人教版高三英語高考第二輪復習之PracticalWriting課件

PracticalWritingAninsightintoOldLiHuaismorethanexperienced.student？editor？captain？volunteer？chairman？Whatdoyouwantfromme？Question&AnswerSessionFocusonTraditionalChinesecultureandcampusactivities.Insight1conclusion(beforeourwriting)Whatelsewouldyou

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knowaboutpracticalwriting？Question&AnswerSession教育部發(fā)文要求每個中小學生都要參與志愿服務。寒假將至，假定你是校學生會主席李華，請你在校英語報上發(fā)表一封倡議信。內(nèi)容包括：1.志愿者活動的益處；2.可以開展的志愿者活動；3.發(fā)出倡議注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSchoolmates,

Volunteeringisplayingacrucialroleinstudents’overalldevelopment.Withtheapproachofwintervacation,it’shightimethatwetookupvolunteering.

應用文—2024九省聯(lián)考Genre（體裁）Person：FirstpersonTense：SimplepresentStructureBenefitsActivitiesLaunchinitiativesBasicelementsWhat

arethebarriersinpracticalwriting?應用文—總結九省聯(lián)考學生答題情況（問卷調(diào)查）Insight23無法清楚地辨認字體，信息未能傳達給讀者。應用文—學生答題情況5漏掉主要內(nèi)容（志愿活動），詞匯有限，信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者應用文—學生答題情況應用文—評分原則scoringstandards1.總分15分，按照五個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3.詞數(shù)少于60詞，從總分中減去1分，多于100的（未寫到答題區(qū)域之外）不扣分。4.評分時，應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。5.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯均可以接受。6.如書寫較差，以致影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。Insight2應用文—總結九省聯(lián)考學生答題情況（問卷調(diào)查）Insight2應用文—學生答題情況11覆蓋主要內(nèi)容，語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務,但不豐富，語句間銜接不合理應用文—各檔次給分范圍和要求第四檔（10-12）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務?！m漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容?！獞玫恼Z法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求?！Z法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致?！獞煤唵蔚恼Z句間連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。達到了預期的寫作目的。應用文—學生答題情況13語法結構豐富較多的詞匯詞組上下文過渡自然應用文—各檔次給分范圍和要求第五檔（13-15）

完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務?！采w所有內(nèi)容要點?！獞昧溯^多的語法結構和詞匯。—語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力?！行У厥褂昧苏Z句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

完全達到了預期的寫作目的。CompletenessDiversityCoherenceFocusoncompleteness，diversityandcoherenceinyourwritingInsight2Conclusion李華如何驚艷閱卷老師Howtowowyourteacher？Insight3

1.短語優(yōu)先

many

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１、三大用詞優(yōu)先原則：2.考綱詞匯優(yōu)先：good ---hard ---big ---takepartin--avarietyof,agreatmany,plentyofparticipatein，throwoneselfinto,diveintoreachoutfor,extendassistancetobebeneficialto,contributeto,amazing,brilliant,

fantastic,fabuloustough，challenging,complicatedparticipatein,throwoneselfinto,diveintoconsiderable/significant/enormous/immense

3.優(yōu)先加形容詞或副詞：Ihopethat…I__________hopethat…h(huán)avean

effecton…-havea_____________effecton…takemeasures

to…-take__________measuresto…sincerelyprofoundeffective定語從句 (attributiveclauses)非謂語動詞 (Nonpredicativeverbs)名詞性從句 (nounclauses)倒裝句 (Inversion)被動語態(tài)

(Passivevoice)2、豐富句型結構：方式一：非限制性定語從句適用情況：提出具體行為建議后，以非限定從補充說明信息。Wecanserveothersinthecomfortofourownhomeswithvirtualvolunteering.VirtualvolunteeringtakesadvantageoftheInternet.(改為非限制性定從)2.Ourstresslevelsarereducedwhenwedomeaningful volunteerwork.Anditfurtherenablesustosleepbetter.

Ourstresslevelsarereducedwhenwedomeaningful volunteerwork,whichfurtherenablesustosleepbetter.Withvirtualvolunteering,whichtakesadvantageoftheInternet,wecanserveothersinthecomfortofourownhomes.方式二：非謂語動詞作狀語適用情況：兩個并列句主語一致時，可考慮轉變其中一個為非謂語1.Anunusualtypeofvolunteeringiscalledvoluntourismanditallowsustoservepeopleinneed.

（非謂語合并句子）Anunusualtypeofvolunteeringiscalledvoluntourism,

2.Iamoccupiedintendingtotheelderlyinthenursinghouse,Ifinditchallengingtodevotemyselftostudy.(非謂語合并句子)

Ifinditchallengingtodevotemyselftostudy.

Occupiedintendingtotheelderlyinthenursinghouse，allowingustoservepeopleinneed.方式三：名詞性從句適用情況：表達觀點、看法、建議時，可選名詞性從句1.我們可以做的活動從兒童福利院做志愿者到收集動物生活數(shù)據(jù)來協(xié)助保護工作。

rangesfromvolunteeringatchildren’shometocollectingdataaboutanimallifetoassistwithconservationefforts.2.最終，那就是我們?yōu)槭裁匆?。（劃線部分翻譯）Ultimately,Whatwecandothat’swhyweserve.方式四：倒裝句適用情況：兩個并列關系以及強調(diào)感情色彩1.志愿工作不僅可以改善人們的生活質量，還可以對世界產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。（劃線翻譯）

,butalsohasahugeimpactontheworld.2.只有通過挑戰(zhàn)我們自己，我們才能走出我們的舒適區(qū)。(翻譯)Onlybychallengingourselves

canwestepoutsideourcomfortzone.Notonlydoesvolunteeringworkimprovepeople’squalityoflife方式五：被動語態(tài)適用情況：強調(diào)動作的承受者，不用說清楚執(zhí)行者時1.傳統(tǒng)的志愿服務類型是在社區(qū)內(nèi)部進行的。（劃線部分翻譯）Thetraditionaltypesofvolunteering2.志愿服務不僅僅局限于當?shù)氐臋C會。（劃線部分翻譯）Volunteeringlocalopportunities.

isnotjustlimited/restictedtoaredonewithincommunities.Insight3ConclusionSharpenourvocabularyanddiversifyour sentencepatterns.PolishupGroupWork Volunteeringhasavarietyofbenefits.

Firstly,itisanamazingopportunityforustoparticipateinpublicserviceactivities.Moreover,adifferentlifeexperiencecanbeobtained

byvirtueofvoluntarywork.Additionally,whencommunicatingwithpeople,notonlycanwehelppeopleinneedbutwecanalsodoourpartforsociety,thusdevelopingoursocialskillsandbroadeningourhorizons.

Actually,therearenumerousvoluntaryworkavailableforus,rangingfromsortingoutrubbishorshowingpeoplearoundmuseumsto

extendingassistancetotheelderly. I