【大單元教學(xué)】八年級上冊英語Unit 1 寫作課課件

Wheredidyougoonvacation?Unit1SectionB3a-4寫作課學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)通過以讀促寫，能夠找出目標(biāo)語句以及文章結(jié)構(gòu)，并簡單描述旅行。通過制作行動地圖，能夠起草和修改作文，培養(yǎng)語言的運(yùn)用能力。Let’shavefun.Wherearewe?Let’stalk.Wheredidyougoonvacation?Iwentto_________.Xi’anCanyoutellmeanythingaboutyourtripinXi’an?OK.someonewentnoonewonderfulsomethinganythingateLet’sreviewandfillintheblanks.

TravelLog1I_______toXi’an.Everythingwas____________.Iwenttherewith___________important.Itried____________exciting.I______everythingdelicious.Ididn’tbuy___________expensive.________seemedtobebored.wentsomethingsomeoneanythingateNoonewonderful1. Wheredidyougo? IwenttoXi’an.2. Whodidyougowith?

Iwenttherewithsomeone important.3. Whatdidyoudo? Itriedsomethingexciting. Iateeverythingdelicious. Ididn’tbuyanythingexpensive.4. Howdidyoufeel? Nooneseemedtobebored.Let’sreadandanswer.IwenttoXi’an.Everythingwaswonderful.Iwenttherewithsomeoneimportant.Itriedsomethingexciting.Iateeverythingdelicious.Ididn'tbuyanythingexpensive.Nooneseemedtobebored.這篇日記有哪些你想用來寫作的地方？Let’sthink.placesofinterestweatheractivitiesfoodfeelingspeopleshoppingsomethingspecial??somethingexcitingeverythingdeliciousnotboredwithsomeonesomethingcheap?23456718HowdoesthewriterdescribethetriptoXi'an?這篇日記有哪些方面沒有寫？如果你來寫西安旅行日記，你會怎樣寫呢？vacationTobemorespecific(具體的).Let’sthink.HowdoyouwanttowriteyourtriptoXi’an?Let’sthink,drawandwrite.Step1:Workoutyouridea.1.Howwastheweather?2.Wheredidyougo?Itwassunny.3.Whodidyougowith?IwenttoXi’anwithmyfamily.IwenttoXi’an.Let’sbrainstormandtalk.4.Whatdidyoudo?寫作策略：使用圓圈圖構(gòu)思I__________________andIfeltreally

_______.Ilikedthisplacebecause

__________.visited/saw/climbedtheTerracottaArmyGrandTangMalltheGreatWildGoosePagodaHuaMountainLet’sthinkandwrite.5.WhatdidyoudowhenclimbingHuaMountain?6.Howdidyoufeel?walkeduptothetoptakephotosdancedwithmyparentsLet’sbrainstormandtalk.7.Whatdidyoueat?寫作策略：使用圓圈圖構(gòu)思I__________________andit

________________.tried/ate/hadkiwifruitsteamedcoldnoodlesBiangbiangnoodlesmuttonandbread…1. Wheredidyougo? IwenttoXi’an.2. Whodidyougowith?

Iwenttherewithsomeone important.3. Whatdidyoudo? Itriedsomethingexciting. Iateeverythingdelicious. Ididn’tbuyanythingexpensive.4. Howdidyoufeel? Nooneseemedtobebored.Let’sreadandanswer.Iwentto

Xi’an.Everythingwaswonderful.Iwenttherewithsomeoneimportant.Itriedsomethingexciting.Iateeverythingdelicious.Ididn'tbuyanythingexpensive.Nooneseemedtobebored.Let’sstructure.Step2:Outlinewherewhoweatherplace1place2(activities,food,shopping,somethingspecial)feelingswhattolearnexpectationbeginningbodyendingLet’sdraft.Step3:DraftingsimplepasttenseIittheyadiarytensepronoungenreLet’sedit.Step4:Editing3aCompletethediaryentryaboutatriptooneoftheseplaces.Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtohelpyou.hotandsunny tiredmuttonandbread delicioustakesomephotosamazingbuysomethingspecial interestinglearnsomethingimportantAugustWednesday,________20thTodaytheweatherwas___________________.Iwentto________________.Itwas_________.We____________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause_______________________________________.Fordinnerwehad__________________.Itwas__________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally______.AugusthotandsunnytooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantdeliciousHuaMountainsamazingmuttonbreadtiredandLet’scheckandpolish.Step5:Proofreadingcheckformistakesspellinggrammarusethephraseslikesomethingspecialenough...checkpolishLet’sreadandredraft.Step6:RedraftingWednesday,August20thIwenttoXi’anonvacationwithmyfamily.When

Igotthere,itwassunnyandhot.IwassoexcitedbecauseitwasthefirsttimeformetoseeoneoftheoldestcitiesinChina.WedrovetotheTerracottaArmy

first.IlearnedsomethingimportantaboutChinesecultureandhistory.Nextday,wedecidedtoclimbHuaMountainsandwewalkeduptothetop.Everythingwassmallfromabove.Weweresoexcitedtodanceandtookphotos.Afterwalkingforfourhours,Iwastiredandhungry.Then,wetriedsomethingspecialinXi’an.Muttonandbreadtasteddelicious.

Beforeleaving,

Iboughtsomethingspecialformygrandparentsandfriends.Noonefeltbored.Itwasawonderfultrip.Iamsopoundofourcountry.Idecidetostudy