高三年級上冊期中考試英語讀后續(xù)寫+苦難鑄就的科幻創(chuàng)意之旅+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Ilovedreadingbooksverymuchasachild,butmysinglemotherwasstrugglingfinancially,

soIoftenwenttothelibrarytoreadforfree.Myfavoritebooksweresciencefiction（科幻〃、說）.

Once,Ispentawholeafternoonreadingsciencefictioninthelibrary.

WhileIwasenjoyingreading,anillnessnearlyknockedmedown.Myillnesswasvery

strange,andnoonereallyknewwhatitwas.Ialwayswokeupwitharushofurine（尿）.AndthenI

foundoutthatthediseasehadimpactedmyentirelife.IrememberwhenIwasinthesixthgrade,I

hadtogotothebathroominthemiddleofaclass.RealizingIhadtogotothefrontoftheclass

andwritemynameontheblackboardinordertogotothebathroom,Iputupwithit.Bytheend

ofclass,theurinehadsoakedinto（滲透）myjeansandmychair.SincethenIhadnodeskmate.

Andmyshamespreadfromclasstothewholeschool.

Afterthat,Ibecamemoreisolated（孤立的）andsilent,butIgotaridetothelibraryoncea

weekandcheckedoutallthesciencefictionnovelsIcouldcarry.Thankstothem,Igotthrough

thedayswhenIwassickandcouldn'tgotoschool.

WhenIwasfifteen,thehighschoolaskedmymothertotakemeoutofschool.Mymother

andIwerebothrelieved.Ihadmanagedtogetexcellentgradesdespitemissing85%ofmyclasses,

buttheschoolcouldn'tputupwithmyabsenceofschoolmostofthetime.Mymothercouldsee

howsickIwas,andknewhowmuchIactuallywantedtobethere.Buttheschoolofficialshad

startedtogetinvolved.

Worsestill,mymotherdiedsuddenlynotlongafterIdroppedoutofschool,leavingmean

orphan（孤兒）at17.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.

、文章大意

文章講述了作者自幼喜愛讀書，尤其熱愛科幻小說，但因家庭經(jīng)濟困難常去圖書

館免費閱讀。作者身患奇怪疾病，導致在學校遭遇尷尬處境而變得孤立沉默。后

來因病缺課過多被學校要求退學，不久后母親又突然離世，使作者成為孤兒，生

活陷入絕境。

、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)

?伏筆1:作者對科幻小說的熱愛貫穿始終，在困境中科幻小說是其精神寄

托，為后續(xù)科幻雜志拯救作者以及作者在科幻創(chuàng)作上取得成就做鋪墊。

?續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者因科幻雜志獲得新生，開始創(chuàng)作科幻作

品，回應(yīng)了之前對科幻小說的喜愛，以及科幻小說在其艱難生活中

所起的重要作用。

?伏筆2：作者因病在學校遭受歧視和孤立，生活充滿苦難，這使他的經(jīng)歷

獨特且情感豐富，為其科幻創(chuàng)作提供了潛在的素材和深度。

?續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在后續(xù)情節(jié)中，作者的這些經(jīng)歷轉(zhuǎn)化為創(chuàng)作的靈感和特

色，使其作品更具創(chuàng)意，回應(yīng)了他所經(jīng)歷的苦難對其創(chuàng)作的影響。

?伏筆3：作者雖因病缺課很多，但仍能取得優(yōu)異成績，顯示出其聰明才智

和學習能力，為他在科幻創(chuàng)作領(lǐng)域取得成功埋下伏筆。

?續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者憑借自身的智慧和才能在科幻創(chuàng)作上有

所建樹，回應(yīng)了他在學習上的潛力以及在困境中展現(xiàn)出的堅韌和天

賦。

三、續(xù)寫要點

第一段:

1.描述作者發(fā)現(xiàn)科幻雜志后的驚喜和如獲至寶的感覺，以及雜志如何給他帶

來希望和動力。

2.講述作者開始嘗試根據(jù)雜志上的內(nèi)容進行科幻創(chuàng)作，投入其中并逐漸找到

生活的意義。

3.提及作者在創(chuàng)作過程中對自己疾病和生活經(jīng)歷的思考，以及如何將這些融

入到作品中。

第二段:

1.闡述作者的科幻作品因獨特背景而具有的創(chuàng)意特點，如對人性、疾病、孤

獨等主題的獨特詮釋。

2.講述他的作品逐漸受到關(guān)注和認可，可能獲得一些獎項或發(fā)表機會，以及

這對他生活的改變。

3.說明作者從這段經(jīng)歷中領(lǐng)悟到的關(guān)于苦難與創(chuàng)作、堅持與成功的道理，升

華主題。

四、情感線

從患病后的羞恥和孤立導致的絕望，到母親離世后的極度痛苦和無助，再到因科

幻雜志找到希望的喜悅，最后到在創(chuàng)作中獲得認可的自豪和對生活的重新熱愛，

情感經(jīng)歷了巨大的起伏和轉(zhuǎn)變。

五、故事線

作者喜愛科幻小說一患病在學校受辱T退學后母親離世一科幻雜志拯救一開始

科幻創(chuàng)作一作品因獨特背景有創(chuàng)意一獲得認可及感悟

六、主旨升華句

1.Adversitycanbethecatalystforcreativity,andthroughthepowerof

imagination,wecantransformourpainintoartthattouchestheheartsof

others.（逆境可以成為創(chuàng)造力的催化劑，通過想象的力量，我們可以將痛

苦轉(zhuǎn)化為觸動他人心靈的藝術(shù)。）

2.Thehardshipswefaceinlifecanbecomethewellspringofourcreativity,as

weuseourexperiencestocraftstoriesthatresonatewiththeworldandfind

meaninginthemidstofchaos.（我們在生活中面臨的困難可以成為我們創(chuàng)

造力的源泉，因為我們利用我們的經(jīng)歷來創(chuàng)作與世界產(chǎn)生共鳴的故事，并

在混亂中找到意義。）

3.Inthefaceofdespair,apassioncanbeoursalvation,leadingustocreate

worksthatnotonlyexpressourinnerselvesbutalsoconnectwithothersand

provethateventhedarkesttimescangivebirthtosomethingbeautiful.（在絕

望面前，一種激情可以成為我們的救贖，引導我們創(chuàng)作不僅表達我們內(nèi)心

自我，還與他人聯(lián)系的作品，并證明即使是最黑暗的時刻也能孕育出美麗

的東西。）

4.Ouruniquelifeexperiences,nomatterhowpainful,canbetheingredientsthat

makeourcreationsstandout,showingthatfromtheashesofadversity,the

phoenixofcreativitycanriseandsoar.（我們獨特的生活經(jīng)歷，無論多么痛

苦，都可以成為使我們的創(chuàng)作脫穎而出的因素，表明從逆境的灰燼中，創(chuàng)

造力的鳳凰可以崛起并翱翔。）

5.Thejourneyfromorphanedandhopelesstoarecognizedcreatorisatestament

tothepowerofperseveranceandtheabilityofthehumanspirittoturntragedy

intotriumphthroughthemediumofartandcreativity.（從孤兒和絕望至U成為

一個被認可的創(chuàng)作者的旅程證明了堅持的力量和人類精神通過藝術(shù)和創(chuàng)

造力將悲劇轉(zhuǎn)化為勝利的能力。）

七、寫作示范

寫作示范一

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Oneday,

whilewanderingaimlesslyinthestreet,Isawadiscardedscience-fictionmagazine

lyingontheground.IpickeditupwithtremblinghandsasifIhadfoundaprecious

treasure.Thevividpicturesandimaginativestoriesinitimmediatelycapturedmy

heart.Idevouredeverywordandpage,anditwaslikealightshiningintomydark

world.Inspiredbythemagazine,Idecidedtotrywritingmyownscience-fiction

stories.Ipouredallmyemotions,thoughtsaboutmyillness,andthelonelinessand

painIhadexperiencedintomywriting.Dayandnight,Iimmersedmyselfincreating,

andgradually,Ifoundanewpurposeinlife.Throughwriting,Iwasabletoexpress

theunspeakableandfindawaytocopewithmydifficultsituation.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.Myunique

experiencesofdealingwithillnessandtheisolationitbroughtgavemystoriesadepth

andauthenticitythatsetthemapart.Iwroteaboutcharacterswhofacedextraordinary

challenges,muchlikemyself,andexploredthemesofsurvival,hope,andthepower

ofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.AsIcontinuedtowrite,myworksbegan

toattractattention.Oneofmystorieswaspublishedinasmallliterarymagazine,and

itreceivedpositivereviews.Thisrecognitiongavemeahugeboostofconfidence.I

realizedthatmyhardshipshadnotbeeninvain.Theyhadbecomethesourceofmy

creativityandallowedmetoconnectwithreaderswhocouldrelatetothestruggles

andhopesinmystories.Iwasdeterminedtokeepwritingandsharingmyperspective

withtheworld,usingmywordstoturnmypainintosomethingmeaningfuland

beautiful.

寫作示范二

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Istumbled

uponascience-fictionmagazineinathriftstore.ThemomentIlaidmyeyesonit,I

feltastrangeconnection.IboughtitwiththelittlemoneyIhadandrushedhometo

readit.Theamazingworldsandconceptsinthemagazineopenedupanew

dimensionforme.Itgavemeanidea-whynotcreatemyownscience-fiction

universe?Istartedwritingimmediately,usingmyillnessasabackdropand

incorporatingthefeelingsofisolationanddesperationIhadfelt.Iimaginedafuture

wherediseasescouldbecuredinextraordinarywaysandwherepeoplelikemecould

findhopeandacceptance.AsIwrote,Ifeltasenseofliberation,asifIwasescaping

theharshrealityandenteringaworldofmyowncreation.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.Thepainand

lonelinessIhadenduredbecametheessenceofmystories.Mycharacterswereoften

outsiders,strugglingtofitinaworldthatdidn'tunderstandthem,muchlikemy

experienceinschoolandaftermymother'sdeath.Mydescriptionsofthefuturewere

filledwithasenseoflongingforabetterlifeandahopethateveninthedarkesttimes,

therecouldbeaglimmeroflight.Eventually,myworkcaughttheattentionofalocal

writingcompetition.Isubmittedmystoryandtomysurprise,Iwon.Thisvictorynot

onlybroughtmesomefinancialsupportbutalsogavemeasenseofvalidation.I

understoodthatmypasthadshapedmeintoauniquewriter.Iwasnolongeravictim

ofcircumstancesbutacreatorwhocouldusemyexperiencestotouchtheheartsof

others.Fromthenon,Icontinuedtopursuemypassionforwriting,knowingthat

everyobstacleIhadovercomewasasteppingstonetoamorecreativeandfulfilling

lifeintheworldofsciencefiction.

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