（高考英語(yǔ)作文煉句）第66篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.展現(xiàn)誠(chéng)實(shí)正直和責(zé)任感的公司更容易吸引那些有眼光的求職者.因此,這些公司能夠從范圍更廣的潛在雇員中挑選出最具有才能的員工,這些員工擁有的技能可以進(jìn)一步提升公司的利潤(rùn).Companiesthatdemonstrateintegrityandresponsibilityaremore

appealingto

(1.對(duì)……有吸引力)discriminating

(2.有眼光的)jobseekers.Therefore,suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefrom

awiderrangeof

(3.范圍更廣的)prospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividualswiththeskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits.

1-對(duì)……有吸引力appealingtosb

詞典釋義：appealing[?'pi：.l??]

adjective

■attractiveorinteresting

有吸引力的;有感染力的;有魅力的;令人感興趣的

?Theideaofnothavingtogetupearlyeverymorningisrather

appealing

(to

me).每天不用早起,這(對(duì)我)很有吸引力.?Hehadanicesmileandan

appealing

personality.他的微笑非常迷人,個(gè)性也充滿魅力.

外刊例句：Thedeathsofseveralunarmedblackmenatthehandsofpoliceofficersandtheensuingbacklashseemtohavemadepoliceworklessappealing.

()幾位手無(wú)寸鐵的黑人死在了警察手上,這事隨后引發(fā)了民眾抗議,在此影響下,警察工作更加令人不感興趣了.

替換表達(dá)：attractive

tosb

2-有眼光的discriminating

詞典釋義：discriminating1.ADJ-GRADED能被表示程度的副詞或介詞詞組修飾的形容詞

有識(shí)別力的;有鑒賞力的;敏銳的

Someone

whois

discriminating

hastheabilitytorecognizethingsthatareofgoodquality.?More

discriminating

visitorsnowtendtoshunthearea.更有鑒別力的游客現(xiàn)在往往避開(kāi)該地區(qū).

外刊例句：Retailersfeelthepinchas

discriminating

shoppersshowtheirincreasingpower.()因?yàn)檠酃猹?dú)到的顧客影響力越來(lái)越大,零售商日漸手頭拮據(jù).

替換表達(dá)：discerning

3-范圍更廣的awiderrangeof

詞典釋義：range

●●●●○1.N-COUNT可數(shù)名詞

(同類(lèi)事物的)一系列,一連串

A

rangeof

thingsisanumberofdifferentthingsofthesamegeneralkind.?Awide

range

ofcoloursandpatternsareavailable...各種顏色和樣式都有.

?Thetwomendiscusseda

range

ofissues...那兩個(gè)人討論了一系列問(wèn)題.

?The

range

includeschestsofdrawers,tablesandwardrobes.該系列包括五斗柜、桌子和衣櫥.

外刊例句：Thegovernmentclaimstowant

awiderrangeof

peopletocontributetoitspolicy-making.Butitsreluctancetopaythemstandsintheway.()政府聲稱(chēng)希望更多群眾參與到政策制定中,不過(guò)它卻不愿支付他們錢(qián),這就阻礙了人們的參與.

替換表達(dá)：a

broaderrangeofsomething

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：awiderscopeof點(diǎn)評(píng)：scope是指"(學(xué)科、活動(dòng)、書(shū)籍等的)范圍”,例如：Afulldiscussionofthatissueisbeyondthescopeofthisbook.對(duì)那個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行全方位的討論不在本書(shū)范圍之內(nèi).不可以用scope來(lái)指"人”.

Therefore,suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefromawiderrangeofprospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividualswiththeskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits.

[分析]本句的主干是suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefromawiderrangeofprospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividuals,其中,主語(yǔ)是suchfirms,謂語(yǔ)有兩個(gè),分別是willbeabletochoosefrom和(willbeableto)select,它們的賓語(yǔ)分別是awiderrangeofprospectiveemployees和themosttalentedindividuals,在第二個(gè)賓語(yǔ)之后是一個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ)withtheskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits作定語(yǔ),修飾individuals,而在該介詞短語(yǔ)中,過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)neededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits作定語(yǔ),修飾theskills.

2.我們必須要對(duì)自己的人身安全、心理健康和工作負(fù)責(zé).不然就會(huì)與我們的求生本能背道而馳,而且會(huì)限制我們關(guān)愛(ài)親友的能力.Wemusttakeresponsibilityforourownphysicalsafety,

emotionalwell-being

(1.心理健康)andprofessionallife.Doingotherwisewouldnotonly

runcounterto

(2.與……背道而馳)our

survivalinstincts(3.求生本能),butalsoprecludeourabilitytocareforfriendsandlovedones.

1-心理健康emotionalwell-being

詞典釋義：

well-being[?wel'bi：.??]

(also

wellbeing)

noun

uncountable

■thestateoffeelinghealthyandhappy

幸福;安康

?Peopledoingyogabenefitfromanincreasedfeelingof

well-being.練瑜伽的人內(nèi)心的幸福感會(huì)不斷增強(qiáng).

外刊例句：Aleadingprivateschoolheadteacheryesterdaywarnedofthe"disastrousimpact"ofmarriagebreakdownonchildren'seducationand

emotionalwell-being,asheurgedsocietytoreverseits"selfishandself-indulgentattitudes".

()一所頂尖私立學(xué)校校長(zhǎng)昨天向人們警告了婚姻破裂對(duì)于兒童學(xué)業(yè)和心理健康的毀滅性影響,并呼吁社會(huì)成員要扭轉(zhuǎn)其"自私自利、自顧自己的人生態(tài)度”.

替換表達(dá)：psychological/mental

well-being

2-與……背道而馳runcounterto

詞典釋義：runcountertosthadverb

~tosth

intheoppositedirectiontosth;inoppositiontosth

逆向地;相反地;反對(duì)地：

Thegovernment'splans

runcounter

toagreedEuropeanpolicyonthisissue.

政府的計(jì)劃違反了有關(guān)這個(gè)問(wèn)題已協(xié)商好的歐洲政策.

外刊例句：Buttheconsequencesoften

runcounterto

popularpreferences：theFrenchmightfindthemselvesbarredfromsupportingaFrench-languagefilmindustry,forexample.

()不過(guò)結(jié)果卻往往與大眾偏好相反：例如,法國(guó)可能發(fā)現(xiàn)自己無(wú)法支持法語(yǔ)電影公司.

替換表達(dá)：beagainst/becontraryto

3-survivalinstincts求生本能

詞典釋義：

instinct['?n.st??kt]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

■thewaypeopleoranimalsnaturallyreactorbehave,withouthavingtothinkorlearnaboutit

本能,直覺(jué)

?Allhis

instincts

toldhimtostaynearthecarandwaitforhelp.他的直覺(jué)告訴他要留在車(chē)旁、等待救援.?[+

to

infinitive]Her

first

instinct

was

to

run.她的第一反應(yīng)是逃跑.?Itis

instinct

thattellsthebirdswhentobegintheirmigration.是本能讓鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)知道何時(shí)開(kāi)始遷徙.?figurative

Bobseemsto

have

an

instinct

for

(=isnaturallygoodat)knowingwhichproductswillsell.鮑勃好像能憑直覺(jué)知道哪些產(chǎn)品有銷(xiāo)路.

外刊例句：MrSalehhasabetterflairfortheatricsthanmostoftheregion'sotherrulers-for-life,buttheir

survivalinstincts

arejustaskeen.

()薩利赫可能比該地區(qū)的其他終生統(tǒng)治者更能以夸張行為引人矚目,不過(guò)他們的求生本能都是那么強(qiáng)烈.

3.雖然擁有大量的財(cái)富并不是成功的前提,但這并不意味著財(cái)富和成功不能共存.比爾蓋茨和沃倫巴菲特都是億萬(wàn)富商,他們不僅通過(guò)公正、合法的手段創(chuàng)造了財(cái)富,而且擁有良好的人際關(guān)系,對(duì)他們所從事的事業(yè)充滿激情.Althoughhavingalargefortuneisnot

aprerequisitefor

(1.……的前提)beingsuccessful,thisdoesnotmeanthatwealthandsuccesscannotcoexist.BillGatesandWarrenBuffettareallbillionairebusinessmenwhonotonlyhavemadetheirfortunes

throughfairandlegitimatemeans(2.通過(guò)公正、合法的手段),butalsoenjoygoodrelationshipswithothersandhaveapassionfortheendeavorsinwhichthey

partake(3.從事、參與).

1-……的前提aprerequisitefor

詞典釋義：prerequisite[?pri：'rek.w?.z?t]

formal

noun

countable

■somethingwhichmustexistorhappenbeforesomethingelsecanexistorhappen

先決條件,前提,必備條件

?Passingawrittenexamisa

prerequisite

fortakingtheadvancedcourse.通過(guò)筆試是學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)階課程的前提.?Publicsupportisa

prerequisite

for/to

thesuccessofthisproject.大眾支持是這一計(jì)劃取得成功的必備條件.?Theyhadtoagreetocertainconditionsasa

prerequisite

of

being

lentthemoney.他們不得不同意一些條件才能借到錢(qián).

外刊例句：Thatis

aprerequisitefor

anysortofengagementandanyhopeoffuturesales.()未來(lái)可否銷(xiāo)售,所有參與類(lèi)型都以此為前提.

替換表達(dá)：precondition

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：thepremiseof點(diǎn)評(píng)：premise是指聲明、假設(shè)等成立的前提,例如：Theideathatthereislifeonotherplanetsisthecentralpremiseofthenovel.其他星球存在生命這一觀點(diǎn)是這部小說(shuō)的主要前提.它不可以用來(lái)指做成某事的前提條件.

2-通過(guò)公正、合法的手段throughfairandlegitimatemeans

詞典釋義：legitimateUK

[l?'d??t.?.m?t]

US

[-'d??t?-]

adjective

ADVANCED

■allowedbylaw

合法的,正當(dāng)?shù)?法律允許的

?Thearmymustgivepowerbacktothe

legitimate

government.軍隊(duì)必須將權(quán)力交還給合法政府.

ADVANCED

■reasonableandacceptable

合理的,可接受的,得到認(rèn)可的

?Heclaimedthattherestaurantbillwasa

legitimate

businessexpense.他聲稱(chēng)飯店帳單是一筆合理的業(yè)務(wù)開(kāi)支.

means[mi：nz]

pluralnoun

METHOD

方法

IMPROVER

■amethodorwayofdoingsomething

方法,手段

?Theyhadno

means

of

communication.他們沒(méi)有通訊方法.?Weneedtofindsomeother

means

of

transportation.我們需要找其他交通工具了.?Wemustuseevery

means

atourdisposal.我們必須把我們所能采用的各種方法都用上.?Shetriedtoexplain

bymeans

of

signlanguage.她試圖用手語(yǔ)來(lái)解釋.?Thereisno

means

of

tracingthedebtatall.根本無(wú)法追查這筆債.?Thefamily

had

no

means

of

support(=wayofgettingmoney).這家人沒(méi)有收入來(lái)源.

外刊例句：Forexample,astatementthatJapantookpossessionofKoreain1910by

legitimatemeans

nowreadsthatitwasannexedbyforce.

()例如,關(guān)于日本在1910年以合法途徑奪得朝鮮統(tǒng)治權(quán)的聲明,現(xiàn)在讀起來(lái)就是：日本武力侵略了朝鮮.

3-從事、參與partake

詞典釋義：partake

UK

[pɑ：'te?k]

US

[pɑ：r-]

(partook,partaken)

verb

intransitive

TAKEPART

參與old-fashionedor

formal

■tobecomeinvolvedwithortakepartinsomething

參加,參與

?Shewashappyto

partake

in

thefestivities.她很樂(lè)意參加慶祝活動(dòng).

外刊例句：However,thepublic'schanceto

partake

inthepresidentialproducemaniamayfacesomeoppositionfromcommuters.

()然而,公眾有機(jī)會(huì)參與到總統(tǒng)選舉狂潮,但這可能會(huì)迎來(lái)一些路人的反對(duì)聲音.

替換表達(dá)：pursue

4.鑒于從過(guò)去的錯(cuò)誤中汲取經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)對(duì)于我們的日常生活很有價(jià)值,我們要努力做到對(duì)自己誠(chéng)實(shí)并磨練我們的分析和規(guī)劃能力,這一點(diǎn)至關(guān)重要.雖然這些能力并不能讓我們永不犯錯(cuò),但它們結(jié)合在一起可以幫助我們避免犯相同的錯(cuò)誤,讓我們?cè)谕ㄍ晒Φ牡缆飞戏€(wěn)步前行.Giventhattheabilitytolearnfrompastmistakescanproveinvaluableinoureverydaylives,itisimportantthatwestrivetobehonestwithourselvesand

honeouranalyticalandplanningskills(1.磨練我們的分析和規(guī)劃能力).Whilethesequalitiescannotmakeus

infallible(2.永不犯錯(cuò)的),theircombinationcanhelpustoavoidmakingthesamemistake,andkeepus

movingsteadilyforward

(3.穩(wěn)步前行)onthepathtosuccess.

1-磨練我們的分析和規(guī)劃能力honeouranalyticalandplanningskills

詞典釋義：

analyticalUK

[??n.?'l?t.?.k?l]

US

[-'l?t?-]

(formal

analytic)

adjective

■examiningorlikingtoexaminethingsverycarefully

分析的;善于分析的

?Hehasavery

analytical

mind.他善于分析問(wèn)題.?Somestudentshaveamore

analytical

approach

tolearning.有些學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)方法更具分析性.

外刊例句：Candidateswithmanagementconsultancybackgroundsoftenfindthattheirfirststepintoacorporateenvironmentisinastrategy,businessreengineeringorin-housecorporatefinancerole,exploitingthestrong

analyticalandplanningskills

thathavebeenbuilt.

()具行政管理咨詢(xún)背景的候選人常常發(fā)現(xiàn),他們多以策略、產(chǎn)業(yè)重組或內(nèi)部公司財(cái)政角色來(lái)進(jìn)入公司,能運(yùn)用到其原來(lái)已掌握的高超分析規(guī)劃能力.

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