高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+高中醫(yī)院志愿行：付出與感悟交織之路課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習高中醫(yī)院志愿行：付出與感悟交織之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIenteredhighschool,ourteachertoldusthatweweresupposedtodosomevolunteerworktoenrichourhighschoollifeandprepareourselvesforuniversity.Uponhearingthis,IgotexcitedanddecidedthatIwouldtakepartinthisvaluableactivity.IappliedtobeavolunteeratYedaHospital,oneofthebiggestandbusiesthospitalsinourcity.Fortunately,Iwasaccepted!Joyfloodedoverme.4續(xù)寫原文Iwokeupearlyinthemorningandcouldn’twaittoheadforthehospital,hopingtoservepeopleinneedwithabigsmile.Ataround7:30a.m.,allthevolunteersgatheredasplanned.IwasoverwhelmedwithexcitementasIenteredthehospital.Wewerewarmlygreetedbythehospitalstaff.Thenvolunteerswerearrangeddifferenttasks—cleaningrooms,guidingpatientstotheirdestinations,helpingoldpeoplefillinformsandsoon.BecauseIwasgoodatoperatingcomputers,Iwassenttobeinchargeoftheself-servicepaymentmachines,whicharedesignedforpeopletobuymedicineandinstantlypaytheirhospitalbills.5續(xù)寫原文Volunteeringfrom7:30a.m.until8:30a.m.inthehospitalmademeveryhappy.EveryoneIofferedhelptothankedmeoverandoveragain.However,mostofthepeopleinthehospitalhadworriedfaces,andIseldomspottedasmile.Itwasalittledisappointing,butItriedtounderstand.Theymighthavebeentiredouttakingcareofpatients.Icontinuedtoconcentrateonmyassignedtask,helpingplentyofpeople—especiallytheolderoneswhocouldn’tuseadvancedtechnology.Astimewentby,Ifelttiredandbored.6續(xù)寫原文Istoodaside.“WhatshouldIdo?”Ihesitated.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadvisitedthecity.Iwasunfamiliarwitheverythingaroundme.IsearchedthelocationsofotherATMsinthearea.Theyweretoofaraway.Itwouldtakemeatleasttwohourstogetthereonfoot.Ireallydidn’twantmyfriendtowaitformetoolong,butunfortunately,Ihadto.7段首句Paragraph1:Suddenly,Inoticedaforeignerstandingbesidethemachinewithaconfusedlook.Paragraph2:Thatmomentreallytouchedmyheart.8Part2題目分析9續(xù)寫原文分析10本文以人物為中心展開，主要講述文章講述了作者進入高中后，積極響應學校號召參加志愿者活動并成功申請成為耶達醫(yī)院志愿者?；顒赢斕?，作者滿懷期待地早早前往醫(yī)院，與其他志愿者集合后接受了不同任務安排，作者因擅長電腦操作負責自助繳費機。在志愿服務過程中，雖得到受助者的連連感謝，但醫(yī)院里人們大多面帶憂慮，鮮見笑容，作者雖感失望仍堅持崗位，隨著時間推移，作者逐漸產(chǎn)生疲倦和無聊之感。整個故事展現(xiàn)了作者初次醫(yī)院志愿服務的經(jīng)歷與內心情緒的起伏變化，以及對醫(yī)院環(huán)境和志愿工作的初步感受與思考。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點11續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Suddenly,Inoticedaforeignerstandingbesidethemachinewithaconfusedlook.突然，我留意到一位外國人站在機器旁，臉上滿是困惑的神情。我趕忙走上前去，微笑著向他打招呼。顯然，他在使用自助繳費機時遇到了麻煩。我嘗試用英語與他交流，詢問狀況。他解釋說他看不懂中文提示，不知道如何支付買藥的費用。我耐心地一步步演示給他看，用簡單的詞匯和手勢確保他能明白。他專注地看著，并依照我的引導操作。當繳費成功完成，他的臉上露出如釋重負與感激的神情。12續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thatmomentreallytouchedmyheart.那一刻真的觸動了我的內心。我意識到，即便是一個小小的善舉也能產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。在幫助了這位外國人之后，我在志愿服務中重新找到了使命感。之前的疲憊與厭煩似乎漸漸消散。我變得更有活力、更投入，主動尋找更多幫助他人的機會。我?guī)鸵晃惶嶂蟀“D難行走的老婦人提東西，還陪著一位迷路的小孩找到了他的父母。剩余的志愿服務時間過得飛快且充實，那天離開醫(yī)院時，我心中滿是深深的滿足感，因為我知道自己有所作為。13Part3范文呈現(xiàn)14范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,Inoticedaforeignerstandingbesidethemachinewithaconfusedlook.Iquicklywalkedoverandgreetedhimwithasmile.Itwasevidentthathewashavingtroubleusingtheself-servicepaymentmachine.ItriedtocommunicatewithhiminEnglish,askingabouttheproblem.Heexplainedthathedidn'tunderstandtheChineseinstructionsandcouldn'tfigureouthowtopayforhismedicine.Ipatientlyshowedhimstepbystep,usingsimplewordsandgesturestomakesureheunderstood.Hewatchedintentlyandfollowedmyguidance.Asthepaymentwentthroughsuccessfully,hisfacelitupwithreliefandgratitude.15范文呈現(xiàn)Thatmomentreallytouchedmyheart.Irealizedthatevenasmallactofkindnesscouldhaveabigimpact.Afterhelpingtheforeigner,Ifeltarenewedsenseofpurposeinmyvolunteering.ThetirednessandboredomIhadbeenfeelingearlierseemedtofadeaway.Ibecamemoreenergeticandengaged,lookingformoreopportunitiestoassistothers.Ihelpedanelderlywomanwhowasstrugglingtocarryherbags,andaccompaniedachildwhowaslosttofindhisparents.Therestofmyvolunteeringtimepassedbyquicklyandfulfillingly,andIleftthehospitalthatdaywithadeepsenseofsatisfaction,knowingthatIhadmadeadifference.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,Inoticedaforeignerstandingbesidethemachinewithaconfusedlook.Swiftlywalkingover,Igreetedhimwithawarmsmile.Itwasobviousthathewashavingtroublewiththeself-servicepaymentmachine.CommunicatingwithhiminEnglish,Iinquiredabouttheissue.HeexplainedthattheChineseinstructionswerebeyondhiscomprehensionandhecouldn'tworkouthowtopayforhismedicine.Patiently,Idemonstratedtheprocessstepbystep,usingsimplewordsandgesturestoensurehisunderstanding.Withhiseyesfixedonmyactions,hefollowedmyguidanceintently.Itwaswhenthepaymentwassuccessfullycompletedthathisfacewaslitupwithreliefandgratitude.17升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatmomenttrulytouchedmyheart.Itdawnedonmethatevenatriflingactofkindnesscouldhaveaprofoundimpact.Afterassistingtheforeigner,arenewedsenseofpurposewelledupwithinmeduringmyvolunteering.Thetirednessandboredomthathadbeenplaguingmeearlierseemedtovanish.Energeticandengaged,Iactivelysoughtmoreopportunitiestohelp.Helpinganelderlywomanwhowasstrugglingwithherbagsandaccompanyingalostchildtofindhisparents,