2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+高中生斯蒂芬妮的生死救援時刻+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)高中生斯蒂芬妮的生死救援時刻1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Stephanie,afreshmanatEastPeoriaHighSchool,hadjustfinishedherseconddayofclasses,filledwithexcitement.Eagertoenjoythewarmafternoon,shedecidedtotakeherbicycleoutforaride.Thewindrushedpasther,refreshingherspiritasshespeddownahill.However,inacrueltwistoffate,disasterstruck.Shesuddenlylostcontrolofherbike.Theworldaroundherseemedtoslowdownasshefeltthebikeslamintotheground.Inahorrifyingmoment,sherealizedthatoneofthebike’shandlegrips（車把）wasmissing,whichleftasharp,exposedmetalpipethatpiercedherrightleg,severedherartery（動脈）andfloodedherbodywithintensepain.4續(xù)寫原文Panicsetinasshelayontheground,hermindracing.Aseveredarterycancauserapidbloodloss,leadingtounconsciousnessanddeathwithinminutes.Stephaniefeltherselfslippingaway,believingshewouldn’tsurvive.Butinthemidstofheranguish,helpwasontheway.Kupris,whohadbeenworkingonawoodworkingprojectnearby,heardthechaos,droppedhistoolsandrushedoutside.Hisheartracedashedashedalongablock,drivenbyadesperatedesiretoassist.Followingatrailofbloodthatpaintedadistinctcontrastagainstthepavement,hefeltasurgeoffearandconcern.Whenhefinallyreachedthescene,thesightthatcameintoviewwasterriblyhorrible.TherelayStephanieontheground,herfacepaleandherbodytwistedinpain,severelyinjured.5續(xù)寫原文“Thewholethinglookedimpossible,couldn’tbereal,”Kuprisrecalledlater,stillshakingwithfright.Hesawaseverewoundonherupperleg.Bloodwaspouringoutofthecut.Hecalledherbuttherewasstillnoresponse.Panicsurgedthroughhimasherealizedheneededtoactquickly—everysecondcounted.6段首句Paragraph1：“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.Paragraph2：Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了布東皮奧里亞高中新生斯蒂芬妮在騎車下坡時，因車把缺失致動脈被割破，大量失血倒地瀕死。正在附近做木工活的庫普里斯聽到聲響趕來，面對慘狀，他強壓內(nèi)心恐慌，用所學(xué)急救知識用襯衫扎緊傷口上方止血，并撥打911。幸運的是，斯蒂芬妮蘇醒過來，庫普里斯安慰她直到救護車到來。最終，斯蒂芬妮被送往醫(yī)院，庫普里斯因其英勇行為成為社區(qū)英雄，得到斯蒂芬妮家人的感謝。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.“我該怎么辦？”在庫普里斯腦海中回響。他努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來，回憶起曾學(xué)過的急救知識。他迅速脫下自己的襯衫，緊緊地扎在斯蒂芬妮腿上傷口的上方，試圖減緩出血速度。接著，他掏出手機，手指顫抖著撥打911，大聲向接線員說明情況和所在位置，聲音因緊張而有些沙啞。在等待救護車的過程中，他不停地和昏迷的斯蒂芬妮說話，盡管內(nèi)心充滿恐懼，但仍努力讓自己的聲音保持鎮(zhèn)定，希望能給予她一些精神上的支撐。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.幸運的是，斯蒂芬妮睜開了眼睛。她眼神迷茫，臉上滿是痛苦的神情。庫普里斯見狀，心中既欣喜又擔(dān)憂，他輕聲安慰斯蒂芬妮，告訴她救援馬上就到，讓她不要害怕。這時，遠(yuǎn)處傳來救護車的鳴笛聲，庫普里斯急忙起身揮手示意。當(dāng)醫(yī)護人員將斯蒂芬妮抬上擔(dān)架時，他才松了一口氣，癱坐在地上，回想起剛才驚心動魄的一幕，心中五味雜陳。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.Withgreateffort,hemanagedtocalmhimselfdown,recallingthefirstaidknowledgehehadacquiredbefore.Swiftly,heremovedhisshirtandtightlybounditabovethewoundonStephanie’sleg,attemptingtoslowdownthebleeding.Then,takingouthisphone,hedialed911withtremblingfingers,shoutingthesituationandlocationtotheoperator,hisvoicehoarseduetonervousness.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,hekepttalkingtotheunconsciousStephanie,strivingtomaintainacalmtonedespitehisinnerfear,hopingtoofferhersomespiritualsupport.14范文呈現(xiàn)Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.Shelookeddisorientedandwasingreatpain.Uponseeingthis,Kuprisfeltamixtureofjoyandworry.Hesoftlycomfortedher,assuringherthathelpwasonthewayandthatsheshouldnotbeafraid.Atthatmoment,thesirenoftheambulancewasheardinthedistance.Kuprisquicklystoodupandwavedtosignalitsarrival.WhentheparamedicscarriedStephanieontothestretcher,hefinallyletoutasighofreliefandslumpedtotheground,hismindfilledwithmixedemotionsasherecalledthethrillingscenejustnow.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Inthefaceofsuchadiresituation,“WhatshouldIdo?”incessantlyreverberatedwithinKupris’smind.Witheveryounceofhiswillpower,hemanagedtosteadyhisnervesandsummonedthefirstaidknowledgethathadbeentuckedawayinhismemory.Withoutamoment’shesitation,heyankedoffhisshirtanddeftlytieditjustabovetheghastlywoundonStephanie’sleg,thecrimsonbloodseeminglydefyinghiseffortstostemitsflow.Meanwhile,histremblinghandsfumbledforhisphoneandhedialed911,shoutingthedetailsoftheemergencyandtheirpreciselocation,hisvoicecrackingunderthestrainofanxiety.Asheawaitedtheambulance,hemurmuredwordsofcomforttotheunconsciousStephanie,hisvoicequiveringbutresolute,asifbysheerforceofwillhecouldkeephertetheredtolife.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Fortunately,Stephanie’seyelidsflutteredopen.Hergazewasunfocusedandherfacecontortedinagony.Kupris,hisheartleapingwithaglimmerofhope,yetstillweigheddownbyconcern,murmuredsoothingwordstoher,assuringherthatrescuewasimminentandthatshewasnotalone.Justthen,theshrillsirenoftheapproachingambulancepiercedtheair.Kuprissprangtohisfeetandfranticallywavedtoguideitin.AstheparamedicscarefullyloadedStephanieontothestretcher,hesankto