Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle -【同步寫(xiě)作課】高二英語(yǔ)單元寫(xiě)作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版2019選擇性必修第三冊(cè)）

選擇性必修第三冊(cè)Unit2單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練Alettertotheeditor單元寫(xiě)作早知道寫(xiě)作任務(wù)本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇建議信。建議信應(yīng)用非常廣泛，也是英語(yǔ)高考作文?？嫉捏w裁。話題一般要求給對(duì)方的各種煩惱以建議，如壓力、失敗、人際關(guān)系緊張等。或給項(xiàng)目策劃如欄目?jī)?yōu)化等提出內(nèi)容建議。亦或給對(duì)方的計(jì)劃或興趣提出方法建議，等等。常用表達(dá)1.It’shelpful/important/necessaryto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…4.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…5.IfIwereyou,Iwould…6.Firstofall.Ithinkitwouldbebetterif….7.Itwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth

/Italsohelpstodosth單元話題真題展示高考鏈接建議信2023年新高考1卷建議信的寫(xiě)作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。Usewhatyouhavelearnedtowritealetterofadvice.

假定你是李華，你校外教要舉辦口語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班，讓練習(xí)口語(yǔ)的所有的學(xué)生兩人一組練習(xí)，隨機(jī)挑選兩個(gè)人分成一組練習(xí)，你對(duì)此有意見(jiàn)，說(shuō)說(shuō)原因和提建議。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。建議信是就某事向收信人提出自己的建議或給出忠告，以幫助對(duì)方解決相關(guān)問(wèn)題的信件。建議信是對(duì)收信人就某一問(wèn)題提出看法、建議或忠告。建議信不同于投訴信，所以寫(xiě)信人一定要注意禮貌當(dāng)先。建議信一般包括以下內(nèi)容:首先說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的，其次，在肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上提出自己的建議或看法(否則別人以為你在投訴，而不是在提建議)，最后表達(dá)希望采納建議。寫(xiě)作“三步走”:1.自我介紹、說(shuō)明目的2.委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施，或提出忠告3.禮貌地總結(jié)或期盼回復(fù)【文章結(jié)構(gòu)】第一段：?jiǎn)栴}陳述：根據(jù)信息點(diǎn)確定舉行表達(dá)。第二段：提出建議：使用多種句型，避免單一句型表達(dá)。第三段：愿望或期望：寫(xiě)信的結(jié)尾套句。說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的I'msorryyouhavetroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.我很遺憾你在……（方面）遇到了困難，我正在寫(xiě)信是想和你分享一些建議。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout/on…andIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.你向我征求關(guān)于……的意見(jiàn)，我將試著給你提供建議。Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson...我正在寫(xiě)信是想表達(dá)我對(duì)……的看法。提出建議和改進(jìn)措施并給予忠告Isuggest/recommend/thinkthatyoushould…我建議/推薦/認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該……Youmay/might/canconsiderdoing...你可以考慮做……Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideato…我認(rèn)為……將是個(gè)好主意。Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto...在我看來(lái)，將是明智的選擇。AsfarasIamconcerned,you’dbetter...就我而言，你最好...Whynot...?/Whydon'tyou...?為什么不？/你為什么不？希望建議被采納并期待回復(fù)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals(suggestions/tips)practical/useful/helpful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些提議（建議/提示）實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouinmoredetail.我愿意與你更詳細(xì)地討論這個(gè)問(wèn)題。Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.如果您能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激。Iwillbegladifyouwillconsidermyadvice.如果你能考慮我的建議，我會(huì)很高興的。Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我希望你能考慮我的建議?！拘≡嚺５丁緿earFriends,

OnbehalfoftheStudents’Union,Iamwritingtotakethisopportunitytoextendmyheartfeltwelcometoalltheoverseasstudentstostudyatouruniversity.

Itismygreatpleasuretomakeseveralpracticalsuggestionstoyou.Tobeginwith,lifeatouruniversitymaynotberelaxing.Youshouldattendtheclasseverydayanddoyourafter-schoolassignmentsaccordingly.EachofyoushouldstillhelponeChinesestudentwithhisorherEnglishstudy.Inspiteofallthesechallenges,youcanstillenjoyyourlifehere.Variousactivitieslikesocialgatheringsanddancesprovideampleopportunitiestomakefriends.

Ireallyhopeyouwillenjoyyourstudyandlifehere.Shouldyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleaseletmeknow.Yourssincerely,LiMingBadhabits(不良習(xí)慣)1.Becomeinvolvedintobacco抽煙上癮2.Alcoholabuse酗酒3.Physicalandmentalhealthproblems身心健康問(wèn)題4.Relyonunhealthysnacks依賴(lài)不健康的零食5.Skipbreakfast不吃早餐6.Sleeptoomuch睡得過(guò)多 7.Gameaddict游戲成癮8.TVaddict電視成癮9.Internetaddict網(wǎng)癮10.Stayuptoolate熬夜11.Useaphonetoomuch沉迷手機(jī)12.Feelsleepyanddizzy昏昏欲睡頭暈?zāi)X脹13.Gettheflueasily易患感冒14.Experiencemanytoothaches經(jīng)常牙疼15.Feelstressedout緊張焦慮16.Relaxbyplayingcomputergames靠玩電腦游戲放松17.Cigarettesmoking抽煙18.Feelwornout精疲力竭19.Lungsurgery肺部手術(shù)20.Formbadhabits養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣Goodhabits(良好習(xí)慣)1.Stopbuyingsugarydrinks不買(mǎi)含糖飲料2.Nutritionspecialist營(yíng)養(yǎng)專(zhuān)家3.Fitnessconsultant健康顧問(wèn)4.Abalanceddietmenu一份平衡膳食菜譜5.Eatnothingwithsugar不吃含糖食物6.Stimulatemotivation激發(fā)動(dòng)力7.Jumpontheskateboard玩滑板8.Feelmoredynamic感到更精力充沛9.Getrefreshed精神煥發(fā)10.Bloodvessels血管Waystobreakbadhabits1.Growup長(zhǎng)大2.Becomeindependent獨(dú)立3.Makeowndecisions自己作決定(改變壞習(xí)慣的方法)4.Recognizeadhabits認(rèn)識(shí)壞習(xí)慣5.Makeappropriatechanges作適當(dāng)改變6.Makeachoice作選擇7.Accordingtomodernpsychology根據(jù)現(xiàn)代心理8.Facilitateapositivechange促進(jìn)積極的改變9.Examineourbadhabitcycles檢視我們的壞習(xí)慣10.Replaceanegativeroutinewithsomethingmorepositive用更積極的路徑代替不積極的11.Feelrelaxed感到放松12.Becomepessimistic變得悲觀13.Giveup放棄14.Overaperiodoftime過(guò)了一段時(shí)間15.Toreachthegoalofchange為了達(dá)成改變這一目標(biāo)16.Showsomediscipline展現(xiàn)一些原則17.Takemanysmallsteps采取許多小步驟18.Findtherightbalance找到恰當(dāng)?shù)钠胶釯mpacts(習(xí)慣的影響)1.Leadtoseriousaddictions導(dǎo)致嚴(yán)重上癮2.Feelasenseofreward獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)感3.Itiseasytomakeexcusesandgiveup容易找借口并放棄4.Ensurewehaveahappyandhealthylife確保我們擁有快樂(lè)而健康的生活5.Enjoyexercising享受鍛煉6.Feelmuchmoreenergetic感覺(jué)精力充沛得多Positiveaspects(積極的方面)1.Inbothbodyandmind身心2.Sleepsoundly酣眠3.Enhancethequalityofmylife提高我的生活質(zhì)量4.Managestresssuccessfully成功地管理壓力 5.Takeupanewhobby培養(yǎng)一個(gè)新的愛(ài)好6.Absorbstresseffectively有效地吸收壓力7.Takeyourmindoffeverything摒棄一切雜念8.Increaseefficiencyofheartandlungs增加心肺工作效率假如你是李華,你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Alice的生活方式不太健康。你想給她提些建議。

請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給寫(xiě)封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

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用水果代替零食；

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用水代替可樂(lè)；

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減少使用電子產(chǎn)品的時(shí)間；?

多運(yùn)動(dòng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。DearAlice,Hopeeverythinggoeswellwithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHuaDearAlice,Hopeeverythinggoeswellwithyou.Doyoustillstayupverylateeverynight?I’mwritingtosharemyideasonhowyoucanliveahealthylife.Firstofall,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoeatmorefruitsinsteadofsnakes.Also,youneedtogetrideofthehabitofdrinkingcolaonly.Whynotdrinkmorewater?Ifyouspendlesstimeonyoursmartphone,youcanhavemoretimetogettogetherwithfriends.What’smore,don’tyouthinkdoingsportsoftenmakeyoulookwell-builtandfeelenergeticatthesametime?Allinall,ahealthylifestylemakesushealthy,wealthyandwiseinthefuture.Hopefullyyoucanfollowmyadviceandmakeachangefromnowon.Yourssincerely,LiHua

regularexercise1.科學(xué)研究表明歡笑所產(chǎn)生的化學(xué)物質(zhì)可以讓人感覺(jué)更好。scientificstudiesshowthatlaughterproduceschemicalsmakepeoplefeelbetter.2.Mostpeopleassumethatregularexercisedoeswondersforthebodyandmind.大部分人認(rèn)為有規(guī)律地鍛煉身體對(duì)身心健康有奇跡般的效果。3.鍛煉能幫助你減少壓力以及克服消極情緒。Workingoutcanhelpyoureducestressandgetovernegativefeelings.healthybenefits1.它帶來(lái)的健康方面的好處到底是什么呢?Whatexactlyareitshealthybenefits?2.Tobeginwith,physicalactivitiesincreasestheefficiencyofyourheartandlungs.首先，身體鍛煉會(huì)增加心肺的工作效率。3.Somestudiesevenshowthatexerciseimprovescertainbrainfunctions,meaningyoucouldactuallyexerciseyourwaytobetterperformanceatschool.一些研究甚至表明鍛煉可以可以提高一定的大腦功能，意味著你真的可以鍛煉從而改善學(xué)業(yè)。beinghappier1.觀看她的談話可以發(fā)現(xiàn)更多的令人驚訝的變化，都是我們鍛煉時(shí)大腦里產(chǎn)生的。Watchhertalkandfindoutmoreabouttheamazingchangesthatoccurinourbrainwhenweexercise.2.為了在鍛煉后幫助你的肌肉放松并修復(fù)，你需要吃富含蛋白質(zhì)的食物，比如:魚(yú)、蛋和奶制品。Tohelpyourmusclesrecoverandrepairthemselvesafterexercise,youneedeatfoodrichinprotein,suchasfish,eggsandmilkproducts.3.我晚上睡眠更好了，而且白天也更精力充沛。我更快樂(lè)也更自信了。Isleepbetteratnight,andI'mmoreenergeticduringtheday.Ifeelhappierandmoreconfident.假定你是李華，你所喜愛(ài)的GlobalMirror周報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見(jiàn)．請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫(xiě)封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：1．說(shuō)明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者

2．說(shuō)明該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1)兼顧國(guó)內(nèi)外新聞

2)介紹名人成功故事

3．提出建議：

刊登指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的文章注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)己為你寫(xiě)好；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.IlikeitsomuchthatIhardlymissanycopy.TherearemanyadvantagesofGlobalMirror.Firstly,GlobalMirror

coversbothnationalandinternationalnews.Bysimplyturningthepages,Icanknowallimportantthingsthathavehappenedbothhomeandabroad.Besides,thesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome,whichhelpmelearnalotfromthem.Inaword,thankstoGlobalMirror,wearewell-informedandkeepupwiththechangingworld.Asayoungstudent,IwishthatIcanbeamasterofEnglishlanguage.Therefore,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorprovidearticlesaboutEnglishlearningforus.Finally,IhopethatGlobalMirror

willbecomemoreandmorepopular.Thankyouforyourtime!Sincerelyyours,LiHua【鏈接高考—經(jīng)典誦讀】（2023年新高考1卷）假定你是李華，你校外教要舉辦口語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班，讓練習(xí)口語(yǔ)的所有的學(xué)生兩人一組練習(xí)，隨機(jī)挑選兩個(gè)人分成一組練習(xí)，你對(duì)此有意見(jiàn)，說(shuō)說(shuō)原因和提建議。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞1】Dearforeignteacher,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Regardingthegroupingmethodfortheoraltrainingcourse,Iwouldliketoraisesomeconcernsandsuggestions.Whileitistruethatrandomlymixingupstudentscanencouragemorecommunicationandinteraction,theremayalsobesomepotentialissuestoconsider.Firstly,randomgroupingcanresultinstudentswithvastlydifferentspeakingabilitiesbeingpairedtogether.Thismaymakesomestudentswithstrongercommunicationskillsfeelinhibited,whilethosewithweakerspeakingskillsmayfeeloverwhelmed.Additionally,somestudentsmayfeeluneasyanduncomfortablehavingtoworkwithunfamiliarclassmates.Therefore,Isuggestthatamorethoughtfulgroupingmethodbeadopted,suchasgroupingstudentsaccordingtotheirexamgrades,verbalperformance,orinterests.ThiswouldalloweachstudenttopracticetheirspokenEnglishwithpeerswhoareofasimilarproficiencylevel,andoneswithsimilarinterests,whichwouldservetoenhancestudentmotivationandconfidence.Thisapproachalsoensuresthatstudentswithvaryingabilitieshaveopportunitiestodeveloptheirlanguageskills.Ihopethatmysuggestionswillbeconsidered.Thankyouforyourattention.Sincerely,LiHua【佳作欣賞2】Dearesteemedforeigninstructor,MynameisLiHua,oneofyouresteemedstudents.Iwritetoexpressmyopinionconcerningthegroupingstrategyproposedbyyoufortheoraltrainingcourse.Whileitmaybetruethatrandompairingofstudentscanfostergreaterinteractionandcommunication,therearepotentialdrawbackstoconsider.Cautionmustbeexercisedinrandomlygroupingstudents,particularlyinascenariowheretheircommunicationabilitiesvastlydiffer.Itmayleadtoasituationwherehigh-levelcommunicatorsfeelviolatedandinhibited,whilethoselackingareboggeddownbytheoverwhelmingchallengesoftheclass.Inaddition,somestudentsmayfeeluneasyworkingwithunfamiliarclassmates.Withthisinmind,Iproposethatathoughtfulgroupingstrategybeadopted,albeitgroupingstudentsaccordingtotheirexamscores,verbalproficiencyorindividualinterests.This,inturn,ensuresthateverystudentcanpracticespeakingEnglishwithlike-mindedpeers,therebyboostingtheirmotivationandconfidence.Moreimportantly,itguaranteesthatstudentswithvaryingcommun