Unit 2 Travelling-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）（教師版）

第1頁(yè)Unit2Travelling單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度旅行經(jīng)歷本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能用所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)和句型簡(jiǎn)單地介紹一次旅行經(jīng)歷。介紹的內(nèi)容主要為旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、和什么人、做了哪些事情和感受等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能用正確的時(shí)態(tài)即一般過(guò)去時(shí)描述旅行經(jīng)歷；2.能正確使用表示先后順序的邏輯詞組織內(nèi)容，使文章層次清晰；3.能利用多種句式描述經(jīng)歷，使文章內(nèi)容豐富；4.能利用一般過(guò)去時(shí)或者一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表達(dá)旅行的感受?！驹~匯積累】1.name名字1.leavefor動(dòng)身去2.havebeento去過(guò)3.haveafantastictime=havefun=enjoyoneself玩得開(kāi)心4.thewholeday一整天5.rollercoaster(游樂(lè)場(chǎng)的)過(guò)山車6.dosomeshopping購(gòu)物7.attheendof在末尾8.buysth.forsb.=buysb.sth.為某人買某物9.get/beexcitedat/aboutsth對(duì)某事感到激動(dòng)10.beexcitedtodosth對(duì)做某事感到激動(dòng)11.goforapicnic去野餐12.naturalbeauty自然美景13.bythelake在湖邊14.takeadirectflightto直飛到【句式積累】※開(kāi)頭句1.Thewintervacationhasalreadypassed.IwouldliketosharemytriptoShanghaiwithyou.寒假已經(jīng)過(guò)去了。我想和你分享一下我的上海之旅。2.Ihavebeentomanybigcities,suchasGuangzhouandShanghai.我去過(guò)很多大城市，比如廣州和上海。3.Ihavealsobeentomanyplacesofgreatinterest,suchastheWestLakeandtheMountainTai.我還去過(guò)許多名勝古跡，比如西湖和泰山。4.IwenttoQinHuangdaotoseetheseawithmyfamilyyesterday.昨天我和家人一起去秦皇島看海。5.Lastsummer,Iwentonamemorabletriptothebeachwithmyfamily.去年夏天，我和家人去了一次難忘的海灘之旅。6.Wedecidedtovisitabeautifulseasideresortandspendafewdaysenjoyingthesun,sand,andsurfing.我們決定參觀一個(gè)美麗的海濱度假勝地，花幾天時(shí)間享受陽(yáng)光、沙灘和沖浪。7.IhavebeeninSunshineSchoolforamonth.NowI’mleaving,solastFridaywevisitedsomeplacesofinterestinWuxi.我在陽(yáng)光學(xué)校已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了?，F(xiàn)在我要走了，所以上周五我們參觀了無(wú)錫的一些名勝古跡。※中間句1.WearrivedthereontheseconddayofChineseNewYear.我們?cè)诖竽瓿醵竭_(dá)那里。2.Itwassunnyandweenjoyedthetripverymuch.天氣晴朗，我們非常享受這次旅行。3.ItriedsomedelicioustraditionalShanghaifoodatChenghuangTempleSnackStreet.我在城皇廟小吃街品嘗了一些美味的傳統(tǒng)上海菜。4.Finally,IwenttoWangfujingStreetwhereItastedmuchdeliciousfood.最后，我去了王府井大街，在那里我品嘗了許多美味的食物。5.SometimesIdidsomereadinginthehotelaswellaswatchingTV.有時(shí)我在酒店看書，也看電視。6.Icouldn’twaittojumpintotheclear,coolwaterandhavesomefunwithmysiblings.我迫不及待地想跳進(jìn)清澈涼爽的水中，和我的兄弟姐妹一起玩得開(kāi)心。7.Itwassothrillinganditmademefeelaliveandadventurous.它是如此激動(dòng)人心，讓我感到充滿活力和冒險(xiǎn)精神?！Y(jié)尾句1.Thistriptothebeachtaughtmetheimportanceoftakingabreakfromourbusylivesandspendingqualitytimewithlovedones.這次海灘之旅教會(huì)了我從繁忙的生活中休息一下，與親人共度美好時(shí)光的重要性。2.Itremindedmethatnaturehasitsownwayofhealingandrejuvenatingus.它提醒我，大自然有自己的方式來(lái)治愈和并使我們恢復(fù)活力。3.Iwillneverforgetthistrip.我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這次旅行。4.ThoughIwasalittletired,Iwasveryhappy.雖然我有點(diǎn)累，但我很高興。5.Weenjoyedourselvesthatday!IhopeIcancometoWuxiagain.那天我們玩得很開(kāi)心！我希望我能再次來(lái)到無(wú)錫。6.Allinall,itwasaninterestingandunforgettabletrip.總而言之，這是一次有趣而難忘的旅行。7.ItrulylikemytriptoMeishanverymuch.我真的很喜歡我的眉山之旅。【諺語(yǔ)積累】1、讀萬(wàn)卷書不如行萬(wàn)里路。Readingthousandsofbooksisnotequaltotravelingthousandsofmiles.2、一站走三里，—歇走三村。Walkthreemilesatastopandthreevillagesatarest.3、千里之行，始于足下。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithsinglestep.4、人是地行仙，一日不見(jiàn)走一千。Manisanimmortalwhoneverwalksathousandtimesaday.5、桂林山水甲天下，陰朔山水甲桂林。Guilinisthebestplaceintheworld,andYinshuoisthebestplaceinGuilin.6、南天春意濃，北國(guó)正冰封。SpringisintenseintheSouthandiceisfrozeninthenorth.【萬(wàn)能寫作模板】Iwouldliketosharemytripto__________（引出地點(diǎn)）withyou.Iwentto__________by__________（交通方式）withmy__________.Wearrivedthere__________（具體時(shí)間）.Itwas__________（引出天氣）andweenjoyedthetripverymuch.Isaw__________（所見(jiàn)）.Thereweretoomanypeopleonthestreets,andthetrafficwas__________.Itriedsomedelicioustraditional__________foodat__________.Thenextday,wewentto__________.We__________（所做事情）in__________andsaw__________.Ihadagoodtimeduringmytripto__________.（總結(jié)感受）I’mlookingforwardtovisiting__________again.（表達(dá)期待）去年暑假，你去參觀了眉山三蘇祠，在那里你也認(rèn)識(shí)了你的好友Tina。請(qǐng)以“ATriptoSanSuTemple”為題，寫篇90詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名。2.90詞左右（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言精煉，不超過(guò)120詞)；卷面整潔。ATriptoSanSuTemple________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，講述到三蘇祠旅游的經(jīng)歷，包括和誰(shuí)去，怎么去，吃了什么，作何感受；第二步，介紹自己和新朋友Tina的異同，并表達(dá)自己對(duì)朋友的理解或觀點(diǎn)；第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)這趟旅程的感受?！炯炎餍蕾p】ATriptoSanSuTempleLastsummer,IhadatriptoSanSuTempleinMeishan.Iwenttherewithmyparents.Myfatherdroveusthere.IlearnedalotaboutSanSu.What’smore,weatedeliciousDongpoPorkforlunch.Iwashappytomeetanewfriend,Tina.Sheisastallasme.Andwebothlikereading.Sheismuchmoreoutgoingthanme.ButIammorehard-working.Sheisbetterattennisthanme,althoughwebothlikesports.So,Idon’treallycareifmyfriendisthesameordifferentfromme.ItrulylikemytriptoMeishanverymuch.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①What’smore而且②astallas和……一樣高③bebetterat更擅長(zhǎng)④(be)differentfrom與……不同【高分句型】①Sheisbetterattennisthanme,althoughwebothlikesports.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）②Idon’treallycareifmyfriendisthesameordifferentfromme.（if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）一、翻譯短語(yǔ)1．前天2．后天3．照料；照顧4．拒絕5．盼望；期待6．接到（某人的）信、電話等7．以便8．回復(fù)；回信9．去聽(tīng)音樂(lè)會(huì)10．去旅行11．在……結(jié)尾12．舉行聚會(huì)13．去購(gòu)物【答案】1．thedaybeforeyesterday2．thedayaftertomorrow3．lookafter4．turndown5．lookforwardto6．hearfrom7．sothat8．replyto9．gototheconcert10．takeatrip11．a(chǎn)ttheendof…12．haveaparty13．goshopping二、選詞填空clear,be,they,one,family,improve,speak,tradition,photo,duringLastsummerholiday,IhadashortvisittoBritain.Itwasanexcellenttrip.Ilearnedalotfromit.Thiswasmy14timetotravelinaforeigncountry.Iwenttherebyplane.Igotalittleafraidontheplane.BecauseIamnotgoodat15English.IwasafraidthatIcouldn’tunderstandothersandcouldn’ttalkwithothers16.AhostfamilymetmeonceIreachedBritain.Ilivedwiththehostfamilyfortwoweeks.However,myworriesdidn’tappearbecausemyhostfamily17solovelyandkind.Theyalwayscaredaboutmewarmly.Theyalwaysaskedmetoeatwith18.AndIalsocookedsomeofour19food.Myhost20kindness（善良）taughtmethatculturaldiffereneescouldn’tstopfriendship.21myvisittoLondon,wewenttothecentralpartofthecity.WewalkedovertheMillenniumBridge(千禧橋),enjoyedthewaterwaysandtookmany22.Wespentsometimehappily.Thetripwashelpfulto23myEnglish.Itwasalsoawaytolearnthecultureofanothercountryandspread(傳播)ourculturetoothers.Thetravelwaswonderfulforme.Ihopetogothereagain.【答案】14．first15．speaking16．clearly17．were18．them19．traditional20．family’s21．During22．photos23．improve三、完成句子24．會(huì)議結(jié)束時(shí)，湯姆給我們講了一個(gè)有趣的故事。(end)Tomtoldusafunnystorythemeeting.【答案】attheendof25．他去過(guò)廣州很多次。HetoGuangzhoumanytimes.【答案】hasbeen26．這輛車整個(gè)行程中都在高速移動(dòng)。Thecarwas.【答案】movingathighspeedthroughthewholeride27．惠山古鎮(zhèn)向來(lái)以其美景和古建筑而為人所知。HuishanTownhasalwaysandoldbuildings.【答案】beenfamousforitsbeauty/beenfamousforitsbeautifulviews28．西游樂(lè)園的過(guò)山車高速移動(dòng)，整個(gè)乘坐過(guò)程中學(xué)生們都在尖叫。TherollercoasterinXiyouWorldofAdventuremovedandthestudentswerescreamingthrough.【答案】athighspeedthe(whole)ride29．在云南，你可以終年欣賞到美麗的景色。YoucanenjoythebeautifulviewsinYunnan.【答案】allyearround四、翻譯句子30．這些山如此之大以至于走到另一邊需要花費(fèi)很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。.【答案】Thesemountainsaresobigthatittakesalongtimetowalktotheotherside.31．北京烤鴨嘗起來(lái)很好吃?！敬鸢浮緽eijingroastducktastesdelicious.32．我和朋友們?cè)谏缴洗罱ㄆ鹆艘粋€(gè)帳篷，在外面做起了飯。(putup)【答案】MyfriendsandIputupatentonthemountain,andcookedoutside.1．寒假已經(jīng)過(guò)去，相信大家都去了不少有意義的地方吧！在旅行中，我們會(huì)遇見(jiàn)不同的人，欣賞不同的風(fēng)景。這些旅行都會(huì)給我們留下深刻的回憶。請(qǐng)以“MyTripto________”為題，描述自己在寒假的一次旅行。參考要點(diǎn)：1.旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、出行方式、同行的人……；2.旅行中的所見(jiàn)所聞（天氣、活動(dòng)、食物……）；3.你的感受。要求：1.書寫工整，卷面整潔；2.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。MyTripto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，為記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要采用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹旅游的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、出行方式及所見(jiàn)所聞等；第三步，表達(dá)感受?！緷M分作文】MyTriptoShanghaiThewintervacationhasalreadypassed.IwouldliketosharemytriptoShanghaiwithyou.IwenttoShanghaibyplanewithmyparents.WearrivedthereontheseconddayofChineseNewYear.Itwassunnyandweenjoyedthetripverymuch.Isawmanytallbuildings.Thereweretoomanypeopleonthestreets,andthetrafficwasabitheavy.ItriedsomedelicioustraditionalShanghaifoodatChenghuangTempleSnackStreet.Thenextday,wewenttoShanghaiHaichangOceanPark.Wewatchedsomekindsoflifeintheseaandsawawonderfuldolphinshow.IhadagoodtimeduringmytriptoShanghai.I’mlookingforwardtovisitingShanghaiagain.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①wouldliketodo愿意做②enjoythetripverymuch非常享受這次旅行③lookforwardto期待④haveagoodtime玩得開(kāi)心【高分句型】Thereweretoomanypeopleonthestreets,andthetrafficwasabitheavy.（therebe句型）2．使用下列關(guān)鍵詞，以LiHua’sTour為題，寫一篇至少五句話的小短文，描述李華去青海湖的經(jīng)歷，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫。QinghaiLake,parents,went,with,thissummer,LiHua;saw,beautiful,alongtheway,flowers,many;beautiful,was,lake,happy;took,photos,some,gifts,bought,friends,and,for;hopes,nextsummer,again,QinghaiLake,go.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇小作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹李華去青海湖旅行的經(jīng)歷?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，引出話題；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹他去青海湖旅行的經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達(dá)希望?！緷M分作文】LiHua’sTourLiHuawenttoQinghaiLakewithhisparentsthissummer.Theysawmanybeautifulflowersalongtheway.Thelakewasverybeautifulandtheywereveryhappy.Theyalsotookmanyphotosandboughtsomegiftsfortheirfriends.LiHuahopestogotoQinghaiLakeagainnextsummer.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①alongtheway沿路②takephotos拍照【高分句型】①Thelakewasverybeautifulandtheywereveryhappy.(and并列句)②LiHuahopestogotoQinghaiLakeagainnextsummer.(動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ))3．假設(shè)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)角舉辦題為“Mytravel”的征文比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。要求：1.包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞；題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MytravelIliketraveling.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的旅行，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，引出話題；第二步，介紹自己的北京之旅；第三步，介紹自己的寒假旅行計(jì)劃?！緷M分作文】MytravelIliketraveling.Ihavebeentomanybigcities,suchasGuangzhouandShanghai.Ihavealsobeentomanyplacesofgreatinterest,suchastheWestLakeandtheMountainTai.Lastsummer,IwenttoBeijing.First,IwenttotheGreatWall,whereImetmanyforeignersandIalsotookalotofphotos.Second,IwenttotheSummerPalace.Finally,IwenttoWangfujingStreetwhereItastedmuchdeliciousfood.Asforthecomingwintervacation,IamgoingtoHarbin,alsocalledicecity.Ihearthatthecityisverybeautifulinwinter.Iwanttostaythereforaweektoenjoymyself.Ican’twait!【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①suchas例如②takephotos拍照③asfor至于【高分句型】①IwenttotheGreatWall,whereImetmanyforeignersandIalsotookalotofphotos.(where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)②Ihearthatthecityisverybeautifulinwinter.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)4．你曾經(jīng)去過(guò)什么地方游玩？吃了什么食物？做了什么事情？游玩的整體印象怎么樣？請(qǐng)寫一篇游玩日記，字?jǐn)?shù)70字左右。注意：1、使用正確的格式2、使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為日記；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示，寫一篇游玩日記，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出重點(diǎn)。【寫作步驟】第一步，介紹自己曾經(jīng)游玩的地方、吃的食物、做的事情；第二步，發(fā)表自己對(duì)于這次游玩的印象。【滿分作文】Monday,May1stSunnyIwenttoQinHuangdaotoseetheseawithmyfamilyyesterday.Whenwegotthere,wewereveryhappy!Webookedahotelandthenwewenttotheseaside.Howbeautifultheseawas!Weswamintheseaandplayedballwithotherpeople!SometimesIdidsomereadinginthehotelaswellaswatchingTV.Thepeoplewereverywarm-heartedandeasy-going.Weatesomeseafoodthere.Itwasverydelicious!Wehadagreattimethere.IhopeIcanhaveachancetovisitthereagainoneday.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①aswellas也②warm-hearted熱心的【高分句型】①Whenwegotthere,wewereveryhappy!（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Howbeautifultheseawas!（感嘆句）③IhopeIcanhaveachancetovisitthereagainoneday.（賓語(yǔ)從句）5．旅行，或遠(yuǎn)或近，總能讓我們收獲成長(zhǎng)、放松身心。與家人一起探尋城市的繁華、鄉(xiāng)村的靜謐；與老師一起感受文化的多彩、歷史的厚重；與朋友一起體會(huì)挑戰(zhàn)的刺激、拍照的滿足、品嘗美食的快樂(lè)。一切都是最美好的體驗(yàn)。英語(yǔ)報(bào)社現(xiàn)面向全區(qū)初中生征集記憶最深的旅行體驗(yàn)，請(qǐng)你以“ATripto______”為題記錄你去某地的一次旅行，談?wù)勀懵眯兄械乃?jiàn)、所行、所思。要求：1.參考以上導(dǎo)圖，撰寫80-120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.旅行中見(jiàn)過(guò)的風(fēng)景。2.旅行中做過(guò)的事。3.旅行中的感受。ATripto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意避免“信息遺漏”，包括旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、同伴、感受、所見(jiàn)所聞等?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，引出下文；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。包括旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、同伴、感受、所見(jiàn)所聞等；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)對(duì)旅行的喜愛(ài)。【滿分作文】ATriptotheBeachLastsummer,Iwentonamemorabletriptothebeachwithmyfamily.Wedecidedtovisitabeautifulseasideresortandspendafewdaysenjoyingthesun,sand,andsurfing.Assoonaswearrived,Iwasamazedbythebreathtakingviewoftheendlessbluesea.Thesoundofthecrashingwavesandthesmellofthesaltyairinstantlymademefeelrelaxedandpeaceful.Icouldn’twaittojumpintotheclear,coolwaterandhavesomefunwithmysiblings.Duringtheday,webuiltsandcastles,playedbeachvolleyball,andwentforlongwalksalongtheshore.Thewaterwasperfectforswimmingandweeventriedsomeexcitingwatersportslikesnorkelingandjetskiing.Itwassothrillinganditmademefeelaliveandadventurous.Thistriptothebeachtaughtmetheimportanceoftakingabreakfromourbusylivesandspendingqualitytimewithlovedones.Itremindedmethatnaturehasitsownwayofhealingandrejuvenatingus.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①decidetodo決定做②thesmellof……的味道③assoonas一……就【高分句型】①Assoonaswearrived,Iwasamazedbythebreathtakingviewoftheendlessbluesea.(assoonas引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Itremindedmethatnaturehasitsownwayofhealingandrejuvenatingus.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）6．一次旅游，一次經(jīng)歷，一次成長(zhǎng)，一段美好的回憶。把點(diǎn)滴記錄，把所感留存！請(qǐng)以“AWonderfulTrip”為話題寫一篇旅游日記，包括以下內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容提示：1.去了哪里，和誰(shuí)一起；2.去了多久，每天都有些什么活動(dòng)；3.天氣怎樣，最喜歡的美食；4.你的感受。寫作要求：1.日記的格式要正確；2.語(yǔ)意連貫、語(yǔ)言流暢、語(yǔ)法正確，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.不少于80詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為日記；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；③提示：注意日記格式，內(nèi)容提示已給出，注意不要遺漏，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。【寫作步驟】第一步，簡(jiǎn)單敘述和誰(shuí)去了哪里；第二步，具體敘述每天的活動(dòng)、天氣和最喜歡的食物；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感受?！緷M分作文】AWonderfulTripFriday,August18thLastweek,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingbyplane.BeijingisthecapitalofChina.It’sverybeautiful.TherearemanytallbuildingsinBeijing.Westayedthereforfourdays.Theweatherwasveryhot,butIwasstillexcited.Thefirstday,wewenttotheGreatWall.Weweresotiredthatwecan’tsayaword,butwehadawonderfulexperience.Thesecondday,wevisitedtheSummerPalaceandthePalacemuseum.Thethirdday,wewenttothecountrysideofBeijingtogoboatingandfishing.Itwasveryinteresting.Thelastday,weboughtlotsofpresentsformygrandparents.AndWeatemanydeliciousfood,BeijingDuckismyfavourite.Iwillneverforgetthistrip.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①thecapitalof……的首都②buysth.forsb.給某人買某物【高分句型】①TherearemanytallbuildingsinBeijing.（Therebe句型）②Weweresotiredthatwecan’tsayaword,butwehadawonderfulexperience.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）7．假如今天是1月30，星期六。你和你的父母參觀了一個(gè)以舊居而聞名的小鎮(zhèn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記，記錄你這次的旅游經(jīng)歷。提示：1.Howwastheweathertoday?2.Howdidyougotothetown?3.Whatdidyoudothere?要求：1.短文應(yīng)包含以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。3.詞數(shù)70左右（日記格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為日記；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題介紹自己這次的旅游經(jīng)歷，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，邏輯清晰?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，介紹今天的天氣，旅行的地點(diǎn)，交通方式及時(shí)間；第二步，介紹具體的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感受?！緷M分作文】January30thSunnyTodaytheweatherisfine.IwenttoafamousChinesetownwithmyparents.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusanhourtogetthere.Thetownisverybeautiful.Therearemanyoldhouses.Inthesehouses,wecouldseemanyoldtrees.Theyareverytall.Therearealsomanygardenswithbeautifulflowers.Thoughthehousesareveryold,theyarestillverystrong.Wevisitedtheminthemorning.Andwehadlunchinarestaurant.Thefoodwasdelicious.ThoughIwasalittletired,Iwasveryhappy.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①bybus坐公交②inthemorning在早上③havelunch吃午餐【高分句型】①Therearealsomanygardenswithbeautifulflowers.（therebe句型）②Thoughthehousesareveryold,theyarestillverystrong.（though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）8．假設(shè)你是英國(guó)交流生Daniel，已經(jīng)在無(wú)錫陽(yáng)光中學(xué)度過(guò)了一個(gè)月，現(xiàn)即將離開(kāi)，上周五剛和陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次無(wú)錫一日游活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)將這次活動(dòng)寫入日記，活動(dòng)軌跡如下：AdayinWuxi注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文章須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并按照時(shí)間順序描寫，每個(gè)地方添加相應(yīng)的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，使全文連貫、通順；3.最后至少用兩句話表達(dá)對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的感受。7thNov,2023SunnyIhavebeeninSunshineSchoolforamonth.NowI’mleaving,solastFridaywevisitedsomeplacesofinterestinWuxi.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇日記；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹無(wú)錫一日游活動(dòng)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)題干中的內(nèi)容詳細(xì)介紹無(wú)錫一日游的活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié)；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感受?！緷M分作文】7thNov,2023SunnyIhavebeeninSunshineSchoolforamonth.NowI’mleaving,solastFridaywevisitedsomeplacesofinterestinWuxi.Wemetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andtookabustoXihuiPark.Weclimbedthehillandtookaboattripthere.ThenwewalkedtoHuishanOldTowntolearnmoreaboutthehistoryandcultureofWuxi.Afterthat,werodesharedbikestothePlumGarden.Therewesawmanybeautifulsights.Then,wetooktheundergroundtoLivatShoppingMalltodosomeshopping.Intheend,ittookusaboutonehourtogetbacktoschoolbyunderground.Weenjoyedourselvesthatday!IhopeIcancometoWuxiagain.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①attheschoolgate在校門口②learnabout了解③intheend最后【高分句型】①Then,wetooktheundergroundtoLivatShoppingMalltodosomeshopping.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))②IhopeIcancometoWuxiagain.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)9．這個(gè)暑假，你陪同你的英國(guó)朋友Tom參觀了東湖，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示寫一篇介紹你們旅程的英語(yǔ)游記發(fā)給英語(yǔ)報(bào)。內(nèi)容提示問(wèn)題：1.Howwastheweather?2.Whatdidyoudo?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?注意：詞數(shù)60—80詞；標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyTriptotheEastLakeThissummervacation,IwenttotheEastLakewithmyfriendTom._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________