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熱點(diǎn)10二胎二胎無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一,它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了很大的變化。今天,選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是:二胎?!绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】(一)最近,社會(huì)上在熱議已由全國(guó)人大立法通過(guò)的新的國(guó)家計(jì)劃生育政策,即俗稱的“二孩政策”(secondchildpolicy)。假設(shè)學(xué)校本周“英語(yǔ)角”將以此為話題展開(kāi)討論,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文作為討論稿,闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。要求:1.詞數(shù)80100左右。(開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))2.表明你的觀點(diǎn)(贊同或反對(duì)),至少說(shuō)明兩點(diǎn)理由。3.語(yǔ)句連貫,語(yǔ)法正確,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。Recently,thegovernmentannouncedthatallparentswouldbeallowedtohaveasecondchild._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,thegovernmentannouncedthatallparentswouldbeallowedtohaveasecondchild.Somestudentsobjecttothenewpolicy.Theythinktheinglittlesisterorbrotherwillsharethelovefromtheirmonparents.Andtheywillnotgetwhattheywantsoeasilyasbefore.Thelittlesisterorbrothermayalsoaffectpresentquietlife,eventhestudy.Somestudentssaytheywelethenewpolicy.Theythinkitwillgivemorehappinesstothefamily.Therewillbemorepeopletomunicatewithandmorebrothersorsisterstolookaftertheoldofthefamily.Iagreeonthesecondopinion.AndIcan’twaitforanewbabyinmyfamily.Ibelieveheorshecanbringmanysurprisestous.(116words)【解析】試題分析:這是一篇圖表類作文,我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表達(dá)清晰,用了很多比較復(fù)雜的詞匯和句子。例如:Theythinktheinglittlesisterorbrotherwillsharethelovefromtheirmonparents;Theythinkitwillgivemorehappinesstothefamily.使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰明了。(二)國(guó)家現(xiàn)在放開(kāi)了二胎政策,很多人認(rèn)為有個(gè)兄弟姐妹很好,你認(rèn)為呢?根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.父母要花費(fèi)更多時(shí)間和金錢,兩個(gè)孩子會(huì)生氣打鬧;2.有玩伴,不孤獨(dú),學(xué)會(huì)照顧別人,學(xué)會(huì)分享等;3.……注意:1.詞數(shù):80詞左右;2.請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名;4.短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.IgeteverythingIwant.IfIhaveasisterorbrother,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.IgeteverythingIwant.IfIhaveasisterorbrother,myparentsdon’tspendmuchtimewithmeandtheyspendmoremoneyindailylife.Twochildrenmaymakenoiseathome.Butchildrencanlearntosharesomethingwithothers.Theycanlookaftereachother.Andtheycan’tfeellonely.Ithinktwochildpolicyisgood.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇材料作文,提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě),要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。(一)國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后,學(xué)校進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查關(guān)于我們是否愿意有一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹,同學(xué)們各有主張,假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你據(jù)此給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇文章,要點(diǎn)如下表:主張理由78%的學(xué)生愿意不再感到孤獨(dú),學(xué)會(huì)分享。17%的學(xué)生不愿意擔(dān)心他們并不是的家庭唯一,增加家庭的負(fù)擔(dān)5%的學(xué)生無(wú)所謂是否有弟、妹毫無(wú)差異你的觀點(diǎn)自列舉12點(diǎn)DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutasurveycarriedoutinourschoolaboutwhetherwearewillingtohaveayoungersibling(兄弟姐妹)inourfamilies._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutasurveycarriedoutinourschoolaboutwhetherwearewillingtohaveayoungersibling(兄弟姐妹)inourfamilies.Accordingtothesurvey,78%ofthestudentswouldliketohaveabrotherorsisterwhomtheycanplaywith,asaresult,theywillnolongerfeellonely.Besides,theywilllearntosharewithothers.However,17%ofthemareagainstit.Theyworrythattheyaren’ttheonlyofthefamilyanylonger.What’sworse,havingayoungersiblingwillsurelyincreasetheburden(負(fù)擔(dān))ofthefamily.Lastly,5%ofthestudentsthinkitmakesnodifferencestothemwhethertheywillhaveayoungersiblingornot.Inmyopinion,havingasiblingdoeshavemanyadvantages.SoIhopetohaveayoungerbrotherorasister.Iwanttogrowupwithhimorherhappilyandsupportourparentswiththemtogethertomakeourparentsenjoytheirlifewhentheybeeold.Yours,Lihua【詳解】題干分析:閱讀題干,這是一篇要求寫(xiě)看法關(guān)于國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后,我們是否愿意有一個(gè)弟弟或妹妹的看法的作文。題干已經(jīng)給出了第一段,表明了寫(xiě)作的目的“調(diào)查一項(xiàng)關(guān)于我們是否愿意在家里有一個(gè)弟弟妹妹的意愿?!?。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),要表述清楚他人的觀點(diǎn)及理由,同時(shí)也要闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)及理由。這是一份調(diào)查說(shuō)明,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在式。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采取的是三段式寫(xiě)作手法,第一段是題干給出的,表明寫(xiě)作目的;第二段詳細(xì)的介紹了關(guān)于二胎政策學(xué)生們看法;第三段開(kāi)始闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。例文運(yùn)用大量短語(yǔ)與句型,觀點(diǎn)表述清楚,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):Accordingto根據(jù);wouldliketosth想要做某事;asaresult結(jié)果;sharesthwithsb與某人分享某事物;What’sworse更糟糕的是;Inmyopinion照我的想法;hopetodosth希望做某事;growup長(zhǎng)大。句型:(1)Accordingtothesurvey,78%ofthestudentswouldliketohaveabrotherorsisterwhomtheycanplaywith根據(jù)這項(xiàng)調(diào)查,78%的學(xué)生希望有一個(gè)可以一起玩的弟弟或妹妹。Whom引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句;(2)Lastly,5%ofthestudentsthinkitmakesnodifferencestothemwhethertheywillhaveayoungersiblingornot.最后,5%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是否有弟弟妹妹對(duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō)沒(méi)有區(qū)別。Whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。(二)假如你是學(xué)生王俊,在家是獨(dú)生子女,國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后,你的父母想再生一個(gè)孩子,征求你的意見(jiàn),恰好你的美國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)我國(guó)的二胎政策,你給他回一封信,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.簡(jiǎn)單解釋國(guó)家二胎政策;2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法;3.征求Peter的看法。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出,不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。DearPeter,IhavereceivedyourletterandI’mgladtoexplaintoyouthetwochildpolicyinChina.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangJun【答案】DearPeter,IhavereceivedyourletterandI’mgladtoexplaintoyouthetwochildpolicyinChina.TheChinesegovernmentrecentlyplanstochangetheonechildpolicyintotwochildpolicy,meaningthateveryfamilyinChinaisallowedtohavetwochildren.Nowmyparentshavemadeadecisiontogivebirthtoasecondchild,whichworriesmeagreatdeal.Thoughitisgoodtohaveabrotherorsistertogrowupwith.Ihavetoshareeverythingwithhimorher.Mostimportantly,whatifthelovefrommyparentsistotallyswitchedtothenewchild?Asyouhaveayoungersister,didyouhavesimilarproblems?What’syouropinionaboutthis?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply【詳解】1、題干解讀:題干要求給你的美國(guó)筆友回一封關(guān)于我國(guó)的二胎政策的信,信的內(nèi)容要包括所給的要點(diǎn)以及peter的看法。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用三段式;時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;例文詳細(xì)的介紹了我國(guó)的二胎正常和Peter的看法;結(jié)構(gòu)清晰;邏輯性強(qiáng)。3、高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):plantodo;givebirthto;sharewith;makeadecisiontodosth;mostimportantly。句型:TheChinesegovernmentrecentlyplanstochangetheonechildpolicyintotwochildpolicy,meaningthateveryfamilyinChinaisallowedtohavetwochildren;whatifthelovefrommyparentsistotallyswitchedtothenewchild?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如plantodo;givebirthto;sharewith;makeadecisiontodosth;mostimportantly等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。(三)假如你是初中生李華,在家是獨(dú)生子女,國(guó)家開(kāi)放二孩政策后,你的父母想再生一個(gè)孩子,征求你的意見(jiàn)。恰好你的美國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)我國(guó)的二孩政策。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.簡(jiǎn)單解釋國(guó)家的二孩政策;2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法;3.征求Peter的看法。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。DearPeter,IhavereceivedyourletterandI’mgladtoexplaintoyouthetwochildpolicyinChina.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,IhavereceivedyourletterandI’mgladtoexplaintoyouthetwochildpolicyinChina.TheChinesegovernmentrecentlyplanstochangetheonechildpolicyintotwochildpolicy,meaningthateveryfamilyisallowedtohavetwochildren.Nowmyparentshavemadeadecisiontogivebirthtoasecondchild,whichworriesme.Thoughitisgoodtohaveabrotherorsistertogrowupwith,Ihavetoshareeverythingwithhimorher.Mostimportantly,whatifthelovefrommyparentsistotallyswitchedtothenewchild?Doyouhavesimilarproblems?What’syouropinionaboutthis?Yours,LiHua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的外國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)信,內(nèi)容是關(guān)于我們國(guó)家的二胎政策。通過(guò)審題可知,短文中應(yīng)主要包括以下內(nèi)容:首先給Peter介紹我們國(guó)家的二胎政策;然后說(shuō)明自己的父母想要二胎以及自己的想法;最后向Peter征求意見(jiàn)。題目中只給出了大概的提綱,具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力,組織語(yǔ)言,串聯(lián)成文。寫(xiě)作時(shí),應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,并注意句式的完整,不要?dú)埲背煞帧8鶕?jù)題目要求列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),然后羅列出需要用到的單詞和句型,用簡(jiǎn)單句的句式先表達(dá)出來(lái)。然后為提升文章檔次,改變幾個(gè)較高級(jí)的詞匯和復(fù)雜句式,如復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等。同時(shí)需要注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,以使全文意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整充實(shí),作者根據(jù)題目中的提綱,解釋了我們國(guó)家的二胎政策以及自己的父母打算要二胎之后自己的想法。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,敘述清楚、明了,語(yǔ)言得體。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第一人稱為主,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確,用法規(guī)范,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了一些較高級(jí)的句型,如TheChinesegovernmentrecentlyplanstochangetheonechildpolicyintotwochildpolicy,meaningthateveryfamilyisallowedtohavetwochildren.,這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句,使用了句型plantodosth.,change…into…,以及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。再如Nowmyparentshavemadeadecisiontogivebirthtoasecondchild,whichworriesme.中使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句;Thoughitisgoodtohaveabrotherorsistertogrowupwith,Ihavetoshareeverythingwithhimorher.使用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等。這些句型的使用提升了文章的檔次和水平。(四)隨著國(guó)家二胎政策的實(shí)行,二胎問(wèn)題成為了時(shí)下熱議的社會(huì)話題。有些同學(xué)贊成生二胎,因?yàn)樽鳛楠?dú)生子女在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中,一個(gè)人感覺(jué)比較孤單。而另一些人則有不同的看法,認(rèn)為有了二胎,父母需要賺更多的錢,會(huì)很辛苦。那么,你的觀點(diǎn)是什么呢?請(qǐng)就此話題,寫(xiě)一篇短文,闡述自己的觀點(diǎn),你是贊成還是不贊成父母生二胎呢?至少寫(xiě)出兩點(diǎn)原因。要求:1.詞數(shù)80120。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名,學(xué)校名。參考詞匯:twochildpolicy二胎政策M(jìn)yViewonTwochildPolicy____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyViewonTwochildPolicyFirstofall,twochildpolicyisthegiftforsomeonlychild.Forsomefamilies,maybetheparentsareonlychildandtheyalsocanhaveonlychild.Putasidethelonelinessoftheirchild,whentheirchildgrowsupandtheygrowolder,theirchildmarrywithanonlychildgirlaccidentally,theburdenontheirchildandhiswifeisunimaginablyheavy.Theirchildandhiswifehavetotakecareoftwooldcouples.Usually,ayoungcouplelookingafteranoldcoupleisalittledifficult;ifthepressureincreasestwice,howcantheystandit.Butiftheirparentshavetwochildren,theycansharetheburdenoftakingcareoftheirparents.Itwouldbemuchbetter.Secondly,twochildpolicycanguaranteethenumberofChinesepopulation.Asthewidelyspreadofonechildpolicy,somepeoplehavechangedtheirconceptionaboutgivingbirth.Iftheyfirmlybelieveonechildpolicy,therewillbemoreandmorethedink.Afterseveraldecades,ourcountrywillfamousforlackofpopulation.Inconclusion,onechildpolicyhasoutofdate.Andtwochildpolicyisneededandnecessary.Itcansolvetheproblemofnowadaysandthefuture.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)現(xiàn)在國(guó)家實(shí)行的二胎政策提出自己的看法,短文的題目就是MyviewonTwochildPolicy。這是一篇話題類的作文,題目中只給出了二胎這一話題,具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮想象力去完成,這對(duì)于學(xué)生們來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)難點(diǎn),短文寫(xiě)什么,從哪個(gè)方面寫(xiě),如何組織語(yǔ)言,這就要考查學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)功底了。另外寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,還要注意寫(xiě)作的層次,內(nèi)容要有條理,不能雜亂無(wú)章。首先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn),再講述自己的理由。通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第一人稱來(lái)敘述,要注意正確使用動(dòng)詞的形式,注意主謂一致的問(wèn)題。同時(shí)寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,可以使用一些短語(yǔ)和句型,使上下文意連貫,表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文中作者根據(jù)題目的要求對(duì)于國(guó)家實(shí)行的二胎政策提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)。整篇短文的內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。作者主要從兩個(gè)方面闡述了自己的理由,第一個(gè)理由中使用的句型有Putasidethelonelinessoftheirchild,whentheirchildgrowsupandtheygrowolder,theirchildmarrywithanonlychildgirlaccidentally,theburdenontheirchildandhiswifeisunimaginableheavy.、ifthepressureincreasingtwice,howcantheystandit.Butiftheirparentshavetwochildren,theycansharetheburdenoftakingcareoftheirparents。第二個(gè)理由Secondly,twochildpolicycanguaranteethenumberofChinesepopulation、Iftheyfirmlybelieveonechildpolicy,therewillbemoreandmorethedink等。(一)國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后,很多家庭都可能有新的成員加入,那我們的生活會(huì)怎樣呢?你會(huì)為家里做些什么?假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在是家里唯一的孩子,請(qǐng)以"IfIHaveaNewBrotherorSister"為題,闡述你的想法和理由。IfYouHaveaNewBrotherorSisterHowwillyoufeel?ReasonsWhatdoyouwanttosaytoyourparents?…Whatwillyoudoforyourfamily/youngerbrother(sister)?…注意:1.開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好,你只需接著寫(xiě);2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名;3.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的各項(xiàng)內(nèi)容,并至少寫(xiě)兩條理由;4.詞數(shù):80左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IfIHaveaNewBrotherorSisterIthinkmylifewillbedifferentifIhaveanewbrotherorsister.I'llbeveryhappy.BecauseI'llhaveayoungerbrother/sistertoplaywithandtalkwith.Iwanttosaythankstomyparents.Iwilldosomethingformyfamily.Onweekends,I'llhelpmymumdosomehousework,suchascleaningtheroomandsweepingthefloor.I'lllearntolookaftermyself.Becausemyparentsaretoobusytolookafterbothofus.Aftermyyoungerbrotherorsisterisborn,I'llhelpmymotherlookafterhim/her.WhenIamfree,I'lltakehim/herforawalkandplaywithhim/her.AndI'llhelphim/herwithhis/herstudywhenhe/sheisoldenoughtogotoschool.Inaword,I'mgettingreadyfortheingofmyyoungerbrother/sister.【詳解】1.題干解讀:該題屬于說(shuō)明文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意文章的表格要求,敘述假如你有弟弟或妹妹,你的感受,你對(duì)父母說(shuō)的話,將會(huì)為弟弟或妹妹做什么,并敘述相應(yīng)的原因至少2點(diǎn)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo):本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主;表達(dá)的情感要積極向上;為家人所做的事也要貼合實(shí)際;敘述要完整,且保證條理清晰。(二)國(guó)家開(kāi)放二胎政策后,很多家庭都可能有新的成員加入,那我們的生活會(huì)怎樣呢?你會(huì)為家里做些什么?假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在是家里唯一的孩子,請(qǐng)以“IfIHaveaNewBrotherorSister”為題,闡述你的想法和理由。IfyouhaveanewbrotherorsisterHowwillyoufeel?ReasonsWhatdoyouwanttosaytoyourparents?Whatwillyoudoforyourfamily/youngerbrother(sister)?......注意:開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好,只需接著寫(xiě)即可;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名;所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的各項(xiàng)內(nèi)容,并至少寫(xiě)兩條理由;(4)詞數(shù):80左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。IfIHaveaNewBrotherorSisterIthinkmylifewillbedifferentifIhaveanewbrotherorsister.【答案】IfIHaveaNewBrotherorSisterIthinkmylifewillbedifferentifIhaveanewbrotherorsister.I’llbeveryhappy.BecauseI’llhaveayoungerbrother/sistertoplaywithandtalkwith.Iwanttosaythankstomyparents.Iwilldosomethingformyfamily.Atweekends,I’llhelpmymumdosomehousework,suchascleaningtheroomandsweepingthefloor.I’lllearntolookaftermyself.Becausemyparentsaretoobusytolookafterbothofus.Aftermyyoungerbrotherorsisterisborn,I’llhelpmymotherlookafterhim/her.WhenIamfree,I’lltakehim/herforawalkandplaywithhim/her.AndI’llhelphim/herwithhis/herstudywhenhe/sheisoldenoughtogotoschool.Inaword,I’mgettingreadyfortheingofmyyoungerbrother/sister.【分析】這是一篇要求介紹自己如果有個(gè)弟弟或妹妹會(huì)是什么樣的作文?,F(xiàn)在在開(kāi)放二胎政策以后,第一個(gè)孩子如何和自己的弟弟妹妹相處是一個(gè)明顯的問(wèn)題,第一個(gè)孩子應(yīng)該理解父母,并且?guī)椭改刚疹櫟艿苊妹谩!驹斀狻窟@是一篇要求介紹自己如果有個(gè)弟弟或妹妹會(huì)是什么樣的作文。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。在幫助父母方面可以做家務(wù),也可以帶弟弟妹妹出去玩,I’llhelpmymumdosomehousework,suchascleaningtheroomandsweepingthefloor.此句用的結(jié)構(gòu)式helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事,以及suchas結(jié)構(gòu)。(三)某英文雜志中學(xué)生專欄正在征集“二胎政策”放開(kāi)后孩子們的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示,以“Doyouagreewithyourparentshavingasecondchild?為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。談?wù)勀愕目捶?。觀點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1.不會(huì)孤單;2.輪流照顧父母;3.……1.擔(dān)心父母過(guò)于關(guān)注弟弟妹妹;2.害怕與弟弟妹妹相處不好;3.……要求:1)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確;短文連貫通順;2)贊同或反對(duì)只能選擇一種,短文必須包括以上內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;4)詞數(shù)100左右。Doyouagreewithyourparentshavingasecondchild?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Agreement:Doyouagreewithyourparentshavingasecondchild?IhopeIcanhavealittlebrotherorsister.Ithinkthebabyisthebestgiftformyfamily.Ilikebabies.Whenthebabycan’twalkorspeak,Icanhelpparentslookafterhim.Whenhegrowsup,wecanplaywitheachotherandsharethehappinessandsadnesswitheachother.Iwillnotfeellonelyanymore.Whenourparentsgetoldandcan’tdoanythingforus,wewillbeabletolookafterthemtogetherandwecanalsodealwithanytroublewe’llmeetinthefuturetogether.Disagreement:Doyouagreewithyourparentshavingasecondchild?Idisagreemyparentshavinganotherchild.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodformetohaveabrotherorsister.I’mafraidifmyparentshaveanotherchild,theywillhavetopaymoreattentiontothechild.SoIwillgetlesslove.What’sworse,Icouldn’tgetonwellwiththelittlechild,wecouldevenfightagainsteachotheroften.Also,thelittlechildwillb
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