2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí) 導(dǎo)盲犬與新朋友的故事課件

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導(dǎo)盲犬與新朋友的故事題目再現(xiàn)題目分析

范文呈現(xiàn)

努力方向讀后續(xù)寫Part

1題目呈現(xiàn)Forcourage,IseizedtheropeonCho's

broad

back

aswe

passed

my

neighbor's

fence.WalkingbyMr.Groll'syardisthebestpartofourmorningwalk...andalso

the

worst.It

is

thebestpartbecausetherosestalktous.“Goodmorning,Cho,”whisper

the

rose

smells

to

my

guidedog'snose.Nowcomestheworstpart—theunfriendly

shape

nearby.that

shadesus:Mr.Groll.Asusual,friendlyChothumped(拍打)hertail.ButChoisjusta

dog;how

can

she

know

thatthisneighbordoesnot

like

me

at

all?“Hello,Mr.Groll.”IgreetedhimasIdidevery

morning.And

like

every

other

morning,he

didnotanswerme.ButIknewhewas

there,watching,behind

his

fence.Maybehe'safraidofmebecauseI'mblind.Disabilitiesscaregrown-ups

sometimes.ThenI

remember:YesterdayIheardhimplayingcheckerswithmyfriendJimmy,

who'sina

wheelchair.Cho

and:I

marched

on,and

my

thoughts

kept

step.“Why

does

Mr.Groll

ignore

me?He

likes

roses.I

like

roses.Why

can't

two

people

who

like

roses

like

each

other?It's

a

mysterytome.”Ithought“Maybehedoesn'tlikeme

because

I'm

a

girl.”A

skateboard

passed

by.“Hello,Mai

and

Cho!”my

friend

Jana

cried.“Hi,Mr.Groll.”續(xù)寫原文Cho

and:I

marched

on,and

my

thoughts

kept

step.“Why

does

Mr.Groll

ignore

me?

He

likes

roses.I

like

roses.Why

can't

two

people

who

like

roses

like

each

other?It's

a

mystery

to

me.”I

thought“Maybe

he

doesn't

like

me

because

I'm

a

girl.”Askateboard

passed

by.“Hello,Mai

and

Cho!”my

friend

Jana

cried.“Hi,Mr.Groll.”I

waited.IfMr.Groll

ignored

Jana,then

the

mystery

was

solved.But

his

voice

calledout,“Hello,Jana!”The

sound

ofit

broke

my

heart.And

I

knew

something

I

didn't

know

before:Some

peoplewhocanseecanbeblind.Sometimes,theirhearts

don't

see

any

better

than

my

eyes

do.

AndIalsoknewthatunfriendlyMr.GrolllikesJimmy.AndJana.But

not

me

and

Cho.MeandCho!Anideabrightened

my

mystery.MaybeIdidknowwhyMr.Grolldidn't

talkto

me!IattachedCho'sropetoapost,and

I

felt

myway

along

the

fence.Thegatesqueaked(嘎吱)open.“Mai!Becareful!”續(xù)寫原文Para

1:Mr.Groll'ssuddenvoicesteadiedmycouragewhilehis

hand

steadied

my

arm.Para

2:“Your

fear

ofCho

may

be

big,but

friendship

is

bigger.”I

said

firmly,“I

canhelp.Comewithme.”.段首句6Part

2題目分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和導(dǎo)盲犬Cho

在早晨散步經(jīng)過Groll先生的柵欄時(shí)，作者向Groll先生打招呼，但是他并不理睬，作者思考再三似乎得知了Groll為什么

不理自己，作者把Cho

的繩子栓在柱子上，沿著柵欄摸索著往前走，門開了，

一個(gè)聲

音傳來“Mai,小心”。續(xù)寫原文分析點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接

前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接

第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接

第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，

揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。段首句2點(diǎn)2

點(diǎn)3

點(diǎn)4(升華)情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)段首句1點(diǎn)1續(xù)寫第一段

續(xù)寫第二段9>Para

1:Mr.Groll's

sudden

voice

steadied

my

courage

while

his

hand

steadied

myarm.→由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Groll先生突然的聲音堅(jiān)定了我的勇氣，同時(shí)他的手也堅(jiān)定了我的

手臂?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Groll先生告訴作者他很喜歡作者和Cho,

但是對(duì)Cho

有

點(diǎn)恐懼。續(xù)寫思路分析10>

Para2:“Your

fear

of

Cho

may

be

big,but

friendship

is

bigger.”I

said

firmly,“I

can

help.Come

with

me.”由第二段首句內(nèi)容“你對(duì)Cho

的恐懼可能很大。但友誼更重要。’我堅(jiān)定地說：‘我能幫

忙。跟我來。”可知，第二段可描寫作者帶Groll先生接觸Cho,

開始了一段新的友誼。11續(xù)寫思路分析>續(xù)寫線索：詢問原因——Groll先生解釋——Groll先生跟隨作者——讓Groll先生觸摸

Cho——Cho

友好地回應(yīng)——開始新友誼續(xù)寫思路分析12行為類>①解

決

：solve/resolve>②深呼吸：

takeadeepbreath/breathedeeply>③使害怕：scare/frighten→情緒類①恐懼：fear/fright>②猶

豫

：hesitantly/withhesitation續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]“It

isn't

because

I'm

blind

that

you

don't

like

me.”I

sighed.(由連詞because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)[高分句型2]That'swhyyouareshakingevennow.(由連接副詞why

引導(dǎo)的表語從句)

>[高分句型3]And

now

that

the

mystery

was

solved,our

new

friendship

could

begin.續(xù)寫素材(由nowthat引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)Part

3范文呈現(xiàn)Mr.Groll's

sudden

voice

steadied

my

courage

while

his

hand

steadied

my

arm.

“You...you

can

please

solve

my

mystery,”I

said.Then

I

took

a

deep

breath.“It

isn't

because

I'm

blind

that

you

don't

like

me.”I

sighed.“It's

Cho

who

scares

you

when

wewalk

by.That's

why

you

are

shaking

even

now.”Hesaid

gently,“I

like

you,Mai.AndCho,too.But

up

close,Cho

scares

my

words

away.”His

breath

sounded

thin

as

aworn-out

blanket.“He

is

a

very...big

dog.”he

said

in

a

low

voice.范文呈現(xiàn)16“Your

fear

ofCho

may

be

big.but

friendship

is

bigger.”I

said

firmly,“I

can

help.

Comewithme.”IheardasmileinMr.Groll'svoice.“OK,”hesaid,“Itrust

you,my

friend.”I

led

him

back

to

Cho,and

told

Mr.Groll

how

gentle

Cho

was.Then

I

tookMr.Grol'shandin

mine

and

guided

it

to

Cho's

head.Hesitantly,Mr.Groll

pettedCho's

ears.Friendly

Cho

waved