2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit2Letstalkteens表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案牛津譯林版必修第一冊(cè)

PAGEUNIT2Let’stalkteens建議信本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)建議信。建議信是常用的書(shū)信形式之一，主要用來(lái)針對(duì)收信人存在的某一問(wèn)題提出自己的合理化建議，從而達(dá)到幫助對(duì)方解決問(wèn)題的目的。建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和勸服力。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭——開(kāi)宗明義，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^(guān)點(diǎn)(stateyouridea)；2．主體——對(duì)所提出的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并說(shuō)明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)；3．結(jié)尾——呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，重申觀(guān)點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion)。留意事項(xiàng)：1．開(kāi)宗明義，直入主題。在書(shū)信正文的開(kāi)頭找準(zhǔn)話(huà)題的切入點(diǎn)，自然而然地引出自己想要談的主題。寫(xiě)信時(shí)要充分了解狀況，有的放矢，以提高書(shū)信的針對(duì)性。2．給出希望對(duì)方實(shí)行或者終止某種行為的理由。在陳述理由的過(guò)程中要換位思索，盡量為對(duì)方考慮。要用事實(shí)說(shuō)話(huà)，以增加勸服力。3．語(yǔ)氣要和緩，讓對(duì)方考慮你的想法或者建議，以理服人是關(guān)鍵，不能把自己的想法強(qiáng)加于人。4．給出合理建議，通過(guò)提建議讓對(duì)方明確行動(dòng)的方向，從而達(dá)到寫(xiě)信的最終目的。[常用詞塊]1．Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaif...假如……我認(rèn)為這是個(gè)好辦法2．Inmyopinionitwouldbewiseto...依我看，做……是明智的3．Isuggestthatyoushould...我建議你應(yīng)當(dāng)……4．Inmyopinion，you'dbetter...我認(rèn)為你最好……5．Iadviseyouto...我建議你……6．IfIwereyou，Iwould...假如我是你的話(huà)，我會(huì)……7．Whynot...？/Whydon'tyou...?為什么不……？8．Howabout...？/Whatabout...?……怎么樣？[常用語(yǔ)句]※精彩開(kāi)頭1．Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人溝通方面有些麻煩，你也可能常常感到孤獨(dú)。2．I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很興奮收到你就……征求建議的來(lái)信。3．Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。※正文佳句1．First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參與一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部呢？假如你這樣做的話(huà)，就會(huì)交到摯友。2．Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)當(dāng)盡可能與人交談。這樣，你會(huì)感覺(jué)好點(diǎn)。3．Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看書(shū)或聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，這會(huì)是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的辦法。通過(guò)這樣做，你會(huì)使自己安靜下來(lái)。4．Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最終但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)當(dāng)先和她談一談。5．AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來(lái)，你們應(yīng)當(dāng)相互幫助。※余味結(jié)尾1．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)覺(jué)這些方法有用。2．Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.假如你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加了解你，會(huì)情愿和你交摯友的。3．Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你聽(tīng)從我的建議，你會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處很好的。假如你是李華，你的好摯友蘇珊最近和媽媽發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵，好幾天不說(shuō)話(huà)了。為此她特別苦惱，想讓你給出一些辦法。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一封建議信。1．仔細(xì)考慮自己的行為；2．盡量理解媽媽?zhuān)靼姿龅亩际菫樽约汉茫?．找個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)主動(dòng)和媽媽閑聊，了解媽媽的真實(shí)想法；4．適當(dāng)贊美媽媽并致歉。留意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSusan，I'msorrytohearthatyouhavearguedwithyourmotherandyou'refeelingsadnow.Yours，LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearSusan，I'msorrytohearthatyouhavearguedwithyourmotherandyou'refeelingsadnow.Iunderstandyourfeelings.Hereissomeadvicehelpfultoyou.Firstly，ifyouthinkitover，you'llfindthatyou'relikelytohavedonesomethingwrong.Forexample，youshouldn'thavearguedwithyourmother.Secondly，youshouldlearntounderstandyourmother.Afterall，she'swillingtodoanythingthatwillmakeyouhappy.Thirdly，findachancetohaveatalkwithyourmotheranditwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Lastly，trytodosomethingforyourmotheranditwillmakeherhappy.Iwishyouallthebest.Yours，LiHua點(diǎn)評(píng)：1.文章結(jié)構(gòu)支配合理；2.個(gè)別句式還有升格的空間；3.過(guò)渡連接比較單調(diào)；4.句式結(jié)構(gòu)還可以更豐富?！旧褡魑摹緿earSusan，I'msorrytohearthatyouhavearguedwithyourmotherandyou'refeelingsadnow.Iunderstandyourfeelings.HereissomeadvicewhichIthinkwillhelpyou.Firstofall，thinkitover，andyou'llfindyou'relikelytohavedonesomethingwrong.Forexample，youshouldn'thavearguedwithyourmother.Secondly，youshouldlearntounderstandyourmother.Afterall，she'swillingtodoanythingthatwillmakeyouhappy.Thirdly，findachancetohaveatalkwithyourmother，whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Lastbutnotleast，trytodosomethingforyourmother，whichwillmakeherhappy.Iwishyouallthebest.Yours，LiHua假如你是中學(xué)一年級(jí)新生李華。開(kāi)學(xué)之初，你的英語(yǔ)老師Ms.Li希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)狀況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封信。1．你對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的相識(shí)；2．目前的英語(yǔ)水平；3．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問(wèn)題；4．對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。留意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMs.Li，I'mveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.Thankyou!Yours，LiHua【參考范文】DearMs.Li，I'mveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.Astheworldisbecomingaglobalvillage，Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant，somasteringEnglishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwomainproblemsinmystudyarethatIfinditdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart，andthatIoftenfe