高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)+乘坐公交車上班的途中遇到拿著牌子要錢坐車的人+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)乘坐公交車上班的途中遇到拿著牌子要錢坐車的人1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Igotoworkbybusalmosteveryday,althoughIhavemyowncar,becauseitischeaperandIlikethefeelingofbeingwithothers.I’mthekindofpersonwholikestowatchpeople.Iliveinasmalltown,soIseemanyofthesamepeoplegettingonthebuswithmeeveryday,ontheirwaytoandfromwork.Formanymonths,Inoticedanelderlymangetonatoneofthestopsandalwaysheadtothebackofthebus.4續(xù)寫原文Heworethesameclotheseveryday.Theclotheswerewell-worn,butclean.Icouldtellheledasimplelife.Ihadneverspokentothisgentleman,butheusuallygavemeasmilewhenhepassedby.Oneday,itwassnowingsoIdrovetowork,forIdidn’twanttobelate.Inoticedthegentlemanstandingonastreetcorner.Heheldasigninhishandaskingformoney.IwenthomethatdayandwrotehimanotesayingIwasgratefulforwhatIhadinmylifeandthatIwantedtosharesomeofitwithhim.InthenoteIwrote:Hi,IamLarissa.MaybeIseemlikeastrangertoyou,butIamonthesamebusasyoualmosteveryday.Isawyoutheotherdayonthestreet,andIhopethismoneycanhelpyou.Iwishyouapleasantweek.5段首句Para1：Iputasmallamountofmoneyinanenvelope...Para2：Thenoteread:"HiLarissa...6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文是一篇記敘文，講述了作者在每天乘坐公交車上班的途中，總會遇到一個拿著牌子要錢坐車的人。作者出于善心給他留了紙條和錢，這個陌生男人表達了衷心的感謝。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Iputasmallamountofmoneyinanenvelope...由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我把少量的錢在一個信封里?！笨芍谝欢螒?yīng)該描寫作者把錢給這個陌生男子時彼此的動作和表情。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenoteread:"HiLarissa...由第二段首句內(nèi)容“紙條上寫著：你好，拉麗莎?！笨芍?，第二段應(yīng)該描寫紙條上的內(nèi)容以及作者在看到這張紙條之后的感受。11續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材裝進信封——遞給男子——露出微笑——男子感謝——便條內(nèi)容——領(lǐng)悟感受12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①上車：geton/getinto②遞給：hand/passon③意識到：realize/beawareof情緒類①令人振奮的：uplifting/inspiring②愉快的：pleasant/jolly/delightful13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]Andthenextdaywhentheelderly-mangotonthebusIgavehimthenoteandmoneyinthesmallenvelope.(運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]Ididn’trealizewhathappinessasmallactofkindnesscouldbringme.(運用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Iputasmallamountofmoneyinanenvelope.Andthenextdaywhentheelderly-mangotonthebusIgavehimthenoteandmoneyinthesmallenvelope.Ididn’tsaymuchtohim,butjustsmiledalittle.Andhesmiledinreturn.Thenextday,whenwegotonthebusagain,hehandedmeanote,alsowithasmileonhisface.16范文呈現(xiàn)Thenoteread:“HiLarissa.Thankyouverymuchforyourgenerosity.Themoneywillbeusedtobuynextmonthsbuspass.Yournotecertainlyprovidedaverypleasant,upliftingstarttotheweek.Ihopeyoucontinuetoenjoyagoodlife.—ByJohn.”Iwillkeephisnoteforever!Wenowsmileandnodtoeachotheronthebuseverymorning.Ididn’trealizewhathappinessasmallactofkindnesscouldbringme.IthinkIleadacharmedlife!17范文譯文我把少量的錢放在一個信封里。第二天，當這位老人上車時，我把小信封里的紙條和錢給了他。我沒有跟他說太多，只是微微一笑。他也笑了。第二天，當我們再次上車時，他遞給我一張紙條，臉上也帶著微笑。紙條上寫著：“嗨，拉里薩。非常感謝你的慷慨。這筆錢將用于購買下個月的公共汽車通行證。你的紙條確實為本周提供了一個非常愉快、令人振奮的開始。我希望你繼續(xù)享受美好的生活。--約翰。”我會永遠保存他的紙條！現(xiàn)在，我