（高考英語作文煉句）第39篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.面試時(shí)求職者在儀表上一定要特別謹(jǐn)慎,因?yàn)榈谝挥∠蟠_實(shí)很重要.Candidatesshould

takeparticularcarewith

(1.對……特別謹(jǐn)慎)theirappearancewhentheyattendaninterviewbecause,

firstimpressionsdocount(2.第一印象確實(shí)很重要).

takeparticularcarewith詞典釋義：particular3.ADJ

形容詞

格外的;特別的;尤其的

Youcanuse

particular

toemphasize

thatsomethingisgreaterormoreintensethanusual.?Particularemphasiswillbeplacedonorallanguage

training.將會(huì)特別強(qiáng)調(diào)口語訓(xùn)練.

6.

takecareover/withsth

tospendalotoftimeandeffort

makingsurethatsomethingisperfect講究某事物,注意某事物：?Paulalwaystakes

greatcareoverhisappearance.保羅一向很注意自己的外表.

外刊例句：Travellersshould

takeparticularcarewith

foodandwater.Ifdrinkingwateris

notfromaknownsafesourcethenitisbestavoidedormadesafebyboiling

orpurifying.

()旅游者應(yīng)該格外關(guān)注食物和水的安全.如果無法從確保安全的水源取水喝,那么最好就別喝這些水,或者是燒開或凈化它們,從而喝得安全.

替換表達(dá)：payspecialattentionto/beverycarefulwith

2-firstimpressionsdocount

詞典釋義：impression

UK

[?m?pre?(?)n]

US

noun

[countable]

[singular

impression

plural

impressions]

★★★

1.

anopinionorfeeling

thatyouhaveaboutsomeoneorsomethingyouhaveseenbutdonotknowvery

well

have/gettheimpression

(that)：

Ihavethe

impressionthatshe’sverygood

atherjob.

firstimpressions

(=opinionsthatyouformimmediately,before

thinkingthoroughly)：

Thereportseemstobebasedentirelyonfirstimpressions.

count[ka?nt]

verb

HAVEVALUE

有價(jià)值

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

■tohavevalueor

importance;to

matter

有價(jià)值;很重要;要緊

?I'vealwaysbelievedthathappiness

counts

morethanmoney.我一直認(rèn)為幸福比金錢更重要.?Myopiniondoesn't

count

for

anything

aroundhere(=noonevaluesmyopinion).我的看法在這里絲毫不受重視.

外刊例句：Theoldadagethat"firstimpressionscount”seemstobetrue.

()俗語有云,"第一印象很重要”,看來所言非虛.

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)

firstimpressionreallycounts/matters點(diǎn)評："第一印象”應(yīng)該是first

impressions,不能寫成firstimpression,這里應(yīng)該改為firstimpressionscount/matter(2)thefirstimpressionsareveryimportant點(diǎn)評："第一印象”的固定說法是first

impressions,不能說thefirstimpressions

Q：這個(gè)句子可不可以用cannottoo再怎樣都不為過來寫呢?請老師寫一個(gè)正確的句子,可以嗎?A：can’tbetoo這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)一般只能用在can’tbetoocareful這個(gè)短語里面,含義是"越小心越好”,例如：You

can'tbetoocarefulwhenayoungchildisnearwater.孩子在水邊時(shí),還是越小心越好.

2.很多雇主現(xiàn)在提供企業(yè)內(nèi)部培訓(xùn)項(xiàng)目,并且要求所有的新員工都參加.如果這些培訓(xùn)班是被合理設(shè)計(jì)的,那么新員工會(huì)更加容易融入職場.Manyemployersnowprovide

in-housetrainingprograms(1.企業(yè)內(nèi)部培訓(xùn)項(xiàng)目)andrequireallnewemployeestoattendthoseclasses.Iftheclassesareproperlydesigned,thenewemployeewillfinditmucheasierto

fitintotheworkplace(2.融入職場).

1-in-housetrainingprograms

詞典釋義：in-house[??n'ha?s]

adjective

adverb

■Somethingthatisdonein-houseisdonewithinan

organizationorbusinessbyitsemployeesratherthanbyotherpeople

在組織內(nèi)部(的);在機(jī)構(gòu)內(nèi)部(的)?an

in-house

trainingscheme內(nèi)部訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃?Allouradvertisingmaterialisdesigned

in-house.我們所有的廣告材料都是由內(nèi)部設(shè)計(jì)的.

外刊例句：Butsincethepurgingof

in-housetraining

departmentsinthe1980s,theyhavemoreoften

contractedoutthegeneral-skillswork.

()然而,公司自上世紀(jì)80年代對內(nèi)部培訓(xùn)部門進(jìn)行清洗過后,一直慣于把一般的技術(shù)工作外包出去.

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：Corporateinternaltrainingprograms點(diǎn)評：沒有corporateinternaltrainingprograms的說法,這里應(yīng)該改為in-housetraining

programs

2-fitintotheworkplace

詞典釋義：21.PHRASAL

VERB

短語動(dòng)詞

融入;與…相處融洽(或和諧)

If

you

fitinto

aparticulargroup,youseemtobelongtherebecauseyouare

similartotheotherpeopleinit.

【語法信息】：VPn(notpron)?It'shardtoseehowhewould

fit

into

theteam.很難看出他將如何融入這支隊(duì)伍.

外刊例句：ButinatypicallycringeworthyBrent-like

way,thecharactershowshistruecoloursbylistingaseriesofridiculous

reasonswhycandidateswithdisabilitieswouldnot

fitintotheworkplace,suchasrestrictedgrowth,blindnessor

deafness.

()該角色列出了一系列傷殘候選人為何不能融入職場的原因,比如成長受限、看不到或者是聽不懂等,而這就讓其本色盡顯,盡管是以標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的布倫特時(shí)尷尬方式呈現(xiàn).

替換表達(dá)：integrateintotheworkplace

3.大公司的市場份額更大、市值更高,因此它們在財(cái)政上更加穩(wěn)健,不容易受到經(jīng)濟(jì)變化影響.這意味著大公司相比小公司能提供更好的福利待遇和工作穩(wěn)定性.小公司通常運(yùn)作資金更少,更有可能通過裁員來應(yīng)對市場低迷.Alargecompanyhasbetter

marketshare

(1.市場份額)andmarketvalue,soitisfinanciallymorerobust,andnotasvulnerabletochangesintheeconomy.Thismeansalargecompanycanprovidebetter

welfarepackages

(2.福利待遇)andjobsecuritythanasmallercompany,whichtypically

operatesonfarlesscapital

(3.運(yùn)作資金更少)andismorelikelytofirestaff

inresponseto

(4.應(yīng)對)areducedmarket.

1-marketshare

詞典釋義：market

sharenoun

uncountable

■thenumberofthingsthatacompanysellscomparedwith

thenumberofthingsofthesametypethatothercompaniessell

市場占有率(一家公司所銷售產(chǎn)品數(shù)量較之其他公司所銷售同類產(chǎn)品數(shù)量的比)?Thecompanyhas

increased

itsmarketshare.公司的市場占有率提高了.

外刊例句：GENERAL

MOTORShassufferedasteadydeclineinitsAmerican

marketshare

fordecadesnow.()通用汽車的美國市場份額在過去數(shù)十年來一直下滑.

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)marketshares點(diǎn)評：要指某一個(gè)公司的市場份額應(yīng)該說market

share,而不能說marketshares,例如我們只能說Alargecompanyhasbettermarketshare,而不能說Alargecompanyhasbettermarketshares(2)marketproportion/shareinthemarket點(diǎn)評：這里應(yīng)該改為固定說法market

share

2-welfarepackages

詞典釋義：welfareUK

['wel.fe?r]

US

[-fer]

noun

uncountable

HELP

幫助

IMPROVER

■helpgiven,especiallybythestateoranorganization,

topeoplewhoneedit,especiallybecausetheydonothaveenoughmoney

福利救濟(jì);社會(huì)福利?Thisnationalfundpaysfor

welfare

benefits

suchasunemploymentandsicknesspay.此項(xiàng)國家基金提供多項(xiàng)福利救濟(jì),例如失業(yè)和醫(yī)療等.?UKAfterhermonth'ssickleave,shewassummonedtosee

thecompany's

welfare

officer.她休了一個(gè)月病假之后,公司的福利主管召見了她.

package

ADVANCED

■arelatedgroupofthingswhentheyareofferedtogetherasasingleunit

一(整)套?Thecomputercomeswitha

software

package.電腦附帶一套套裝軟體.?The

aid

package

forthe

earthquake-hitareawillincludeemergencyfoodandmedicalsupplies.地震災(zāi)區(qū)的救援物品將包括應(yīng)急食品和醫(yī)療用品.

外刊例句："Wecelebratesecondworldwarveteransateveryopportunity.Just

likeanyotherNigeriansoldierwhodiesserving,theirchildrenhavebeen

awardedscholarshipsandother

welfare

packages,”saidspokespersonRabeAbubakar.()發(fā)言人拉比說,"我們一有機(jī)會(huì)就舉行二戰(zhàn)老兵的紀(jì)念活動(dòng),這就像尼日利亞士兵殉職之后,其孩子可以獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金和社會(huì)福利一樣.”

替換表達(dá)：welfarebenefits

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)wealthbenefit點(diǎn)評：沒有wealthbenefit的說法,應(yīng)該改為welfarebenefits/welfarepackages(2)socialbenefit點(diǎn)評：socialbenefit是指"社會(huì)效益”,它不可以用來指企業(yè)為員工提供的福利.(3)interest點(diǎn)評：interest是指"利益”,它一般用在beintheinterestsof

somebody/something這一短語中,不可以用來指企業(yè)為員工提供的福利.

3-farlesscapital

詞典釋義：farUK

[fɑ：r]

US

[fɑ：r]

adverb

(farther,farthestor

further,furthest)

AMOUNT

數(shù)量

ESSENTIAL

■verymuch

非常;遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn);大大

?Thiscaris

far

better

thanouroldone.這輛車比我們那輛舊的好多了.?Itcost

far

more

(money)thanIcould

afford.這花費(fèi)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出了我的承受能力.?Heloseshistemper

far

too

often.他太愛發(fā)脾氣了.?I'd

far

rather/sooner

gotothetheatrethan

watchavideo.我寧可去劇院看戲也不看錄影.

capitalUK

['k?p.?.t?l]

US

[-t??l]

noun

MONEY

錢

ADVANCED

uncountable

■moneyandpossessions,especiallyalargeamountofmoneyusedforproducingmore

wealth

orforstartinganewbusiness

資本,資金;本錢

?Sheleavesher

capital

untouchedinthebank

andlivesofftheinterest.她不動(dòng)用銀行里的本金,靠利息生活.?We've

put

￡20000

capital

into

thebusiness,butwe'reunlikelytoseeanyreturnforafew

years.我們在生意上投入了兩萬英鎊,但很可能在幾年內(nèi)都看不到任何回報(bào).

外刊例句：

HesaidthiswillmeanthatAMPwillneed

farlesscapital

torunitsbusiness

thaninthepastbecauseofregulationsthatmean￡100investedin

unit-linkedproductsmustbesupportedby￡4ofregulatorycapital.

()他說,這將意味著,AMP的運(yùn)營成本要遠(yuǎn)比以前低,因?yàn)樾乱?guī)規(guī)定：每投資100英鎊到人壽保險(xiǎn)相關(guān)產(chǎn)品就可獲得4英鎊的規(guī)定金額援助.

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)lessworkingcapital點(diǎn)評：沒有workingcapital的說法,這里要改成operatesonfarlesscapital(2)havelessflowingcash點(diǎn)評：沒有flowingcash的用法(只有cashflow),這里要改為operatesonfarless

capital

4-inresponseto

詞典釋義：response

re·sponse/

r??spɑns

;

r??sp?ns

/noun

1.C,Usomethingthatisdoneasareactiontosomethingthathashappenedor

beensaid反應(yīng);響應(yīng)：

[+

to

]?thepublic's

responsetoourappealforhelp公眾對我們求助呼吁的反應(yīng)in

responsetosth?Thelawwaspassed

inresponsetopublicpressure.這條法規(guī)是迫于公眾壓力而通過的.

外刊例句：DonaldTrumptookaimattheDodd-Frankreformsoffinancialservices,whichweredrawnup

inresponseto

the2008crisis.

()特朗普把矛頭指向Dodd—Frank金融服務(wù)業(yè)改革計(jì)劃.該計(jì)劃出臺于2008年,用于應(yīng)對當(dāng)時(shí)的金融危機(jī).

替換表達(dá)：tocopewith/todealwith

Q：Thismeansalargecompanycanprovidebetterwelfarepackagesandjobsecuritythanasmallercompany,

whichtypicallyoperatesonfarlesscapitalandismorelikelytofirestaff

inresponseto

areducedmarket.請問魏老師,句中有than,那么jobsecurity是否需要換成形容詞詞組,然后用比較級修飾.謝謝A：不用,句子還原后其實(shí)是providebetter

welfarepackagesand(better)jobsecuritythan…jobsecurity已經(jīng)有better修飾了.

Q：notasvulnerabletochanges,這里是不是應(yīng)該有個(gè)比較對象呢asvulnerableas...,to的后面不應(yīng)該是原型嗎,為什么這里用的是changes?A：這里是省略,隱含了與小公司比較的意思,句子還原后是notasvulnerabletochanges(assmallcompanies);changes在這里是名詞,而不是動(dòng)詞.

Q：morefinanciallyrobust還是financiallymorerobust呢?A：這里用morefinanciallyrobust或者financiallymorerobust都可以.

Q：這般staff應(yīng)該用staffs?A：staff是復(fù)數(shù)名詞,不能說staffs

4.不管兼職工作是有趣還是無趣,或者學(xué)生在商業(yè)活動(dòng)中成敗與否,僅僅是學(xué)生擁有一份工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)這一個(gè)事實(shí)就會(huì)讓他們畢業(yè)后在找全職工作時(shí)派上用場.Regardlessofwhetherapart-timejobprovesinterestingordull,orwhetherstudentssucceedorfailinabusinessventure,

themerefactof(1.僅僅是……這一個(gè)事實(shí))havingworkexperiencewill

comeinhandy

(2.派上用場)whentheyseek

afull-timejob(3.全職工作)aftergraduation.

1-themerefactof

詞典釋義：mereUK

[m??r]

US

[m?r]

adjective

[beforenoun]

IMPROVER

■usedtoemphasizethatsomethingisnotlargeorimportant

只不過的,僅僅的?Theplanecrashed

mere

minutesaftertake-off.飛機(jī)起飛后僅僅幾分鐘就墜毀了.?Itcosta

mere

twentydollars.那只需花費(fèi)20美元.?The

mere

thought

ofitmakesmeill.一想起它就讓我不舒服.

2.usedtoemphasizethatsomethingwhichis

smallornotextremehasabigeffectorisimportant極小的;極不重要的〔用于表示某物雖小或微不足道,卻有很大的影響或重要性〕：?Themerestlittle

noisemakeshimnervous.一丁點(diǎn)的聲音也會(huì)使他緊張.?Themerethought

offoodmadeherfeelsick.一想到食物她就惡心.?Themerefactthat

thetalksarecontinuingisapositivesign.會(huì)談仍在繼續(xù),單這一點(diǎn)就是個(gè)好的征兆.

外刊例句：Butsoisthefactthat,inBritain,even

politiciansoftheleftdeploretheapparentconsequencesofeconomic

inequalityratherthan

themerefact

of

it.()但事實(shí)就是,在英國,即使是左翼政客都會(huì)譴責(zé)經(jīng)濟(jì)不平衡帶來的明顯后果,而非僅僅認(rèn)為這只是一個(gè)事實(shí).

2-comeinhandy

詞典釋義：c