熱點(diǎn)18旅游2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語(yǔ)最具熱度話題作文（教師版）

熱點(diǎn)18旅游旅游無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了快樂。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：旅游?！绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）下圖是某街區(qū)的平面圖,最近來此旅游的人很多,為方便游客,請(qǐng)寫一份旅游指南。(詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)單詞)WeletoCenterStreet.First,takeataxifromtheairport._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WeletoCenterStreetTakeataxifromtheairport.GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright.NowyouareonCenterStreet.CenterStreetisagoodplacetohavefun.It’saverybusystreet.Youcanenjoyflowersinthegarden.It’sbetweenthepostofficeandtherestaurant.Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant.It’sacrossfromthebookstore.【解析】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給的圖示寫一篇旅游指南。這是一篇看圖作文，我們要仔細(xì)觀察圖片中所標(biāo)注的街道、場(chǎng)所的名稱，分清方向等信息，用正確的英語(yǔ)介紹里面的這些場(chǎng)所。這篇作文跟我們教材中所學(xué)的指路這一話題非常相關(guān)，里面會(huì)涉及一些短語(yǔ)和句型，因此學(xué)生們可以從教材上所學(xué)的這些知識(shí)著手。寫作時(shí)，要注意空間順序，敘述要有條理，不能雜亂無(wú)章。使用祈使句和并列句，這些句型在這個(gè)場(chǎng)景中是經(jīng)常用到的。注意動(dòng)詞的正確形式，使用正確的介詞短語(yǔ)。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目所給的圖示，介紹了圖上的街道、場(chǎng)所的位置關(guān)系等信息。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，包括了文章需要的所有信息。整篇短文表達(dá)有序，作者按照了從下向上的順序，依次介紹，這樣處理，使文章很有條理。這篇短文里主要使用了祈使句和and連接的并列句，還使用了復(fù)合句。文章里比較好的句型有GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.、ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright、Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.、Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant等。（二）假如你叫Jane,這個(gè)暑假你們?nèi)覝?zhǔn)備出去旅游，就下列內(nèi)容給旅行社的經(jīng)理寫一封信。注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2、不得在文中透露自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearmanager,Mywholefamilywantto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jane【答案】Dearmanager,MywholefamilywanttohaveajourneytoDalianduringthesummerholiday.ItwillbeginonJuly10th,andthejourneywilllastfortendays.Wewillgotherebyplane.Couldyouhelpmebooksevenairtickets?Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.Weneedthreeroomsforsevenpeople,andwhat’sthemostimportant,thehotelshouldnotbefarfromtheocean.Wewilltakeawalkalongthebeachinthemorning,andwewillgoswimmingandplayingvolleyballonthebeachafterlunch.Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.Itwillbegreatfun.Intheevening,wewilleatmanydifferentkindsofseafood.Itwillbeanexcitingvacationandwewillhaveagoodtime.Wearelookingforwardtothisjourney.Thankyouforyourhelpingus.Yours,Jane【解析】試題分析：本篇作文為應(yīng)用文，要求用英文寫一封信，告知旅行社經(jīng)理關(guān)于旅游的主要事項(xiàng)。要求：1．書信應(yīng)包括圖中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)內(nèi)容；2．信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3．詞數(shù)控制在80字左右。（開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。4．要注意時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤?！緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】：這篇書信要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)。并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。亮點(diǎn)是表示順序詞的運(yùn)用，使文章更具條理性，思維清晰，表達(dá)清楚，例如ItwillbeginonJuly10th,，Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.，Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.等。（一）假如在英語(yǔ)課上，老師讓同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阆矚g哪種旅游方式并說明理由。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游

1.有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；

2.不必自己找賓館；

3.結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助。

個(gè)人旅游

1.自由安排時(shí)間；

2.選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；

3.學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己。

注意事項(xiàng):1.詞數(shù)不少于60；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或姓名。參考詞匯:團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travelwithagroup；個(gè)人旅游travelalone;安排arrange;景點(diǎn)sightsHello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Ilike____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Iliketravellingwithagroupbetterthantravellingalone.That’sbecauseifwehaveaguideleadingtheway,wewon’tgetlost.Andthereisnoneedforustolookforahotelbyourselves.Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother.Anyway,weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart.Sotravellingwithagroupisachancetocooperatewithothers.【解析】試題分析：作者介紹了在團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游和個(gè)人旅游之間進(jìn)行選擇自己喜歡的旅游方式，作者選擇了團(tuán)隊(duì)旅行。并介紹了團(tuán)隊(duì)旅行的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者把為什么喜歡團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游的原因交代的很清楚，Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother；weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart..這些句子給文章增色不少。（二）在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路不必自己找旅館結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助個(gè)人旅游自由安排時(shí)間選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意：1.文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.想法至少在兩句以上；3.詞數(shù)為80—100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travelwithagroup；個(gè)人旅游travelalone；安排arrangeRecently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.Withaguide'shelp,theywon'tgetlostandtheydon'tneedtolookforhotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakefriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.However,otherstudentsprefertotravelalone.That'sbecausetheycanarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.What'smore,it'sachanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.Forme,I'dliketotravelalone.IwanttospendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇討論結(jié)果報(bào)告，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，介紹喜歡的旅游方式。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后表達(dá)出自己的看法與觀點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中g(shù)etlost，withaguide’shelp,lookfor,besides,makefriends,preferto,lookafter等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還使用了表語(yǔ)從句，固定句型It’s+形容詞/名詞+for+sb.+todosth.等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。（三）山東泰山被聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織定為世界自然文化遺產(chǎn)。假設(shè)外國(guó)友人到你學(xué)校參觀后準(zhǔn)備去旅游。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)和圖片向外國(guó)友人簡(jiǎn)單介紹泰山：1.位于山東中部，是中國(guó)著名旅游勝地。每年有大批中外游客去旅游觀光。2.乘汽車大約要2個(gè)小時(shí)，也可以乘火車。3.登山便可領(lǐng)略。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐字翻譯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MountTaiisoneofthemostfamousmountainsinChina.ItisinthemiddleofShandongProvince.EveryyearthousandsofChineseandforeignersvisitthere.It’snotfarfromhere.Ittakesyouabouttwohourstogettherebybus.Youcanalsogotherebytrain.AutumnisthebestseasontoclimbMountTai.Onthetopofthemountain,youcanenjoytheseaofclouds,wondrouspines,uniquerocksaroundyouandthesunrise.Andthesunriseiswonderful.MountTaiisreallyaniceplacetovisit.【詳解】本文是一篇旅游景點(diǎn)的介紹英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：交代寫作的目的：介紹泰山的情況——是我國(guó)最著名的山峰之一。第二部分：文章主體部分：介紹泰山的具體信息——地理位置，交通方式，旅游季節(jié)等。第三部分：總結(jié)全文。（四）根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇有關(guān)北京的旅游指南，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求語(yǔ)言通順，條理清晰，詞數(shù)不少于90詞.

China

Aboutthecountry

location

InAsia

Beijing,thecapital

Oldandbig

longhistory

Oneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld

Placestovisit

Beijing

VisitthePalaceMuseum,

tryBeijingduck

Weather

Verydifferentaroundthecountry

Others

Language

Chinese

Money

RMB

...

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BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.Itisoldandbig.InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.WeuseRMB.【解析】試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.等等。（一）假如你是北京的李麗，下周你在哈爾濱讀中學(xué)的表妹來北京旅游．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她寫一封信，并告訴她在北京旅游期間做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中學(xué)生．寫作要點(diǎn)：1、歡迎她來北京．2、介紹北京的情況．（1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過330C；（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵；（3）必去的名勝：長(zhǎng)城．3、對(duì)她在北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學(xué)生提出具體建議．寫作要求：1、不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名．2、可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫．3、字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰．4、至少80詞．DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!YoursLiLi．【答案】DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？WeletoBeijing．BeijingislocatedintheeastofChinaandattractsmoreandmorepeopleathomeandabroadtovisit，studyandevenlivedthereforalongtime．Thereasonwhybeijingissopopularisthatitisneitherhotinsummernorcoldinwinter．Notonlyisitthecapitalofchina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．Ifyouwanttohaveanenjoyablejourney，Isuggestyouclimbthegreatwall．BecausethefamoussayinginChinaisthatthemanwhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman．Theweatherwillbehotnextweekendsandthehighesttemperatureisabove30degrees．Soyoushouldwearcoolclothes．Thetransportationisveryconvenientbecausethesubwaynearlycoversthewholecity．Soyouhadbettertakethesubwaytogoout．Beijingisacivilizedcityandyoushouldbeacivilizedstudent．ZunlaoaiyouisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation．Ifyousitnexttotheoldorthesick，pleasetaketheinitiativeseat．Lookingforwardtoyouring.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以來“北京旅游”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一封書信。介紹北京的情況，以及寫出文明旅游的要求。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中Weleto,thecapitalof,takethesubway,hadbetter,lookingforwardto，and、so等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如:句型notonly...butalso...；賓語(yǔ)從句、條件狀語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。（二）國(guó)慶節(jié)即將到來，你的筆友想去三亞旅游，正好今年暑假你和父母去了三亞旅游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)自己的所見、所感及所給的信息向你的筆友介紹三亞之旅.AtriptoSanyaLocationinthesouthofHainanWeatherhotintheday,coolatnightTotalsize(面積)about1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityCharactersblueseaandbeautifulbeachesThemostfamoustouristattractions(旅游勝地)BuddhiststatueofGuanyin(海上觀音),NanshanTemple(南山寺),YalongBay(亞龍灣),Theendsoftheearth(天涯海角),WuzhizhouIsland(蜈支洲島)Activitiesgoswimming,gosurfing(沖浪),gofishing,godiving(潛水),playbeachvolleyball…Foodseafood,coconutjuice,fruitTransportationbyair,bytrain…Feelings…要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)不少于70左右。(短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但須把省略號(hào)的部分補(bǔ)充完整，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【答案】AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.SanyaisinthesouthofHainananditisabout1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityinHainan.It'shotintheday,coolatnight.It'sfamousforblueseaandbeautifulbeachesthere.ThemostfamoustouristattractionsareBuddhiststatueofGuanyin,NanshanTemple,YalongBay,TheendsoftheearthandWuzhizhouIsland.TherearelotsofthingstodoinSanya,youcangoswimming,gosurfing,gofishing,godivingandplaybeachvolleyballandsoon.It'swonderful.Alsoyoucanenjoytheseafoodanddrinkcoconutjuiceandtastelotsoffruit,theyareverydelicious.IfyougotoSanya,youcangotherebyairorbytrain.Inthecityyoucangoanywherebybus,bybikeandbytaxi.It'sveryconvenient.Ithinkitwasrelaxingtospendmylastholiday.Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇風(fēng)景介紹，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示來寫一篇介紹三亞風(fēng)景區(qū)的信件，主要介紹三亞的位置，天氣，旅游點(diǎn)及當(dāng)?shù)靥厣?，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述三亞景區(qū)的相關(guān)信息；描述細(xì)節(jié)時(shí)，細(xì)節(jié)描寫細(xì)致；并同時(shí)要結(jié)合所給信息敘述完整，保證條理清晰。（三）考試結(jié)束,我們背上包,帶上自己,去旅游。假如你是李華,今天你們班英語(yǔ)課上進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給遠(yuǎn)在英國(guó)的筆友Peter寫封電子郵件,告訴他討論的情況,并說說你喜歡的旅游方式和理由。寫作要點(diǎn):1.討論的話題:去旅游。2.同學(xué)們的旅游方式:(1)50%的同學(xué)想進(jìn)行一次自己計(jì)劃的"自由行"(DIYtour)(2)30%的同學(xué)想進(jìn)行一次簡(jiǎn)單的"跟團(tuán)旅游"(packagetour)3.說說你喜歡的旅游方式和理由。寫作要求:1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Recentlywehavediscusseddifferentwaystogotravelling.HalfofthestudentschooseaDIYtour.Itisconvenientforthemtoarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.Inaddition,itisalsoagoodchanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.However,30percentofthestudentspreferapackagetour.Withaguide’shelp,theywon’tgetlostandtheydon’tneedtolookforthehotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakesomenewfriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.Personally,IremendaDIYtourbecauseIcanspendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.Bestwishes!YoursLiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按照電子郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接開頭，主體部分結(jié)合學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)并說明原因，最后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采用三段式，簡(jiǎn)潔明了；第一段先表示問候，第二段開門見山，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)介紹了兩種不同的旅游方式并詳細(xì)說明了理由，