作文 16 河北卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文03河北卷2021年真題在線初中生活已近尾聲，同學(xué)們即將步入高一級(jí)學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)閱讀下表中的內(nèi)容和所給提示，從下面兩所學(xué)校中選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校，并根據(jù)該校信息寫一篇短文。NamesItems(條目)PurpleSchoolOrangeSchoolSchoolspublic,alonghistoryprivate,well-knownTeachershard-workingyoungandactiveStudentslesshomeworkcolorfulactivities提示：(1)Whichschoolwouldyouliketogoto?(2)Whydoyouchooseit?注意：1.短文須包括表格中你所選學(xué)校的全部信息和提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；3.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Iwouldliketogoto..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，選擇一所喜歡的學(xué)校進(jìn)行寫作。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別介紹學(xué)校的特點(diǎn)、學(xué)校老師和學(xué)生的情況等。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文IwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetterbecauseitisaprivateschoolanditiswell-knowninourcity.Therearealotofnewandmodernteachingfacilities.Wecanhaveaccesstothemostadvancedequipmentandexperiencethebestteachingeffects.What’smore,theteachersinOrangeSchoolareyoungandactive.Ithinkitisimportantandhelpfulforustodevelopagoodrelationshipwithteachers.Anditisgoodforourstudy.Lastbutnotleast,studentstherehavecolorfulactivitiesandIhopetheschoollifewillbewonderfulthere.2020年真題在線李碩今年五歲，他的媽媽疫情期間去支援武漢。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖片及文字提示寫一篇短文。saygoodbyekisshismotherreceiveawarmwelcomegiveherabighug注意：（1）短文須包括每幅圖片的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，提示詞語供參考；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；（3）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。LiShuoisafive-year-oldboy.OneSundayafternoon,hismotherwasgoingWuhantohelppatientsthere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于看圖作文，題目的開頭已給出。要求根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容并結(jié)合文字提示，發(fā)揮想象來寫一篇英語作文。寫作時(shí)要包含每幅圖片的主要信息并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，根據(jù)圖畫及文字提示，以一般過去時(shí)講述了李碩的媽媽去武漢抗疫到回來的過程中的幾個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達(dá)到位。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：saygoodbyetosb.；acrosstheTVscreen；beundercontrol；comeback；medicalworkers；receiveawarmwelcome；givesb.ahug。句型：while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；assoonas引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；以how開頭的感嘆句。滿分范文LiShuoisafive-year-oldboy.OneSundayafternoon,hismotherwasgoingWuhantohelppatientsthere.Hisfathertookhimtosaygoodbyetoher.Oneday,hesawhismotheronTVwhileshewasaway.HemissedhersomuchthathekissedhismotheracrosstheTVscreen.Whentheoutbreakwasundercontrol,hismothercamebackwithothermedicalworkers.Theyreceivedawarmwelcome.Assoonashismothergothome,LiShuogaveherabighug.Howhemisseshismother!2019年真題在線文明禮貌從我做起，從現(xiàn)在開始，從點(diǎn)滴小事做起。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“WhentoSayThankYou”為題，寫一篇短文。提示:1)Whenshouldwesay“thankyou”athome?2)Whenarewesupposedtosay“thankyou”atschool?3)...要求:1)短文須包括提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)和一個(gè)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2)短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯:wash,encourage,openWhentoSayThankYouIt’spolitetosay“thankyou”whenothershelpusorsaysomethingkindtous._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹我們?cè)诩液驮趯W(xué)校怎么做個(gè)有禮貌的人。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。重點(diǎn)短語和句型：say“thankyou”tosb對(duì)某人說“謝謝”，it’s+形容詞+forsbtodosth做某事對(duì)某人來說怎么樣，helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事，asoftenaspossible盡可能經(jīng)常的滿分范文It’spolitetosay“thankyou”whenothershelpusorsaysomethingkindtous.Beingpoliteisagoodtraditioninourcountry.Nobodylikesapersonwhoisimpolite.It’simportantforustobepolite.Weshouldsay“thankyou”toparentswhentheycookforus.Weshouldsay“thankyou”whentheywashclothesforus.Weshouldalsobepoliteatschool.Whentheteachershelpusworkoutquestions,weshouldsay“than