高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題之個人成長類+牧場女孩的成長之旅+講義

PAGE10閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。Papaalwayswantedaboy,acowboy,tohelponourranch（牧場）.IknowhewishesIwereaboy.He'salwayscallingme"Joey"insteadof"Josefina."WheneverIasktohelpherd（放）thecowshereattheranch,Papasays,"That'smen'swork."ItwasSaturdaymorning.IflewintothekitchenwhenIsmelledthedelicioussmellofbreakfast.Papahadalreadyfinishedeatingandwasputtingonhisrubberboots（橡膠靴子）Withoutaword,hewalkedoutintotheheavyrain."IsPapamadatmeorjusttheworldingeneral?"IaskedMama."We’vebeenhavingalotofrain.Yourfather'sworriedaboutthecows,"sheexplained."Unlesshecandrivethemtohighground,theywillbeindanger.Heneedshelp.""I'mprettygoodonahorse,"Isaid."I'vegotprizestoproveit."Shelaughed."YouknowhowPapafeelsaboutyoungladiesdrivingcows."Idid,butIdecidedtomakeanofferanyway.WhenPapagotback,Iwaswaitingatthedoor."Icouldhelpifyou'donlyletme,"Itoldhim.Hestoodthereforwhatseemedlikeanhour,andthensaid,"Gogetyourraincoat,Joey.""It'sJosefina!"Iracedbackintothehouse.Werodeintothegrassland,PapaonabighorsenamedMiguelandmeonmyhorse,Isabella.Webegancallingthecowsassoonaswereachedtheriver.Finally,wefoundourred-and-whitecowsinathicket（灌木叢）.Wegotthecowsoutofthethicketandherdedthemtowardhigherground.Buttheystoppedatthedeepriverthatstoodinourway.Finally,thefirstcowsteppedintothewater,andtheothersfollowed.PapaswamacrossonMiguel,thenturnedtowatchme,"Holdontight,Joey.".AsIsabellawalkedin,Ifeltcoldwateraroundmylegs.Thenmyhorsetripped（絆倒）andwentunderexcept-forherhead.Igotwetallthewayuptomyback.Smiling,Papasaid,"Atruecowboyisbrave,Joey.""Cowgirl,"Icorrectedhim.注意∶1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Paragraph1:We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunder（雷聲）almostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意故事圍繞一個渴望在牧場幫忙的女孩展開。女孩的父親一直想要個男孩來幫忙，總是把她叫成“Joey”而不是“Josefina”，且認為放奶牛是男人的工作。一個下雨的周六早上，父親擔心奶牛安危去趕牛，女孩主動提出幫忙，父親最終同意。他們騎馬趕到草原，找到奶牛并將其趕往高地，途中遇到河流，女孩在過河時馬摔倒，她全身濕透，但父親鼓勵她是勇敢的“牛仔”，她糾正說是“女牛仔”。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應（一）伏筆父親對男孩的期望及對女孩的態(tài)度：為后續(xù)女孩努力證明自己、爭取在牧場幫忙的機會做鋪墊，在續(xù)寫中可體現(xiàn)女孩通過行動逐漸改變父親的看法。女孩的騎馬技能和獲獎經(jīng)歷：暗示女孩有能力在牧場工作，續(xù)寫中可利用這一點讓女孩在后續(xù)情節(jié)中發(fā)揮優(yōu)勢。下雨的天氣和父親對奶牛的擔憂：推動故事發(fā)展，營造緊張氛圍，續(xù)寫中可進一步描寫惡劣天氣帶來的挑戰(zhàn)及女孩的應對。（二）續(xù)寫回應第一段：可寫雷聲對馬和女孩的影響，以及女孩如何在這種突發(fā)情況下保持冷靜或應對，進一步展現(xiàn)她的勇敢和成長。第二段：描寫回到牧場后的情景，如父親和女孩的互動、母親的反應等，體現(xiàn)家庭氛圍的變化和女孩的成就感，突出女孩在經(jīng)歷這次事件后的情感收獲。三、續(xù)寫要點（一）第一段描述雷聲響起后馬的反應和女孩的處境，如馬是否受驚、女孩如何控制馬等。女孩的心理活動，可能包括害怕但又努力克服的想法，以及對完成任務的決心。父親的反應和可能給予的指導或鼓勵。（二）第二段描寫回到牧場時的環(huán)境和女孩的感受，如疲憊但滿足等。父親和母親對女孩的態(tài)度變化，例如父親的認可、母親的欣慰等。女孩對這次經(jīng)歷的感悟或總結，可體現(xiàn)她對自己的新認識和成長的體會。四、故事線女孩渴望幫忙-父親因雨擔心奶牛-女孩主動請纓-父女趕牛過河-馬受驚-繼續(xù)趕牛-成功回到牧場五、感情線女孩從渴望得到父親認可，到面對困難時的堅定和勇敢，再到最后可能獲得父親認可的喜悅和成就感，以及家庭氛圍中情感的變化，如父親對女孩態(tài)度的轉變，母親的欣慰等。六、主旨升華句Inthefaceofchallenges,agirl'sdeterminationandcouragecanbreakthroughgenderlimitationsandwinrespectandrecognition.（在面對挑戰(zhàn)時，一個女孩的決心和勇氣可以突破性別限制，贏得尊重和認可。）Thejourneyofayoungheartisfilledwiththepursuitofself-worth,andeverystepofgrowthiswrittenwithperseveranceandbraveryintherainandthunderoflife.（一顆年輕的心的旅程充滿了對自我價值的追求，在生活的風雨雷電中，每一步成長都用毅力和勇敢書寫。）Throughthetrialsoftheranchandthethunderofthestorm,agirldiscoversherinnerstrengthandredefinesherplaceinaworldthatonceunderestimatedher.（通過牧場的考驗和風暴的雷聲，一個女孩發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己內心的力量，并在一個曾經(jīng)低估她的世界中重新定義了自己的位置。）Intherealmoftheranch,wheretraditionsoncedefinedroles,agirl'sbravestepsandunwaveringspiritchangetheperceptionandlightupthepathofself-actualization.（在牧場這個曾經(jīng)由傳統(tǒng)定義角色的領域，一個女孩勇敢的步伐和堅定的精神改變了觀念，照亮了自我實現(xiàn)的道路。）Againstthebackdropoftheranchandthesymphonyofnature'selements,agirl'sgrowthunfolds,teachingusthattruecourageknowsnogenderanddreamscantranscendexpectations.（在牧場的背景和自然元素的交響樂中，一個女孩的成長展開，告訴我們真正的勇氣不分性別，夢想可以超越期望。）七、寫作范文范文一第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Thepoorhorsewasclearlyfrightened,andittookallmystrengthtoholdontightandcalmherdown.Icouldfeelmyheartpoundinginmychest,butIknewIhadtobebrave.Papashouted,"Staycalm,Joey!Keepcontrolofthehorse!"ItookadeepbreathandtriedtosootheIsabellawithgentlewordsandpats.Afterafewtensemoments,sheseemedtosettleabit.Wecontinuedtoherdthecows,butthethundermadethetaskevenmorechallenging.Thecowswerealsogettingrestless,butImanagedtokeepthemmovingintherightdirection,determinednottoletPapadown.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Whenwefinallystopped,Papalookedatmewithanewfoundrespectinhiseyes."Youdidagoodjoboutthere,Josefina,"hesaid,usingmypropernameforthefirsttimeinawhile.Mamacameout,sawmywetandmuddystate,andrushedtohugme."You'reabravegirl,"shesaidwithasmile.Aswesatdowntoeat,Ifeltasenseofprideandaccomplishment.IhadproventomyselfandtoPapathatIcouldhandlethetasksontheranch,notasaboy,butasacapableanddeterminedgirl.ThisexperiencehadnotonlystrengthenedmybondwithmyfatherbutalsomademerealizethatIcouldovercomeanyobstaclewithcourageandperseverance.范文二第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isabellarearedup,andIhadtoholdonfordearlife.Myheartraced,butIrememberedwhatPapahadtaughtmeaboutstayingcalminsuchsituations.IspokesoftlytoIsabella,tryingtocalmhernerves.Paparodeoverquickly,"It'sokay,Joey.Justkeephersteady."Inodded,takingdeepbreathstosteadymyselfaswell.Thecowsweregettingmoreagitatedbythethunder,anditwasastruggletokeepthemmovingtowardshigherground.ButIrefusedtogiveup.Iusedallmyskillsanddeterminationtokeeptheherdtogetherandmovingforward,showingthatIwasjustascapableasanycowboy.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Aswedismounted,Papaputhishandonmyshoulder."Youdidreallywelltoday,Josefina.I'mproudofyou."Ibeamedwithpride.Mamagreeteduswithawarmsmileandsaid,"Mylittlecowgirlisallgrownup."Atthedinnertable,wetalkedabouttheday'sadventure.Irealizedthatthroughthisexperience,IhadnotonlyhelpedPapawiththecowsbutalsoearnedhisrecognition.Itmademeunderstandthatgenderdoesn'tmatterwhenitcomestodoingwhatyouloveandbeingbrave.Iwasdeterminedtocontinueprovingmyselfandmakingavaluablecontributiontotheranch,asaconfidentandfearlessgirl.Thisdaymarkedanewbeginninginmyrelationshipwithmyfatherandmyplaceontheranch.參考答案We'djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isoftlystrokedandpattedher