作文22 山東卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀+素材積累

作文22山東卷2021年山東中考英語書面表達(dá)為慶祝中國共產(chǎn)黨建黨100周年，你校將于下周舉辦藝術(shù)節(jié)，活動豐富多彩。假設(shè)你是李華，負(fù)責(zé)組織英語演講比賽，請你給外教Smith寫封郵件，邀請他擔(dān)任演講比賽的評委（judge），主要內(nèi)容包括：1.藝術(shù)節(jié)的基本情況和意義；2.演講比賽的時間、地點(diǎn)；3.表達(dá)邀請的愿望。要求：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語句通順，內(nèi)容連貫；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實(shí)姓名和校名。DearMr.Smith,Tocelebratethe100-yearanniversaryoftheCommunistPartyofChina,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHuaDearMr.Smith,Tocelebratethe100-yearanniversaryoftheCommunistPartyofChina,ourschoolistoholdanactivity.Knowingthatyou’reinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutobeoneofthejudgesinthespeechcontest.Asplanned,wearegoingtoholdanartfestival.WewillsingredsongsandpayavisittoXiaoping’sformerresidencetoshowourloveforthePartyandourmotherland.Wewillalsoholdaspeechcontest.Itwillbeheldinourschoolhallat10o’clockthisSaturday.Theeventissomeaningfulthatnotonlycanitraisepatrioticawarenessofus,butalsoenrichourschoollife.Ihopeyoucancomeandhaveagoodtime.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，邀請外教Smith做演講比賽的評委，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時主要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)以一般將來時為主。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題，告知自己的目的；第二段介紹將舉行的藝術(shù)節(jié)和演講比賽的相關(guān)信息；第三段表達(dá)邀請的愿望；第四段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。2020年山東中考英語書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華，你校將要舉辦“勞動實(shí)踐周”活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國朋友Scott寫一封信，邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括1.活動時間：……2.活動內(nèi)容：校園環(huán)境美化、實(shí)踐基地勞動、勞動主題演講……3.活動意義：……要求1.100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）；2.包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語句通順，意思連貫；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯∶LabourPracticeWeek勞動實(shí)踐周；practicebase實(shí)踐基地DearScott,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearScott,How'sitgoing?I’mgladtotellyouapieceofgoodnews.OurschoolwillhaveaLabourPracticeWeek.Welcomeyoutojoinit.ThisactivitylastsfromSeptember1stto7th.Duringtheweek,we'llcleanupourcampuscompletelytomakeourschoolmorebeautiful.What'smore,wecanworkinthepracticebase.Itmustbereallyinteresting.We'lllearntodolotsofthings,forexample,doingsomecooking,drivingacar,evenshooting.Ican'twaittotakepartinit!Don'tforgettoprepareatalk,everyonehastogiveatalkabouttheactivityatlast.We'lllearnalotandopenourmindinit.Wemusthaveagoodtimetogetherthere!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求介紹勞動實(shí)踐周活動的時間、活動內(nèi)容及意義。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來寫作，時態(tài)采用一般將來時為主，介紹活動的具體內(nèi)容敘述完整，條理清晰。2019年山東中考英語書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你某英語報(bào)社的編輯Rina,收到LiWei同學(xué)的來信，訴說了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請你根據(jù)以下提示給LiWei回信。要求：1.須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充,語句通順,意思連貫;2.詞數(shù):100詞左右;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個入真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯:laughat;careabout;high-fatfood;themore…,thehealthier…DearLiWei,I’vereceivedyourletterandIcanunderstandyou.YoursRinaDearLiWei,IhavereceivedyourletterandIcanunderstandyou.Youmustfeelbadwhenbeinglaughedatuseofyourover-weight.Hereismyadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfident,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Secondly,trytoeathealthilykeepawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,Istronglyadviseyoutoexercisemoreoften.You'dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou'llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,Rina【詳解】假設(shè)你某英語報(bào)社的編輯Rina,收到LiWei同學(xué)的來信，訴說了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請你根據(jù)以下提示給LiWei回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.；Secondly,trytoeathealthilykeepawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.這些給文章增色不少。2018年山東中考英語書面表達(dá)分享是一種行為方式，也是一種良好的品質(zhì)（quality），人生處處充滿分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快樂，快樂加倍；分擔(dān)煩惱，煩惱減半。請根據(jù)以上觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖所示，以“MySharingExperience”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯：befullof,cut…inhalf,thanksto,overcomeMySharingExperienceSharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MySharingExperienceSharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople.Everyonehashisexperienceofsharing.SodoI.Ioftensharemyfeelingswithmymum.WhenImakeprogressorwinacompetition,Isharemyhappinesswithmymum.Afterseeingabigsmileonherface,Igetasenseofsatisfaction.WhenImeetsometroublesandfeeldepressed,Itoldmysadnesstoher.Shealwayshugsmeandcomfortsme.Hercourageouswordsmakemelearnthatloveisalwaysaroundme.Itmakesmyheartfullofwarmthandstrength.Tosumup,sharingmyfeelingswithmumisreallyagoodwaywhichdrivesmybadmoodandbringsmepleasure.Asasayinggoes,‘Shareyourhappiness,yourhappinessdoubles;shareyoursorrow,yoursorrowcutstohalf.’【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述分享的經(jīng)歷、意義以及感悟。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如so引導(dǎo)的倒裝句,sharewith,makeprogress,asenseof,makesbdo,fullof,tosumup以及諺語Shareyourhappiness,yourhappinessdoubles;shareyoursorrow,yoursorrowcutstohalf。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。2017年山東中考英語書面表達(dá)當(dāng)今社會，很多家庭對孩子過分溺愛，導(dǎo)致當(dāng)他們面對問題時手足無措．因此對孩子們來說，學(xué)會自立相當(dāng)重要．請根據(jù)以上所述，結(jié)合表格所提供的圖片及文字信息，以"Learn?to?BeIndependent"為題寫一篇100詞左右的短文．社會現(xiàn)象你的觀點(diǎn)家長應(yīng)相信孩子，不要包辦一切；

提出合理建議，讓孩子自己做決定

…?孩子不要過度依賴父母，學(xué)做家務(wù)，照顧自己

勇于面對并解決困難；要求：

1．短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．題目

開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

參考詞匯：

1．make?decisions

2．depend?on

3．look?after

4．on?the?one?hand…on?the?other?hand.…

Learn?to?Be?Independent

Nowadays,many?children?are?treated?as"little?emperors"at?home.

?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?????????????Learn?to?Be?Independent

Nowadays,many?children?are?treated?as"little?emperors"at?home,theirparentsdoallthethingsforthem,andtheydonothing.Besides,thechildrenasktheirparentstodothisandtodothat.Theirparentsarealways?willingto

doallthethings.what'smore,theparentsevenmakedecisionsfortheirchildren.＜闡述社會現(xiàn)象＞

Inmyopinion,first,parentsshouldbelieveintheirchildren,andletchildren?dothingsbythemselves.＜高分句型＞Second,parentsshouldmakepropersuggestions.，andgivethemmorechancestomaketheirowndecisions.Last,childrenshouldlearntobeindependent,ifchildrenalwaysdependontheirparents,theywillhavedifficultiesfuturelife．＜高分句型闡述觀點(diǎn)，提出建議＞

Inaword,itisnecessaryandimportantforchildrentobeindependent．＜總結(jié)必要性與重要性＞【分析】重要短語及句型：

betreatedas被當(dāng)作…

believein相信

makedecisions做決定

learntodo學(xué)習(xí)去做

ifchildrenalwaysdependontheirparents,theywillhavedifficultiesfuturelife如果孩子總是依賴父母，他們將會在未來生活中很困難if…will…主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時，高級復(fù)合句

Inaword,itisnecessaryandimportantforchildrentobeindependent,總之，讓孩子學(xué)會獨(dú)立是必要的也是重要的．Itis+adjtodo干某事是…的【點(diǎn)評】寫圖畫作文時，我們最好不要遺漏圖畫所給的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意語句的連貫與銜接．行文要注意簡化，不要抱沓冗長，最好能夠?qū)懚痰暮唵尉洌@樣比較能夠得分，同時注意寫作文時使用一定的連接詞，比如，first,second,third,lastbutnottheleast等等．寫作文完成時要注意檢查修改，以避免遺漏，如果有條件的話，最好能夠先打個草稿，再抄到答題紙上，這樣更容易得高分．最后，注意去使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫流暢，方能成就一篇好作文中考英語作文滿分必備的句型1.重點(diǎn)句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…對某人來說…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能…

such…that…如此…以至于…

3).not…until…直到…才…

例：Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback。

4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生氣的原因是她對他說了謊。)5).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子那是因?yàn)椤?).Itissaidthat+句子據(jù)說…

Itisreportedthat+句子據(jù)報(bào)道…

8).Thereisnodoubtthat+句子毫無疑問…

9).Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子不言而喻，毫無疑問10).Thereisnoneedtodo沒必要做…11).Thereisnopointindoing做某事毫無意義

12.asisknowntoall,+句子眾所周知asweallknow,+句子據(jù)我們所知

itisgenerally/publiclyknown/consideredthat…,眾所周知2.提建議hadbetter(not)do最好(不)做

howabout/whataboutdoing…怎么樣?Ithinkyoushoulddo我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該…

Isuggest/advicethatyoushoulddo我建議你做…

IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…我要是你的話，我會做…

It’sbesttodo最好做…