2025年高考英語復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)突破：讀后續(xù)寫提分之情緒描寫篇（解析版）

情緒描寫

（高興、興奮、傷心、憤怒）

齡備素同

詞匯短語能力提升表達(dá)

名詞：joy快樂；高興happiness幸福；愉快pleasure高興；愉快laughter笑聲amusement

娛樂；娛樂活動excitement激動；興奮

動詞：delight使高興；高興thrill使激動；興奮brighten使高興；使明亮excite使激

動；使興奮

形容詞cheerful令人愉快的；快樂的merry愉快的；高興的

joyful快樂的；愉快的overjoyed欣喜若狂；非常高興

副詞：excitedly激動地happily高興地；快樂地

cheerfully高高興興地

1.dance/jumpfor/withjoy雀躍/高興地跳起來

2.giveajumpintheair高興地蹦跳

3.lightup喜形于色

4.brightensb/sheart使某人心情愉快

5.bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness欣喜若狂

6.inagoodmood心情好

7.inhigh/cheerfulspirits興高采烈

8.onthetopoftheworld非常高興、興奮

9.amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既興奮又開心

10,grinfromeartoear咧嘴大笑

句式能力提升表達(dá)

Icouldhardlycontainmydelightanddancedintothehouse.

我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅，蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。

Delightedandthrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenskippedintothekichenalongwithmy

smilingmother.

又高興又激動，我蹦跳了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟著我微笑著的媽媽進(jìn)了廚房。

Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.

當(dāng)她打開盒子時,她的手激動得發(fā)抖。

Tearsofjoy/happinesswelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether,他們喜極而

泣，緊緊擁抱在一起。

Shecameuptohim,withasmileshininglikeadiamond,Innotimehiseyeswerefilledwith

warmexcitedtears.她帶著鉆石般閃耀的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激動得熱淚盈眶。

Therainfellrelentlessly,eachdropechoingthedepthofhersorrow,asiftheskyitselfwere

weepingforherbrokenheart.

雨不停地落下，每一滴都回響著她內(nèi)心深處的悲傷，仿佛連天空都在為她破碎的心而哭

泣。

Withasighthatseemedtocarrytheweightoftheworld,shegazedintotheemptystreet,herheart

avoidfilledwithnothingbutgrief.

她發(fā)出一聲仿佛承載著整個世界重量的嘆息，凝視著空蕩蕩的街道,她的心是一片空虛，

除了悲傷再無其他。

Thememoryofhissmilelingered,hauntinghereverywakingmoment,aconstantreminderof

whatshehadlostandcouldneverregain.

他的笑容的記憶縈繞不去，在每個清醒的時刻困擾著她，不斷提醒著她失去了什么，且

永遠(yuǎn)無法找回。

Thenightenvelopedherinitsdarkcloak,amplifyingthesilencethatechoedwithherunspoken

sorrow,makingitallthemoreprofound.

夜色將她籠罩在黑暗的外衣下，放大了回響著她未說出口的悲傷的寂靜,使其更加深刻。

Ifonlythepastcouldbeundone,shewouldgiveanythingtorelivethosecarefreedaysbeforethe

sorrowtookroot.

如果過去可以重來，她愿意付出一切來重新經(jīng)歷那些悲傷扎根之前的無憂無慮的日子。

Thewindwhisperedthroughthebarrentrees,carryingwhispersoflostloveandunspoken

goodbyes,addingtothemelancholyofthemoment.

風(fēng)吹過光禿禿的樹木，帶著失去的愛情和未說出口的告別的低語，增加了這一刻的憂郁。

Hertearsflowedfreely,eachoneasilentscreamofthepainshedarednotutter,stainingthe

pillowcasewithhersorrow.

她的淚水肆意流淌，每一滴都是她不敢言說的痛苦的無聲吶喊，將枕套染上了悲傷的顏

色。

Theemptychairatthedinnertablestoodasaconstantreminderofhisabsence,avoidthatcould

neverbefilledwithanythingbutsorrow.

餐桌旁那把空蕩蕩的椅子，時刻提醒著他的缺席，那是一個除了悲傷什么也填不滿的空

虛。

Thephotographsonthewallstaredbackather,capturingmomentsthatnowfeltlikeadistant

dream,filledwithasadnessthatrefusedtofade.

墻上的照片回望著她，捕捉到的瞬間現(xiàn)在感覺像是遙遠(yuǎn)的夢，充滿了不愿褪去的悲傷。

Themoonshonebrightly,castingasilverlightthatonlyservedtohighlightthelonelinessthat

surroundedher,makingthenightallthemoredesolate.

月亮明亮地照耀著，灑下銀色的光芒，卻只是凸顯了她周圍的孤獨(dú)，讓夜晚更加荒涼。

Thesoundofhislaughterechoedinhermind,abittersweetmemorythatbroughttearstohereyes

andaachetoherheartthatrefusedtoheal.

他的笑聲在她腦海中回響，這是一段苦樂參半的記憶，讓她的淚水盈眶，心中的傷痛久

久無法愈合。

Witheachpassingday,theweightofhersorrowseemedtogrowheavier,aburdenshecarried

withherwherevershewent.

隨著日子的流逝，她悲傷的重量似乎越來越重，成為了一個無論走到哪里都背負(fù)著的重

擔(dān)。

Theraindropsdancedonthewindowpane,mirroringthetearsthatsilentlystreameddownherface,

bothinharmonywiththemelodyofhersorrow.

雨滴在窗玻璃上跳舞,映照著她臉上默默流淌的淚水,兩者都與她悲傷的旋律和諧共鳴。

Theworldaroundherseemedtohavelostitscolor,thevibranthuesreplacedbyadullgray,

reflectingtheemptinesswithinherheart.

她周圍的世界似乎失去了色彩，鮮艷的色調(diào)被單調(diào)的灰色所取代，反映了她內(nèi)心的空虛。

Thesilenceofthenightwasdeafening,theabsenceofhisvoiceaconstantache,avoidthatcould

onlybefilledwiththedeepsorrowthatconsumedher.

夜晚的寂靜震耳欲聾，他聲音的缺席成為了一種持續(xù)的疼痛，一個只能用吞噬著她的深

切悲傷來填補(bǔ)的空虛。

Theflamesofangerignitedwithinhim,consuminghisrationalityandleavingonlyasmoldering

emberofresentment.

他心中的怒火熊熊燃燒，吞噬了他的理智，只留下一絲怨恨的余燼。

Withclenchedfistsandeyesblazinglikecoals,hestoodthere,everymuscletautwiththefuryhe

struggledtocontain.

他站在那里，拳頭緊握，眼睛像煤炭一樣熾熱，每一塊肌肉都緊繃著，努力壓抑著內(nèi)心

的憤怒。

Thenewsofthebetrayalstruckhimlikeathunderbolt,ignitingastormofangerthatthreatenedto

engulfeverythinginitspath.

背叛的消息如晴天霹靂般擊中了他，引發(fā)了一場憤怒的風(fēng)暴,威脅著要吞噬沿途的一切。

Thesilenceintheroomwasdeafening,filledwiththeunspokenfurythatcrackledlikeelectricity

betweenthem.

房間里的沉默震耳欲聾，充滿了他們之間像電流般僻啪作響的未說出口的憤怒。

Hadheknownthetruthearlier,hewouldhaveconfrontedherwithafurythatwouldhaveshaken

theveryfoundationsoftheirrelationship.

如果他早點(diǎn)知道真相，他會用足以撼動他們關(guān)系根基的憤怒去質(zhì)問她。

Theinjusticeofitallsimmeredbeneaththesurface,threateningtoboiloverintoaraginginferno

ofangeratanymoment.

這一切的不公在表面下醞釀著，隨時可能沸騰成一片憤怒的熊熊烈火。

Hervoicetrembledwithbarelycontainedrageasshespoke,eachwordlikeashardoficecutting

throughtheair.

她說話時聲音因難以抑制的憤怒而顫抖，每個字都像鋒利的冰片劃破空氣。

Thesightofthedamagecausedbynegligencefilledhimwithafurythatburnedhotterthanany

flame,fuelinghisdeterminationtoseekjustice.

看到因疏忽造成的損害，他感到無比憤怒，這種憤怒比任何火焰都要熾熱，激發(fā)了他尋

求正義的決心。

Witheverypassingmoment,theangerwithinhimgrew,likeawildfirespreadingthroughthedry

grass,consumingeverythinginitspath.

隨著時間的流逝，他內(nèi)心的憤怒像野火燎原般蔓延，吞噬著沿途的一切。

Theinsulthungintheairlikeapoisoneddart,piercinghisprideandignitingablazeofangerthat

refusedtobeextinguished.

侮辱如同有毒的飛鏢懸在空中，刺穿了他的自尊，引發(fā)了一場無法熄滅的憤怒之火。

Theinjusticedonetoherfamilywasaconstantreminder,fuelingthesmolderingangerthatnever

trulyleftherside.

家人遭受的不公是她永遠(yuǎn)的痛，也是她心中永不熄滅的憤怒之火。

Themerethoughtofitsentashiverofangerdownhisspine,asensationthatmadehisbloodboil

andhisfistsclenchinvoluntarily.

僅僅想到這件事，他就感到一股憤怒的寒意順著脊椎蔓延，這種感覺讓他的血液沸騰，

拳頭不由自主地緊握。

Thebetrayalwassoprofoundthatitfeltasifaknifehadbeentwistedinhisheart,unleashinga

torrentofangerthatthreatenedtoconsumehim.

背叛如此深刻，仿佛有把刀在他的心上旋轉(zhuǎn)，釋放出一股憤怒的洪流，威脅著要吞噬他。

Thediscoveryoftheliesentshockwavesthroughhim,awakeningaslumberingbeastofangerthat

hadlaindormantfortoolong.

謊言的發(fā)現(xiàn)在他心中掀起了軒然大波，喚醒了沉睡已久的憤怒野獸。

Inthatmoment,allreasonfled,replacedbyaraginginfernoofangerthatconsumedhimwhole,

leavingnothingbutashesofhisformerself.

在那一刻，所有的理智都消失了，取而代之的是一場吞噬了他全部的憤怒之火，只留下

了他曾經(jīng)的自我化為灰燼。

寫作思路

在讀后續(xù)寫寫作中，對人物情感的描寫常常能使人物的形象顯得生動鮮活。人的情感可以分

很多種，如喜悅、滿意、失望、悲傷、憎恨、憤怒、驚訝、恐懼、贊賞等等。在英語中有很

多不同的詞和句式來表達(dá)這些不同的情感。

一、情緒描寫之喜樂

喜樂的情緒通常和動作“笑”結(jié)合，這樣寫出來的句式更靈動活潑。常見的表達(dá)方式有：smile

brightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing；weara

bright/broadsmile;givesbasmileo

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beam:smileveryhappily

lightup:ifsomeone'sfaceoreyeslightup,theyshowpleasure,excitementetc.

lightupwith：Hiseyeslitupwithlaughter.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.

lightsthup:tomakesomeone'sfaceoreyesshowpleasureorexcitement.

Suddenlyabrightsmilelitupherface/eyes.

例如：他的父母滿意地笑了。

Hisparentsbeamed/smiledwithsatisfaction.

Hisparentsworeasatisfiedsmileonhisface.

嘗試一下

1.看到直升飛機(jī)，Jane高興地笑了起來。

Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.

Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.

2.當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，小baby開心極了。

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywasfullofjoy.

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.（非

常開心）

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelitupthe

room.

二、情緒描寫之激動

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動詞：whistle（吹口哨）/dance/jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurge（激增）of

happiness/delight/joy/excitement;（one'seyes）twinkle（閃閃發(fā)光）;（one'sheart）beat/pound

wildly（心跳加速）；canhardlyconcealone'sexcited（幾乎無法掩飾興奮的心情）

形容詞：delighted;oveqoyed;excited;thrilled;bewildwithjoy（欣喜若狂）

句子：Awildgaiety（快樂）tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。

Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高興得難以形容。

Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.（flushv.發(fā)紅）她激動得滿臉通紅。

嘗試一下

當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltexcited/thrilled.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.

Knowingshewontheprize,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.

Knowingshewontheprize,shewasovercomewithexcitement.

三、情緒描寫之生氣

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feel/getangry/furious;seizedbyanger;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormout

of/into/off(氣沖沖地…)；storm(怒吼)；

①Iwasseizedbyanger.我被憤怒覆蓋。

②Hewasfumingwithrage.他大發(fā)雷霆。

③Hisangerboiledover.他的憤怒情緒突然爆發(fā)起來了。

④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住自己的憤怒。

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他怒火沖天。

@Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。

@Hegavemealookofburninganger.他看了我一眼，怒不可遏。

嘗試一下

Sam感到非常生氣。

Samfeltveryangry.

Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.

Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.

Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.

四、情緒描寫之傷心痛苦

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sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;be

overcomewithsadness

句子：

Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著臉頰滾了下來

IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我覺得我在悲傷的海洋中漂浮。

Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。

Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她抽泣著，雙手掩面。

Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。我的眼睛充滿了

淚水。

Afrown(皺眉)nowstoodonhisface.他開始皺眉。

Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那里，臉上帶著憂郁的表情。

Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這個消息使他臉上蒙一片陰影。

嘗試一下

1.她傷心不已。

Shefeltextremelysad.

Asadnesscameoverher.

Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.

Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.

Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.

Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.

2.他哽咽欲哭。

Alumpcametohisthroat.

3.她的雙眼哭得通紅

Hereyeswereredfromcrying.

4.她的眼里滿含淚水。

Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.

5.眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來.

Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.

6.Oliver獨(dú)自一人在房間里流下了孤獨(dú)傷心的淚水

Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears.

7.Wilbur哭著直到睡著。

Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.

五、情緒描寫之恐懼

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frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwith

terror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one*skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;

句子：

Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)向我，眼睛里充滿了恐懼。

Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐懼慢慢地涌在她身上。

Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...當(dāng)...時，她被嚇壞了

Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她的臉變得蒼白，站在那里結(jié)結(jié)巴巴。

Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心里涌起一股恐懼。

Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated（窒息）.她的心跳太劇烈，幾乎要窒

息了

嘗試一下

我感到很害怕。

Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.

Iwasin（a）panic/wasfulloffear.

Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.

Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.

六、情緒描寫之其他

感動

①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感動，我們...

②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。

③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來,...

緊張

Herfaceturnedpal,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她的臉?biāo)?，感覺如坐針氈。

Hispalmsweresweatyandkneesweresoft.他手心出汗，膝蓋發(fā)軟。

尷尬/羞愧

Hewasembarrassed/ashamed.

Hisfaceflushed（通紅）/burned（燃燒）withembarrassment/shame.他因?qū)擂味鴿M臉通紅。他窘得臉

都紅了。

Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了頭。

Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning,她感到羞愧難當(dāng)，臉上滾燙。

Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧極了，血液涌

上臉頰。

絕望

Hefelthopeless/desperate.

Uponhearingthebadnew,shewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankinto

hopelessness.聽到這個壞消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入絕望。

Hisbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverythingdesertedhim.他那種向前看、

看到一切事物積極一面的信念拋棄了他。

感謝

Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.

我跑向父親，伸出手，緊緊抱住他。

Withgratefultearshanginginhiseye,shekeptextending（表達(dá)）hisgratitude（感激），"Thankyou

somuch!”

他眼中滿是感激的淚水，不停地說:“非常感謝!”

鼓勵

Takingadeepbreath,Imanagedtocalmmyselfdownandwalkeduptotheplatformconfidently.

深吸一口氣，我成功地讓自己鎮(zhèn)定，然后自信地走上了講臺。

Iwalkedovertohim,andpattedhimontheshoulderencouraging:"Comeon!”

我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓勵道:“加油!”

震驚

Hewassurprised/shocked.

Hiseyesgrewwide/widenedwithsurprise/astonishment（震'原）whenheheardthenews.

聽到這個消息后，他驚訝地睜大了眼睛。

It'shardtobelieve.Hedidn'tacceptthejobthathewaslongfor.

真難以置信，他竟然沒有接受那份期待己久的工作。

Grandfathersdeathwasreallyaboltfromtheblueforme.

祖父去世的消息對我來說簡直是晴天霹雷。

疑惑/迷茫

Hefeltconfused.

Withaconfusedlookonhisface,hehadnoideawhattodo.

他露出困惑的表情，不知道該做什么。

Hescratchedhishead,havingonideawhattodo.

他撓了撓頭，不知道該做什么。

寫作訓(xùn)練

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（2024.遼寧大連.模擬預(yù)測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之

構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

OnwarmSeptembernight,ontheOuterBanksofNorthCarolina,softseawindsfilledthe

air.Themoonwasfull.Miracouldfeeltheenergyintheair.Shelovedeverythingabouttheocean,

andthiseveningshehadcomedowntothebeachtoenjoythesaltynightairandhearthewaves

washingoverthesandgently.

Miraclosedhereyesandlistenedtothewaves.Thegentlerollingsoundwascalming.

Suddenly,Miracouldhearanothersound,too.Shelistenedcarefully.Thesoundwassosoftthat

shecouldbarelyhearit.Sheopenedhereyesandlookeddownatthesand.Itwasmoving!Allofa

sudden,shecouldseeatinyheadcomingout.Then,shesawfourtinyfeetandashell.Aturtlehad

emerged!

Miralookedinamazementatthebabyturtle.Inthemoonlightshecouldjustmakeoutthe

greenandbrownpatternonitsshell.Itwassosmall!Shewatchedwithwonderasotherbaby

turtlesbegantoemerge.Onebyonetheystruggledoutoftheirundergroundnests.Soonthebeach

waslikeamovingcarpetoftinyturtles.

Miraknewtheturtlesshouldheadtowardsthewavesandswimaway,soshewaspuzzled

whentheybegantopullthemselvesintheoppositedirection.Whywouldtheturtlesbegoing

awayfromtheocean?

Suddenly,sherememberedsomethingshehadheardfromsomepeoplelivinghere.

“LoggerheadseaturtlescomebackhereeveryyearinApril.Theyburytheireggsonthebeach

andinthefirstweekofSeptemberthosebabyturtleshatchandheadbackdowntothesea.But

someofthemnevermakeit.Sometimestheydiegoingacrossthebeach,tryingtofindthose

brightlightsinthehouses.Thelightsconfusetheseaturtles.^^

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Miralookedacrossthebeachatherhouse.

Uponarrival,sheshouted,“Theturtlesarehatching!Wehavetohelpthem!”

【答案］Apossibleversion

Miralookedacrossthebeachatherhouse.Whatcameintohersightwashermother,

sittingontheporchrockingherbabysister.Accompanyingherwashisfatherdrinkinglemonade.

Miracouldseethemclearlybecauseherhousehadtwobrightlightsthatlitupthefrontyardof

thehouse.Suddenlyitclicked.Mirashoutedtothematthetopofhervoice,t6Tumoffthelights

please!?,Buttheyfailedtohear,soshebegantorun.Sheracedtoherhousewithonlyonethought

“Turnoffthelights^^.Shetrippedandfell,butwithoutdelayshepickedherselfupandcontinued

runninguntilshereachedthehouse.

Uponarrival,sheshouted,“Theturtlesarehatching!Wehavetohelpthem!”Withthat,

Miradashedintothehouseandturnedoffthebrightporchlights.Herparentswerealittlebit

confused.However,afterMiraexplainedwhathadhappened,theyjumpedintoactionaswell.

Theyhurriedlyrushedtotheirneighborsandaskedthemtoturnofftheirlights.Meanwhile,Mira

wasoffrunningtowardstheseaagain.Shereachedthebeachjustintimetoseethetinyturtles

slippingsilentlyintothewaves.Asthelastturtleswamaway,itseemedtohavelookedbackat

Mira.Inthemoonlight,Mirathoughtshesawitsmile.NowMiracouldpictureallthesmallturtles

swimminghappilyintheocean.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開。米拉熱愛海洋的一切，這晚她來到海灘。閉目傾聽中，她

突然察覺到另一細(xì)微聲響，竟是沙子在動！一只小海龜破土而出，隨后更多小海龜掙扎著離

開地下巢穴，海灘瞬間變得生機(jī)勃勃。米拉驚訝又困惑，因小海龜竟朝遠(yuǎn)離海洋的方向爬去。

她隨即想起當(dāng)?shù)鼐用竦脑?每年四月，紅海龜會來此產(chǎn)卵，九月初小海龜孵化后應(yīng)回歸大海，

但一些海龜會被沿岸房屋的燈光迷惑，誤入歧途，甚至因此喪生。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫

①由第一段句首內(nèi)容“米拉望著海灘對面她的房子?！笨芍谝欢慰梢悦鑼懨桌吹降木跋?/p>

和她的行動。

②由第二段句首內(nèi)容“一到那里，她就喊道：‘海龜正在孵化！我們必須幫助他們！’”可知，

第二段可以描寫米拉勸解人們關(guān)燈后海龜?shù)男袆幼兓妥罱K的結(jié)果。

2.續(xù)寫線索：望著房子一跑向燈光一勸解一關(guān)掉燈一海龜回大海

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①陪伴某人：accompanysb./keepsb.company

②關(guān)掉：turnoff/switchoff

③開始：begin/start

情緒類

①困惑的：confused/puzzled

②高興地：happily/gladly

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1】Whatcameintohersightwashermother,sittingontheporchrockingher

babysister.（運(yùn)用了What引導(dǎo)的主語從句、現(xiàn)在分詞sitting作狀語）

【高分句型2]Miracouldseethemclearlybecauseherhousehadtwobrightlightsthatlitupthe

frontyardofthehouse.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句、that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

【高分句型31However,afterMiraexplainedwhathadhappened,theyjumpedintoactionaswell.

（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

（二）

（2024?廣西?一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇

完整的短文。

Iwasanxious,sittingoutsideanoperatingtheatre,worriedaboutthefateofmysonwho

hadhadaveryseriousaccident.Welivedintheremotearea,andtherewasonlysmallhospital

nearby.Mysonwaslyingunconsciousinsideandwaitingfortheonlysurgeoninthehospitalto

treathim.Forme,everymomentseemedlongerthanayear.Suddenly,adoctorrushedtowards

theoperationroomwhilehisassistanthandedhimawhiteapron（白大荏卜）.Ijustcouldnotcontrol

myanger,startingshoutingatthedoctor."Iamshockedtoseehowcasualyoucanbe!Mysonis

lyingintheoperatingtheatreforsolongandyoucanonlymanagetocomeandseehimnow?”

Thedoctorstaredatme,and,holdinghisshouldergently,said,“ThisistheearliestIcouldget

here.Iwasnotinthehospital.Now,pleaseletmedomyworkandyoutakeaseatthere."

Ibecamemorefurious.Althoughthedoctorwentinsidethetheatre,Icontinuedexpressing

mydissatisfaction.Anhourpassed.Stilltheredlightoutsidetheoperatingtheatrewason.Three

morehourswentby;IthenbegantothinkofallthefrighteningthingsthatImighthavetohear

oncethedoctorgavehimtheconclusion.

Ilookedupandsuddenlyrealizedthatthelighthadgoneoff.Thedoctorcameoutofthe

room,rushingashehandedoverhisaprontothenurse.BeforeIcouldaskhimanything,the

doctorsaid,"Yoursonissafenow.Pleasetalktothenurseifyouneedtoknowanythingmore.

Excuseme.^^BeforeIcouldaskhimanythingmore,thedoctorrushedaway.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Ilostmytemperagain.

Iwasfrozenonthespot,notutteringaword.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Ilostmytemperagain.Butthenurserequestedmetocalmdownandsaid,'Tmsorry,Sir,

foralltheinconvenienceyouhavehad.^^ThenIwastoldthewholetruth.Thesurgeonwasinthe

funeralwhenhewascalledaftermysonwasbroughthere.Hissonpassedawaylastnight.Hehas

alwaysbeenamanofstrongprinciplesandethics.Beforehecouldsayfarewelltohisson,he

rushedheresothatIdon'thavetofacewhatheisgoingthroughrightnow.

Iwasfrozenonthespot,notutteringaword.Isincerelytakealessonfromthisstory.Even

attheageof42,1madethiscostlymistakeofjumpingtoaconclusionevenbeforeIknewthe

wholetruth.Todaymysonissafeanddoingwellbecauseofthefatherwholefthisson'sfuneral

tosavemine.NotuntilthedidIrealizethatneverjumptoanyconclusionbeforeyouknowthe

wholetruth.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的孩子生命垂危需要做手術(shù)，但是醫(yī)生卻遲到

了。作者非常生氣，最后才知道醫(yī)生為了給自己的孩子做手術(shù)卻錯過了醫(yī)生自己孩子的葬禮

的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我又發(fā)脾氣了。”可知，第一段可描寫護(hù)士讓作者冷靜下來并告訴了作

者真相的經(jīng)過。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我僵在那里，一句話也說不出來。”可知，第二段可描寫作者對自己之

前的行為感到內(nèi)疚以及作者的內(nèi)心感受。

2.續(xù)寫線索：作者又發(fā)脾氣了一護(hù)士讓作者冷靜下來一告訴真相一作者愣住了一作

者對之前的行為感到內(nèi)疚——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①要求：request/require

②拯救：save/rescue

③意識到：realizethat/beawarethat

情緒類

①冷靜：calmdown/collectoneself

②遺憾的：sorry/regretful

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Beforehecouldsayfarewelltohisson,herushedheresothatIdon'thave

tofacewhatheisgoingthroughrightnow.（運(yùn)用了連詞Before引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，so...that

引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句以及連接代詞what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2].Todaymysonissafeanddoingwellbecauseofthefatherwholefthisson'sfuneral

tosavemine.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

（三）

（2024.江西.二模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇

完整的短文。

Marcuswasreallyexcitedtowatchasolareclipse（日食）inBloomfieldonasunny

Saturdayafternoon.Hesetupthetelescopehe'dborrowedfromhisteacheronanopenareanear

thebaseballfield,wheretheschoolbaseballteamwaspracticing.Marcusdidn'tlikebaseball;he

wasmoreinterestedinthestars.Asolareclipsewasaspecialevent,andhedidn'twanttomissit.

Whilethebaseballteampracticed,Marcuspaidnoattentiontothem.Ashelookedthrough

histelescopeatthesun,themoonstartedcoveringit,creatingacoolcrescentshape（月牙形）.

Marcuswasamazedbyit.Hewishedhecouldsharethismomentwithsomeonewholoveditas

muchashedid.

Then,thebaseballcoach,Bernardi,announcedovertheloudspeakerthatthebaseballgame

wasputofffor30minutesbecauseofthesolareclipse.CoachBernardi'sannouncementbrought

Mareusback,toreality.Herealizedhewasalonenearthebaseballfield,holdinghistelescope.He

hadbeensointotheeclipsethathedidn'tnoticeabaseballflyingtowardhim.Ithitthetelescope

andbrokethelens（鏡片）.

Marcuswasangry,andheshouted,wonderingwhohadthrownthebaseballathim.He

pickeduptheballandheadedtowardthebaseballfield.Hewasworriedabouttellinghisteacher,

Mr.Baker,aboutthebrokentelescope.Sure,itwasn'thisfault,buthehadpositionedthetelescope

nearthebaseballfield,andhestillfeltheshouldtakeresponsibility.

AsMarcussteppedontothebaseballfield,herealizedsomefansandplayerswerewatching

theeclipse.Eachpersonwastryingtogetachancetolookthroughthetelescopesthatsomefans

hadbroughttowatchtheeclipse.Marcusnoticedaboyrunningtowardhim."I'mreallysorry

aboutwhathappenedwithyourtelescope.Ididn'tmeantobreakit.Ishouldhavebeenmore

careful,"saidtheboy,withasincereexpression.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。

Marcusunderstoodthatitwasjustanaccident.

Afterawhile,itwasMarcus'sturntolookthroughthetelescope.

【答案】Marcusunderstoodthatitwasjustanaccident.Heappreciatedtheboy*shonestyand

forgavehimimmediately.SensingMarcus'sdisappointment,theboyofferedtosharehisown

telescopewithMarcus,whichhehadbroughttowatchtheeclipseaswell.Gratefulfortheboy's

kindness,Marcusacceptedtheoffer,andtogethertheymarveledatthecelestialwonderunfolding

abovethem.Theeclipsewasasharedexperiencenow,turningamomentoffrustrationintoa

bondingopportunity.

Afterawhile,itwasMarcus*sturntolookthroughthetelescope.Ashepeeredthroughthe

lens,thedamagedlensofhisowntelescopewasmomentarilyforgotten.Thecrescentsunwasa

breathtakingsight.Marcusfeltarushofexcitement,realizingthatthebeautyoftheuniversecould

bringpeopletogetherinunexpectedways.Heturnedtotheboyandthankedhimagain.Together,

theycontinuedtoobservetheeclipse.Asthemoonmovedpastthesunanddaylightreturned,

Marcusleftthebaseballfieldwithanewfoundappreciationfortheunexpectedconnectionslife

couldoffer,andalessonlearnedabouttakingresponsibilityandturninganegativesituationintoa

positiveone.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以Marcus觀看日食的經(jīng)歷為線索展開，講述了他在看日食時望遠(yuǎn)鏡被棒球意

外砸壞，最后與造成意外的男孩化干戈為玉帛，并一起分享觀看日食的故事。

【詳解】段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句“Marcus明白這只是一場意外?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Marcus

原諒男孩，男孩與他分享望遠(yuǎn)鏡，他們一起觀看日食。

由第二段首句“過了一會兒，輪到Marcus通過望遠(yuǎn)鏡觀看了。”可知，第二段可描寫Marcus

觀看日食時的感受以及這次經(jīng)歷給他帶來的感悟。

續(xù)寫線索：理解——原諒一分享——觀看——激動——感悟一收獲

詞匯激活

行為類

忘記：forget/leavebehind

提供：offer/provide

離開：leave/depart

情緒類

感激的：grateful/thankful

興奮的：excited/thrilled

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].SensingMarcus'sdisappointment,theboyofferedtosharehisown

telescopewithMarcus,whichhehadbroughttowatchtheeclipseaswell.（使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語

作狀語和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為telescope）

[高分句型2].Marcusfeltarushofexcitement,realizingthatthebeautyoftheuniversecould

bringpeopletogetherinunexpectedways.（使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）

（四）

（2024.貴州畢節(jié)?三模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成

一篇完整的短文。

OneSundaymorning,ahighschoolstudentnamedLilywaswanderingintheschool.The

sunshonebrightlythroughtheleafytreesthatlinedintheschoolcourtyard.Agentlebreeze

wafted（吹送，飄送）throughtheair,carryingthedistantsoundsoflaughterandchatterfromother

students.ItwasatthispeacefulandjoyfulmomentthatLilysawawalletlyingontheground.

“Whoseisit?”Lilysaidtoherself.Shepickeditupandopenedit,seeingalargeamountofcash

accompaniedbyimportantdocumentsandIDcards.

DoubtandconfusionbegantoconsumeLily."WhatshouldIdo?ShouldIkeepthemoney

formyself?IcanbuymanythingsI'vewantedforalongshethought.Thetreesaroundher

seemedtoswingtogether,asifmirroringthechaoswithinherthoughts