山東省德州市2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語(yǔ)試題感恩節(jié)前夜的驚喜新外套背后的姐妹情與家庭愛(ài)講義

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mysister,Norma,hasalwaysbeenahardworker,earningthetitle“mybiggirl”fromourmother,whileIwasalwayslabeled“l(fā)azyJoan”.Normabegantoworkparttimewhenshewasbarelytwelveyearsold,doingweeklycleaningforanelderlyneighborlady.ButNormadidn'tkeepthemoneysheearned.ItwentdirectlytoMothertohelpwiththehouseholdexpenses.Whenthefinalbellrangfortheday,NormawouldracetocatchthebustomakeittoworkontimewhileIleisurelywanderedinthehallwaywithnewfriends.AsOctoberbroughtfallrainsandcoldairdownfromthenorth,Motherkepttellingmetoputonmywintercoat.Thecoatfromthepreviouswinterwasugly.Thesleevesweretooshort,andsinceIhadgrownthroughthesummermonths,thewaistofthecoatwasnearlyundermyarmpits(腋下).Normawashavingthesameproblem,withhercoatbeingtoosmall.Motherkepttellingmethatshedidn'thavethemoneyforanewcoat,andIkeptrefusingtowearthelittlegirl'scoattoschool.Ishouted;Icried;Ibegged.Itdidn'tdoanygood.SomeofmyclassmateswerewearingtheirnewcoatswiththefashionableshortAlinestyle.HowIenviedthosegirls!Oneday,MotherwasplanningourannualfamilyThanksgivingdinnerwhenIaskedherthewrongquestion.“Howisitthatyoucanbuyallthosegroceriestofeedeveryonebutnotbuymeanewwintercoat?”“Younglady,itisn'talwaysaboutyouandwhatyouthinkyouneed,”Motherblamedandimmediatelysentmetomyroomupstairsformyselfishattitude.Istayedinmyroom,feelingangryanddisappointed.Ateleveno'clockthatevening,Normafinallycamehomefromwork.Icouldhearherexcitedvoiceinthelivingroombelow.Mothercalledtome,“edownandseewhatNormahasboughtwithherpaycheck!”注意：IcamedownandsawNormawearinganewcoat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItooktheboxfromNormaandopenedit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：諾瑪從小勤勞工作，十二歲就兼職幫鄰居打掃賺錢(qián)補(bǔ)貼家用。作者較為懶散，當(dāng)冬天來(lái)臨，作者因舊外套又丑又不合身而拒絕穿著，看到同學(xué)的新外套心生羨慕，在感恩節(jié)籌備時(shí)因抱怨母親能買(mǎi)食材卻不給自己買(mǎi)新外套而被母親責(zé)備。當(dāng)晚諾瑪下班回家，母親讓作者下樓看諾瑪用工資買(mǎi)的東西。

伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：諾瑪從小打工賺錢(qián)交給母親補(bǔ)貼家用?；貞?yīng)：諾瑪用自己的積蓄給作者買(mǎi)了新外套。伏筆：作者的外套又丑又不合身且母親稱(chēng)沒(méi)錢(qián)買(mǎi)新的?；貞?yīng)：諾瑪買(mǎi)了作者心儀的新外套。伏筆：作者羨慕同學(xué)的新外套?；貞?yīng)：諾瑪給作者買(mǎi)的外套正是作者渴望的款式。伏筆：作者因外套問(wèn)題與母親產(chǎn)生沖突?；貞?yīng)：諾瑪?shù)呐e動(dòng)化解了作者與母親間的矛盾。伏筆：諾瑪下班回家時(shí)母親興奮的呼喚?；貞?yīng)：諾瑪帶回了給作者的驚喜（新外套）。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：

情感線(xiàn)：從看到諾瑪有新外套時(shí)的嫉妒，到打開(kāi)盒子發(fā)現(xiàn)給自己的新外套的驚喜與感動(dòng)，最后領(lǐng)悟到親情的珍貴與諾瑪?shù)年P(guān)愛(ài)。

故事線(xiàn)：作者看到諾瑪?shù)男峦馓缀笮纳刀?，打開(kāi)諾瑪遞來(lái)的盒子發(fā)現(xiàn)是自己夢(mèng)寐以求的新外套，之后作者感動(dòng)落淚，與諾瑪和母親擁抱，一家人在感恩節(jié)前夜充滿(mǎn)溫情。主旨升華句：Trueloveisoftenhiddeninthemostunexpectedactsofkindness.（真愛(ài)常隱藏在最意想不到的善舉之中。）Family'scareislikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,alwaystheretofortus.（家人的關(guān)懷就像寒冬里的暖爐，始終在那慰藉我們。）Sometimes,thegreatestgiftisnottheobjectitself,buttheloveandthoughtbehindit.（有時(shí)，最珍貴的禮物并非物品本身，而是其背后的愛(ài)與心意。）Thebondoffamilycanovereanyenvyandresentment,leadingtoaheartfullofgratitude.（家庭的紐帶能夠克服任何嫉妒與怨恨，讓內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)感激。）Inthejourneyoflife,it'sthelovefromfamilythatlightsupthedarkestpath.（在人生旅途中，是家人的愛(ài)照亮最黑暗的道路。）寫(xiě)作示范一：

IcamedownandsawNormawearinganewcoat.Itwasabeautifulnavybluecoatwithafauxfurcollarthatlookedsowarmandstylish.Thelengthwasperfect,reachingjustbelowherknees,andthecutflatteredherfigure.Normawasbeamingwithprideasshetwirledaroundtoshowitoff.Shesaidshehadbeensavingupforawhileandfinallydecidedtotreatherself.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelapangofjealousy,thinkingthatshecouldaffordanewcoatwhileIwasstuckwithmyold,illfittingone.ButIforcedasmileandcongratulatedher.

ItooktheboxfromNormaandopenedit.Tomyutterastonishment,insidewasabrandnewwintercoat,exactlythekindIhadbeenlongingfor.ItwasalightgraycolorwithatrendyAlineshapeandsoft,thickfabric.Tearswelledupinmyeyesinstantly.IlookedatNorma,whowassmilingtenderlyatme."Youdeserveit,littlesister,"shesaid.IthrewmyarmsaroundherandthenhuggedMothertightly.Thatnight,aswestoodthereinthelivingroomontheeveofThanksgiving,Irealizedthatfamilylovewasmorepreciousthananynewcoat.寫(xiě)作示范二：

IcamedownandsawNormawearinganewcoat.Thecoatwasadeepburgundy,anditseemedtoglowinthelight.Thebuttonswerelargeandshiny,andthestitchingwasfine.Norma'sfacewaslitupwithhappinessasshemodeledit.Ifeltatwingeofenvy,butItriedtohideit.Motherwasalsosmiling,clearlyproudofNorma'spurchase.IwonderedhowNormacouldaffordsuchanicecoatwhileIwasstillstuckwithmyshabbyone.

ItooktheboxfromNormaandopenedit.There,nestledintissuepaper,wasagorgeouswintercoat.Itwasacreamywhite,withahoodlinedwithplushfur.Myheartskippedabeat.Iwasoverewithemotion.Normaexplainedthatshehadbeenworkingextrahoursjusttobuythisforme.IwassotouchedthatIburstintotears.Mothercameoverandjoinedourembrace.Atthatmoment,Iunderstoodthatinafamily,wemayhaveourdifferencesandmomentsofenvy,butultimately,loveandsacrificeprevail.ItwasaThanksgivingEveIwouldneverforget,filledwiththewarmthoffamilyloveratherthanjustthewarmthofanewcoat.參考答案IcamedownandsawNormawearinganewcoat.Incredibly,itwastheverycoatthatIhadbeendreamingof,thefashionableshortAlinestyle.Normaturnedrou