作文 12 青海卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析

作文12青海卷2021年真題在線假如你是李磊，你的筆友Anna給你發(fā)了電子郵件訴說(shuō)她的煩惱，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行回復(fù)。要求：1.邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書寫規(guī)范。2.詞數(shù)100左右。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。DearLiLei,Mysisterpracticesplayingtheviolininanafter-schoolclass,somyparentsaskedmetogoandlearnittoo.ButI’mjustnotamusicgirl.Youknow,I’minterestedinsportsandIwanttochoosewhatIlike.Now,I’msoupset.WhatshouldIdo?AnnaDearAnna,Iunderstandyourfeeling.HereiswhatIthink.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopewhatIsaidishelpfultoyou.LiLei滿分范文DearAnna,Iunderstandyourfeeling.HereiswhatIthink.Maybeyourparentswon’tknowhowyoufeelifyoudon’ttalktothemaboutit.Whynothonestlyandkindlyletthemknowmusicandyouareneveragoodmatch,butsportsandyouaremadeforeachother?Meanwhile,you’dbettertellthemyouhavehadaclearlifegoalandareoldenoughtomakeyourowndecisions.Further-more,trytogetaproperchancetoprovethatyouaretalentedinsports.Onlythenwilltheyknowyoubetterandletyouchoosewhatyoulovetodo.I’msureyourparentswillbeupforhelpingyouexploredifferentoptions.IhopewhatIsaidishelpfultoyou.LiLei考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇對(duì)電子郵件的回復(fù)。根據(jù)Anna信中所提到的煩惱，進(jìn)行回復(fù)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在回信中針對(duì)Anna提到的煩惱，給出自己合理性的建議，讓父母知道自己并不擅長(zhǎng)音樂(lè)，明確告知父母自己的目標(biāo)是什么，這樣有效地溝通會(huì)讓父母理解和支持的。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。2020年真題在線人生的每一次經(jīng)歷都是一種學(xué)習(xí)和提升。2019年新型冠狀病毒在中國(guó)和全球蔓延，我們見(jiàn)證了全國(guó)人民居家隔離，醫(yī)務(wù)人員馳援武漢，學(xué)生停課不停學(xué)等戰(zhàn)“疫”行動(dòng)，這些都帶給我們?cè)S多思考和啟發(fā)。請(qǐng)以“ALifeLessonILearned"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。要求：1.觀點(diǎn)明確，內(nèi)容完整，邏輯清晰，書寫規(guī)范；2.詞數(shù)100左右。ALifeLessonILearned________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分范文ALifeLessonILearnedAllofusjoinedtogethertofightagainstthediseasewhenCOVID-19hitthewholeworldinasuddenearlythisyear.Itwasabigchallengetoeveryone,butnooneheldback.Manypeopledevotedthemselvestofightingagainstit.Thegovernmentadvisedustostayathomeandavoidgoingtothepublicplacesifpossible.Doctorsandnursestriedtheirbesttotreatthepatientsandtakegoodcareofthemthoughtheywereattheriskofgettinginfected.Peoplewhowerewillingtohelpothersworkedasvolunteers.Theydidalotandwerenotafraidofthedangertheyfaced.Theoutbreakhascausedsomanydeathsthatitgivesmealifelesson:Weshouldcherisheverymomentwithourlovedones.考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于話題作文。要求以“ALifeLessonILearned”為題，結(jié)合新型冠狀病毒肺炎在中國(guó)和全球的蔓延這一事件，寫一篇短文談?wù)勛约旱乃伎己蛦l(fā)。寫作時(shí)要緊扣題目要求并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，開頭點(diǎn)出大家一起參與抗疫，第二段講述新冠肺炎給大家?guī)?lái)了挑戰(zhàn)，各方一起與病毒作斗爭(zhēng)，最后提到疫情爆發(fā)帶來(lái)眾多死亡，使自己懂得要珍惜與所愛(ài)的人在一起的每一刻。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：jointogether；fightagainst；inasudden；devoteoneselftodoingsth.；advisesb.todosth.；avoiddoingsth.；tryone'sbesttodosth.；takegoodcareof；attheriskof；bewillingtodosth.；beafraidof；givesb.alifelesson。句型：when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；but連接的表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的并列句；though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。2019年真題在線假如你是小明，你的筆友Sam給你發(fā)了電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行回復(fù)。要求：1.邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書寫規(guī)范。2.詞數(shù)80左右。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。chairman：主席unique：特別的DearXiaoMing，Howareyoudoing？IamwritingtoaskyousomethingabouttheChineseCultureWeekthatwearegoingtoholdinSeptember.AsthechairmanoftheChineseLearningClubatschool，Iamthinkingabouthowwecanorganizeauniqueandamazingactivity.Therefore，couldyoupleasegivemesomegoodsuggestionsonwhatthememightbebetterandwhatexactlywearegoingtodo？Thanks.SamDearSam，It'sagoodideatohavesuchaCultureWeekinyourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________XiaoMing滿分范文DearSam,It’sagoodideatohaveChineseCultureWeekinyourschool.Ithinkit’shelpfulnotonlytoimproveyourChinesebutalsotohaveabetterunderstandingaboutChina.However,asuccessfulactivitydependsonhowinterestedstudentsfeel.Thus,agoodthemewillbeabslutelynecessary.Inmyopinion,youmayconsider"ChineseSpringFestival"asyourtheme.Forexample,givingalectureabouttheSpringFestivalmaymakestudentsgetageneralideaofit,writingcouplets,guessingriddlesandmakingJiaoziarealltheactivitiesthatarereallyinterestingandattractive.Inthisway,studentswhoareinvolvedintheactivitieswillsurelyexperienceChineseculture.XiaoM