江蘇省揚(yáng)州市江都區(qū)2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語(yǔ)試題英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫貧寒之家的圣誕講義密謀愛(ài)的禮物

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AsChristmasdecorationsappearedintown,ourparentscalledmytwoyoungerbrothersandmetogether.Atfirst,Ithoughtsomeonehaddied,becauseIhadneverseenmyparentslooksosad.MybrothersandIstoodwaitingfortheawfulnews.Momhuggedmeasshemurmured,“Christmasisgoingtobedifferentthisyear.Wewon'tbehavingatreeorpresents.Wecanbarelyaffordfood.”Dad,restingonthecouch,beckoned(招手示意)theboysintohisarms.“ThingswillchangewhenIgetbacktowork.”Myfamilywaspoorerthandirt.Dad,theonlybreadearnerinourfamily,workedinacoalmine.However,soonafterreturningtoworkattheendofalongstrike,Dadwashurtinarockfallthatbrokebonesinhisfoot.Lyingonthecouchwiththeswollenfoothighonpillows,hedidn'ttalkorsmilemuch.Therewaslittletosmileabout.Nowork,noine.Atnineyearsold,Imotheredmyyoungerbrothers:Rodney,agedsix,andStevie,three.Wesharedasmallbedroom.Thatnight,afterourparents’announcement,wetalked.Rodneybegan.“Em,didyouseehowsadMommyandDaddylooked?IthoughtMommywasgonnacry.“Me,too.Daddy'sfoot’s…thisbig”whisperedStevie,holdingouthisarms.“Yeah..We'reinhardtimes,"Isaid.“ItmakesMommyandDaddysad."“Butwedon'thavetobesad,"Iadded,hopingtobrightenthemood.“Sincetherearestillseveralweekstogo,maybewecandosomethingtocheerthemup,"Isaidwithoverdoneenthusiasm.Theboysproposed,“Wecantakethemoneyfromourpiggybank...earnsomemore..andsurprisethemwithgifts!"“Icanrunerrands(跑腿)forAuntEmandneighborstoearnmoney,"Ioffered.“Yeah,"Rodneyadded,“IandSteviecanreturnbottlesandsavethedepositmoney...insteadofbuyingcandy!"HepushedSteviegentlywithhiselbow.“Yeah!”Stevieclutchedhishandstogether.Wehadaplan!Untiltheynoddedoff,Icoachedmylittlebrothers(especiallyStevie)inwaystoguardoursecret.“Don'ttalkaboutitduringtheday."注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意圣誕節(jié)將至，父母卻告知“我”和兩個(gè)弟弟今年沒(méi)錢買圣誕樹(shù)和禮物，連食物都快負(fù)擔(dān)不起，因?yàn)榧依镂ㄒ粧赍X的爸爸在煤礦工作時(shí)受傷，沒(méi)了收入，家庭陷入困境?！拔摇弊鳛?歲的姐姐安慰弟弟們，隨后大家一起想出通過(guò)存錢、跑腿、撿瓶子賣錢等方式攢錢給父母買禮物的計(jì)劃，還約定要保守秘密，準(zhǔn)備悄悄執(zhí)行這個(gè)讓父母開(kāi)心起來(lái)的重要任務(wù)。5處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：父母告知今年圣誕節(jié)的艱難處境，一家人都很難過(guò)。回應(yīng)：孩子們積極想辦法改變現(xiàn)狀，在續(xù)寫中通過(guò)努力準(zhǔn)備禮物，讓父母的心情從悲傷轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜與感動(dòng)，實(shí)現(xiàn)情緒上的轉(zhuǎn)變。伏筆：爸爸受傷沒(méi)了工作，家里沒(méi)收入。回應(yīng)：正因如此才有了孩子們?yōu)楦淖兗彝シ諊€錢的情節(jié)，后續(xù)他們用自己辛苦攢的錢買禮物，讓家庭重新有了溫馨快樂(lè)的感覺(jué)。伏筆：孩子們商量好各自掙錢的辦法，如“我”跑腿、弟弟們撿瓶子存錢等?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫中可以體現(xiàn)出孩子們通過(guò)這些方式一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)積攢資金，最終有能力購(gòu)買禮物，將計(jì)劃付諸實(shí)踐。伏筆：“我”叮囑弟弟們要保守秘密。回應(yīng)：在后續(xù)情節(jié)里，秘密一直沒(méi)被泄露，直到圣誕節(jié)當(dāng)天送出禮物，給父母帶來(lái)十足的驚喜，使情節(jié)更具戲劇性和溫馨感。伏筆：大家懷著期待又緊張的心情制定了計(jì)劃?；貞?yīng)：后續(xù)就圍繞著計(jì)劃的執(zhí)行以及最終成功給父母送禮物展開(kāi)，展現(xiàn)孩子們努力的過(guò)程和父母收獲驚喜的溫馨畫面。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：寫孩子們醒來(lái)后就開(kāi)始按計(jì)劃行動(dòng)，“我”去鄰居家?guī)兔ε芡?，兩個(gè)弟弟到處收集瓶子換錢，過(guò)程雖辛苦但大家都充滿干勁，為給父母準(zhǔn)備禮物默默努力，每天都期待著能攢夠錢。第二段：描述圣誕節(jié)早上，孩子們把用辛苦攢的錢買的禮物送給父母，父母先是驚訝，隨后十分感動(dòng)，一家人緊緊相擁，沉浸在幸福溫暖之中，這個(gè)特別的圣誕節(jié)讓大家感受到了濃濃的親情和愛(ài)的力量。情感線從最初得知圣誕節(jié)艱難時(shí)的悲傷、擔(dān)憂，到制定計(jì)劃后的期待、充滿干勁，再到送禮物時(shí)父母的驚訝以及一家人收獲的感動(dòng)、幸福，整體情感是從低落向溫暖、喜悅轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線家庭因爸爸受傷面臨拮據(jù)的圣誕節(jié)，孩子們制定計(jì)劃掙錢，努力執(zhí)行后在圣誕節(jié)送出禮物，讓家庭重歸溫馨。主旨升華句Loveinafamilycanturnhardshipintoaheartwarmingcelebration.（家庭中的愛(ài)能將艱難困苦變?yōu)橐粓?chǎng)暖心的慶祝。）Intoughtimes,theunitedeffortsofafamilycancreatethemostpreciousgiftsofall.（在艱難時(shí)刻，一個(gè)家庭齊心協(xié)力能創(chuàng)造出最珍貴的禮物。）Thepoweroffamilyloveshinesbrightestwhenfacingdifficulties.（面對(duì)困難時(shí)，家庭之愛(ài)的力量最為閃耀。）Afamily'sbondisstrengthenedbythesharedeffortstobringjoyinhardtimes.（在艱難時(shí)期為帶來(lái)歡樂(lè)而共同努力會(huì)使家庭紐帶更加牢固。）Eveninpoverty,thelovewithinafamilycanmakeChristmastrulymagical.（即便身處貧困之中，家庭內(nèi)部的愛(ài)也能讓圣誕節(jié)變得無(wú)比神奇。）寫作示范一Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Iimmediatelywenttotheneighbors’housestoaskiftheyneededanyerrandsdone.RodneyandSteviescouredtheneighborhoodalleysforemptybottles.Everylittlebitofmoneyweearnedwascarefullysaved.Despitethetiredness,ourheartswerefullofexcitement,knowingthatoureffortswouldbringsmilestoMommyandDaddy'sfaces.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.Theystaredatusinastonishmentatfirst,thentheireyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Theyhuggedustightly,sayinghowproudtheywereofus.Inthatmoment,ourlittlelivingroomwasfilledwithloveandhappiness,makingthisaChristmaswewouldneverforget.寫作示范二Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!IstartedrunningerrandsforAuntEm,carryinggroceriesanddoingsmallchores.RodneyandSteviewerebusycollectingbottlesfromeverycornertheycouldfind.Daybyday,wewatchedoursavingsgrow.Thoughitwastoughworkforouryoungselves,wedidn'tplain,ourmindsfixedonthebigsurpriseforourparents.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.MommycoveredhermouthinsurprisewhileDaddy'seyeswidened.Thentheybothbrokeintobigsmilesandpulledusclose.Theirhugswerewarmandfulloflove.ThisChristmasbecamespecialnotbecauseoffancygiftsbutbecauseoftheloveandunityweshowedasafamilyinthefaceofhardship.【答案】參考范文Weawokeinthemorning，transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Thefollowingweekssawmedashinghomefromschooleachdaydeterminedtoearnapenny.Iwasusuallygreetedbysecretwinksandgrinsonewithamissingtooth,andtheotherwithtiny,straightteethbothassuringmeoursecretwassafe.AfewdaysbeforeChristmas,wegleefullywentshopping.WeboughtMomanewapron,andforDad,apairofleatherslippers.ThenightofChristmasEveseemedendl