2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit5Revealingnature表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案外研版選擇性必修第一冊(cè)

PAGEUnit5Revealingnature視察日志本單元寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是描寫(xiě)植物生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程的視察日志。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——寫(xiě)作目的；2．主體(body)——植物成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程；3．結(jié)尾(ending)——你的感受。[常用詞塊]1．growthconditionoftheplant植物生長(zhǎng)條件2．a(chǎn)holelargeenough一個(gè)足夠大的洞3．puttheearthbackinthehole把土回填到洞里4．upto20feetinlength長(zhǎng)度達(dá)20英尺5．selectproperseeds選擇合適的種子6．a(chǎn)lightapplicationoffertilizer運(yùn)用微量的肥料[常用語(yǔ)句]精彩開(kāi)頭1．Doyouhaveanexperienceofplantingakindofplant？你有過(guò)種植植物的經(jīng)驗(yàn)嗎？2．Letmeshareyouwiththeprocessaboutmyexperienceofgrowingwatermelon?讓我和你共享我種植西瓜的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。3．Ioncelivedinthecountrysideandplantedsomegarlicinthegarden.我曾經(jīng)在鄉(xiāng)村住過(guò)，在菜園里種過(guò)大蒜。豐滿主體1．Checktoseeifthereareanylocalrequirementsaboutdigging.檢查當(dāng)?shù)厥欠裼嘘P(guān)于挖掘的要求。2．Takeasuitableshovelanddigaholethatis4－5timesthewidthoftherootball，morethanenoughsoitwillfit.用一把合適的鏟子挖一個(gè)比球?qū)?－5倍的洞，足夠大，這樣就合適了。3．Usethegardencultivatortoloosenthedirtallaroundtheholetomakeiteasierfortherootstospread.用園藝耕耘機(jī)把洞四周的泥土松掉，使根部更簡(jiǎn)單散開(kāi)。余味結(jié)尾1．Seeingtheflowers，Iwastooexcitedtoexpressmyfeelings.看到這些花，我太興奮了不能表達(dá)我的感受。2．Ican'twaittoshowmygrandparentsthefruittreesIhaveplanted.我迫不及待地給祖父母看我種的果樹(shù)。3．Nopains，nogains.不勞無(wú)獲。假定你是正在英國(guó)留學(xué)的李華，在生物課上，老師要求同學(xué)們課后視察一種植物的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，并用日志的形式將該過(guò)程記錄下來(lái)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇日志介紹草莓的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，內(nèi)容包括：1．幼苗(seedling)植入土壤；2．兩周后：幼苗葉子變大，呈傘狀；3．一個(gè)月后：長(zhǎng)出花苞(bud)；4．兩個(gè)月后：雌蕊(pistil)變成草莓，約5天后，草莓成熟(mature)。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruit.Somepeoplewanttoplantstrawberries.Thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgrowintolargerumbrella-shapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Ittakesabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Fivedayslater，wecanenjoyfreshmaturestrawberries.點(diǎn)評(píng)：1．草莓生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程記述詳盡；2．結(jié)尾處沒(méi)有涉及感受；3．句與句之間的連接還不太緊湊。[升格作文]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruitandsomepeopleevenwanttoplantstrawberriesbythemselves.Actually，thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Hereismyobservationaboutthem.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrella-shapedonesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Thefollowingprocessisalittlelonger，takingabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Andfivedayslater，wecanhavefreshmaturestrawberries.Isn'titinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocess?假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你種植綠豆(mung)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。1．購(gòu)買(mǎi)種子，種在菜園里；2．幾天后，綠豆長(zhǎng)出地面；3．又過(guò)了幾天，長(zhǎng)出綠葉；4．給綠豆?jié)菜?，長(zhǎng)得很好；5．綠豆不斷生長(zhǎng)，三個(gè)月后最終開(kāi)花結(jié)籽。留意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：長(zhǎng)出地面comeup；長(zhǎng)葉子comeintoleaf；灑水sprinklewater；開(kāi)花結(jié)籽gotoseed___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LastsummerIplantedsomemunginmygarden.FirstIboughtsomeseedsfromaseedman.ThenIsowedtheminthegarden.Afewdayslater，Iwenttothegardenandfoundthemungwerebeginningtocomeup.Anotherfewdayspassedandthemungwerecomingintoleaf.NowandthenIs