2021新高考英語I卷讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀

2021新高考英語I卷讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀讀后續(xù)寫是一種將閱讀與寫作緊密結(jié)合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的綜合語言運用能力?？忌プ」适碌臄⑹戮€索，依據(jù)原文的寫作思路續(xù)寫文章，并適當發(fā)散。對于這類題型，我們需要注意的問題是：1、寫什么

2、怎么寫今天我們將以2021年的新高考I卷題目為例，對英語讀后續(xù)寫方法探究！AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

【原文分析】

本文以第三人稱，描述了一對雙胞胎在母親節(jié)為媽媽做早餐，送上一份驚喜的故事。這也是新高考的第一次續(xù)寫真題。整體難度不大，所描述事件貼近生活，是每個孩子都可能經(jīng)歷過的事情，故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情節(jié)上增加故事色彩，則是本篇文章寫作的更高境界。明線：Asurprise暗線：lovebetweenfamilies根據(jù)續(xù)寫部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在雙胞胎失望之時，父親的出現(xiàn)給他們帶來了希望?？梢詮囊韵碌膸讉€方面入手去考慮問題：呈上：

Howdidfatherfeelonseeingthemess?細節(jié)：

Whatdidfatherdotohelp?啟下：

Whocookedthebreakfastatlast?在第一段的描寫當中，同學們可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描寫做飯的場景。以達到對原文呼應(yīng)的目的。父親幫忙后，怎樣還讓母親感覺到驚喜呢？這是父親和孩子們之間的一個小秘密。第二段則是向媽媽獻上驚喜的時刻了。呈上：Whatdidtheysay?細節(jié)：Howdidmotherreactandfeel?點題:

Whatasurprise!第二段可以運用到平時練習用過的表示驚喜、感動的情感描寫。溫馨提示：據(jù)說，答題卡是長成這樣子的，行高8毫米，行寬≈19厘米（實際寬度18.7-18.8厘米）讀后續(xù)寫:共18行（段落開頭占2行，可寫作的空間8.5行*2段）所以，大家在寫作的時候，特別是文采洋溢的同學們，一定要控制好字數(shù)。不要超出答題范圍呀！【下水作文】續(xù)寫下水文1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Seeingthemess,theirfatherfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.Butsoonherealizedtheirintention.Inconsequence,hejoinedthetwinsinpreparingtheMother’sDaysurprise.Thoughhehadneverbeenseencooking,actually,hewasexpertindoingso.Thetwinsassistedtheirfatherwiththebreakfastwithgreatcuriosity,anditwasapleasuretoteamupwiththeirfather.Eventually,theycouldsmellhowgoodthedisheswere.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Theysaid“HappyMother’sDay”,withtheireyestwinklingwithexcitement.Theirfatherlaughedheartilyandtoldherthetwinshadpreparedbreakfastforher.Thenthetwinswhisperedtoherthattheylovedhersomuchandtheywereeagertoseehersmileeveryday.Hearingthewords,sogladwasshethatherfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.Atthatmoment,theyallsensedhowbeautifulsomethinglivingcouldbe.Whatasweetsurprise!

（160詞）續(xù)寫下水文2：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Seeingthetheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,Dadsuddenlyfiguredouttheirsecret.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.Withoutasecondthought,Dadofferedtohelp.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.Theyhelpedcleanthekitchenwhiletheirfathercookedasandwichandsomeporridgeskillfully.Soon,thedelicioussmellofbreakfastfilledthekitchen.Dadhintedtoshowthatitwasasecretandwentbacktothebedroom,askingthetwinstogoontocarryouttheirgreatplan.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Theyyelled“HappyMother’sDay,darlingMummy!Abigsurpriseforyou!”Whenshesawthebreakfast,hereyeswidenedupandtwinkledwithexcitement.Dadwaspretendingtobesurprisedtoseesuchdeliciousfood.Motherhuggedthetwinsandshowedherthanks.Shetastedandpraisedthatitwasthebestbreakfastshehadeverhad.Thetwinssmiledtotheirfathersecretly.Afeelingoflovefilledthewholeroom.Whatabeautifulsurprise!

（170詞）續(xù)寫下水文3：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.“Don’tpanic!”he

handed

eachoneawettowel,

helping

themcleanthemessquickly.

Afterthat,

Jeff

stammeredout

theirplan,

hisfaceflushing.However,Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!Icanteachyoutocook.”

Atthis,JennaandJefalmost

jumpedtotheirfeet,joyineyes.

Underhiscarefulguidance,

itdidn’ttakelongbefore

theFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.

Everythingsettled,

Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Meetingtheirsmilingeyes,Motherfeltconfused

until

theypresentedthebreakfastandsaid“HappyMother’sDay”.Mother

gavethematighthug,“Unbelievable!Youcancook!It’sthebiggestsurpriseIhavereceived.”

Herfacelitupwithhappiness.“Theyhaveknownhowtotakecareofothers.”Fathersaid

inresponseto

herexcitement,

winking

atJennaandJef.Theycouldn’thelpgiggling.

Itwasasecretonlysharedbetweenthem.

附：續(xù)寫原文Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindismay,theirfatherappearedinthedoorway.Onelookandhe

knewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheircrestfallenfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascle