【讀后續(xù)寫】2020年5月浙江麗水四校高二期中聯(lián)考概要寫作講評(píng)-蘭建珍-教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)

AlessonPlanofaSummaryWriting龍泉一中蘭建珍1.教材分析：本次高二下學(xué)期期中考試四校聯(lián)考英語卷的寫作部分包括推薦信和概要寫作。其中概要寫作短文是關(guān)于“全素飲食”的一篇說明文——Plant-basesdiet,共354詞，要求寫一篇60詞的內(nèi)容概要。短文共分為4個(gè)段落，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，體裁明確。然而，文本語言晦澀，尤其是第一自然段，邏輯關(guān)系較為復(fù)雜，需要深入推敲。2.學(xué)情分析授課對(duì)象的高二年級(jí)學(xué)生剛開始系統(tǒng)接觸概要寫作，雖有一定的英語學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)和思維方式，但是要想比較全面地正確概述全文，過程還需要引導(dǎo)，能力還有待提高。尤其是對(duì)于語言晦澀、結(jié)構(gòu)模糊、邏輯復(fù)雜的段落概述，本階段的學(xué)生還是缺乏方向感，缺乏靈活變通的能力，所以需要多次的練習(xí)、鞏固和提升。3.教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)教師姓名學(xué)校上課學(xué)校與年級(jí)課題名稱蘭建珍龍泉一中龍泉一中，高二（11）班summarywriting——plant-baseddiet課型summarywritingAimsBytheendofthislesson,studentswillbeableto:1.furtherunderstandthe"play"stepsandthe"piano"Ruleandkeeptheminmindwhilewritingasummary;2.getmorefamiliarwiththeSummarywritingskillsbyleadingthemtoanalyzethepassageoneparagraphbyoneparagraph;3.promotetheirlevelsofawarenessofwhatisagoodsummarywriting.FocusGuidestudentstoanalyzethepassagetogetthemainpointsandleadthemtolistthepointsintheirownwordsaccordingtothe"play"stepsandthe"piano"rule.DifficultyHowtoguidestudentstoanalyzethepassagetogetthemainpoints;Howtoleadthemtolistthepointsintheirownwordsaccordingtothe"play"stepsandthe"piano"rule.ProceduresStep1Lead-inbyreviewingtherequirementsofsummarywritingT:Whatshouldwekeepinmindifwewanttowriteagoodsummary?Ss:"playthepiano".Intentions:Usethequestionstostimulatethestudents’knowledgeoftherequirementsofasummarywriting——"playthepiano".Step2ReadingandanalyzingWhat’sthepossiblestyleofthepassage?A.ExpositionB.ArgumentationC.NarrationFocusonPara.1andfinishthefollowingtasks:Ssareaskedtoreadtheparagraphagainanddrawthestructureofthepassage.Intentions:studentscanagainroughlygetthegeneralideaandthestructureofthepassage.AnalysisofPara.1=1\*GB3①Pointoutthekeypointsbyfindingoutthetopicsentenceandthekeywords.Whilethereisnosetdefinition,aplant-basedwayofeatingfocusesonconsumingplant-sourcedwholefoodsthat…Overall,"plant-based"ismoreofabroadandflexiblewayofthinkingaboutnutritionratherthanarigiddiet.=2\*GB3②ListthekeypointsinyourownwordsAplant-baseddietmainlyconsidersplant-sourcedwholefoodsbuttheanimalproteinsarealsoneeded.Aplant-baseddietnotonlycentersonplant-sourcedwholefoods,butitneedssomeanimalproductslikeanimalproteins.Aplant-baseddietcentersonnutritiouswholefoodscomingfromplantsources,withanimalproteinsservingascomplements/supplements.Intentions:studentscanreviewtheskillsofdefiningthetopicsentencesandthekeywordsaswellasgettingtaughttoapplytheskillsflexiblytogetthemainpointsandrestatethemintheirownwords.FocusonPara.2andfinishthefollowingtasks:AnalysisofPara.2T:Isthereatopicsentencehere?Whatisit?Ss:Oneofthemainreasonsisthehealthbenefits.T:Whatkindofhealthbenefitsmost?Why?Ss:Particularly,aplant-basedlifestylehasbeenlinkedtohearthealth.T:Whatistheresultoftheresearch?Anytypicalwords?Ss:…lowerriskofhavingcardiovascular(心血管的)disease…Intentions:Studentsareenabledtogetthemostimportantpointbygettingthekeywordsofthetopicsentenceandthetypicalwords2.Listthekeypointsinyourownwords.※Researchhasshownaplant-basedlifestyleisconducivetokeepinghealthy,especiallyreducingtheriskofcardiovasculardisease.※Oneofthemajorreasonswhypeoplefollowaplant-baseddietisthatitbenefitsourhealth,especiallydecreasingtherateoftheheartdiseaseIntentions:Exposingthestudentstoawiderrangeofpossibleversionsforthemainpointsofeachparagraphbylearningsomeexcellentexpressions.FocusonPara.3andfinishthefollowingtasks:AnalysisofPara.3T:Whatdoesthisparagraphmainlytellus?Ss:Anotherbenefitoftheplant-baseddiet.T:Howdoyouknow?Anytypicalword?Ss:Also.T:Whydoesthislifestylehelpusloseweight?Ss:Becauseoffullfiberandwater,makingusfeelfullup.2.Listthekeypointsinyourownwords.※Besides,abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-baseddietgeneratethefeelingofbeingfull,consequentlycontributingtolosingweight.※It’shelpfultoloseweightbymakingyoufeelfullupduetotheabundantfibreandwater.Inaddition,abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-baseddietgeneratethefeelingofbeingfull,consequentlyresultinginlosingweight.Intentions:Throughpractice,studentsaremorefamiliarwiththestepsandtheskillsofgettingthemainideaofeachparagraphintheirownwords.FocusonPara.4andfinishthefollowingtasks:AnalysisofPara.4Q:Whatdoestheexternalbenefitreferto?A:brightenyourskin.Q:Why?A:Becauseofvitamins.Q:What’stherestoftheparagraphabout?A:AdetailedexampleofV-c.Listthekeypointsinyourownwords.Moreover,plant-basedeatersmayhavebrightandsmoothskinthankstotherichvitaminsfromthediet.Inaddition,theplant-basedfoodsarerichinvitamins,whichwillmakeyourskinbright.Besides,theplant-basedfoodscontainingvitaminscouldbrightenyourskin.Intentions:tocheckwhetherthestudentshavegottheskillofanalyzinganexampleorexplanation.Step3Analyzethestructureofthepassageplant-basedwholefoods=1\*GB3①What’saplant-baseddiet?Animalproteins=2\*GB3②Benefit1=3\*GB3③Benefit2=4\*GB3④Benefit3healthbenefitloseweightbrightenyourskinesp.lowerheartdiseaseStep4Yokethesentencestoapassage(60wordsorso)AppreciatethepossibleversionofthesummaryAplant-baseddietcentersonnutritiouswholefoodscomingfromplantsources,withanimalproteinsservingascomplements.(要點(diǎn)1)Researchhasshownaplant-basedlifestyleisconducivetokeepinghealthy,especiallyreducingtheriskofcardiovasculardisease.(要點(diǎn)2)Besides,abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-baseddietgeneratethefeelingofbeingfull,consequentlycontributingtolosingweight.(要點(diǎn)3)Moreover,plant-basedeatersmayhavebrightandsmoothskinthankstotherichvitaminsfromthediet.(要點(diǎn)4)(72words)AssignmentDrawaconclusionofwhat’scoveredduringtheclassandtakeanote.ReflectionsWillthestudentsbemotivated?Willthest