高考英語二輪專題寫作應(yīng)用文復(fù)習(xí)-介紹學(xué)校變化課件

高考寫作應(yīng)用文介紹學(xué)校變化假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim曾經(jīng)在你校讀書，想了解學(xué)校有哪些變化，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校的變化；2.你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。題目分析姐解題步驟1.審題假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim曾經(jīng)在你校讀書，想了解學(xué)校有哪些變化，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校的變化；2.你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。WhatHow寫作對象身份寫作背景寫作目的Communication交際得體？Version1:Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamreallydelightedtoknowthatyouusedtobeanexchangestudentinourschool.Knowingthatyouareconcernedaboutallthechangesinourschool,Iamwritingtosharewithyou.Version

2:…Knowingthatyouhavestudiedinmyschoolforseveralyears,Iamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinourschool’snewchange,I’dliketomakeadescriptionofthechangeandsharemyfeelingswithyou.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim曾經(jīng)在你校讀書，想了解學(xué)校有哪些變化Communication交際得體Sample

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1:Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Knowingthatyouareinterestedinmyschool’schanges.I’mmorethanhappytosharewithyou.Sample

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Howiseverythinggoingrecently?I’mdelightedtoknowthatyouarestillconcernedaboutmyschool.I’mheretotalkaboutthechangesofitafteryourleaving.Sample

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Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Ithasbeenalongtimesinceyouleft,Ireallymissyou!Thereareindeedmanychangestakingplaceinmyschool,andIcan’twaittosharewithyou.Content內(nèi)容如何展開?

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ChangesoftheschoolContent內(nèi)容如何展開Hardware?Software?environmentequipmentPeople(teachers&students)Courses(corecourses/optionalcourses;

Class-Selectionsystem)ExtracurricularactivitiesAneffectiveleadingsentenceEffective:specificcontent&impressivelanguageOurschoolhaschangedalot!Ourschoolhaschangedremarkably!Ourschoolhaschangedinmanyrespects!Ourschoolhaschangedinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Thepastthreeyearshavewitnessedgreatchangesinbothfacilitiesandcourses.Effective?2.Content內(nèi)容如何展開?

Language語言如何支撐？Changesofschool硬Version1:Wehaveupdatedthestudyandlivingequipmenttothelatestversion.Themulti-mediacomputer,whichyoucomplainedaboutseveraltimes,nowrunsfluentlyandnolongercrashesdown.最新版運(yùn)行流暢死機(jī)2.Content內(nèi)容如何展開?

Language語言如何支撐？Changesofschool硬Version3:Hardwarefacilitieshavebeenupgraded,includingnewblackboardsandcomputersintheclassrooms.Theschoollibrary,whichhasbeenunderrepairduringthelastthreemonths,willreopennextweek.Itissaidthatthelibrarywillseatmorestudentsandthelibrarianshaverestockedthelibraryshelveswithlargequantitiesofnewbooks.硬件設(shè)備在維修中重新開放提供座位；容納更新，補(bǔ)充大量3.LanguageTopicwords在告別晚會上上次見到彼此很想念你忍不住要和你分享發(fā)生變化和。。。差異很大呈現(xiàn)新面貌改變外觀樓房修葺（翻新）設(shè)備更新面積擴(kuò)建環(huán)境美化Changesofschool1.校園建筑的翻新2.圖書館、操場的擴(kuò)建3.教學(xué)設(shè)施的更新4.環(huán)境的美化Renovate/reconstruct/repair/mendenlarge;expandupgrade;update;furnish；add；equipbeautify;decorateSentencesto

use自從告別晚會以來，我們已經(jīng)有三年沒見了。我們很想你。學(xué)校變化真大。學(xué)校設(shè)法讓我們生活得更充實(shí)。成立了許多社團(tuán)給我們提供實(shí)踐活動。學(xué)校教學(xué)方法有很大改變。我們走出校園實(shí)踐我們的知識。教學(xué)設(shè)備升級了，每間教室都裝配了電子白板和最先進(jìn)的電腦。去年修葺后，我們的教學(xué)樓有了文化氣息，經(jīng)典繪畫作品和五顏六色的照片裝飾著墻壁。整個校園煥發(fā)著活力，到處都種著樹木或鮮花。歡迎你回來親自看看學(xué)校的變化。你會感到很震撼。1.從告別晚會以來，我們在已經(jīng)有差不多3年沒見了。我們都很想念你。Ihaven’tseenyouforalmostthreeyearssincewesaidgood-byeatthefarewellparty.Wemissyoualot.2.學(xué)校真的變化很大。Literally,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Literally,,ourschoolhaswitnessedgreatchanges.3.學(xué)校設(shè)法讓我們的生活更充實(shí)。成立了許多社團(tuán)給我們提供實(shí)踐活動。Ourschoolhasdonealottohelpusachievemorefulfilledlives.Clubsandsocietiesaresetuptoprovideuswithsomehands-onactivities.4.學(xué)校教學(xué)方法有很大改變。我們走出校園實(shí)踐我們的知識。Ourschool’steachingmethodshaveremarkablychanged.Wegooutofthecampustoapplyknowledgeintopractice.5.教學(xué)設(shè)備升級了，每間教室都裝配了電子白板和最先進(jìn)的電腦。Teachingfacilitiesareupgraded,witheachclassroomequippedwithelectronicwhiteboardsandadvancedcomputers.6.去年修葺后，我們的教學(xué)樓帶有了藝術(shù)氣息，經(jīng)典繪畫作品和五顏六色的照片裝飾著墻壁。Renovatedlastyear,theschoolbuildingsbear/haveanartistictouchnow,withclassicpaintingsandcolorfulphotosdecoratingthewall.7.整個校園煥發(fā)著活力，到處都種著樹木或者鮮花。Thewholecampusisburstingwithvigor,withtreesorflowersplanted/sittingeverywhere.8.歡迎你回來親自看看學(xué)校的變化。你會感到很震撼。Welcomebacktoourschoolandhavealookatthesechangesforyourself！Youwillbeamazed!

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equippedwithelectronicwhiteboardandadvancedcomputers.Renovatedin2019,themainbuildingsnowhave/bearanartistictouch,withclassicpaintingsandcolorfulphotosdecoratingthewall.Thewholecampusisburstingwithvigor,withtreesorflowersplanted/sittingeverywhere.Ibelievemyschoolwillchangeforthebetternextyear,withanewcampustobecomepartofus.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在抗震加固改造后（renovation），你們回到了煥然一新的學(xué)校。

請根據(jù)下列提示，給你的美國筆友Peter寫信，介紹學(xué)校的新面貌。Withsb./sth.doing/done/todoAbrand-newschool_____infrontofus,witheverything_____.Studyinginthebuildingiscomfortablewithwalls…Ourclassroomslookmore______with…Practice:Withsb./sth.doing/done/todo范文賞析Howiseverythinggoingrecently?Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyouareinterestedinthechangesofmyschool.SoI’mwritingtosharesomeinformationwithyou.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolwithintheseyears,andnowit’squitedifferentfromtheoneyouwerestudyingin.Firstly,ourschoolhasbecomequitemodern,withalltheclassroomsequippedwiththelatestcomputersandelectronicblackboards,addingtotheconvenienceofourstud