專題10 書面表達（解析版）

專題10書面表達（2023?江蘇連云港?中考真題）走進江蘇，游歷各地。眾多外國友人暑期將參加“GoJiangsu”旅游活動。假如你是李華，請你根據以下圖片及文字提示，以“WelcometoLianyungang”為題寫一篇英語短文，邀請他們走進家鄉(xiāng)連云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。注意：（1）詞數90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；（2）文中應包括所給內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；（3）文中不得出現考生的真實姓名、校名等信息。WelcometoLianyungangI’mLiHuafromLianyungang,Jiangsu.I’dliketorecommendmyhometowntoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WelcometoLianyungangI’mLiHuafromLianyungang,Jiangsu.I’dliketorecommendmyhometowntoyou.Lianyungangliesinthenorth-eastofJiangsu.It’sfamousformanyplacesofinterest.HereyoucanvisitHuaguoMountain,thehomeoftheMonkeyKing.YoucanalsogototheSumaBaytoenjoythebeautifulsea.It’scoolinsummer.Moreover,Lianyungangisacitywithrichculture.Localpeoplearefriendlyenoughtohelpyou.Remembertotryourlocalfood.I’msureyouwillenjoyit.Don’tmissLianyungangwhenyouattend“GoJiangsu”.Welcometoourhometown.We’relookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體說明連云港的地理位置以及著名的景點；第二步，介紹連云港豐富的文化和當地的人們以及食物；第三步，最后邀請大家來連云港做客。[亮點詞匯]①befamousfor因……而著名②moreover而且③lookforwardtodoing期待做[高分句型]Don’tmissLianyungangwhenyouattend“GoJiangsu”.（when引導的時間狀語從句）（2023?江蘇揚州?中考真題）為豐富校園生活，弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，近期你校校報英語專欄舉行了GettingclosetotraditionalChineseculture征文活動，請根據表格中的內容提示寫一篇英語短文，向此專欄投稿，介紹中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝（handicraft）風箏的歷史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。KitesHistoryMozi,intheWarringStatesperiodCharacteristicsmaterialsformakingkites:…shapesofkites:…Culturalimportancekites:●atraditionalChinesehandicraft●…kiteflying:●apopularoutdooractivity…●theWorldKiteCapital:Weifang,ShandongProvince…Yourideas…要求：（1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；（3）詞數：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；（4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。KitesKiteshaveahistoryofabout2,300yearsinChina._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：KitesKiteshaveahistoryofabout2,300yearsinChina.ThekitewasinventedbyamancalledMoziintheWarringStatesperiod.Hemadeabirdoutofwood.Itwasthefirstkiteinhistory.Later,hisstudentLuBanusedbambootomakekites.DuringtheEasternHanDynasty,withtheinventionofpaper,peoplebegantousepapertomakekites.Kiteshavealsobeguntotakeondifferentshapes,suchasairplanes,eaglesandsoon.TheWorldKiteCapitalisWeifang,ShandongProvince.Therearemanygrandkitecompetitionsheldthereeveryyear.Peopleallovertheworldwanttogothere.Flyingkitesisdeeplylovedbypeople.Itisaverypopularoutdooractivity.Everyweekend,Icanseemanypeopleflyingkitesinthepark.Theyplayhappily.Butthekitesweflynowareallboughtfromstores.Fewpeoplemaketheirownkites.IbelievethatasatraditionalChinesehandicraft,kitesshouldcontinuetobepasseddown.WeshouldprotecttraditionalChinesehandicrafts.【詳解】[總體分析]①

題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②

時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③

提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹風箏的歷史情況以及特點；第二步，介紹風箏的文化特點以及如今風箏的發(fā)展情況；第三步，最后提出自己的觀點。[亮點詞匯]①

withtheinventionofpaper隨著紙的發(fā)明②

takeon呈現③

allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①

IbelievethatasatraditionalChinesehandicraft,kitesshouldcontinuetobepasseddown.（賓語從句）②Butthekitesweflynowareallboughtfromstores.（定語從句）（2023?江蘇蘇州?中考真題）HappyHomeClub本期的主題是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”為題向中外朋友介紹你的想法，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內容包括：（1）觸動你的一件事情；（2）這件事給你的啟示；（3）你的倡議。注意：（1）詞數：100左右。（2）內容完整（照抄閱讀語篇不得分）（3）文中不得出現與考生相關的真實校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：要求根據題干中的提示介紹如何讓自己的家鄉(xiāng)變得更美，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹觸動你的一件事情以及這件事情給你的啟示；第二步，為了使蘇州變得更美，介紹你的倡議；第三步，書寫結語。表達“希望家鄉(xiāng)會更美麗”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof各種各樣的②besupposedtodosth.應該做某事③remembertodosth.記得做某事④intime及時[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引導時間狀語從句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建議的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（賓語從句）（2023?江蘇無錫?中考真題）青少年在成長過程中會遇到各種問題，為此《21世紀英文報》開設了TeensTalk專欄，傾聽讀者的心聲，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回復。假設你是李華，最近也遇上了些煩心事，請給該專欄發(fā)一封英文郵件，講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項：（1）郵件內容須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；（2）詞數在100左右，郵件開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；（3）郵件中不得使用真實的個人姓名或學校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.ThesedaysI’mnothappy.Ialwaysarguewithmyparents.Theyonlycareaboutmyschoolwork.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Theyplantochooselotsofafter-schoolclassesforme.ButIdon’twanttotaketheseclassesanddon’twanttobesobusy.I’minterestedinpainting.Ijustwanttotakepaintinglessonsduringtheholiday.Theydisagreewithme.Idon’tknowwhattodo.AndhowcanIimprovetherelationshipwithmyparents?Canyougivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現在時；③提示：根據要求講述自己的煩惱。注意不要遺漏要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明自己遇到了問題。第二步，講述自己的煩惱并尋求建議。第三步，書寫結尾。[亮點詞匯]①arguewith和某人爭吵②careabout關心③takepaintinglessons上繪畫課[高分句型]①Thesummerholidayiscoming.（現在進行時表示將來的動作）②Idon’tknowwhattodo.（疑問詞+動詞不定式）（2023?江蘇徐州?中考真題）假定你是李華。你班交換留學生Simon即將返校，他對“校園科技周”非常感興趣，他寫了一封郵件向你詢問相關信息，請你根據郵件內容和所給提示寫封回信。注意：1.詞數90左右。郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；2.郵件需包括所給要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，使內容完整通順；3.郵件中不得泄露個人信息；4.請按照如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【答案】例文：HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.ItwillbeheldintheNo.2buildingintwoweeks.TherearemanydifferentkindsofactivitiesintheWeek.First,youcanwatchsciencefictionfilmslikeTheWanderingEarth.Second,somestudentswilltellstoriesaboutscientistslikeDengJiaxian.What’smore,ourschoolwillsharethelatestnewsabouttechnologyandshowcreativeideasaboutrobots.Youarecrazyaboutrobots,right?Great,therearesomesmartrobotshowsyoucantakepartinhere.Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據開頭，介紹科技周開始的時間；第二步，根據Simon的問題提示，介紹科技周的活動；第三步，介紹Simon感興趣的機器人活動。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof不同種類的②takepartin參加[高分句型]Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.（感嘆句作賓語）（2023?江蘇宿遷?中考真題）“雙減”政策推行之后，中學生的學習及生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。為了達成“五育”并舉的培養(yǎng)目標，你校開展了豐富的延時服務課程并鼓勵學生參與志愿服務。某報社想了解這方面的情況。假如你是李華，請你根據以下提示寫一封英文郵件進行簡單介紹。延時服務參加各種各樣的課程，比如音樂、籃球等；……（你的情況）志愿服務幫助他人解決問題；……（舉例說明）你的收獲提升能力，更加自信；……（補充1-2點）注意事項：1.詞數90左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；2.文中不得出現真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。DearEditor,Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouttheafter-schoolservicesinourschoolandthevoluntaryworkwedo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】例文DearEditor,Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouttheafter-schoolservicesinourschoolandthevoluntaryworkwedo.Ourschoolprovidesvariousafter-schoolservices,suchasmusic,basketball,andmore.IenjoytakingpartintheartclubwhereIcanexpressmycreativity.Inadditiontotheseservices,wealsohaveopportunitiesforvoluntarywork.Byhelpingotherssolveproblemsandassistingincommunityserviceevents,wegainvaluableexperienceanddevelopimportantskills.Throughtheseactivities,Ihavegainedconfidenceandimprovedmyabilities.Ibelievethattheseexperienceswillbenefitmegreatlyinthefuture.Bestwishes,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據提示內容介紹學校的課后服務和志愿工作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出對課后服務和志愿工作的介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從課后服務和志愿工作兩個方面重點介紹；第三步，表達自己的收獲。[亮點詞匯]①suchas例如②takepartin參加③Inadditionto另外④inthefuture在未來[高分句型]①Byhelpingotherssolveproblemsandassistingincommunityserviceevents,wegainvaluableexperienceanddevelopimportantskills.（動名詞作賓語）②Ibelievethattheseexperienceswillbenefitmegreatlyinthefuture.（that引導的賓語從句）（2023?江蘇泰州?中考真題）泰州是著名的教育之鄉(xiāng)。你的英國朋友想了解泰州的教育，想請你用英語介紹一下，你列出如下提綱：1.良好的教育環(huán)境（校園美麗，名人眾多……寫1-2點）；2.優(yōu)秀的老師；3.自己的學習表現。要求：1.包含所有要點，表達清晰，過渡合理，銜接自然，可適當拓展；2.不得使用真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息；3.詞數100左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IamproudtobeastudentinTaizhou.Thereisagoodeducationalenvironment.Thecampushereisbeautiful,andtherearemanycelebrities,suchasHuYuan,WangAnshiandsoon.Therearealsomanylibrariesandfamousuniversities.Theteachersherearealsoexcellent.Mostofthemareteacherswhograduatedfromfamousuniversities,andsomeevenreturnedfromstudyingabroad.Theyhaveadvancedteachingmethodsandteachingideas.Theyalsoproducealargenumberofexcellentstudents.Inadditiontolearningculturalknowledge,Ialsojoinmanyclubs,suchasbasketballclub,chessclub,dancingclubandsoon.HereInotonlylearnculturalknowledge,butalsolearnalotoflifephilosophy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據提示內容介紹泰州的教育，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹泰州良好的教育環(huán)境；第二步，介紹優(yōu)秀的老師；第三步，介紹自己的學習表現。[亮點詞匯]①beproudof為……感到自豪②graduatefrom畢業(yè)于③alargenumberof許多[高分句型]①Mostofthemareteacherswhograduatedfromfamousuniversities,andsomeevenreturnedfromstudyingabroad.（who引導的定語從句）②HereInotonlylearnculturalknowledge,butalsolearnalotoflifephilosophy.（notonly...butalso...連接并列結構）（2023?江蘇鎮(zhèn)江?中考真題）假如你是李華，你們學校整理出一塊空地，將用于拓寬學生活動和實踐的空間。校英語報登載了校方初擬的兩種方案，就這塊空地建設文化角還是菜園征求意見。請根據提示給校報寫一封信談談你的想法和建議。ACultureCornerAVegetableGarden●displayartworks●shareideasandfeelings●holdactivities（fashionshows,…）●developasenseofbeauty●…●workwithclassmates●learnfarmingskills●harvestvegetables（tomatoes,…）●formthehabitoflabour（勞動）●…要求：1.所寫內容必須包括一種方案的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.對你所選擇的方案說明理由，并對其提出建議；3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；4.文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,I’mhappytohearthatthereisanemptyareainourschoolforbuildingaCultureCorneroraVegetableGarden.Inmyopinion,it’sbetterto______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________