2024-2025學年譯林版八年級英語上學期考點 專題04 Unit1 ~Unit4書面表達串講【考點清單】

Unit1本單元以“朋友”為話題,要求學生對朋友的外貌特征、個人品質(zhì)及未來計劃進行描述,同時給出一些建議。素材積累1.描寫人物外貌和品格的常用詞匯:Appearance:tall//short//fat//thin//slim//beautiful//pretty//good-looking//handsome//lovely//cute//strong...Personality:clever//smart//polite//friendly//kind//generous//hard-working//helpful//honest//humorous//patient...假如梅是你的好朋友,住在你家隔壁,你們既是鄰居又是最好的朋友。請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容,寫一篇短文介紹她。外貌大眼睛,圓臉,長直發(fā),是朋友中最苗條的,總是面帶微笑個性1.

慷慨大方,樂意和朋友分享2.

心地善良,從不說別人的壞話3.

樂于助人,有煩心事的時候,我總是找她傾訴4.

可以告訴她任何事,因為她總能保守秘密特長有好的嗓音,歌唱得好;擅長騎自行車未來計劃長大后想當一名歌手并周游世界寫作提綱[高分范文]Mayisbothmyneighbourandmybestfriend.Wearenowstudyingatamixedschool.Shehasaroundfacewithbigeyes.Shehaslongstraighthair.Sheistheslimmestofmyfriends.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Mayisgenerousandiswillingtoshareherthingswithfriends.Sheiskindandneversaysabadwordaboutanyone.Sheisalsoveryhelpful.Shealwayslistenstomyproblemscarefullyandgivesmesomehelp.Icantellheranythingbecauseshecanalwayskeepasecret.Shehasagoodvoiceandsingswell.Sheisalsogoodatridingabike.Shewantstobeasingerandtravelaroundtheworldwhenshegrowsup.寫作任務(wù)請根據(jù)下面提示,以“Mybestfriend”為題寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友Daniel。特點圓臉,

瘦高個兒;

很幽默,

經(jīng)常講笑話讓我們開懷大笑。品行愿意和朋友分享東西;

對人友善;

時刻準備幫助別人。愛好喜歡閱讀,

每天看英文報刊和雜志。喜歡運動,

每周二和周四下午放學后和同班同學們一起打棒球。喜歡旅行,

希望每周進行一次學校旅行。未來計劃長大想當……

要求:1.表達清楚,語句通順,意思連貫;2.短文必須包括所有的信息,省略號部分適當發(fā)揮1~2句;3.100詞左右。MybestfriendIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Heistallandthinandhasaroundface.Hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsusfunnyjokestomakeuslaugh.Heisgenerousandalwayswillingtosharewhathehaswithothers.Heisalsokind.Heisreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.Hehasmanyhobbies.HelovesreadingandhereadsEnglishnewspapersandmagazineseveryday.Helikesdoingsportstoo.EveryTuesdayandThursdayafternoon,heplaysbaseballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Healsoenjoystravellingandhehopesthathecangoonaschooltripeveryweek.Hewantstobecomeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,becausehewouldliketohelpmorepeople.Unit2本單元以“學校生活”為話題,要求學生對心中理想的學校生活進行描述,包括課程的開始、結(jié)束;課程的內(nèi)容及作業(yè)等。素材積累1.描寫學校生活的常用詞匯:科目:Chinese//Maths//English//French//Physics//PE//History//Geography...運動:badminton//basketball//football//tabletennis//tennis//volleyball...校園俱樂部:ArtClub//ChessClub//DanceClub//ReadingClub...2.描寫學校生活的常用重點句型:Myidealschoolstartsat...andfinishesat...Wehaveanhourfor...Ihave...becauseIthink...isveryinteresting.Ilove...,soIhave...everyday.Wehavelotsof...Every...,wegoonaschooltrip.經(jīng)典例題請根據(jù)提示,以“Myidealschool”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示:1.學校有五幢教學樓、兩千多名學生、三百多名教師;2.教室寬敞明亮,教師親切,學生友好且樂于助人;3.早上八點上課,每天上六節(jié)課,星期六和星期天不上學;4.沒有許多家庭作業(yè),有許多時間進行課外活動……寫作提綱[高分范文]MyidealschoolMyidealschoolhasfiveteachingbuildings.Therearemorethan2,000studentsandmorethan300teachersinit.Theclassroomsarebrightandbig.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlyandhelpful.Thefirstclassbeginsat8o’clockinthemorning.Wehavesixlessonseveryday.Wedon’tgotoschoolonweekends.Wedon’thavetoomuchhomeworktodoeveryday.Instead,wehavemuchtimeforafter-schoolactivities.Wefeelveryhappyinthiskindofschool.豐富多彩的“課后服務(wù)”活動讓我們的校園生活更加充實,促進我們成長。請以“ColorfulActivitiesatSchool”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。要求:1.短文應(yīng)包含思維導圖中的所有信息,可適當發(fā)揮;2.主要寫“課后服務(wù)”期間參加的活動,如作業(yè)輔導、社團活動等;3.摘抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分,文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名、學校校名。Colorful

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...ColorfulActivitiesatSchoolSincetheimplementationofthe“doublereduction”policy,allkindsof“after-schoolservice”activitieshaveenrichedourcampuslife.Letmeintroducesomeofmyownactivities.First,afterschool,Iusuallyplaybasketballontheplaygroundforhalfanhour.Anditwillmakemefullofenergy.Then,Ifinishmyhomeworkatschool.SoIdon’thavetodomyhomeworkwhenIgohome.Finally,Iwilltakedrawinglessons.BecauseIlikedrawingthingsonpaperbest.Ithinkit’sveryrelaxingforme.Unit3本單元以“出行游記”為話題。要求完成一個短篇游記寫作。素材積累1.出行游記的常用詞匯:plan//journey//trip//square//museum//arrive(at/in)//reach//getto//placesofinterest//boring//exciting//interesting//culture//geton//getoff//cost//ticket...出行游記的常用重點句型:Weareplanningadayouton...Wewillmeetat...Wewilltaketheunderground/busto...Wewillvisit/see...Wewillgobackto...Thecostisabout...perstudent.經(jīng)典例題請根據(jù)下列提示,以學生會的名義,寫一則本周日學校旅行的通知。1.地點和費用:浙江西塘古鎮(zhèn),每位80元;2.周日早上6:30在校門口上車,不要遲到,坐車需要大約兩個小時;3.主要活動:欣賞古鎮(zhèn)的美景,了解不同的文化,買禮物送給家人和朋友;4.在當?shù)匾患矣忻娘堭^吃午餐;5.下午4點返回學校。寫作提綱[高分范文]October20,2023Dearall,WewillgoonaschooltriptoXitang—anoldtowninZhejiangthisSunday.Wewillgetonthebusattheschoolgateat6:30a.m.thisSunday.Don’tbelate.Itwilltakeusabouttwohourstogetthere.Wewillenjoythebeautifulsightsoftheoldtownandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.Wecanalsobuysomepresentsforfamilyandfriends.Wewillhavelunchinafamouslocalrestaurant.Wewillbebacktoschoolat4p.m.Thecostofthetripis80yuanperstudent.TheStudents’Union假如去年“五·一”期間你和你的父母到南通旅游,你在這次旅游中收獲頗豐。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的要點,以“ThetriptoNantong”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,并就這次旅游的所見所聞?wù)務(wù)勀愕氖斋@?；顒禹椖可衔?.

游覽狼山遇見外國人，與其交談

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參觀園藝博覽園觀賞花木，拍攝照片

(自擬一點收獲)下午1.

參觀海底世界(自擬一點收獲)2.

暢游美麗濠河(自擬一點收獲)活動感受

(自擬旅游的感受)(

自擬旅游的感受)注意:1.短文必須包含所給要點,可適當發(fā)揮;2.詞數(shù)不少于90,開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得提及真實的校名和人名。參考詞匯:theWolfHill狼山;theHorticulturalExposition園藝博覽園;theUnderseaWorld海底世界;theHaoheRiver濠河ThetriptoNantongLastMayDayholiday,myparentsandIwenttoNantong.Thisexperienceimpressed(給……留下印象)me.Inthemorning,wewentsightseeingontheWolfHill.ImetaforeignerandtalkedwithhiminEnglishwhenweclimbedthehill.IwasveryhappythatIfounditusefultolearnEnglish.ThenwewenttotheHorticulturalExposition.Wesawmanykindsofflowersandtooklotsofphotos.Welearnedalotabouttheflowers.Intheafternoon,IlearnedalotaboutthenamesoffishwhenwewenttotheUnderseaWorld.Laterthatday,wetookaboattripontheHaoheRiver.Ienjoyedthebeautifulviewsandsanghappilyalltheway.Wehadsuchanexcitingtripthatwewillneverforgetit.WehopetovisitNantongagainsomeday.Unit4本單元的話題與DIY有關(guān)?，F(xiàn)在DIY在青少年中越來越受歡迎。他們喜歡動手做各種各樣的物品。在寫關(guān)于DIY的短文時,要包括DIY的目的、內(nèi)容、過程、結(jié)果以及收獲的喜悅之情。1.DIY的常用詞匯:instructions//tool//paint//brush//glue//rope//scissors//tape//fix//repair//decorate//stick//putin//putup//fill...with...//makeamistake//cutout//mix//tidyup//gowrong//correct2.DIY的常用重點句型:Idecideto...bymyself....helpmewith...Wehadfunworkingtogether.Ittookme...minutes/hourstofinishit.Imadesomemistakeswhen...Intheend,...WhenIcompleted...,...經(jīng)典例題假如你是一個DIY迷,請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文,介紹你的DIY。提示:要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所給的信息,可以適當發(fā)揮;2.句意連貫,語句通順;3.80詞左右。寫作提綱[高分范文]IamcrazyaboutDIY,andIoftendosomethingswithmyownhandsinmyfreetime.SometimesIhavetoreadtheinstructionscarefully.Lastweek,Ithoughtmybedroomwasboring,soIdecidedtopaintityellow.Mymumtoldmetostop,butIkeptonpaintinguntilthewallsandtheceilingwereyellow.YesterdayIputupashelfabovemybed,andputmanystorybooksonit.NowitisveryeasyformetogetthebooksbecauseIdon’thavetogotothestudytogetthemanymore.近年流行DIY,DIY源于為節(jié)省費用人們在閑暇時自行整修房屋的行為,漸漸地DIY的概念也被擴及到所有可以自己動手做的事物上。請以“MyViewonDIY”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求:1.詞數(shù)80左右,書寫工整,語句通順,意思連貫;2.文中不得提及真實的人名和校名等個人信息。要點:*WhatdoyouthinkofDIY?*WhatDIYjobdidyouoncedo?*Whattoolsandmaterialsdidyouuse?*Wasyourworkwelldone?*WhatdoyoulearnfromDIY?MyViewonDIYDIYisverypopularnow.IthinkDIYcanhelpimproveourabilitiesindoingsomethinganditcanmakeususelessmoney.Myparentsneverletmedoanything.ButonMother’sDay,Iwantedtomakemymothersurprised.Iplannedtomakethecardforherbymyself.Iusedsometoolsandmaterials,suchaspaper,glue,scissorsandsoon.AlthoughIdidn’tdoitwell,mymotherwasstillhappy.ItisveryimportantformeandIamsureDIYwillhelpmemore.Let’sDIYfromnowontomakeusactbetterinthefuture.練習1.假如你是校報的英語記者李平,請你根據(jù)以下信息,給新入學的學弟學妹們寫一封信,歡迎他們來到新學校,并對他們在學校如何做合格的中學生提出建議。寫作要點:1.歡迎他們來到新學校。2.介紹學校:(1)課程有趣;(2)有多名外教;(3)課外活動豐富。3.請對他們在學校如何做合格的(qualified)中學生提出具體建議。寫作要求:1.不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2.可適當加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing[思路點撥]①題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。首先歡迎新生來到新學校,然后從課程、外教及課外活動方面對學校進行介紹,最后對新生在學校如何做合格的中學生提出建議。②寫作指導:題目中給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時。[標準范文]Dearnewfriends,

It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.Welcometoourschool!

AtfirstI’llintroducetheschooltoyou.Therearemanyinterestingsubjectsinourschool,suchaspainting,swimmingandmusic.Youcanlearnalotfromthesubjects.Therearealsomanyforeignteachersinourschool.Theyarewelltrainedandhavemuchteachingexperience.Wealsohavemanycolourfulactivitiesinourschool.Howtobeaqualifiedstudent?Here’ssomeadvice.First,youshouldobeytheschoolrules.Second,workhardandmakeprogresseveryday.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.Third,learntogetonwellwithyourclassmatesatschool.Fourth,youcanaskyourteachersorfriendsforhelpwhenyou’reintrouble.Ihopeyoucangrowasapersoninourschool.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiPing

[高級語塊]重點句型Second,workhardandmakeprogresseveryday.努力學習,每天進步。(and連接兩個簡單句,并列句)Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.如果你用心投入,沒有什么是困難的。(if引導條件狀語從句)重點短語suchas例如;makeprogress取得進步;putyourheartinto...用心投入到……2.你們班將于期中考試后外出游玩一天,參觀揚州名勝。請你以班長的名義寫一封信,向全班同學發(fā)出邀請,并對行程和交通工具做出安排。要點:1.上午8∶00在校門口集合上車;參觀瘦西湖(theSlenderWestLake)和個園(theGeyuanGarden)并拍照。2.午飯后到茱萸灣風景區(qū)(theZhuyuBayScenicSpot)看熊貓并欣賞美景。3.傍晚到東關(guān)街購物,品嘗揚州小吃,在DIY商店學做水果色拉。4.每人費用100元。旅行結(jié)束后會把照片放在網(wǎng)上供同學們?yōu)g覽。5.希望每個同學會喜歡本次旅行并玩得開心。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.邀請信必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使其連貫、通順。Dearclassmates,