第10講 讀后續(xù)寫心理活動(dòng)之積極情緒描寫（高興、激動(dòng)等）（講義）-2024年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)講練測(cè)（新教材新高考）含答案及解析

?第10講心理描寫之積極情緒（講義）目錄目標(biāo)1開心、高興的常用詞、句目標(biāo)2興奮、激動(dòng)的常用詞、句目標(biāo)3美好事物的常用詞、句目標(biāo)4感恩、感動(dòng)常用詞、句目標(biāo)5經(jīng)典賞析目標(biāo)6真題感悟開心、高興的常用詞、句詞組incheerfulspirits心情愉快；becontentwith對(duì)...感到滿意；bedelightedat對(duì)...很高興；setone'sheartatrest使某人安心；brightensb'sheart使某人心情愉快；bepowerfullyattractedto被強(qiáng)烈地吸引；bejoyfulover/about因...而高興；dance/jumpforjoy高興地跳起來；tearsofhappinessflowingdown流下幸福的淚水；asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherface滿意的表情/一個(gè)令人鼓舞的表情出現(xiàn)在她的臉龐上；【精彩典例】1.（湖南師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)2023-2024學(xué)年高三摸底考試）MychildrenhappilyacceptedandwarmlytookSteventovisithisnewhomeanddiscussedmakingroomforSteven.我的孩子們高興地接受了邀請(qǐng)，并熱情地帶史蒂文去他的新家，討論為史蒂文騰出空間。2.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.(容光煥發(fā))3.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。4.Asmileplayedaroundhismouth.他的嘴角掛著一絲笑意。5.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。6.Theyranaroundaftereachother,theirfacesirradiatedwithjoy.他們互相追逐著，臉上充滿了喜悅。7.Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高興得難以形容。8.Iwasoverjoyedandranthreestepsatonce.我欣喜若狂，三步并作兩步就跑了過去。9.Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。10.Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。11.Iwasfloatingonair.我高興得飄飄然。12.Flowersaresmilingbrightly,birdsarecryingjoyfully.Myheartisassweetashoney.花兒在微笑，鳥兒在快樂地鳴叫，我的心情就像吃了蜜一樣的甜。13.WhenIturnedaround,IfoundJohnwasgrinning.我轉(zhuǎn)過身時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)約翰正咧著嘴笑。14.ThemomentIwantedtoshoutatmyson,mywifesmiledandwinkedatme.我剛想對(duì)兒子大喊大叫，我妻子微笑著對(duì)我眨了眨眼。15.Wheneveryonestarted/begantoclaptheirhands,Marygavethemashysmile.大家開始鼓掌時(shí)，瑪麗沖他們羞澀地微笑了一下。興奮、激動(dòng)的常用詞、句詞組feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness感覺既興奮又開心；canhardlyconcealhisexcitement幾乎無(wú)法掩飾他的興奮的心情；quiteflushedwithexcitement激動(dòng)的滿臉通紅；toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是；conceal/healone’sexcitement難掩激動(dòng)；containone’sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)；aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮；ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲；cheerup振奮起來；【精彩典例】1.（廣東省六校2023-2024學(xué)年高三聯(lián)考試題）NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.在我最瘋狂的夢(mèng)中，我從來沒有想過我確實(shí)被分配了實(shí)習(xí)工作，在學(xué)校生活節(jié)目中表演，而我第一次在電視上公開露面是在五天內(nèi)。（2024屆浙江省強(qiáng)基聯(lián)盟適應(yīng)性考試試題）Hejumpedhighandhuggedeveryteammateexcitedly.Everyonecouldseetearswellinginhiseyes.他高高地跳起來，興奮地?fù)肀е總€(gè)隊(duì)友。每個(gè)人都能看到他的淚水。3.（2024屆江蘇省蘇州市南京師大實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校調(diào)研）Atthenews,Davehadtoholdbackhistearsofjoyandcouldn'thelpjumpingup.聽到這個(gè)消息，戴夫不得不忍住喜悅的眼淚，忍不住跳了起來。4.Herfaceisred,excitementintheheart,asadeerjumpingwithjoy.她激動(dòng)的滿臉通紅，心里像有只小鹿，在歡樂地蹦跳。5.Therewasasparkleofexcitementinhereyes.她的眼中閃爍著激動(dòng)的光芒。6.Iwassoexcitedinside,likearoughsea.我內(nèi)心十分激動(dòng)，像波濤洶涌的大海一樣。7.Shelaughed,hereyesshining/glowing/sparklingwithexcitement.她笑了，興奮得兩眼放光/閃爍著光芒。8.Singinghappily,thatgirlgazedateverythingaroundherwithinnocenteyes.那個(gè)女孩高興地唱著歌，用天真的眼神注視著周圍的一切。9.Quiteflushedwithexcitementweretheirruddyfaces,astheyswunginthewind.他們十分興奮，臉頰通紅，在風(fēng)中搖擺。10.Hegotflushedandexcitedallatonce.他突然臉頰通紅，興奮不已。11.Theboystoppedshort,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了腳步,他的心怦怦直跳,充滿了興奮和期待.12.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個(gè)消息,一陣激動(dòng)的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。13.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。14.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng),難以成聲15.Herheartwasbeatinglikeafreedbird'sassheleaneddownandgatheredthegiftstoherbreast.當(dāng)她俯下身子將禮物抱在胸前時(shí),她的心就像獲得自由的小鳥一樣跳動(dòng)著。16.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國(guó)歌就激動(dòng)不已。17.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”不能抑制住他的高興和激動(dòng)，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道:媽媽，辛苦了。18.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。19.Aweightoffhermind/Aweightliftedfromhermind,shecouldn’thelpsheddingtearsofjoy,herheartovercomewithimmensehappinessandhermindconsciousofneithertimeorspace.她如釋重負(fù)，忍不住落下開心的熱淚，她的心充滿著巨大的幸福，她的頭腦完全忘記了時(shí)間和空間。美好事物的常用詞、句【精彩典例】（2024屆廣東省四校高三第一次聯(lián)考試題）Withthesunpeekingoverthehorizon,John’sfaceglowedwithgratitude.太陽(yáng)在地平線上掠過，約翰的臉上洋溢著感激之光。Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecomeroftheparkeveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公園里都開滿了各式各樣的鮮花，香氣伴著微風(fēng)四處彌漫。多么香甜啊!Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飄在藍(lán)天中,就像安靜的魚兒在廣闊的海洋中暢游。Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍(lán)色的天空和成群飄動(dòng)的金色云朵所吸引了。Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩飛舞。Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)下山,溫和的光線落在肩頭。感恩、感動(dòng)常用詞、句詞組appreciatesbforsth;因某事感激某人shedtearsofgratitude流下感激的淚水haveadeepgratitudetowards對(duì)……深懷感激withgratitude/appreciation感激地owesb.alot/agreatdeal非常感激某人bedeeplymoved/touchedby...被……深深感動(dòng)betouchedbeyondwords被感動(dòng)得說不出話來bemovedtotears感動(dòng)得落淚thanksbfromthebottomofone’sheart從心底感謝某人can’tthanksbmore/enoughfordoingsth對(duì)某人做了某事感激不盡owe/givecredittosb;歸功于某人beoverwhelmedwithexcitementandgratitud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表達(dá)的感激【精彩典例】（廣東省執(zhí)信中學(xué)2023-2024學(xué)年高三開學(xué)試題）Deeplytouched,dadheldtheflowerstightlyandgently,andimmediatelygatheredusintohisarms,saying,“Youaremybestflowers!”爸爸深深地感動(dòng)，緊緊而溫柔地握著花，立刻把我們抱在懷里，說：“你是我最好的花！”Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears.我感激地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，眼睛閃閃發(fā)光忍住眼淚。Afterhearingtheexplanation,Bernardwasoverwhelmedwithexcitementandgratitude.聽到這個(gè)解釋后，伯納德激動(dòng)萬(wàn)分，感激萬(wàn)分。Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。Withtearsstreamingdownherface,herantomum’swarmhug,andsaidthanktoher.他淚流滿面，跑到媽媽溫暖的擁抱前，對(duì)她說了聲謝謝。SothrilledwasshethatshethrewherselfatAli.“Thankyou!Ali.”Tearsofjoywelleduptheireyesasthebrotherandsisterhuggedtightlytogether.她激動(dòng)得向阿里撲去?！爸x謝你!阿里?！毕矏偟臏I水涌了出來。兄弟姐妹緊緊擁抱在一起時(shí)。Touchedimmensely,wefailedtoutterasingleword,tearsblurringoureyes.感動(dòng)無(wú)比，我們一句話也說不出來，淚水模糊了雙眼。Albertwastouchedbythewarmthoftheirwelcome.阿爾伯特被他們的熱烈歡迎而感動(dòng)。Deeplymoved,Ithankedhimagain.我深為感動(dòng)，再次向他表示感謝。Iwasoverwhelminglymovedbyhisheroicdeed.我被他的英雄事跡所感動(dòng)。Hisboundlessgenerositymovedusdeeply.他的無(wú)限的慷慨深深地感動(dòng)了我們.經(jīng)典賞析【模擬速遞】1．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Duringthesummerof2021,MakylaLinder,likemanykids,wasbored.SchoolwasoutandthespreadofCOVID-19meantthatmostpeoplehadtostayathome.Sothe12-year-oldbeganwatchingvideosaboutbaking(烘焙)online.Theonlybakingshehaddonebeforewashelpingouthergrandmother.Soon,Makylastartedbakingonherown.Shemadecupcakesandchocolate-coveredstrawberries.Shetestedthemoutonherfamilyandfriendswhocameover.Formostkids,pickingupanewhobbywouldhavebeenenough.However,Makylahadbiggerideas.Sheaskedhermom,ChelseaHatcher,ifshecouldstartsellingthetreatsshehadcreated.“IsaidOKbutIkeptpushingitoff.Butsheaskedmeacouplemoretimes,”saidMakyla’smomChelseaHatcher.Hatchereventuallyagreedtoletherdaughterstartabakingbusiness.ShehelpedMakylabuymorebakingsupplies.Meanwhile,Makylafocusedonherbakingresearchandworkedonperfectingherrecipes.Makylastartedoutsmall,withnewcustomerscomingfromrecommendations.ThenhermomhelpedhersetupabusinesscalledDolciDessertsandmadeanInstagrampage.Thepagehasatelephonenumberandanemailaddresssopeoplecanplaceorders.TheDolciDessertsInstagramaccounthasphotosofthecakesforsale.Therearechocolate-coveredpretzeisandwhitechocolate-coveredOreos.TherearealsoRiceKrispietreatsandbananapudding.Makylasaysshehasabout30customers.Manyofthemarereturningcustomers.“Ilikebaking,andIlikemakingmycustomershappy,”saidMakyla.Shealsolikesmakingherownmoneyandsavingit.Sheevenboughtherselfapairofnewshoes.Makyla’ssuccessdoesn’tsurprisehermom.“Sheworkshard,”saidHatcher.Still,lotsofpeoplehavebeenamazedatabakerwho’ssoyoung.Generally,nobodywillnaturallyexpectthatsuchayoungteenagercouldmakesowonderfulcakesandevenrunanonlinecompany.Para.1:ShabriaMiller,aneighborofthefamilyknowsMakylawellandwantedtoshowsupport.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:MakylahasmanycustomerslikeShabria,whomakehersobusythathermomhashadtoremindhertoslowdown,especiallywhenschoolstarted.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ShabriaMiller,aneighborofthefamily,knowsMakylawellandwantedtoshowsupport.Sosheorderedsomecupcakesforherfamily.SomeofMrsMiller’sfamilywereunsureaboutthesweetsatfirstbecausetheyweremadebyamiddleschoolstudent.However,assoonastheytriedthem,theywantedMrsMillertoordermore.ShabriahasorderedfromDolciDessertsseventimesalready.She’safanofthetreats,butevenmoreoftheirbaker.“Theyareassweetasthelittlegirl”shesaid.“Weoftencan’twaittotastehernewproducts.”MakylahasmanycustomerslikeShabria,whomakehersobusythathermomhashadtoremindhertoslowdown,especiallywhenschoolstarted.MakylabakesoneveningsofFriday,Saturday,andSunday.Shefocusesonherschoolworkontheotherevenings.Sheunderstandsthatschoolismoreimportant.Whensheisnotstudying,MakylaspendsmuchtimewatchingtheFoodChanneltogetnewideas.SheplanstokeeprunningDolciDesserts.Shereallyenjoysbaking,butwhatsheenjoysmostisthefeelingofmakingpeoplehappy.“Iwillcontinue”shesaid“aslongaspeoplelovemycakes.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。本篇文章以人物為線索展開，講述了12歲的女孩MakylaLinder開烘焙店的故事。2021年夏天因?yàn)樾鹿谝咔樵诩覠o(wú)聊，MakylaLinder開始在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(x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sinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________