讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類父親幫我走出求學被拒陰霾課件-高三英語二輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫|個人成長類廣東大灣區(qū)高二-Rejectedstudent‘sredemption

父親幫我走出求學被拒陰霾廣東大灣區(qū)高二年級2023-2024學年度第二學期期末統(tǒng)一考試原文分析讀后續(xù)寫原文審讀多篇范文呈現(xiàn)解題思路分析讀后續(xù)寫可積累文本1、

原文審讀：IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmylittlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtomeinherten-year-oldvoice:“Weregretthatwedonothaveaplaceforyou.."RejectedfromGeorgetown.“Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates..."RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveatWilliamandMary.AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigesttherejectionsimmediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhomeandwentbacktoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschoolstheyreallywantedtogoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.lgotgoodgrades,madetheschoolteamandscoredwellonmySATs.Ihadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities(鵠齒)even.Sobeingrejectedseemeddisastrous(disaster).IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe“"goodschools."lreallywantedtobechosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheotherhand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbeheadedwiththeguywhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirstchoice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccerballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委員會)exactlywhattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,“I'vedecidedtogiveuptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.”Thesubtextinthiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右:(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.Deeplytouchedbyhiswords,Ibegantoreassessmysituation.2、

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紅色定從/定語；藍色賓從；黃色狀從，從句斜體；下劃線+標黃單詞+斜體

為需掌握積累單詞、短語；黑體標黃，非謂語；可積累部分為

embody；

注釋(定語從句)

故事山模式：

銜接點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；銜接點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；銜接點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；銜接點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。對提示句P1,P2做逐詞逐句的解讀，理解其背后深意；回溯原文，找到對應的文本，確定基本元素，時間，地點，人物，所涉及的物品，細節(jié)等信息；試圖對時間線，地點線結合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所變化，以確定是否需要展開；構思情節(jié)讀懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理結合生活實際，構思文章，并完成成長前的困擾情境描寫+消極情緒的累積→高潮

成長中的蛻變

成長的動機+過程中變化的心情成長后的升華

成長后的收獲+積極情緒(喜悅、滿足和驕傲等)可積累詞匯：1.onaschooltrip-近義短語：onafieldtrip,duringaschoolexcursion-例句：Wewenttothemuseumonaschooltriplastyear.2.calledhome-近義短語：phonedhome,contactedhome-例句：Icalledhometocheckonmyfamily.3.payphone-生詞：付費電話

-近義詞：publicphone,coin-operatedphone-例句：Heusedapayphonetomakeacallsincehiscellphonedied.4.Weregretthat...-近義短語：Wearesorrythat...,Weapologizefor...-例句：Weregretthatwecannotofferyouaplaceatthistime.可積累詞匯：5.qualifiedcandidates-近義短語：eligibleapplicants,suitablecandidates-例句：Thereweremanyqualifiedcandidatesfortheposition.6.safetyschool-生詞：保底學校

-近義短語：backupschool,fallbackoption-例句：UMasswashersafetyschool,butshestillappliedtoherdreamcolleges.7.digesttherejections-生詞：消化拒信

-近義短語：processtherejections,cometotermswiththerejections-例句：Ittookhersometimetodigesttherejectionsfromhertopchoices.8.madetheschoolteam-近義短語：gotintotheschoolteam,wasselectedfortheschoolteam-例句：Hemadetheschoolteamafterseveralroundsoftryouts.可積累詞匯：9.majordisappointments-近義短語：significantsetbacks,bigletdowns-例句：Hehadneverfacedanymajordisappointmentsinlifeuntilnow.10.failedatanything-近義短語：experiencedfailure,fallenshort-例句：Shehadneverfailedatanythingbefore,sotherejectionwashardtoaccept.11.oneofthe"goodschools"-近義短語：oneoftheprestigiousschools,oneofthetopuniversities-例句：Hedreamedofattendingoneofthe"goodschools"hisparentshadmentioned.12.partyschool-生詞：以聚會聞名的學校

-近義短語：schoolwithapartyculture,socialschool-例句：Theuniversityhadareputationasapartyschool,buthewasmorefocusedonacademics.可積累詞匯：13.getactive-近義短語：takeaction,becomeinvolved-例句：Insteadoffeelingsorryforherself,shedecidedtogetactiveandpursueotheroptions.14.firstchoice-近義短語：topchoice,preferredoption-例句：Dukewasherfirstchoice,butshedidn’tgetin.15.takeacake-decoratingcourse-生詞：學習蛋糕裝飾課程

-近義短語：enrollinabakingcourse,takeaculinaryclass-例句：Aftertherejection,shejokedabouttakingacake-decoratingcourseinsteadofgoingtocollege.16.Theworldisn’tfair-近義短語：Lifeisn'tfair,Thingsareunfair-例句：Afterbeingrejected,hebitterlyremarked,"Theworldisn’tfair."可積累詞匯：5.Tremble

基本信息

詞性：v./n.

詞義：顫抖，戰(zhàn)栗；搖動

近義詞：shake,shiver,quiver

聯(lián)想詞：vibrate,quake,flutter

例句：

Herhandstrembledassheopenedtheletter.Thegroundtrembledduringtheearthquake.推薦的動作、心理、環(huán)境描寫例句：常見搭配和可積累語料

動作描寫：

loadhaybales（搬運干草捆）

pressanearto（貼耳聽）

grabtheflashlight（抓起手電筒）

racebackto（飛奔回到）

心理描寫：

wasn’tconvinced（不相信）

wokeinthenightthinkingabout（夜里醒來想著）

wonderingwhattodo（不知道該怎么辦）

環(huán)境描寫：

afaintmeowfromthehayloft（干草棚里微弱的貓叫聲）

quietwhenCalliewentinside（當Callie進去時一片寂靜）

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積累詞匯1.remainedbitter-生詞：依然苦澀

-近義短語：stayedresentful,continuedtofeelbitter-例句：Heremainedbitteraboutthesituationforalongtime.2.satmedown-近義短語：talkedtomeprivately,hadaseriousconversationwithme-例句：Mymothersatmedowntodiscussmyfutureplans.3.openedmyheart-生詞：敞開心扉

-近義短語：sharedmyfeelings,confidedin-例句：Sheopenedherhearttoherbestfriendaboutherstruggles.積累詞匯4.pouredoutmyfrustrations-近義短語：ventedmyfrustrations,expressedmyfrustrations-例句：Hepouredouthisfrustrationsafterthedifficultweekatwork.5.feellikeafailure-生詞：感覺像個失敗者

-近義短語：thinkI’mafailure,believeI’vefailed-例句：Afterlosingthegame,shefeltlikeafailure.6.listeningattentively-生詞：專心聆聽

-近義短語：payingcloseattention,listeningcarefully-例句：Hewaslisteningattentivelytothespeaker’severyword.積累詞匯7.painfulrejections-近義短語：hurtfulrejections,difficultrejections-例句：Thepainfulrejectionsfromuniversitiesmadehimdoubthisabilities.8.reflectionofyourworth-生詞：你價值的反映

-近義短語：measureofyourvalue,indicationofyourworth-例句：Thesesetbacksarenotareflectionofyourworthasaperson.9.overcomethischallenge-近義短語：getpastthisobstacle,conquerthisdifficulty-例句：Heknewhehadthestrengthtoovercomethischallenge.積累詞匯10.supportyoueverystepoftheway-生詞：全程支持你

-近義短語：bewithyouthroughout,helpyouthrougheverything-例句：I’llsupportyoueverystepoftheway,nomatterwhatyoudecide.11.reassessmysituation-近義短語：rethinkmyposition,reevaluatemysituation-例句：Afterspeakingtohisfather,hebegantoreassesshissituation.12.dwellingontherejections-生詞：糾結于拒絕

-近義短語：focusingontherejections,obsessingovertherejections-例句：Dwellingontherejectionswon’thelpyoumoveforward.積累詞匯13.reachingmyfullpotential-生詞：發(fā)揮我全部潛能

-近義短語：realizingmyfullpotential,achievingmypotential-例句：Toreachyourfullpotential,youmuststopdoubtingyourself.14.shiftingmymindset-生詞：轉變心態(tài)

-近義短語：changingmymindset,alteringmyperspective-例句：Shiftingmymindsethelpedmeseethingsmoreclearly.15.embracetheopportunities-生詞：抓住機會

-近義短語：seizetheopportunities,takeadvantageoftheopportunities-例句：Shedecidedtoembracetheopportunitiesthatcameherway.積累詞匯16.renewedsenseofpurpose-近義短語：freshsenseofpurpose,newmotivation-例句：Afterthetalk,hefeltarenewedsenseofpurposeinlife.17.doveintomystudies-生詞：全心投入學習

-近義短語：immersedmyselfinmystudies,fullycommittedtomystudies-例句：Hedoveintohisstudieswithdeterminationafterhisrealization.18.newpassions-近義短語：freshinterests,newfoundpassions-例句：Atuniversity,shediscoverednewpassionsthatguidedherfuturecareer.積累詞匯19.initialdisappointment-生詞：最初的失望

-近義短語：earlydisappointment,firstdisappointment-例句：Theinitialdisappointmentfadedasshefoundnewopportunities.20.unwaveringsupport-生詞：堅定不移的支持

-近義短語：constantsupport,unfalteringsupport-例句：Hisunwaveringsupporthelpedherthroughthetoughesttimes.1.語料升級與積累

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