讀后續(xù)寫+街邊花束中的溫情與希望+講義 高一上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題

高一上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之成為一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。EverytimeJimcrossedthestreetonhiswaytowork,hewouldseealittlegirlsellingflowersonthestreet.Shesatbyalargegreenboardwiththenamesoftheflowersandtheirpricesonit.Unfortunately,noonepaidattentiontoher,andsherarelysoldanything.Jimwantedtohelpher,andonedayhegothischance.Hisauntwouldretire,andhethoughtabouquet(花束)wouldbeagreatgift.“Hello,couldyoupleasemakemeabouquetofroses?”Jimsaidasheapproachedthegirl.Thegirldidn’traiseherheadandjuststaredatthesamespotontheground.“I’mCassy.Thankyouforbuyingflowersfromme,”shesaid.“Couldyoupleaseselecttheflowersbyyourselfandgivethemtome?Iwilltiethemtogetherforyou.Ican’tsee.”“Oh,I’msorry,”Jimsaidashepickedtheflowersandhandedthemtoher.Withinseveralseconds,thegirlmadealovelybouquetforJim.“Here,”shesaid,holdingthebouquet.“That’llbe$5.”“Thanks.They’rebeautiful,”JimsaidandwalkedawayafterplacingthemoneyinthehatbesideCassy.Thenextday,JimwenttoworkandhedecidedtohaveaquicktalkwithCassyontheway.However,hedidn’tseeCassywheresheusedtobethatmorning.Hethoughtshemightbelateanddecidedtomeetherthenextday,butshedidn’tshowupforthenextfewdaysinarow(連續(xù)地).JimwasconcernedaboutCassy,wonderingifsomethingbadhadhappenedtoCassy.Surprisingly,hefinallymetCassyagainonthestreetwithherflowers.Paragraph1:JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：吉姆每天上班路上都會看到賣花的小女孩卡西，她因失明只能讓顧客自選花朵然后幫忙扎成花束。吉姆為退休的阿姨買花后，連續(xù)幾天沒看到卡西，很是擔(dān)心。再次見到卡西后，故事有了新的發(fā)展。文章通過吉姆與卡西的交集展開，展現(xiàn)了吉姆的善良以及對卡西的關(guān)懷。伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：卡西失明，讓吉姆自己選花?；貞?yīng)：后文吉姆帶卡西回家，能更好地理解卡西的不易并給予幫助。伏筆：卡西賣花生意不好，很少有人買。回應(yīng)：這使得吉姆的購買行為對卡西意義重大，也為后文吉姆進一步關(guān)心卡西家庭狀況做鋪墊。伏筆：吉姆沒看到卡西后很擔(dān)心?；貞?yīng)：所以再次見到卡西時他立刻跑去，情感反應(yīng)合理。伏筆：卡西獨自在街邊賣花?；貞?yīng)：暗示她可能家庭有困難，后文引出她生病的母親。伏筆：吉姆決定與卡西快速交談?；貞?yīng)：雖未成功交談，但體現(xiàn)吉姆對卡西的關(guān)注，后續(xù)發(fā)展順理成章。續(xù)寫要點：情感線：第一段從吉姆見到卡西的欣喜，到得知她之前未出現(xiàn)原因后的同情與關(guān)心；第二段從到卡西家見到其生病母親的震驚與憐憫，到想要進一步幫助她們的堅定。故事線：第一段吉姆詢問卡西之前未出現(xiàn)的原因，卡西解釋是母親生病照顧母親；第二段吉姆了解卡西家庭困境，決定幫助她們，如聯(lián)系慈善機構(gòu)或提供一些物資援助等。主旨升華句：Alittlekindnesscanbeagreatlightinthedarknessofothers'lives.（一點小小的善意能成為他人黑暗生活中的巨大光亮。）Inthejourneyoflife,reachingoutahelpinghandisthemostbeautifulscenery.（在人生旅途中，伸出援助之手是最美的風(fēng)景。）Truecompassionliesnotinwordsbutindeedsthatwarmtheheart.（真正的同情不在于言語，而在于溫暖人心的行動。）Thepowerofcareisthatitcantransformlonelinessanddespairintohope.（關(guān)愛的力量在于它能將孤獨與絕望轉(zhuǎn)化為希望。）Kindnessisthekeythatunlocksthedoortoamoreharmoniousandlovingworld.（善良是開啟更和諧友愛世界大門的鑰匙。）寫作示范一：Paragraph1:

JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.“Cassy,wherehaveyoubeen?Iwasreallyworriedaboutyou,”Jimsaid.Cassyexplainedthathermotherhadfallenillandshehadtostayathometotakecareofher.Jimfeltapangofsympathy.Heaskediftherewasanythinghecoulddotohelp.Cassyjustshookherheadandsaidshewasmanaging.ButJimcouldseethetirednessandworryinherface.Hedecidedhecouldn'tjuststandby.

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JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.Thesmallandshabbyhouseshowedthefamily'spoverty.Jadewaslyinginbed,lookingweak.Jim'sheartsank.HetoldCassythathewouldtrytogetsomehelp.Hecontactedalocalcharityandtoldthemaboutthefamily'ssituation.Thecharitypromisedtoprovidesomemedicalsuppliesandfood.Jimalsosaidhewouldcometovisitthemregularly.Cassywasdeeplygrateful,andJimknewthathissmallactofkindnesscouldmakeabigdifferenceintheirdifficultlives.寫作示范二：Paragraph1:

JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.“Cassy,you'reback!Imissedseeingyouhere.Whathappened?”Jimaskedwithconcern.Cassysaidhermothergotsickandshehadtobewithher.Jim'sfacefilledwithworry.Heaskedabouthermother'scondition.Cassysaiditwasaseriousillnessandtheywerehavingahardtime.Jimtookherhandandsaid,“You'renotalone.I'lldowhateverIcan.”

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JimthendroveCassytoherhome,wherehemethersickmother,Jade.Thehousewasinadilapidatedstate.Jadewaspaleandfrail.Jimwasshocked.Heimmediatelythoughtofwaystohelp.Heaskedhisfriendsandcolleaguestodonatesomemoneyandnecessities.HealsohelpedCassyfindapart-timejobthatshecoulddoathome.CassyandJadewerebothtouchedbyJim'skindness.Jimrealizedthatinhelpingothers,hefoundadeepermeaningandjoyinhisownlife.【答案】JimwassodelightedtoseeCassythatherantoheratonce.However,tohisshock,Cassyseemedtiredandpale.Heapproachedherworriedly.“Cassy,whathappenedtoyou?Doyoustillrememberme?”“Theonewhoboughtroses?”“Yes,that’sme.I’mworriedaboutyou.Youhaven’tbeenherefordays.”“Well,Iamokay,”shesaid.“Momsufferedfromanillness,andI