專題04 家人與朋友-備戰(zhàn)2022年上海中考英語書面表達滿分攻略（解析版）

（一）（2021年寶山一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anactofkindness”.(以“一個善意的舉動”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）“贈人玫瑰，手有余香”。意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同贈人一只玫瑰般微不足道，但它帶來的溫馨都會在贈花人和愛花人的心底慢慢升騰、彌漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，請結(jié)合生活中的一次真實經(jīng)歷，談一談你對善良的看法。（注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。2.照搬閱讀語篇內(nèi)容不得分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達僅供參考）havetroublewith/doinggiveahelphand....treatsbwithkindness...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AnactofkindnessHereisatouchingmomentinmylifethatlwillneverforget.lstillrememberthatwasarainyday.lfailedanexam,andlfeltveryupset.What’sworse,Ididn’tbringanumbrella.Countlessraindropsbeatagainstmybody.Suddenly,theraindropsdisappeared.Whenllookedup,lsawabigumbrellaandmydeskmate,Mike.Hesaid,“Anexamcan’tstandforeverything.lbelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.”Hiswordsreallytouchedmyheartandcheeredmeup.Afterthat,lstudiedharderandmadegreatprogress.It’sourdutytoshowkindnesstoothersaroundus.Ithinkeveryoneshouldtreatotherswithkindness,whenhavetroublewithsomething.【解析】【分析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時結(jié)合題目要求，進行作答寫作，第一段引出話題“善意的舉動”；第二段記敘一次善意的舉動；第三段說明自己對善意的看法。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；記敘善意的舉動這件事情，時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主，說明自己對于善良的看法，采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。（二）（2020年虹口一模）WritingWriteapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“inmymemory”.（以“我記憶中（的）”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）回顧初中幾年的學(xué)習(xí)生活，你的記憶中一定有許多難忘的人、事、物或地點，請選取一個角度談?wù)勀愕南敕ɑ蚋惺?。（注意?.在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文AnunforgettableexperienceinmymemoryEverybodyhassomethingunforgettable.Forme,Istillrememberthedaymydadtaughtmehowtorideabike.Iwasafraidtorideabike.Butmydad'sencouragementmademedeterminedtolearnit.Atfirst,Ithoughthewasalwaysbehindme,holdingtheseatinordertokeepmefromfallingoff.Iwashappywiththis,butherealizedhecan'tholdmeupallmylife.Andhetoldmethatonedayhewouldhavetoleave,soImustbeindependent.Afteralongtime,Ifinallylearnedit.Thisunforgettableexperiencetoldmewecan'tdependonanyoneelsebutourselves.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇半命題作文。要求補全題目“inmymemory”并根據(jù)題目完成作文。寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。例文點評：例文采用一段式；使用第一人稱，時態(tài)選用一般過去時。向我們介紹了自己難忘的回憶。高分亮點：短語：somethingunforgettable；beafraidtodosth；inorderto；dependon等。句型：Forme,Istillrememberthedaymydadtaughtmehowtorideabike.使用了定語從句，that被省略。Thisunforgettableexperiencetoldmewecan'tdependonanyoneelsebutourselves賓語從句，that被省略。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清文章的要求和要點；其次，理順自己的行文思路；再次緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡；最后要仔細(xì)檢查是否有單詞拼寫錯誤和標(biāo)點的誤用等，還要注意是否出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，有無重復(fù)遺漏，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）（2020年嘉定一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“help(s)megrow”（以“助我成長”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）生活中的很多事或人能幫助我們成長。理想、品格、老師、親人、朋友……都為我們的成長助力，請選取一個方面，結(jié)合發(fā)生在你自己身上的經(jīng)歷，來寫一寫他（它）是如何助力你成長的。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表達僅供參考）encouragesb.todo...dosb.afavourwiththehelpof...makegreatprogress________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MaryhelpsmegrowLookingbackonthepastfouryears’study,therehavebeenmanydifficultiesformenotonlyinstudybutalsoinlife.Thereisanunforgettableexperience.ItwasthefirsttimethatIdidn’tpassanimportantexam.Atthattime,IwassodepressedthatIcouldhardlycontrolmyself.AfterknowingthatIwasinbadmood,myfriendMaryspentallherfreetimecompanyingmeandneverstoppedencouragingme.Withherencouragement,Itriedmybestinstudy.Finally,Isucceededinmakingprogress,andIrealizedthathowimportantagoodfriendwastome.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文，開頭先概括描述，緊接著第二段圍繞著受感觸的事展開寫。2.例文點評：文章以第一人稱來敘述，時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主。描述事情情節(jié)時，條例清楚，語句表達通順，邏輯性強。3.高分亮點：短語：notonly…butalso；spendsometimedoingsth句子：ItwasthefirsttimethatIdidn’tpassanimportantexam中that引導(dǎo)的定語從句；Irealizedthathowimportantagoodfriendwastome中that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。（四）（2021年普陀區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_______haswonmyrespect”.（以“……贏得了我的尊敬”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）提示：AuntSandy用行動贏得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身邊是否有這樣一位值得尊敬的人關(guān)心著你的成長？請先補全標(biāo)題，再結(jié)合體事例談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。照抄語篇不得分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyfatherhaswonmyrespectThepeopleIrespectthemostismyfather.Heisadoctor.Healwaysbusywithwork.SinceIcouldremember,hehasneverspentawholeweekendtostaywithme.HegoestothehospitalveryearlybeforeIgetup,andcomesbackhomeafterIsleep.ButIdoesn’tmatteratall.Heisaherotome.Hedevotesalmostallthetimetohispatients,andmanylivesaresaved.Healwayssaid,amanshouldhavedignity,integrity,honor,andmostofall,behelpfultoothers.Thisaffectedmedeeply,soIworkhardsothatsomedayIcanbethemanlikemyfather.（五）（2021年松江區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothefollowinginformation.意大利爺爺Paterno的勵志故事使它成為很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活學(xué)習(xí)中你也有一位想效仿或追隨的榜樣。請以“AmodelIwanttofollow”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。照抄閱讀語篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】AmodelIwanttofollowIhaveamodelinmyheartinsoccerfield--Messi,themodelIwanttofollow.Frommyprospective,inthepresentsoccerfield,Idonotthinkanyoneelsecanmatchhim.Firstofall,hisgreatballcontrollingskillsbroughtaworldoffansfantasticexclamation.Heisnotonlyfastbutalsocaneasilycrossthedefenderswhointendtostophim.Moreover,itishistalent,whichcanevenmatchthegodofsoccer--Marodona,hisdiligenceandpreciousqualitythatdeeplyattractme.Ultimately,heisthemodelwithdistinguishedcharacteristicIwanttofollowbecauseIamfondofsoccer,therealartisticsoccer.Therefore,Iwillstudyhardandtrymybesttopromotemysoccerskilltocatchupwithhiminordertobeanoutstandingsoccerplayer.（六）（2021年閔行區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfunnestfamilymemory”(根據(jù)提示，以“我最有趣的家庭回憶”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)提示:回憶有趣的家庭生活總是美好的。請結(jié)合你的親身經(jīng)歷，描述你和家人在一起時最有趣的事兒，并談?wù)劯邢搿?注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。抄襲閱讀理解語篇的不給分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyfunnestfamilymemoryTherearecountlessinterestingthingsinourfamily.Letmetellyouonething.It’sabouteating.Irememberonceagain,whenIwasatmygrandma’shouse,itwasgoingtoadinner.Mystomachwashungryandsang"Iwanttoeat".Irantothetableinawindymannerandstartedeating.Ijusthadabiteofthefood.,feelingveryspicy,askedhermother:"Mom,whyisvegetablepeppersohot?"Momranoverandtastedvegetablepepperandsaid,"Thisisnotvegetablepepper,it'spepper!""Ah?,Iaskedinconfusion.Thisischili,nowonderit'ssospicy.""Givemesomewater!"Thefamilylaughedwhentheyheardit.Infact,therearemanyinterestingfamilystories,waitingforustodiscover.Aslongasyouareseriousaboutdiscoveringit,youwillfeelthatfamilyfuneverywhere.（七）（2019年青浦區(qū)一模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThemostvaluablelessonI’veeverlearned”（請以“我學(xué)到的最珍貴的一課”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Usethefollowingasareference(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）Whoorwhatgaveyouthemostvaluablelesson?Whydoyouthinkitisthemostvaluablelesson?Whatwillyoudoafterlearningthislesson?注意:抄襲試卷中內(nèi)容不得分。文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名以及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThemostvaluablelessonI’veeverlearnedThemostvaluablelessonwasgivenbymyelderbrotherStevewhohelpedmegrowintoaresponsibleperson.OncewhenIreturnedintearsfromaSaturdaybaseballgame,itwasStevewhotooksometimetoaskmewhathappened.WhenItoldhimthatmybaseballhadflownthroughneighbor'swindow,breakingtheglasswithacrash,Steveencouragedmetoconfesstoher.Afterall,Iwassupposedtoplaybaseballontheplaygroundinsteadofinthepathbetweenbuildings.AlthoughmyvoiceshookasIapologizedtomyneighbor,Iofferedtopayforthebrokenwindowfrommypocketmoney.ThisleftmeadeepimpressionandI’vebeentaughttofacetheresultsofmybehaviorandshouldertheresponsibility.（八）（2019年浦東新區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“HowluckyIamtohave_________”（以“我多么幸運能夠擁有__________”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格，請在答題紙上把作文標(biāo)題補充完整，如：atruefriend，awarmfamily，aninterestingbook……）在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你可能因為擁有一位真誠的朋友、一個溫暖的家、一本有趣的書等等而感到幸運，請選取一個方面談?wù)勛约旱挠H身經(jīng)歷，并說明為何感到幸運。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不子評分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表達僅供參考）BesatisfiedwithEncouragesb.todosthDosbafavorWiththehelpof________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowluckyIamtohavemyfamilyHowluckyIam!Ihavethebestparentsintheworld.Mymothercooksmealsformeeveryday.ShealwaysspendsmoneybuyingthingsthatIlikebest.Myfathertakesmetotheschoolandtakesmehomeeveryday.Iknowhemustbetired,butheneversaysthat.WhenIamhappy,theylookhappierthanme.WhenIfeelbad,theystaybesidemeandmakemehappyagain.Theygiveallthattheyhavetome.Iwanttosaytothemloudly,"Iloveyou,parents!"（九）（2019年虹口區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iadmiremyself”（以“夸夸我自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）提示：為了給初中四年的學(xué)習(xí)生活留下美好的回憶，你們班級策劃了一次主題斑會。要求每位同學(xué)以“夸夸我自己”為題，用一至三個形容詞概括自己的優(yōu)點，并通過舉例子或列舉理由加以說明。（注意；短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThereislittledoubtthatIhavechangedforbetterthanbeforeinthepastfouryears.Now,twowordswillbeusedtodescribeme,courageous,persistent.Followsaremyreasons.Beforeenteringthejunior,Iwasthetopstudentinmyschoolallthetime.Everytimemyparentsattendedthemeetingintheschool,theywouldbeproudofmebecauseofthehighlypraisefromourteachersbeforeotherparents.However,atthebeginningofthestudyinjuniorschool,Iwasthebeststudentnolonger,andevenbecamethelastone,whichupsetmealot.Andforalongtime,IfounditextremelyfrustratingthatalltheclassmatesexceptmecouldfollowOurteachers.Luckily,InevergaveupmystudyandIbelievedthatonlyifworkharder,Iwouldgethighermarks.Finally,inthefinalexamofgradesix,Ibecamethefirstinmyclass.HowIadmiremyselfbecauseofmybeingpersistentandcourageous.（十）（2019年金山區(qū)一模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iamnolongeralittlechild”以“我不再是一個孩子”為題寫一篇至少60字的短文。背景：如今，我們的父母一方面對我們百般呵護，一方面又時常抱怨我們長不大。請給你的父母寫一封信，證明你不再是一個孩子了（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入字?jǐn)?shù)）。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表達和圖片僅供參考）※usedto※makeme※（be）fullof（注意：信中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IamnolongeralittlechildDearparents,Asajuniorthreestudent,IthinkIhavegrownupandI’mnolongeralittlechild.Inthepast,Ialwaysaskedyoutodosomethingformeandneverthoughtaboutwhetheryouweretiredandbusy.ButnowIcandoalmosteverythingmyselfandevenhelpyoudothehousework.IusedtobeshybutnowIcantalktothestrangers.Inaword,Iamnolongeralittlechild.Thankyouforalwayscaringforme.YoursLinda（十一）在中國傳統(tǒng)文化中，“家”是一個永恒的話題。家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，溫暖而有力量。請你結(jié)合下圖，以“Home”為題，寫一篇約110詞的英語短文。讓外國朋友了解中國文化中的“家”。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HomeHomemeansalottoeveryChinese.Whenourfamilymemberscomebackhomeforreunion,wesitaroundthetable,sharingourachievementsandhappiness.Homebecomesthewarmestplace.It’saplacefulloflove.Lovecanbeexpressedbygift,familydinnerandphonecall.However,noneisbetterthangoingbackhomeandspendingtimewithourfamilies.It’salsoaplacefullofstrength.Wheneverwehavedifficulties,wecanreturnhome.Thankstotheencouragementandhelpfromourfamilies,wecanrebuildourbeliefandconfidencetokeepmovingforward.Sohowlonghaveyoubeenawayfromhome?Comeback.Homeisalwayswaitingforyou.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“家”為題來介紹中國文化中的“家”。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。第一段引出主題；第二段到第四段介紹了家究竟是一個什么樣的地方；最后一段總結(jié)概括。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。（十二）Lifeisfulloflove愛是荒漠甘泉，滋養(yǎng)你的心靈；愛是長夜明燈，指引你前進的方向。生活中愛無處不在，它或來自你的父母、家人；或來自你的老師、朋友、同學(xué)甚至陌生人。請你用英文以“Lifeisfulloflove”為題寫一篇短文，敘述一個你經(jīng)歷過充滿愛的故事。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.書面表達必須寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LifeisfullofloveIsthereathingfullofloveburieddeeplyinyourheart?Iwanttoshareonewithallofyouandpushmyself.Oneafternoon,Idraggedmyselfontothebustogohome.Itwastherushhourandthebuswasextremelycrowded.IwasevensecretlyhappythatIhadaseat.Justatthatmoment,awomangotonthebuswithababyinherarms.Shewasstandingrightnexttome.JustasIwashesitating,oureyesmet.Ihadmixedfeelings,embarrassed,worried,nervous…BeforeIcouldgetup,shesaidtomewithawarmvoice“Boy,youmustbeverytiredafterthewholeday’swork.Butfightingforyourdreamisahappything.Iwillgetoffatthenextstop.Sithereandhaveagoodrest.”Howkindandunderstandingshewas!Whatshesaidmademenotonlyashamedbutmoved.Itwasherlovethatispushingmetobeabetterperson!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Lifeisfulloflove為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般過去時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段敘述自己經(jīng)歷過的充滿愛的故事；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（十三）（2020年松江區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Mygains”.(疫情期間，我們足不出戶，但是我們看到聽到了很多感人事跡，我們也經(jīng)歷了一段不同尋常的學(xué)習(xí)生活。無論是無私奉獻的白衣天使或社區(qū)志愿者還是我們自己的生活經(jīng)歷都給我們帶來了不同的感悟和收獲。請結(jié)合這些感人事跡或自身經(jīng)歷，完成一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Thefollowingexpressionsarejustforreference:onlinelearningmovingmedicalworkersimpressivecommunityvolunteerswarm-hearted注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：MygainsWeChinesestudentshavetotakeonlinecoursesathomebecauseofthevirus.Thereisnodenyingthateverystudenthashisownimpressiveexperience.Asforme,Ifirmlybelievethatitmakesmemoreknowledgeableandself-disciplined.Duringthisperiod,teachersarrangedourtimewellenoughtomakeeverystudentstudymoreefficientlyathome.Ialsotookfulluseofmyleisuretimetolearnmypoorsubject---Maths.WhenIwasinneed,IalsousedQQorWechattoaskmyteachersforhelpandtheycouldhelpmeinstantly.TeachersalsomadePPTinclasssothatwecouldgeteffectiveknowledge.However,sometimesmyself-controlwasnotenough,somyparentsalwaysremindmethatImustspendmoretimestudyingwhenIwasathomesothatIcouldbeadmittedintoanidealhighschool.Afteracertaintime,Iamabletotakefulladvantageofmytimeflexibly.Therefore,onlinelearningimprovesmyabilityofgettingknowledgeandcontrollingmyself.（十四）（2020年寶山區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Adaytoremember.(以“值得記住的一天”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)Thefollowingquestionsareforreferenceonly.(以下問題提示僅供參考）1.Isthereadaythatyouwillalwaysremember?2.Whathappenedonthatday?Wherewereyou?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：ADaytoRemember(難忘的一天)ItwasSunday.OurteacherMr.Zhuledustoaparknearby.Usuallywegototheparktospendourholiday.Buttodaywewenttheretotakepartinvoluntarylabor.Wegotthereatnineo’clock.Mr.Zhudividedusintothreegroupsandthenwebeganworking.ThestudentsinGroupOneplantedtreesandwateredflowers.ThestudentsinGroupTwowerebusycollectinglitterleftbythetourist.Theyalsocleanedthebenchesinthepark.IwasinGroupThree.Wewenttothechildren’splaygroundandcleanedalltheequipmentthere.Weworkedveryhard.Ataboutelevenwefinishedworking.Wemetatthegateofthepark.Weallfelttiredbutveryhappy.范文二ADaytoRemember(難忘的一天)IstillrememberthefirstdayIwenttothezoo.WhenIwasonlyfiveyearsold,mymothertookmethere.Iwaspleasedtoseesomanyrealanimalsatthesametime.Theyseemedsolovelyandactive.Ispentaniceday.Butonmywayhome,Ibegantofeelsorryforthem.Theyweretakenawayfromtheirparentsandfriendsandalsofarawayfromthenature.Theymusthavefeltlonely,Ithought.Everyday,theonlythingtheycoulddowastositthereandwaitforfood.（十五）（2020年嘉定區(qū)二模）Inatleast60words,writealettertothepersonyouwanttoexpressyourthanks.（以"Athank-youletterto”為題，寫一封不少于60個詞的感謝信，標(biāo)點符號不占格）2020年是不平凡的一年，在這段特殊的日子里，你一定感受到了父母、老師、朋友或是一些陌生人給你帶來的溫暖和感動，請結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一封信給他(他們)，表達你的感激之情。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表達僅供參考）thank...forbemovedbyprovide...with___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________