《課時(shí)把關(guān)練》英語必修第三冊(cè)RJUNIT 5 Part V Writing 寫作專練含答案

課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartVWriting妙筆生花(讀后續(xù)寫)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ASpecialAppointmentYearsagoImovedtoWoodlandHillstotakeajobinasmallhospital’semergencydepartment.NoonewantedtoworkonNewYear’sEve，sotheshift（輪班）wenttome.Ikissedmyfamilygoodbyeandwentofftospendthenightinthehospital.Itwasathanklessjob.At9pm，theambulancebroughtinamaninhis60swhowashavingaheartattack.Hisfacewaspale，andhewasfrightened.ThewholenightIdidmybesttosavehislife.BeforeIleftinthemorningtospendNewYearwithmyfamily，Istoppedbytoseehowhewasdoing.Itwasstilltough，buthehadsurvivedthenightandwassleeping.ThefollowingyearIgotNewYear’sEvedutyagain.At9pmsharp，thewardclerktoldmetherewasacouplewhowantedtospeakwithme.WhenIapproachedthem，themanintroducedhimselfasMr.Leeandsaid，“Youprobablydon’trememberme，butlastNewYear’sEveyousavedmylife.Thankyoufortheyearyougaveme.”Heandhiswifehuggedme，handedmeasmallgift，andleft.Thefollowingyearanewdoctorhadjoinedthegroup，butIwantedtoseeifMr.andMrs.Leewouldreturn.Thistime，Ivolunteeredfortheshift.Ikeptaneyeonthedoor.Onceagain，atexactly9pm，theLeesappeared，carryingawarmlywrappedbundle.Itwastheirnewgrandchild.Mr.Lee，hisfamilyandIspent13NewYear’sEvestogether.Inthelateryearsthestaffallknewaboutthestoryandwouldworktogivemetimewithhiminthebreakroom，wherewespentahalf-houreachNewYear’sEve.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme. Icarefullyopenedthepackageandfoundacrystal（水晶）bellinsidewiththeword“Friendship”engraved（雕刻）onit. 步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵前文概要審體裁：記敘文審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)審前文大意以及要點(diǎn)：第一段：介紹作者新到一家小醫(yī)院急診室上班，新年前夜值班；第二段：介紹作者在新年前夜搶救了一位患心臟病的病人，早上病人轉(zhuǎn)危為安；第三段：病人夫婦感恩作者，到醫(yī)院送禮物；第四段：作者主動(dòng)值夜班，期望見到病人夫婦；第五段：連續(xù)13年病人夫婦都在新年前夜和作者團(tuán)聚。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)1.第一段所給首句：LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme.上文提到Mr.Lee夫婦連續(xù)13年和作者一起過新年前夜，結(jié)合首句中的alone可知，Mr.Lee可能因病去世，而Mrs.Lee拿著的禮物，可能是Mr.Lee臨終前留給作者的。2.第二段所給首句：Icarefullyopenedthepackageandfoundacrystalbellinsidewiththeword“Friendship”engravedonit.作者打開包裹看到的是一個(gè)上面刻著單詞“友誼”的水晶鈴。由此作者所想到的應(yīng)該是他們一起度過的新年前夜以及他們之間的友誼。結(jié)尾句：應(yīng)該圍繞thecrystalbell收尾。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動(dòng)描述情節(jié)話題激活詞匯疾?。篽eartattack，headache，stomachache，toothache動(dòng)作：kiss，spend，give，hug，survive，sleep，die禮物：gift，present，package，bell心理狀態(tài)：frightened，thankful，thankless，grateful句式翻譯1.李先生兩天前心臟病復(fù)發(fā)去世了。（diefrom）_____________________________________________________________________________________2.他沒有忘記我們的約定，幾天前準(zhǔn)備了這個(gè)最后的禮物。（and連接的并列句）_____________________________________________________________________________________3.他懷著一顆感恩的心過了長(zhǎng)達(dá)13年有意義的生活。（and連接并列謂語）_____________________________________________________________________________________4.當(dāng)我看著鈴的時(shí)候，我想起了和Lee一家人度過的新年前夜以及我們之間的友誼。（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）_____________________________________________________________________________________5.現(xiàn)在我和我的家人、朋友每個(gè)新年的前夜都會(huì)在晚上9點(diǎn)搖響鈴，來表達(dá)我們對(duì)所銘記的人最美好的祝愿。（and連接并列謂語）_____________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤(rùn)色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級(jí)1.用shetoldme升級(jí)第1句______________________________________________________________________________________2.用so連接的并列句升級(jí)第2句______________________________________________________________________________________3.用aslongas（表示“長(zhǎng)達(dá)……”）升級(jí)第3句______________________________________________________________________________________4.用動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語；動(dòng)詞-ed形式作定語升級(jí)第4句______________________________________________________________________________________5.用動(dòng)詞-ing形式作伴隨狀語升級(jí)第5句______________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartVWriting參考答案步驟三1.Mr.Leediedfromanotherheartattacktwodaysago.2.Hehadneverforgottenourappointmentandhepreparedthelastgiftdaysago.3.Helivedwithagratefulheartandhadameaningfullifefor13years.4.WhenIsawthebell，IlookedbackontheNewYear’sEveswhichIspentwiththeLeesandthefriendshipbetweenus.5.Now，myfamily，myfriendsandIringthatbelloneveryNewYear’sEveatexactly9pmandofferourbestwishestothemenwhowewon’tforget.步驟四1.ShetoldmeMr.Leediedfromanotherheartattacktwodaysago.2.Hehadneverforgottenourappointment，sohepreparedthelastgiftdaysago.3.Helivedwithagratefulheartandhadameaningfullifeforaslongas13years.4.Seeingthebell，IlookedbackontheNewYear’sEvesspentwiththeLeesandthefriendshipbetweenus.5.Now，myfamily，myfriendsandIringthatbelloneveryNewYear’sEveatexactly9pm，offeringourbestwishestothemenwhowewon’tforget.步驟五Onepossibleversion：LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme.Mrs.Leelookedpale.Shetoldm