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Sarah,ahighschoolstudent,wasalwayseagertoparticipateineveryactivityhappeninginschoollife,andsheoftenpersuadedherbestfriend,Anthony,tojoinher.Oneday,SarahsawaposterannouncingtheannualGreatBake-offChallenge.Excitedly,sheexplainedtoAnthonyhowthewinnerwouldbegrantedabakingmasterclasswiththewell-knownbaker,ChefBella.BothSarahandAnthonylovedbakingandidolized(崇拜)chefBella,whosecookingshowwaspopularacrossthecountry.However,theyrealizedthecompetitionwouldbetoughastheirschoolhaditsshareoftalentedbakers.Despitethis,Sarahsuggestedthattheycombinetheirstrengthstoparticipateasateam.Anthonyagreed,andtheystartedthejourneytowintheGreatBake-offChallenge.SarahandAnthonystartedbyshortlistingtheirstrengths:Sarahwasskilledatconstructinganddecoratingcakes,whileAnthonywasgoodatdevelopingdeliciousflavors.Theyspentweekends
brainstorming,testing,andperfectingtheirbakingrecipes,transformingSarah'sfamilykitchenintotheirveryownbake-offbattleground.Asthedateofthecompetitiongotcloser,theygrewmoreanxious.Theyevenhadafewargumentsaboutthecake'sdesignortheflavorcombination,buttheyquicklyresolvedtheirdisagreementsandcontinuedtoworktogetherasateam.ThedayoftheGreatBake-offChallengefinallyarrived.SarahandAnthonywalkedintotheschoolhall,theirheartspoundingwithamixofanticipationandfear.Thesetuphadmultipleworkstations,eachequippedwithanoven,amixer,andbasicbakingtools.Theparticipantsweregiventhreehourstocompletetheircakes,afterwhichthejudgeswouldevaluateeachcreationbasedontasteandoriginality.Thecountdownbegan,andthecouplesprungintoaction.Anthonyworkedonthecomplexflavorcombinations,whileSarahstartedbuildingthecake'simpressivestructure.Duringtheintensity,theycouldn'thelpbutstealaglanceattheothercompetitors,admiringtheiropponents’skillsandcreativity.However,theyremainedfocusedontheircreation,supportingandencouragingeachotherthroughouttheprocess.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意高中生Sarah熱衷于參加學(xué)?;顒?dòng),她拉著好友Anthony一起參加學(xué)校一年一度的烘焙大賽。獲勝者能得到知名烘焙師ChefBella的大師課。他們知道競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈,但決定發(fā)揮各自優(yōu)勢(shì)組隊(duì)參賽。賽前他們利用周末研究食譜,雖有爭(zhēng)論但都能迅速化解。比賽當(dāng)日,現(xiàn)場(chǎng)有多個(gè)配備齊全的工作站,參賽者需在三小時(shí)內(nèi)完成蛋糕,由評(píng)委根據(jù)味道和創(chuàng)意評(píng)判。比賽中,他們分工協(xié)作,在專注自己作品的同時(shí)也關(guān)注對(duì)手。五要素分析人物:Sarah、Anthony及其他參賽選手、評(píng)委。時(shí)間:從看到烘焙大賽海報(bào)開始,到比賽當(dāng)天。地點(diǎn):學(xué)校,包括Sarah家廚房(準(zhǔn)備階段)和學(xué)校禮堂(比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng))。起因:對(duì)烘焙的熱愛以及渴望贏得與知名烘焙師學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)。經(jīng)過:組隊(duì)、準(zhǔn)備、參賽過程中的協(xié)作與小插曲。結(jié)果:完成作品,等待評(píng)委評(píng)判。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:比賽競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈?;貞?yīng):他們?cè)诒荣愔锌吹綄?duì)手的實(shí)力,更專注于自己作品,通過努力使作品有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。伏筆:評(píng)委將根據(jù)味道和創(chuàng)意評(píng)判?;貞?yīng):文中描述他們?cè)谖兜篮蛣?chuàng)意上精心準(zhǔn)備,等待評(píng)委評(píng)判結(jié)果。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段情感線:緊張又期待,完成作品后的如釋重負(fù)和對(duì)結(jié)果的忐忑。故事線:詳細(xì)描述完成的蛋糕外觀,展現(xiàn)他們對(duì)作品的滿意,同時(shí)提及其他參賽者作品的優(yōu)秀,增加緊張感。第二段情感線:極度緊張,對(duì)評(píng)委評(píng)價(jià)的關(guān)注與擔(dān)憂。故事線:描述評(píng)委品嘗和評(píng)價(jià)的過程,著重于他們的表情和動(dòng)作,突出Sarah和Anthony的緊張心情。主旨升華句Teamworkinacompetitioncanturnashareddreamintoatangibleachievement.Intheheatofacontest,friendshipandcollaborationarethesecretingredientstosuccess.Thejourneyofabakingchallengeisnotjustaboutwinning,butalsoaboutthebondforgedthroughteamwork.Whenpassionmeetsteamworkinacompetition,theresultisnotonlyacreationbutalsoastoryoffriendship.Abakingcompetitionrevealsthatwithcombinedefforts,friendscancreatesomethingbeautifulandachievetheirdreams.寫作示范第一篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakestoodoutwithitsuniquecharm.ThesmoothfrostinganddelicatedecorationswereatestamenttoSarah'sskill.Anthony'sflavorsseemedtowaftthroughtheair,invitingeveryonetotakeabite.Theylookedaroundandsawotheramazingcakes,buttheyfeltproudofwhattheyhadachieved.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahandAnthony'seyeswerefixedonthem.Everybitethejudgestook,everynodorwhisperamongthemmadetheirheartsrace.Theysawthejudgeswritedownnotes,andtheyprayedthattheirhardworkwouldshinethroughandearnthemthetopprize.第二篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakewasamasterpiece.Thetierswereperfectlyaligned,andthecolorsblendedharmoniously.Itwasavisualdelightthatdrewmanyeyes.Astheyaddedthefinaltouches,theywerefilledwithasenseofaccomplishmentdespitethenervousness.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahsqueezedAnthony'shandtightly.Thejudgessampledeachcakemethodically.WhentheyreachedSarahandAnthony'screation,theduowatchedintently.Thejudges'expressionswereinscrutableastheytasted,leavingSarahandAnthonyontenterhooks,waitingfortheverdict.范文:Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theytookastep
backandstartedadmiringtheir
accomplishment.It'sanextraordinaryfive-layercakewithanincrediblemixofflavorsandimpressivedecorations,
displayingtheirbeautifuljourney
togetherasfriends.Drawinginspirationfromtheiridol,ChefBella,theysoughttocreatenotjustacake,butagreatworkofart.Withdustedfaces
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