浙江省精誠聯盟2024-2025學年高三上學期12月聯考英語試題讀后續(xù)寫 科學路上的逆襲：艾瑪的堅持與勝利

閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。InasmalltowninIowa,sixteen-year-oldEmmaThompsonwasanambitiousstudentwithdreamsofbecomingascientist.Everyyear,thelocalhighschoolheldasciencefair,andEmmahadalwaysplacedhighbutneverwonfirstplace.Thisyear,shewasdeterminedtochangethat.Emmaspentmonthsworkingonherproject,astudyonrenewableenergyusingalgae(藻類),.Sherecordeddata,ranexperiments,andevenstayeduplateintothenightperfectingherpresentation.Herparentsoftenfoundherworkingatherlaptop,surroundedbybooksandlabequipment.Oneevening,aweekbeforethesciencefair,Emmawasworkingonherprojectwhenherlaptopscreensuddenlywentblack.Panicked,shetriedtorestartit,butitwasnouse.Allherdata,notes,andthepresentationwereonthatlaptop,andshehadn'tbackedupherfiles.Desperate,Emmatookthelaptoptothelocalrepairshop.Thetechniciantoldheritwouldtakeatleastaweektorecoverthedata,ifitwasevenpossible.Emmalefttheshop,feelingasenseofdespair.Howcouldshepossiblyrecreateeverythinginjustafewdays?Returninghome,shesatonherbed,fightingbacktears.Hermindflashedbacktoaconversationshehadhadwithherscienceteacher,Mr.Reynolds,earlierintheyear.Hetoldherthetruetestofascientistwasnotinhowtheyhandledsuccess,butinhowtheyovercamefailureandthatinnovationoftencamefromtheabilitytoadaptandpersevere.EmmaletMr.Reynolds’

wordssinkin.Sherealizedthatthiswasherchancetoproveherself-asatruescientist.Determinedtomakethebestofhersituation,shebegantogatheralltheresourcesshestillhad.Shefoundherhandwrittennotes,somescattered(散亂的)papersandreliedonhermemorytorecallkeypointsofherresearch.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答Paragraph1:Takingadeepbreath,Emmadecidedtostartover.Paragraph2:Afterthefair,thewinnersweretobeannounced.文章大意：在愛荷華州的一個小鎮(zhèn)上，16歲的艾瑪懷揣著成為科學家的夢想，為當地高中的科學展精心準備了數月關于藻類可再生能源的項目。然而在展會前一周，她的筆記本電腦突然黑屏，數據丟失，這讓她陷入絕望。但她想起老師曾說過的話，決定重新開始，憑借著之前的手寫筆記、散落的紙張和記憶，努力重建項目。故事山分析：開端：艾瑪是個有抱負的學生，一直想在學?？茖W展上奪冠，為此努力準備關于藻類可再生能源的項目。發(fā)展：臨近展會時，她的筆記本電腦崩潰，數據丟失，這給她帶來巨大打擊，她去維修店得知數據恢復至少需要一周，而此時距離展會僅剩幾天。高潮：艾瑪在絕望中想起老師的教導，決定克服困難，重新開始準備項目，她四處搜集資料，重新做實驗，日夜忙碌。結局：科學展結束后，開始宣布獲獎者，故事在此處留下懸念，引發(fā)讀者對艾瑪最終結果的好奇。五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應：伏筆：艾瑪一直夢想成為科學家且在之前的科學展未獲一等獎，這次決心奪冠。回應：在續(xù)寫中，艾瑪克服重重困難最終贏得一等獎，實現了自己的目標，呼應了她的夢想和決心。伏筆：艾瑪花數月準備項目，認真記錄數據、做實驗和完善展示，體現她對項目的投入?；貞杭词闺娔X數據丟失，她憑借之前積累的知識和經驗，重新開始并成功完成項目，展現了她扎實的科研基礎和堅韌的精神。伏筆：老師曾對艾瑪說過真正的科學家如何應對失敗以及創(chuàng)新來自于適應和堅持的能力。回應：在困境中，艾瑪想起老師的話，以此激勵自己重新開始，將老師的教導轉化為實際行動，最終獲得成功，體現了老師話語對她的深刻影響。伏筆：艾瑪的父母經?？吹剿陔娔X前工作，周圍堆滿書籍和實驗設備，表明她的努力和專注?；貞涸谥匦聹蕚漤椖康倪^程中，這種專注和努力再次體現，她更加投入地工作，不放過任何細節(jié)，最終取得好成績，也讓父母為她感到驕傲。伏筆：艾瑪去維修店被告知數據恢復至少需一周且不確定能否成功，凸顯她所面臨的困境?；貞哼@促使她不得不另尋出路，依靠自己的能力重新開始，從而推動了故事的發(fā)展，讓她在困境中成長和蛻變。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：詳細描述艾瑪重新開始后的具體行動，如重新設計實驗步驟、如何更精準地收集數據、向哪些人請教問題等，以及她在這個過程中遇到的困難和如何克服它們，突出她的堅持和努力。同時，可以描寫她的心理變化，從最初的絕望逐漸轉變?yōu)閳远ê妥孕?。第二段：重點刻畫宣布獲獎者時艾瑪的緊張心情，以及聽到自己名字時的驚喜、激動與自豪。還可以描述周圍人的反應，如同學的祝賀、老師的欣慰等，最后以艾瑪對未來的展望和對這次經歷的感悟作為結尾，升華主題。情感線：

起初，艾瑪因筆記本電腦數據丟失而感到極度絕望和無助，覺得自己幾個月的努力白費，奪冠的希望渺茫。但在回憶起老師的話后，她的內心逐漸燃起希望之火，轉變?yōu)閳远ǖ臎Q心，開始重新投入項目準備，雖辛苦但充滿斗志。在等待結果時，她緊張不安，擔心自己的努力得不到認可。當得知自己獲得一等獎時，她的情感達到高潮，充滿了驚喜、激動和自豪，也深刻體會到堅持和努力的意義，對未來追求科學夢想更加充滿信心。故事線：艾瑪夢想在科學展奪冠，精心準備藻類可再生能源項目。展會前一周電腦崩潰，數據丟失，她陷入絕望。去維修店得知數據恢復困難，她決定重新開始。艾瑪憑借記憶和散落資料重建項目，努力克服困難?？茖W展結束，等待宣布獲獎者。艾瑪獲獎，實現夢想，感悟堅持的力量。主旨升華句5句英文ThisjourneyofEmma'snotonlyledhertovictoryinthesciencefairbutalsotaughtherthatsetbacksarebutsteppingstonestogreaterachievements.（艾瑪的這次經歷不僅讓她在科學展上獲勝，還讓她明白挫折只是通往更大成就的墊腳石。）Throughthetrialsandtribulations,Emmadiscoveredthatthespiritofperseverancecanturntheimpossibleintothepossible,lightingthewaytoherscientificaspirations.（歷經艱難困苦，艾瑪發(fā)現堅持不懈的精神能將不可能變?yōu)榭赡埽樟了目茖W抱負之路。）Emma'sstoryisatestamenttothefactthatwhenfacedwithfailure,one'sdeterminationandabilitytoadaptcancreateopportunitiesforremarkablecomebacks.（艾瑪的故事證明，當面臨失敗時，一個人的決心和適應能力能夠創(chuàng)造驚人逆轉的機會。）TheobstaclesEmmaencounteredandovercameservedasareminderthatthepathtosuccessinscience,oranyfield,ispavedwithchallengesthatonlytheresilientcantraverse.（艾瑪遇到并克服的障礙提醒我們，在科學或任何領域，成功之路都布滿了只有堅韌不拔者才能跨越的挑戰(zhàn)。）Inthefaceofadversity,Emmaheldfasttoherdream,provingthatwithunwaveringdedicationandthecouragetostartanew,onecanreachforthestarsandgraspthem.（在逆境中，艾瑪堅守夢想，證明了憑借堅定不移的奉獻精神和重新開始的勇氣，一個人能夠追逐星辰并將其握在手中。）兩篇寫作示范第一篇Takingadeepbreath,Emmadecidedtostartover.Shescouredtheinternetforanyrelevantresearchpapersandreachedouttolocalexpertsinthefieldofrenewableenergy,whogenerouslyprovidedherwithvaluableinsights.Sherebuiltherexperimentsfromscratch,double-checkingeverymeasurementandobservation.Emmaalsoenlistedthehelpofherfriends,whoassistedherwithgatheringmaterialsandsettinguptheexperiments.Despitethelonghoursandtheinitialsetbacks,sherefusedtogiveup.Eachsmallsuccess,likeasuccessfuldatacollectionorabreakthroughinunderstandingthealgae'sbehavior,boostedherconfidence.Afterthefair,thewinnersweretobeannounced.Emma'sheartpoundedinherchestasshestoodamongtheotherparticipants.Theannouncerbegantoreadthenames,andwitheachone,heranxietygrew.Butwhensheheardhernamecalledasthefirst-placewinner,shewasovercomewitharushofemotions.Tearsstreameddownherfaceasshewalkeduptoreceivetheaward.Herclassmatescheeredloudly,andherteacherbeamedwithpride.Emmaknewthatthiswasjustthebeginningofherjourneyintheworldofscience.Shehadlearnedthatnomatterhowdifficultthesituation,withdeterminationandhardwork,shecouldovercomeanyobstacleandachieveherdreams.第二篇Takingadeepbreath,Emmadecidedtostartover.Shedugthroughheroldnotebooksandfoundsomepreliminarysketchesandideasthatshehadinitiallydiscarded.Usingtheseasastartingpoint,sheredesignedherentireproject.Shevisitedthelocaluniversitylibraryandspenthoursporingoveradvancedtextbooksonrenewableenergy.Emmaalsojoinedanonlineforumforyoungscientists,wheresheaskedquestionsandreceivedhelpfuladvice.Sheworkedtirelessly,oftenforgettingtoeatorsleep.Slowlybutsurely,herprojectbegantotakeshapeagain.Afterthefair,thewinnersweretobeannounced.Emma'spalmsweresweatyasshewaitedanxiously.Whenthejudgefinallyannouncedherasthewinner,shewasinastateofshock.Shehuggedherparentstightlyandthankedherfriendsandteachersfortheirsupport.Thisexperiencehadnotonlygivenheravictoryinthesciencefairbuthadalsotransformedherintoamoreresilientanddeterminedindividual.Sherealizedthatsetbackswereaninevitablepartofthescientificjourney,butitwashowonerespondedtothemthattrulymattered.Fromnowon,shewasreadytofaceanychallengesthatcameherwaywithcourageanddetermination.讀后續(xù)寫參考答案：Takingadeepbreath,Emmadecidedtostartover.Shehadherhandwrittennotes,somepapers,andhermemory.Shecoulddothis.Thefollowingweek,Emmaspenteverywakinghourreconstructingherproject.Thekitchenturnedintoamakeshiftlab,notesscatteredacrossthetable.Herparentsmadesureshehadsnackstokeepherenergyup.Thenightbeforethesciencefair,Emmafinallyfinishedherpresentation.Sheknewitwasn’taspolishedasherorig