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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。WayneBooneisa53-year-oldtruckdriverforapaper-recyclingcompanyinSuffolk,Virginia.Everyday,hedrivestheempty18-heeltruckupInterstate64inChesapeaketowardVirginiaBeach,about50kilometersaway,wherehewillpickuphisfirstloadoftheday.OnemorninginApril,thestrongwindsgaveWayneBoone’struckagoodwhipping(鞭打).HeplannedtochangeintotheleftlaneoftheG.A.TreakleMemorialBridgewhenthestormletlooseitsfullforce.RainhammeredBoone’swindshield.Windsgrewfierce.Ashewasturning,Boone’sfrontwheelsmetthewetsurfacejustasapowerfulwindblewthedriver’ssideofhistruck.Itfeltlikethewindliftedthetruckclearoffthesurface.Histruckcrashedintotheguardrail(護欄)onthefarrightedge.Hestruggledtoregaincontrol,butanotherwind,blowingmoreviolently,pusheditupwardfrombelow,liftingthetruckcab(駕駛艙),withBooneinside,overtheedgeofthebridgebeforedroppingitagain.Ifhefeltanyhopeofsurvivalbefore,itdisappeared.Thetruckaimedstraightdowntowardthegrey-blackwater.Intheend,Boone’struckwashangingoverthebridge,under21metersofwhichwasadeepriver.Boonewasbadlyinjuredhalfblindedbythebloodpouringintohiseyesandsufferingfromshock.Heforcedhimselftofocus.Ifhehadanychanceofescapingthecabandsurviving,hehadtogetoutofhisseatbelt.Gatheringallhisstrength,hepulledhimselfbetweentheseatsandputhimselfbackasfarashecouldbehindthedriver’sseat.Hestruggledtograbhismobilephone,butitwasoutofhisreach.Afterhewashunginthewindforanhour,waitingtodie,Boonewasalmostexhausted.Washegoingtogetoutofherealive?Hehadneverpanicked.Hehadacceptedhisfate(命運).Hewasreadytogoifthat’swhatwasmeanttobewhenheheardanoisewasdrawingnearer.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens(汽笛).____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意53歲的卡車司機WayneBoone在四月的一天駕駛卡車時遭遇強風。在G.A.Treakle紀念橋上,他的卡車先是撞到護欄,后被強風掀起,駕駛艙懸在橋邊,下方是深河。Boone受傷嚴重,被困在車內,在絕望中等待死亡時聽到了聲音靠近。他原本已接受命運,卻又燃起了一絲希望。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應伏筆:Boone從未驚慌且接受命運,為后續(xù)他在救援到來時的心態(tài)轉變做鋪墊,體現(xiàn)他堅韌又無奈的心理。續(xù)寫回應示例:在續(xù)寫中,可描寫當救援人員到來時,Boone內心從絕望到希望的強烈轉變,以及這種轉變如何體現(xiàn)在他的行動和情感上。比如他可能會更加積極地配合救援,眼神中重新煥發(fā)出求生的渴望等。續(xù)寫要點第一段:描述Boone聽到警笛聲后的反應,救援人員的行動,如如何接近他、對他進行安撫和采取救援措施等,以及Boone在這個過程中的感受和表現(xiàn)。第二段:講述Boone和救援人員出現(xiàn)在橋上時人們的反應,Boone被救后的狀態(tài)和心理活動,以及他對這次經(jīng)歷的感悟和可能產(chǎn)生的影響。情感線從遭遇事故時的驚恐、絕望,到聽到警笛聲后的希望燃起,再到被救后的欣慰、感激以及對生命的重新認識。故事線卡車事故-被困等待-聽到救援聲音-救援過程-成功獲救及感悟主旨升華句(英文)Inthefaceofextremedanger,hopeisthelightthatguidesusthroughthedarkestmoments.(在極端危險面前,希望是引領我們度過最黑暗時刻的光。)Thepowerofperseveranceandthearrivalofhelpcanturnadesperatesituationintoanewbeginning.(堅持的力量和救援的到來可以將絕望的局面轉變?yōu)樾碌拈_始。)Eveninthejawsofdeath,thehumanspiritcanfindthestrengthtoholdonuntilsalvationarrives.(即使在死亡的邊緣,人類的精神也能找到堅持的力量,直到救援到來。)Anear-deathexperienceteachesustocherishlifeandappreciateeveryopportunityforsurvival.(一次瀕死的經(jīng)歷教會我們珍惜生命,感激每一個生存的機會。)Whenallseemslost,thekindnessandcourageofotherscanbringusbackfromthebrinkandgiveusasecondchanceatlife.(當一切似乎都失去時,他人的善良和勇氣可以將我們從邊緣拉回,給我們第二次生命的機會。)寫作示范一Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Hisheartleapedwithaglimmerofhope.Soon,hesawtherescueteamarrivingatthescene.Theyquicklyassessedthesituationanddevisedaplantosavehim.Onerescuerrappelleddowntothetruck,carefullymakinghiswaytoBoone.HecomfortedBooneandsecuredasafetyharnessaroundhim.Then,withthehelpoftheotherrescuersabove,theyslowlyliftedBooneuptothebridge.Allthewhile,Booneheldontightly,hisbodystilltremblingfromtheordeal.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Therewerecheersandsighsofrelief.Boone,weakandexhausted,wasimmediatelyrushedtothehospital.Ashelayonthestretcher,hecouldn'tbelievehehadsurvivedsuchaterrifyingordeal.Hewasgratefultotherescuersandthestrokeofluckthathadbroughtthemtohimintime.Thisexperiencewouldforeverchangehisperspectiveonlife,makinghimcherisheverymomentandappreciatethepowerofhopeandhelpinthefaceofextremedanger.寫作示范二Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Thesoundgavehimnewstrengthandasenseofrelief.Therescueteamwastednotimeinsettinguptheirequipment.Askilledclimberdescendedtowardsthedanglingtruck,reachingBoonewithareassuringsmile.HecarefullycheckedBoone'sinjuriesandhelpedhimintoaspecialrescuedevice.Astheybegantheascentbacktothebridge,Boonefeltamixoffearandhope.Thewindstillwhippedaroundthem,butheknewhewasingoodhands.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Camerasflashedasthedramaticrescuewascaptured.Boonewasoverwhelmedwithemotions.Hewasgratefultobealiveandfortheheroiceffortsoftherescueteam.Inthefollowingdays,hewouldreflectontheincident,realizingthateveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysachanceforsalvation.Thisnear-deathexperiencewouldinspirehimtolivelifetothefullestandnevertakehissafetyandthekindnessofothersforgranted.寫作示范三Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Hisspiritliftedasheknewhelpwasontheway.Therescueoperationcommencedpromptly.AbraverescuerwaslowereddowntoBoone'sposition.HecalmedBoone'snervesandworkedquicklytoensurehissafety.Together,theypreparedfortheascent.Witheverypassingmoment,Boonefeltabitmoreatease.Therescuer'ssteadypresencegavehimthecourageheneededtofacethedifficultsituation.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Theatmospherewaselectricwithreliefandcelebration.Boonewastakentoawaitingambulance.Ashelookedaroundatthepeoplegathered,hewasdeeplytouchedbytheoutpouringofconcern.Thisharrowingexperiencehadtaughthimthevalueoflifeandtheimportanceofnevergivinguphope.Hewouldcarrythislessonwithhimalways,andbeforevergratefulforthesecondchancehehadbeengivenonthatfatefulday.讀后續(xù)寫Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens(汽笛).Tohim,thenoisysoundcouldhavebeenangelssinging.Hopefinallyfloodedthroughhimasarescuercamedownwitharope.Hesighedinreliefwhentherescuergavehimstep-by-stepin
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