2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+少年逐夢：從自卑走向舞臺之光+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習少年逐夢：從自卑走向舞臺之光1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasaboy,IalwaysworeturtleneckshirtsbecauseIwassosensitiveandshy.Iworkedhardtoearnexceptionalmarksandalwaystriedtobehavewell.Iwasyoungerthaneveryoneelsebecausemygoodmarkshadallowedmetoskipsecondgrade,butthisaddednothingtomyalreadylowself-confidence.WhenIwas14,myparentsdivorced(離婚).Imovedinwithmydadinanewneighborhood,buthewasalwayssobusyandhadlittletimeforme.Itseemedtheonlytimeheeverspoketomewastobedemandingorcritical.Ibegantohatecominghomefromschooleveryday.Isankfurtherintomylowself-esteem(自尊心)andwasoverwhelmedwithfeelingunappreciatedandalone.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,myauntcalled.Thisseemedlikeamiracle(奇跡)tome.AuntGinetteusuallyonlycalledonceayear,onmybirthday.Shesaidshehadjustseensomeyoungteenagersparticipateinapublicspeakingcontest,andshethoughtIshouldtryit,too.ShetoldmeshefirmlybelievedIcouldperformonstageliketheotherkidssinceshehadseenmedoskits(幽默小品)forthefamilyatChristmas.Iwasalittlesurprised.Me?Onstage?Inapublicspeakingcontest?Iwashesitant.ButAuntGinettewassoconfidentandseemedreallyserious.Feelingherstrongbelief,Iwentagainstalloddsandagreedtoenterthecontest.5續(xù)寫原文Allthatwinter,twiceaweekafterdinner,Itookthreedifferentbusesforthethree-hourround-triptopracticeinVilled’Anjou,wherethecompetitionwouldtakeplace.Althoughmydadreallydidlovemeandwantedthebestforme,hedisapprovedofthisnewdream,fearingitwouldtakeawayfrommyhomeworktimeandimpactmyacademicperformance.ButIremainedatopperformerinschoolandnevermissedaday.6段首句Paragraph1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Paragraph2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文中的“我”因成績好卻性格內(nèi)向且年幼于同學，本就缺乏自信，14歲時父母離婚，與忙碌且嚴苛的父親生活，更加深了“我”的孤獨與自卑。一次，許久未聯(lián)系的姑姑打來電話，鼓勵“我”參加演講比賽，這讓“我”十分意外。在姑姑的堅定勸說下，“我”克服內(nèi)心的猶豫答應參賽。整個冬天，盡管父親不支持，“我”仍堅持每周兩次往返三小時去練習。這次經(jīng)歷成為“我”改變的契機，讓“我”在追求夢想的道路上邁出勇敢一步，也為“我”從自卑走向自信開啟了新的篇章。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.我站在后臺，心像一只被困在牢籠里的小鹿般狂跳不止。雙手不自覺地反復拉扯著衣角，眼睛緊盯著舞臺上的一舉一動，腦海中不斷回響著這四個月來練習的每一個字、每一個停頓和每一處情感的起伏。周圍的一切喧囂似乎都漸漸遠去，只剩下自己緊張而急促的呼吸聲。我深知，這個夜晚對我來說意義非凡，它是我這幾個月努力的見證，也是我突破自我的關鍵時刻。我一遍又一遍地在心里給自己打氣，試圖壓下那幾乎要將我吞噬的緊張感，等待著上臺的那一刻。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.當我結(jié)束演講，臺下掌聲雷動的那一刻，我慌亂地在人群中尋找著父親的身影。終于，我看到了他，他的臉上洋溢著我從未見過的光彩，那眼中閃爍的光芒如同夜空中最璀璨的星辰。一瞬間，過去所有的委屈、孤獨和不被理解都煙消云散。我快步走向父親，他緊緊地抱住了我，沒有過多的言語，但那有力的擁抱傳遞著他深深的愛意與自豪。在這一刻，我明白了，這段艱難的旅程不僅讓我找到了自信，也修復了我和父親之間那看似遙遠的關系，我知道，未來的路或許依舊充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但我已不再是從前那個自卑怯懦的少年。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Standingbackstage,myheartwaspoundinglikeawilddeertrappedinacage.Unconsciously,Ikeptfidgetingwiththehemofmyclothes,myeyesfixedoneverymoveonthestage,whilethewords,pauses,andemotionalnuancesIhadpracticedoverthepastfourmonthsechoedceaselesslyinmymind.Allthehustleandbustlearoundmeseemedtofadeawaygradually,leavingonlymyrapidandnervousbreathing.Iwaswellawarethatthisnightwasofgreatsignificancetome.Itwasatestamenttomyeffortsduringthesemonthsandacrucialmomentformetobreakthroughmyself.Irepeatedlypsychedmyselfup,tryingtosuppresstheoverwhelmingnervousnessthatthreatenedtoengulfme,asIawaitedmyturntostepontothestage.14范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.ThemomentthethunderousapplauseeruptedafterIfinishedmyspeech,Isearchedfranticallyformyfather'sfigureamongthecrowd.Finally,Isawhim.HisfacewasbeamingwitharadianceIhadneverwitnessedbefore,andthesparkleinhiseyeswaslikethebrighteststarinthenightsky.Inaninstant,allthepastgrievances,loneliness,andmisunderstandingsvanishedintothinair.Iquicklywalkedtowardsmyfather,andhehuggedmetightly.Therewerenoexcessivewords,butthatpowerfulembraceconveyedhisdeeploveandpride.Atthismoment,Iunderstoodthatthisarduousjourneyhadnotonlyenabledmetofindmyconfidencebutalsorepairedtheseeminglydistantrelationshipbetweenmyfatherandme.Iknewthattheroadaheadmightstillbefullofchallenges,butIwasnolongerthetimidandself-abasedteenagerIusedtobe.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Standingnervouslybackstage,withmyheartthumpingwildlylikeacagedbirdlongingforfreedom,Itriedtosteadymybreath.Thehoursofpracticeoverthepastmonthsflashedthroughmymind,eachcarefullycraftedwordandintonationbeingengraveddeeply.ItwasnotuntilIheardmynameannouncedthatIsnappedoutofmytranceandsteppedontothestage.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining—hewassoproud.NeverhadIexpectedsuchanexpressionofsheerpridefromhim.Therehestood,amongthecheeringcrowd,hisfiguretallandfirm.Itwasthismomentthatmadealltheeffortsworthwhile.Thejourneythathadbeenfraughtwithself-doubtandobstaclesnowseemedlike