讀后續(xù)寫+滑雪之旅：46+歲新手的恐懼破冰與自我超越+講義 高三上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwas46,myhusbandJerrysuggestedthatIgoskiingwithhim,promising,“Youwillloveit!Thisisjustthefirststep.”“Notonmylife!YouknowIcan’tstandbeingcold.”Ididn’tmentionmyfearofchairliftsandheights.“Yougoandhavefun,sweetheart!”So,Jerrywentskiingwithhisnephewandothernewskiers.Moretripsfollowedwithincreasingexcitement.Yet,Icouldn’tignoretheirgenuinejoyinskiingnorthepositivechangesinJerry.Ibegantofeelguilty.Didn’tIowesomethingtothissportandtomyhusband?Shouldn’tIatleasttryit?“What?”myfriendsaskedinsurprisewhenIsaidIwasconsideringskiing.“You’re46yearsold!You’regoingtobreakaleg.”Thoughtheyreflectedmyownfears,Itookupmycouragetotakemyfirststep.ItoldJerryImighttryskiing.Thus,heimmediatelyplannedatripjustforthetwoofus.Thoughfilledwithfear,Icouldn’thidemyexcitementaswedrovetoCalifornia’sBigBearMountainResort（度假勝地）.Aftercheckingin,Jerry’sblueeyessparkled（閃光）ashesignedmeupforthenextday’sbeginnerclass.Thefollowingmorning,afterfittingmewithrentalskiboots,leadingmetotheinstructor,andkissingmequickly,Jerryrushedtothenearestskilift.Istoodinastraightlinewithalltheotherbeginners,likeducksinarow,andlistenedtotheskiinstructor.Lastinlineattheupperend,Itriedtoappearinvisibleuntiltheunthinkablehappened:Ilostmybalanceandfell.Itriedtofollowinstructions,butmyfeet,whichIcouldn’tfeel,refusedtocooperate.Icouldonlyturninonedirection—left.Worse,Icouldn’trememberwhattodowithmyskiswhenIneededtostop,soIjustfellover.AndIkeptforgettingtherule:“Neverpointyourskisdownhillwhentryingtogetup.”O(jiān)netime,Ijustlaythere,exhausted.“Ihateskiing!”Iwhispered,finallygettingupright.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：46歲的“我”因怕冷且害怕纜車和高處而拒絕丈夫杰瑞去滑雪的提議，但看到丈夫滑雪時(shí)的快樂和積極變化后，在朋友的驚訝聲中決定嘗試。到了加州大熊山度假村，“我”在初學(xué)者課程中狀況百出，不是摔倒就是無法控制滑雪板，甚至一度心生厭惡。伏筆以及回應(yīng)：伏筆1：“我”最初堅(jiān)決拒絕滑雪，與后文決定嘗試形成反差，續(xù)寫中“我”會因某些事改變想法并堅(jiān)持滑雪。伏筆2：朋友們對“我”滑雪的驚訝反應(yīng)，凸顯滑雪對“我”的挑戰(zhàn)性，續(xù)寫中“我”會克服困難證明自己。伏筆3：杰瑞獨(dú)自滑雪時(shí)的興奮，為他鼓勵(lì)“我”滑雪并在后續(xù)給予幫助做鋪墊，續(xù)寫中他會繼續(xù)推動“我”進(jìn)步。伏筆4：“我”在初學(xué)者隊(duì)伍中的糟糕表現(xiàn)，預(yù)示后續(xù)會有成長轉(zhuǎn)變，續(xù)寫中“我”會逐漸掌握滑雪技巧。伏筆5：“我”對滑雪的抱怨，與最終克服恐懼形成對比，續(xù)寫中“我”會愛上滑雪并有所感悟。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：情感線：沮喪與感動交織，因自己的失敗而沮喪，因杰瑞的陪伴而感動，有放棄又有不甘。故事線：杰瑞放棄自己的滑雪樂趣，來到“我”身邊，耐心地陪著“我”練習(xí)最基礎(chǔ)的動作。他不斷地給“我”講解技巧，鼓勵(lì)“我”不要害怕摔倒，還親自示范正確姿勢。在杰瑞的幫助下，“我”雖然還是會犯錯(cuò)，但逐漸有了一些信心，不再那么抗拒滑雪。第二段：情感線：自豪與感慨，為自己克服恐懼而自豪，對滑雪和生活有了新的感悟，充滿熱情。故事線：“我”開始主動挑戰(zhàn)一些小坡度，能夠較為熟練地控制滑雪板停下來和轉(zhuǎn)彎。不僅能跟上初學(xué)者課程的進(jìn)度，還嘗試了更高級一點(diǎn)的滑道，享受滑雪的速度與激情。意識到只要勇敢嘗試，就能突破自我，對未來充滿期待，決定繼續(xù)滑雪。主旨升華句：“Ageisneverabarriertonewadventures;itisthespiritofdeterminationthatpavesthewayfortheconquestoffears.”（年齡從來不是新冒險(xiǎn)的障礙；是決心的精神為戰(zhàn)勝恐懼鋪平道路。）“Inthefaceofself-doubt,thesupportofalovedonecanbethecatalystthattransformshesitationintounwaveringcourage.”（面對自我懷疑，愛人的支持可以成為將猶豫轉(zhuǎn)化為堅(jiān)定勇氣的催化劑。）“Theslopesoflifearefilledwithchallenges,butitisthroughperseveranceandthewillingnesstolearnthatweascendtonewheights.”（人生的斜坡充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但正是通過毅力和學(xué)習(xí)的意愿，我們才能攀登到新的高度。）“Fearisbutapassingshadowthatdissipatesinthelightofdeterminationandthewarmthofencouragement.”（恐懼只是一片短暫的陰影，會在決心的光芒和鼓勵(lì)的溫暖中消散。）“Takingthatfirststepintotheunknown,nomatterhowdaunting,isthepreludetoasymphonyofself-discoveryandgrowth.”（踏入未知的第一步，無論多么令人畏懼，都是自我發(fā)現(xiàn)和成長交響曲的前奏。）寫作示范一：Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Helefthisbelovedslopesandcametomyside.Heheldmyhandsandwalkedmethroughthebasicmovementsagainandagain.Withinfinitepatience,heshowedmehowtocontrolmyskisandkeepmybalance.Hiswordsofencouragementfilledmyears,andhispresencebesidemegavemethestrengthtokeepgoing.IstartedtofeelaglimmerofhopethatmaybeIcoulddothis.Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.Iwasabletoglidedowntheslopeswithconfidence,makingsmoothturnsandstops.IevenjoinedJerryonsomeofthemoreintermediateruns.Irealizedthatthekeytosuccesswasnottobeafraidoffailure.Skiinghadbecomenotjustasportbutametaphorforlife.Iwasreadytofaceanynewchallengesthatcamemyway,knowingthatwithdeterminationandthesupportoflovedones,Icouldovercomeanything.寫作示范二：Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Heabandonedhisownskiingtimeandfocusedonme.Hedemonstratedthecorrectposturesoverandover,andwhenIfell,hewasrighttheretopickmeup.Hetoldmestoriesofhisowninitialstruggleswithskiingtomakemefeelbetter.Hisloveanddedicationgraduallymeltedmyfrustration.Ibegantomimichisactionsmoreaccuratelyandfeltmyskillsimproving.Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.Iwasnolongertheclumsybeginner.Icouldskidowntheslopesindependently,feelingthewindinmyhair.Ihadconqueredmyfearofheightsandchairlifts.Iunderstoodthatsometimeswehavetostepoutofourcomfortzonestodiscoverourtruepotential.Thisnewfoundconfidenceinskiinghadalsoseepedintootheraspectsofmylife,makingmemoreeagertoembracechangeandgrowth.【答案】Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Hesuppliedmewithfood.Wisely,heblamedmyinstructorandpromisedprivatelessons.Thenextmorning,Ifellinlovewithmy