作文05 福建卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀+素材積累

作文05福建卷2021年福建中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)小記者李華，上周學(xué)校開展了“EnglishDay”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的海報(bào)和學(xué)生參加活動(dòng)的數(shù)據(jù)寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹活動(dòng)情況以及同學(xué)們的感受。詞數(shù)80左右。NumberofParticipants(參加者)EnglishDayTime:2:00p.m.-4:30p.m.June18thPlace:IntheschoolhallLearningbyDoing*SingingCompetition*CookingShow*Storytelling,Joinus!注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。OurSchoolEnglishDayOurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OurSchoolEnglishDayOurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.Ittookplaceintheschoolhallfrom2:00p.m.to4:30p.m.onJune18th.Threeactivitieswereincluded.Halfofusstudentstookpartinthesingingcompetition.30%ofuswenttothecookingshow.Andtherestofusenjoyedourselvesinthestorytelling.WespokehighlyoftheEnglishDay.Welearntalotthroughpractice.Italsomadeuscometorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.Wehopetherewillbemorecolorfulactivitiesinourschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹上周開展的英語日的活動(dòng)情況。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過去時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段介紹活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間；第二段介紹學(xué)生參加活動(dòng)的情況；最后一段介紹這個(gè)活動(dòng)給同學(xué)們帶來的感受。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。2020年福建中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友David對(duì)中醫(yī)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖示，用英語寫一封電子郵件，向他推薦即將在你校舉辦的“傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)進(jìn)校園”的宣傳日活動(dòng)，說明推薦理由，并請(qǐng)他關(guān)注線上相關(guān)信息。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。DearDavid,I'mpleasedtoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,I'mpleasedtoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine.Now,I'dliketosharewithyousomeinformationaboutTraditionalChineseMedicineDayinourschool,whichisgoingtotakeplaceonJuly31,2020.Onthatday,afamousdoctorwillgiveusatalkonChinesemedicine.Andtherewillbeashowaboutitsdevelopment.Also,thefilmLiShizhenwillbeon.I'msuretheactivitieswouldbeveryhelpfultoyou.Ihopeyoucanvisitwww.intelschool.comandhaveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChinesemedicine.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。文中向朋友推薦即將舉辦的“傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)進(jìn)校園”的宣傳日活動(dòng)，并說明推薦理由。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文主要以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般將來時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。邏輯性強(qiáng)，句子通順。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：sharewithsbaboutsth與某人分享某事；takeplace舉行；behelpfultosb對(duì)某人有幫助。句子：therewillbeashowaboutitsdevelopment句中用的是therebe句型；I'msuretheactivitieswouldbeveryhelpfultoyou句中由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞that已省略。2019年福建中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatI’vejustwonthethefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyothinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項(xiàng)：1.回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHuaDearharryCongratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthefuturethey’llplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Plus,I’mdyingtohavearobotofmyown.Icanhaveittakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee,mygrandparentsareoldandcannotmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking,cleaningthehouseandsoon.【詳解】本文屬于應(yīng)用文體，就英國筆友哈利在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)寫一封回信。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如playrolesin,dailylife,bedyingto,takecareof,helpsbdo,suchas,andsoon以及howgladIam中how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。2018年福建中考英語書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry對(duì)武術(shù)感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖表提示，用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他暑期來觀摩你校舉辦的首屆武術(shù)節(jié)，感受中華武術(shù)文化。詞數(shù)80左右。TimeJuly7to9,2018ActivitiesCompetitions,showsHistoryofWushuThousandsofyearsBenefits（益處）ofWushu…注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。參考詞匯：practiceWushu練武DearHenry,IamgladthatyouareinterestedinWushu.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearHenry,IamgladthatyouareinterestedinWushu.HereI’vegotgoodnewsforyou.ThefirstWushufestivalofourschoolisgoingtobeheldfromJuly7to9,2018.I’dliketoinviteyoutothefestival.YoucanwatchmanyWushucompetitionsandenjoywonderfulshows.ChineseWushuhasahistoryofthousandsofyears.PracticingWushuisagoodwaytoimproveourhealth.Besides,ithelpsustodevelopstrongwills.Mostofuslikeitverymuch.IhopeyouwillcomeandexperienceChineseWushuculture.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.YoursLiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式來寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)圖表提示，介紹武術(shù)節(jié)的時(shí)間、內(nèi)容、武術(shù)的歷史以及練習(xí)武術(shù)的益處等。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來介紹內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容全面，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。2017年福建中考英語書面表達(dá)你的美國朋友John計(jì)劃暑假來中國旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，用英語在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建，詞數(shù)80左右。要求：1.必須包含所有提示信息，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi，John,I’mgladtohearthatyou'replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I'dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.Fujianlies__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!Hi，John,I'mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I，dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit,FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.Ithasapopulationofover38million.Becauseoftheniceenvironment,it’sknownasRefreshingFujian,whichattractsmillionsoftouristsfromhomeandabroad.Ifyoucome,youcanenjoyfreshair,blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers.ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiandGulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.Besides，youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)圖示可知主要介紹福建省的位置，省會(huì)城市，人口，名勝，環(huán)境及其他的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致性。在組成文章時(shí)注意語言的邏輯性，詞匯要合適豐富。這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章中高分作文比較多，如：Becauseoftheniceenvironment，it'sknownasRefreshingFujian．句中使用短語有："becauseof因?yàn)?、"beknownas作為…而著名"．Ifyoucome，youcanenjoyfreshair，blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers．句中"Ifyoucome"為條件狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】1.仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。審讀所給信息，弄清楚所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，然后對(duì)所給的信息進(jìn)行梳理，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)調(diào)整寫作順序，使文章行文連貫。2.列全要點(diǎn)，即提綱要點(diǎn)化，然后寫作成文。此時(shí)我們就必須在大腦中將各種信息點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充完整，適時(shí)使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式。要根據(jù)提示將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，使文章的內(nèi)容完整、飽滿、要點(diǎn)齊全，注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。同時(shí)注意句子與句子之間，段落與段落之間要有合理的過渡銜接。3.檢查核實(shí)，確保無誤。中考作文素材中考英語作文考查學(xué)生綜合語言運(yùn)用能力，分值比重大?？忌鶕?jù)提示信息（圖片或文字），運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯、句型和語法知識(shí)針對(duì)目標(biāo)話題進(jìn)行語言輸出（書面表達(dá)）。

建議考生在日常學(xué)習(xí)中做好以下三點(diǎn)：1、積累相關(guān)話題的好詞佳句（建立作文素材本）。2、至少每一周寫一篇作文，達(dá)到訓(xùn)練常規(guī)化。（學(xué)以致用）3、注重讓老師指導(dǎo)修改，反復(fù)推敲，打磨完善。（精益求精寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一檔作文20字方針）要點(diǎn)齊全，通順連貫，語言豐富，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，卷面整潔。寫作布局（三段文10句）開頭（1—2句）；正文（6—8句）；結(jié)尾（1—2句）寫作步驟（五部曲）審題—構(gòu)思—草稿—修改—抄寫審題五要素：人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，格式，內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)。經(jīng)典連詞作用：使文章有整體性、連貫性.連詞分為并列連詞和從屬連詞并列連詞的作用連接具有并列關(guān)系的詞、短語或句子，常見的并列連詞有4種：表示聯(lián)合關(guān)系的連詞：and和both…and………和……都notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……neither…nor…既不……也不……，兩者都不；aswellas也注意：both…and…連接并列短語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。notonly…butalso…連接并列主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞遵循就近原則。neither…nor…連接并列主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞也遵循就近原則。表示選擇關(guān)系的連詞：or或者否則either…or…要么……要么……，或者…或者…（它連接并列主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞符合就近原則）whether…or…是……還是……ratherthan而不是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞：but但是while然而（表示對(duì)比）however然而（4）表示因果關(guān)系的并列連詞：so因此for因?yàn)?、從屬連詞的作用：引導(dǎo)從句（1）引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語的連詞：when當(dāng)……的時(shí)候while當(dāng)……的時(shí)候as當(dāng)……的時(shí)候assoonas一……就……after在……以后before在……之前since自從……until直到……when從句后的謂語動(dòng)詞可以是瞬間動(dòng)詞也可以是延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞；while從句后的謂語動(dòng)詞必須是延續(xù)性動(dòng)作；當(dāng)主句是一般將來時(shí)或祈使句時(shí)，且表示一般將來時(shí)的意義，assoonas引導(dǎo)的從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來，即符合“主將從現(xiàn)”結(jié)構(gòu)。（2）引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句的從屬連詞：if如果unless除非，如果…不… if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，當(dāng)主句是一般將來時(shí)或祈使句時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表將來，即遵循“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。（3）引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句的從屬連詞：because、since、as（因?yàn)椋┻@三個(gè)詞所表示的語氣由because到as逐漸減弱。但回答由why提問的句子，只能用because來回答。because和so不能同時(shí)使用。（4）引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句的從屬連詞：sothat,inorderthat以便，為了……（5）引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句的從屬連詞：so…that…，such…that…如此…以至于…兩者的區(qū)別如下：so+形容詞/副詞+thateg.ThisboxissohearythatIcan’tcarryit.such+a/an+形容詞+名詞單數(shù)+thateg.It’ssuchaheavyboxthatnobodycancarryit.such+形容詞+名詞復(fù)數(shù)/不可數(shù)名詞+thateg.It’ssuchgoodadvicethatI’llacceptit.so+形容詞+a/an+名詞單數(shù)+thateg.Sheissolovelyagirlthatwealllikeher.（6）引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句的從屬連詞：though/although雖然，盡管evenif/eventhough即使though/although引導(dǎo)的從句不能與but連用。（7）引導(dǎo)賓語從句的連詞：that.if/whether是否when什么時(shí)候why為什么where在哪里（8）引導(dǎo)定語從句的從屬連詞：thatwhowhichwhomwhenwherewhy和whose中考英語背好句人物介紹1)外貌Heusedtobethin,butlookhowbigandstrongheisnow！Myfatherisatallmanwithapairofglasses.HehasthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhaveeverseen.I'mnotverytallandIhavecurlyhairthatlookslikeblackwaves2)性格特征Iknowshecaresaboutmebecauseshe'salwaystheretolisten.Mr.Liisstrictaboutourstudies,buthealwaysencouragesusandgivesussupport.Heissokindthatheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Nomatterwhoaskshimforhelp,heisalwayswarm-heartedandgenerous.Shestudieshardandalwaysgetsgoodgrades,butshenevertakesprideinherself.Helenissofriendlythatallherclassmateslikeherverymuch.Nomatterwhathappens,myfatherisalwayscalm.3）個(gè)人喜好IlikewatchingthenewsbecauseIhopetofindoutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Oneofmyfavouriteclotheswassentbymyfriend.Thisnotebookremindsmeoflotsofwonderfultime.Thismodelplanealwaysremindsmeoftheloveandcarefrommygrandpa.Myhobbyisstudyingstars.Ifinditveryinteresting.Davidhasbeenveryluckybecausehishobbyhasbroughthimpleasureandsuccess.I'mseriousaboutrunning.Itcanmakemehealthierandstronger.Iamveryfondofsinginganddancing,andinmysparetimeIoftenlistentoEnglishsongs.IcansinganddancesowellthatIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparties.介紹個(gè)人夢(mèng)想及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想Everyonehasdreams.Butyou'dbetterthinkaboutwhatyoushoulddotomakeyourdreamscometrue.MydreamistobeanEnglishteacher.ThereasonisthatIwanttoteachthestudentsknowledgeandhelpthemsucceedinthefuture.Inmyopinion,thedreamwillbeturnedintoreality(現(xiàn)實(shí))oneday.Iwanttobeapilot,butIknowtherearemanychallenges.介紹想感謝的人及如何表達(dá)感恩之情Thankstoyourkindnessandconsideration,I'vemaderapidprogressinEnglishstudy.Wearetrulygratefultoyouforwhatyouhavedoneforus.IwanttogivemysincerethankstoyouforcheeringmeupandhelpingmeoutwheneverIhavedifficulties.Iamtrulygratefultomyparentsfortheloveandsupporttheyhavegivenme.介紹個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)或特殊之處Hehastheabilitytoorganizethecompany,andeverythingisingreatorder.Notonlydoesheworkhardbutalsoheisgoodatplayingbasketball.Mysisterhasmoreexperienceonhowtoplaytheviolinwell.閑暇活動(dòng)介紹周末活動(dòng)與感受OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoabigfarmwherewelearnedaboutteaprocessing.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendmoretimeinreadingbooksinsteadofplayingcomputergames.Inaword,itwasreallyanunforgettableandmeaningfultripforus.介紹業(yè)余生活Whileothermembersinmyfamilygooutonweekends,Iprefertoreadsomegoodbooksathome.AlthoughI'mbusywithmylessons,mysparetimeisstillcolorful.Inmyfree/sparetime,Iliketolearnsomeaboutdifferentformsofart.It'sagoodwaytodevelopmyabilitytoenjoythebeauty.校園生活介紹校園課程Thenat9:00Ihavescience.Itisdifficultbutinteresting.Myfavouritesubjectsaregeographyandmath.Icangetthemostpointsineveryexam.OurschoolstartsateightinthemorningfromMondaytoFriday校園活動(dòng)及興趣小組Schoolactivitiescannotonlymakeourlifecolorfulbutalsoletusrelax.Therearemanykindsofout-of-classactivitiesinourschool,suchasballgames,playingchess,singingandsoon.Hehasbecomemoreoutgoingandmadesomegoodfriendsinschool.Inthefirstyear,Ididn'tworkveryhardinclass,butIjoinedmanydifferentschoolclubsandhadalotoffun.介紹學(xué)?；厩闆rMyschoolisverybeautiful,andtherearesomeshopsaroundit.Infrontofthedininghallisthesportshallandthebuildinginfrontofthatisforscience.It'sveryluckyforustohavesuchagoodlearningenvironment.假期與旅游.介紹假期活動(dòng)Ireadsomegoodbookstoopenupmymind.I'lltakepartinsomevolunteeractivitiesbecauseIcans