高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+雪山孤影中的別樣圣誕

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)雪山孤影中的別樣圣誕1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Decemberstrode(闊步走)intothemountainsofColorado,shootingsnowflakesandblowingthemintoathickblanketofwhite.AsChristmasapproached,thefarmerstherecloseddownmostwoodenhousesforaholidaycheer.Notallwereclosed,however.Therewasstillworktobedone,andsomeonehadtostay.ThatsomeonewasSlimCarter.OldJake,anotherfarmerthere,hadofferedtokeephimcompany,butSlimshookhishead.“Afterall,ayoungmanlikemehasgotplentyofChristmasesahead,”Slimjoked.BeforeJakeofferedtostayagain,Slimhurriedon.“I’lljusthaveaprivateChristmasthisyear,andthat’sthewayIwantit.”Sohewasleftaloneatthehouse.Alone,withhishorseinthefarmandthewolvesroaringintheforestnearby.4續(xù)寫原文Truthwas,SlimhaddecidednottocelebrateChristmasatall.Itwasn’tthathedidn’tlikeChristmas.Infact,hisChristmasmemoriesweregoodones.Hismotherwouldfilltheirhousewiththelightofcandlesandthesmellofcandy.HisfatherwouldmaketheirChristmastreehuntanall-day,men-onlyaffair.Slimsmiledasherememberedsittingonthebroadbackoftheirhorsewiththefreshlycuttreealongbehind.Backhome,theywouldcoverthetreewithpapersnowflakesandhomemadedecorationsandsingalltheChristmassongstheyknew.Andthat’sthewayhelikedit.Thosewerethememorieshepulledoutonnightswhenhewasworkingalone.Suchmemorieswarmedhiminside,evenifhisoutsideswereachingwithcold.5續(xù)寫原文ThiswasSlim’sfirstyearawayfromhome.“Christmasisnothingifnotspentwithfamily,”Slimdeclaredtotheemptyhouse.Thatwastherealreasonhe’dsentJakeaway.HefiguredhewouldhandleChristmasbetterifhejustpretendeditwasanordinarywinterworkday.ButonChristmasEve,asSlimheadedbackwithsnowbeneathhisfeetandstarsoverhead,hisheadhunglow.ItwasChristmas,evenwithoutthetreeandthegifts.Christmas,andhewasallalone.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenheremembereddecoratingthetreewithhisfamilyagain.Paragraph2：WhilesingingtohisdecoratedChristmastree,Slimheardaknockonthedoor.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了Slim獨自在科羅拉多山區(qū)過圣誕，盡管這里白雪皚皚、寒風(fēng)呼嘯，但他內(nèi)心仍回憶著過往和家人共度圣誕的溫馨畫面。盡管他一開始拒絕了老杰克的陪伴，打算獨自熬過這個節(jié)日，但在圣誕夜，當(dāng)他回憶起和家人裝飾圣誕樹的情景時，孤獨感愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈。就在此時，老杰克帶著禮物前來，兩人圍坐在火爐邊分享故事，讓這個原本孤寂的圣誕夜充滿了溫暖與情誼，Slim也體會到了不一樣的節(jié)日歡樂。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thenheremembereddecoratingthetreewithhisfamilyagain.Slim沉浸在回憶中，愈發(fā)覺得孤單。他想起往昔與家人溫馨的畫面，心中滿是思念。此時，外面寒風(fēng)呼嘯，屋內(nèi)寂靜清冷，他的心情愈發(fā)沉重，不禁開始懷疑自己獨自過節(jié)的決定是否正確，思念之情也愈發(fā)濃烈。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WhilesingingtohisdecoratedChristmastree,Slimheardaknockonthedoor.Slim滿心疑惑地打開門，看到老杰克站在門口，身上落滿雪花，笑容溫暖。他又驚又喜，連忙將老杰克迎進(jìn)屋內(nèi)。爐火旁，老杰克遞上禮物，兩人愉快地交談起來，分享著各自的故事。屋內(nèi)的氣氛逐漸變得歡快，笑聲和溫暖驅(qū)散了之前的孤獨，這個圣誕夜因這份意外的情誼而變得格外美好。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Slimwassinkingdeeperintotheoceanofmemories,feelinglonelierthanever.ThescenesofpasthappyChristmasdayswithhisfamilyflashedbeforehiseyes,fillinghisheartwithlonging.Outside,thewindwashowlingbitterly,whileinside,thesilenceandcoldnessseemedtomagnifyhissolitude.DoubtscreptintohismindabouthischoiceofspendingChristmasalone,andthesenseofmissinghisfamilygrewstrongerandstronger.14范文呈現(xiàn)Fullofcuriosityandsurprise,Slimopenedthedoor.StandingtherewasOldJake,coveredwithsnowflakes,withawarmsmileonhisface.Overwhelmedwithjoyandgratitude,Slimquicklywelcomedhimin.Bythefireplace,OldJakehandedoverthegift,andtheybeganchattingmerrily,sharingtheiruniquestories.Gradually,theatmosphereintheroombecamelivelyandwarm,withlaughterandfriendshipdrivingawaythepreviousloneliness.ThisChristmasEveturnedouttobeextraordinarilybeautifulbecauseofthisunexpectedbond.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ItwasonChristmasEvethatSlim,drownedintheseaofmemories,feltanoverwhelmingsenseoflonelinesscreepinguponhim.TheheartwarmingscenesofcelebratingChristmaswithhisbelovedfamilyinthepastwereplayingvividlyinhismind,whichwasnowfilledwithintenselonging.Outside,thewindwaswailingasiflamentinghissolitude,andthechillysilencewithinthewoodenhouseonlyservedtodeepenhisisolation.Itwasatthismomentthathestartedtoquestionthewisdomofhisdecisiontospendthisspecialoccasionalone,withthehomesicknessgnawingathisheart.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,aknockonthedoorjoltedSlimoutofhismelancholyreverie.Withamixtureofanticipationandbewilderment,heopenedthedoor.Loandbehold,therestoodOldJake,whosefigurewasdustedwithsnowflakeslikeamessengerofwarmth.Overcomewithasurgeofdelightandgratitude,Slimusheredhiminwithouthesitation.Bythedancingflamesofthefireplace,OldJakepresentedacarefullywrappedgift,andthenensuedadelightfulconversationwheretheyexchangedtheirtalesofyore.Littlebylittle,theroomwassuffusedwithmerrimentandcamaraderie,theonce-predominantlonelinessbeingcompletelydispelledbythemagicoffriendship.Truly,t