2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit5Intothewild表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊(cè)

PAGEUnit5Intothewild動(dòng)物介紹本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是介紹動(dòng)物，此類文章以說(shuō)明為主要表達(dá)方式，用來(lái)介紹動(dòng)物的類屬、生活習(xí)性、生存狀態(tài)、外貌特征等。在寫作時(shí)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭——總體概括介紹該動(dòng)物的狀況。2．主體——進(jìn)行具體介紹該動(dòng)物的具體狀況。3．結(jié)尾——做總結(jié)來(lái)描述該動(dòng)物目前的狀況、境況以及我們應(yīng)當(dāng)實(shí)行的應(yīng)對(duì)措施。[常用詞塊]1．beequaltoitinsize在個(gè)頭大小上和它相等2．feedonflowersandleaves以花朵和樹(shù)葉為食3．theincreasinglydemandontheantelope'sfur對(duì)藏羚羊的毛皮的需求量漸漸增大4．dieoutinthenearfuture在不久的將來(lái)將滅亡5．givebirthtothreebabypandas產(chǎn)下了三個(gè)熊貓寶寶6．thousandsoftouristscomingtoappreciatethebeautifulbirds成千上萬(wàn)的來(lái)觀賞漂亮鳥(niǎo)兒的游客7．thedecreasingnumberofthebirdsthatmigratehere遷徙到這里的鳥(niǎo)兒的數(shù)量越來(lái)越少8．calloneveryonetoworkasavolunteertohelpus號(hào)召大家做志愿者來(lái)幫忙9．takeimmediatemeasurestoprotecttheirhabitatsfrombeingdestroyed實(shí)行緊急措施來(lái)愛(ài)護(hù)它們的棲息地免遭破壞10．beawareoftheimportanceofprotectingmothernature意識(shí)到愛(ài)護(hù)大自然母親的重要性[常用語(yǔ)句]精彩開(kāi)頭1．Thegiantpandaisananimalthat/whichlivesinthemountains.大熊貓是一種生活在山里的動(dòng)物。2．Itfeedson/livesonbamboos.它靠吃竹子為生。3．Thebirdhasbeautifulwingswithsomeblackspotsonsomefeathers.這種鳥(niǎo)有著漂亮的翅膀，一些羽毛上有著黑色的斑點(diǎn)。豐滿主體1．Manytreesarebeingcutdownandmoreandmoreforestsarelost，makinganimalslosetheirhomestolivein.很多樹(shù)木被砍伐，越來(lái)越多的森林消逝，使得動(dòng)物失去了家園。2．Manyfieldsarebeingturnedintodesert，whichmakestheanimalslivingtherehavenoplacetofindfoodtoeat.很多土地正在變成沙漠，這使得生活在那里的動(dòng)物沒(méi)有地方找食物吃。3．Manyanimalsarebeingkilledsothatsomeofthemareindangerofdyingout.很多動(dòng)物被捕殺，因此有些動(dòng)物面臨滅亡。4．Toprotectpandas，measuresshouldbetakentosetupsomenaturereserves.為了愛(ài)護(hù)大熊貓，應(yīng)當(dāng)實(shí)行措施建立一些自然愛(ài)護(hù)區(qū)。余味結(jié)尾1．Inaword，wemusttakesomemeasurestopreventrareanimalsfromextinction.總之，我們必需實(shí)行一些措施來(lái)防止珍稀動(dòng)物滅亡。2．Finally，weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.最終，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)讓人們知道愛(ài)護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物的重要性。假定你是大熊貓繁殖基地的工作人員李華，請(qǐng)你為大熊貓寫一篇解說(shuō)詞，并向前來(lái)參觀基地的美國(guó)客人介紹中國(guó)的這種特有的物種。內(nèi)容包括：1．主要生活在四川、陜西和甘肅的山區(qū)；2．以竹子為食；3．憨態(tài)可掬；4．瀕危緣由：棲息地削減及氣候改變。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：大熊貓繁殖基地(giantpandabreedingbase)[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Ladiesandgentlemen，welcometoseepanda.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutit.Thepandaislovelywithblackandwhitehair.ItisveryspecialinChina，eveninthewholeworld.ItlivesinSichuan，ShaanxiandGansuProvinces.Theyeatbamboos.Manypeoplecometothegiantpandabreedingbasetoseethem.However，becauseofsomereason，thenumberofthemisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Inordertoprotectthem，weshouldtakesomemeasures.Webelievethenumberofgiantpandaswillgreatlyincreaseverysoon.Wishyouagoodtimehere.Thanks.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：1．寫作內(nèi)容太過(guò)于口語(yǔ)化；2．對(duì)熊貓的視察細(xì)致，描述不夠重點(diǎn)突出；3．未能指出愛(ài)護(hù)熊貓的緣由以及愛(ài)護(hù)措施。[升格作文]Ladiesandgentlemen，welcometoourgiantpandabreedingbase.I'dliketointroducethisuniquespeciestoallofyou.AsasymbolofChina，thegiantpandaisaspecialChinesespecies，mainlylivinginthemountainsofSichuan，ShaanxiandGansuProvinces.Theyfeedmostlyonbamboos.Theylooksocuteinappearancethattheyarepopularamongpeopleallovertheworld.However，theyareindangerofextinctionbecauseofthelossoftheirnaturehabitatandtheclimatechange.Inordertoprotectgiantpandasfromdyingout，wehavetakenmanypracticalmeasures.Webelievethenumberofgiantpandaswillgreatlyincreaseverysoon.Wishyouagoodtimehere.Thanks.依據(jù)要求寫一篇關(guān)于瀕危動(dòng)物——金絲猴(goldenmonkey)的短文。詞數(shù)80左右。1．棲息地：中國(guó)2．外貌：金黃色，有點(diǎn)灰；尾巴和身體一樣長(zhǎng)。3．生活環(huán)境：海拔1500－3000米的森林。4．生活習(xí)性：群居，吃水果、干果，在樹(shù)上活動(dòng)；5．它們的數(shù)量削減了，呼吁人們愛(ài)護(hù)金絲猴。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[參考范文]ThegoldenmonkeysLivingonlyinChina，goldenmonkeysareprotectedbytheChinesegovernment.Theirfurisgoldenandabitgrey.Theirtailsareaslongastheirbodies.Themalegoldenmonkeysarebigandstrongwhilethefemaleonesaremuchsmaller.Goldenmonkeysliveinforestswhichare1，500－3，000meters