作文10 2021年黑龍江齊齊哈爾卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文+萬(wàn)能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快專刊真題在線作文10黑龍江省齊齊哈爾卷真題在線（黑龍江省齊齊哈爾市2021年中考英語(yǔ)試題）值此畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)生會(huì)主席倡議大家“攜手愛(ài)校園，為母校獻(xiàn)禮”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。介紹你將如何為母校獻(xiàn)禮。要求：1字跡工整，段落清晰，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，行文連貫；2.要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Howtimeflies!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析考題解析本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹你將如何為母校獻(xiàn)禮，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。滿分范文滿分范文Howtimeflies!It’stimetoleavemyschool.NextMonday,I’llgobacktodosomethingforit.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.First,Iwillpickuptherubbisharoundtheschool.I’llcleanthewindowsanddoors,too.ThenI’llgivetheyoungerschoolmatessomeusefuladvice.Forexample,dothehomeworkbythemselvesorlistentotheteacherscarefully.NextI’llgiveawaymynotes.It’sreallyhardtosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschoolwillhaveabetterfuture.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年齊齊哈爾市中考英語(yǔ)作文跟前幾年相比，難度沒(méi)有太大變化，題干中要點(diǎn)皆有相關(guān)提示，寫作中必須根據(jù)文中要點(diǎn)提示進(jìn)行寫作，要求要點(diǎn)必須全面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹要做什么；第三段收尾，提出希望。保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。佳句積累1.Howtimeflies!【亮點(diǎn)】感嘆句，意為“時(shí)光飛逝”。2.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.【亮點(diǎn)】開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，表明寫該文章的目的。3.First,…Then，…Forexample,…Next…【亮點(diǎn)】文中運(yùn)用相關(guān)銜接詞，使文章更流暢。舉一反三相似題①馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，假如你有機(jī)會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)組織你們班的“畢業(yè)派對(duì)”，你將會(huì)如何構(gòu)思設(shè)計(jì)出一個(gè)充滿創(chuàng)意、情感和品位的畢業(yè)慶?；顒?dòng)呢？請(qǐng)寫一篇80詞以上的短文，介紹你的畢業(yè)派對(duì)計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容要求：1.簡(jiǎn)介大致的構(gòu)思；2.分點(diǎn)列出活動(dòng)流程；3.小結(jié)活動(dòng)的主要特色。注意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。【參考范文】Ihaveaplanforthepartythatdividesintothreeparts.They’rePictureshow,TalentshowandSeniorhighmessage.Part1.PictureshowWebringsomephotostakenwithourteachersorclassmatesanddescribethephotoswithagoodstoryaboutourschoollives.Part2.TalentshowWecanshareourhobbieswithourclassmates.Wecanshowwhatwecandoinmusic,artorsport.Wecanalsoshowotherspecialabilitieslikeplayingmagicandsoon.Part3.SeniorhighmessageEachofuspreparesabigcard,andthenwritesdownamessageforseniorhighonthecardforeachother.Soeveryonecanexchangethebestwisheswithhisorherclassmates.Inthisparty,allofuscanshareourwonderfulexperienceinthepastthreeyears.Wecanpresentwhatthey’velearntandhowmuchprogresswe’vemade,too.Andfinallywemaylookforwardtothefuturewithlotsofencouragementoradvice.【考題解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹你的畢業(yè)派對(duì)計(jì)劃。這是一個(gè)開(kāi)放式的作文，可以自己夠了派對(duì)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Wecanshare...，Eachofusprepares...，allofuscan...，Andfinallywemaylookforwardto...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的派對(duì)計(jì)劃分成三部分，接下來(lái)介紹分成三段介紹這三部分：圖片展示，才藝表演，初中留言，最后期望充滿鼓勵(lì)和建議的未來(lái)。此處divideinto,sharewith,writedown,exchangewith,makeprogress,lookforwardto等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?？键c(diǎn)：提綱作文。相似題②初中三年的學(xué)校生活即將成為美好的回憶?；厥兹陼r(shí)光,你有哪些收獲?即將畢業(yè),你有什么感受?假如你是李華,你校英文?？?qǐng)你寫一篇短文談?wù)劗厴I(yè)之際的感想,內(nèi)容包括你三年學(xué)校生活的收獲以及你即將畢業(yè)的感受。提示詞語(yǔ):knowledge,friend,memory,happy提示問(wèn)題:●Whathaveyougotduringthepastthreeyears?●Howdoyoufeelupongraduation?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Duringthepastthreeyears,IhavelearntalotofknowledgefromthebooksandIhaveimprovedmystudyskills.Icangetalongwithmyteachersandclassmates.Welearnfromeachotherandhelpeachother,too.Especially,mymemoryhasimprovedalotandIcanremembermuchdifficultknowledge.Itmakesmeveryhappy.AthomeIcandosomehouseworksothatmyparentscanhavemoretimetorest.Onmywaytoschool,Icanobeythetrafficrules.WhenImeetdifficulty,Icantalktomyfriendsaboutit.NowIfeelstressedinmystudy.IhavetoomuchhomeworktodoeverydayandIhavetostayuplatetofinishit,soIhavenotimeformyhobbies.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)結(jié)合提示詞語(yǔ)和提示問(wèn)題開(kāi)展論述；主要講述三年來(lái)的收獲。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，重點(diǎn)講述自己的收獲。敘述時(shí)避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，句意完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：getalongwithsb；learnfromeachother；improvealot；makemehappy；obeythetrafficrules；talktomyfriends；stayuplate句型：AthomeIcandosomehouseworksothatmyparentscanhavemoretimetorest.相似題③作為一名即將畢業(yè)的初三學(xué)生，回想過(guò)去三年學(xué)習(xí)生活，一定會(huì)有讓你難忘的人和事。請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？瘜懸黄厴I(yè)感言。提示要點(diǎn)：1.難忘的人和事；2.你的感想和收獲；3.……要求：1.80-120詞。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.包含以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Howtimeflies!SoonIwillgraduate(畢業(yè))fromjuniorhighschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Howtimeflies!SoonIwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears.Iremembermanythings.Iremembermyfirstbirthdaypartyatschoolwhichwasheldbymyheadteacher,sincethenIhaven’tfeltlonelyanymore.IremembermyEnglishteacher,whowasalwayssopatientwhenIaskedhimquestions.Iremembermymathteacher,wholistenedtomecarefullyandexplainedeverythingsoclearly.ThereisnodoubtthatIhaveachievedlotsofknowledgeandskillsduringthethreeyears,whicharegoodformyfuturestudy.I’llneverforgetmydearteachersandclassmates.Iwillcherishmystudyexperiencesatschool.Becauseitistheschoollifethatcolorsmywholelife.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文為材料作文，要求就初中三年難忘的人和事寫一篇文章。時(shí)態(tài)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式，第一段用于引出“難忘的人”這一主題；第二段則詳細(xì)描述了初中三年有哪些老師令作者難忘；第三段收尾，表示自己將永遠(yuǎn)記得這三年時(shí)光。例文層次分明，思路清晰，包含了題目所給全部要點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，單詞拼寫語(yǔ)法無(wú)誤，使用了一些復(fù)雜復(fù)合句型，為本文增加了一些亮點(diǎn)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：graduatefrom，lookback，not…anymore，listento，lotsof，begoodfor。句型：（1）IremembermyEnglishteacher,whowasalwayssopatientwhenIaskedhimquestions.（定語(yǔ)從句）（2）ThereisnodoubtthatIhaveachievedlotsofknowledgeandskillsduringthethreeyears,whicharegoodformyfuturestudy.（Thereisnodoubtthat…固定句型）相似題④假如你是Eric，即將初中畢業(yè)，作為一名優(yōu)秀學(xué)生代表，你將在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿吧！內(nèi)容提示：1.畢業(yè)前的感受；2.對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。要求：1.要求要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)意連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名。3.短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Goodmorning,dearteachers,parentsandfriends.Threeyearswillsoonpass.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodlucktoallofyouandthanksforyourattention.【參考范文】Goodmorning,dearteachers,parentsandfriends.Threeyearswillsoonpass.Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears’life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI’mgoodatit.Iwanttothankher.Atthesametime,IhopethatallthestudentshaveagoodfutureandIamlookingforwardtoamuchhappierhighschoollife.Goodlucktoallofyouandthanksforyourattention.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿。圍繞“畢業(yè)前的感受”及“對(duì)未來(lái)的展望”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段描述自己畢業(yè)前的感受；第二段描述令自己印象最深的一件事，并展望未來(lái)；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿和感謝。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。相似題⑤初中畢業(yè)之際,校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。假定你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一封信,提出你的建議。寫作要點(diǎn):畢業(yè)典禮時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)7月1日,學(xué)校報(bào)告廳三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)1.校長(zhǎng)講話送祝福2.學(xué)生發(fā)言談感恩3.……寫作要求:1.80詞左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名,否則不得分;3.寫作要點(diǎn)都必須用上,緊扣主題,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯:畢業(yè)典禮graduationceremony;前進(jìn)中學(xué)QianjinMiddleSchool;學(xué)校報(bào)告廳theschoolhall。Deareditor,I'mveryhappytohavethechancetoshowyoumyplanforthegraduationceremony.