專題16 寫作方法技巧及20篇專練（解析版）-2021-2022學(xué)年八年級英語下學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（牛津上海版）

專題16寫作方法技巧及20篇專練作文專題作文專題近年來，中考作文中關(guān)于青少年題材的屢見不鮮。此類話題談人生、談理想、談成功經(jīng)驗，也談青少年在成長過程中遇到的種種問題，貼近學(xué)生生活實際，解決好這些問題可幫助他們健康成長，平穩(wěn)度過青春期，所以此主題也是十分必要的訓(xùn)練主題。Ⅰ.主題詞匯成長經(jīng)歷teenager青少年；graduatefrom畢業(yè)于；generationgap代溝；allowsb.todo允許做askforadvice征求意見；bestfriend最好的朋友；becuriousaboutsth.對某事好奇；doone’sbest盡力；makeeffortstodosth.努力做某事；littlebylittle逐漸校園生活understand理解；getonwellwithsb./sth.與他人相處融洽/某事進(jìn)展不錯；raiseone’shand舉手；takeanactivepartin積極參加業(yè)余愛好beinterestedin對………感興趣；befondof喜愛；enjoydoing喜歡做；spend...doing花時間做；inone’ssparetime在空閑時間里學(xué)習(xí)生活takecourses上課；putone’sheartinto專注于；passanexam考試及格；failanexam考試不及格；cheatintheexam考試作弊；subject學(xué)科；handin上交；payattentionto注意人物偶像genius天才；respect尊敬；thinkhighlyofsb.對某人評價很高；lookforwardtodoing期望做學(xué)習(xí)策略express表達(dá)；explain解釋；confidence信心；makeasurvey作調(diào)查；collectinformation收集信息；schedule時間表，進(jìn)度表Ⅱ.有用句型1.Toimprovethesituation,Isuggest...2.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weoughttoberesponsibleforourselves.3.It'salsoimportanttofindawaytobeinvolvedinsocialactivities.4.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First,...Second,...5.Yourlifetodayistheresultofyourattitudesandchoicesinthepast.Yourlifetomorrowwillbetheresultofyourattitudesandchoicestoday.6.Sometimesyourbiggestweaknesscanbecomeyourbiggeststrength.7.Someofthegreatestsuccessfulstorieshavefollowedawordofencouragement8.Fromherconfidence,weknowthat..9.Weshouldbelieveinourselves.10.Justkeepontrying.Theprocessoftryingismuchmorevaluablethantheresult.11.Smileonfailureandsmileonlife.12.Actually,failureislikeanaughtyboywhoplayswithusonthewaytoourgoals.Ontheonehand,hewantstotestus.Ontheotherhand,hewantstohelpusbecomebraver.Themorewesmileonfailure,thebraverweshallbe.13.Growolderandgrowup.Growingupdoesn’tneedanytalentorability.Growingupisalwaysfindingtheopportunityforchange.Nevergiveupdreams.14.Avolunteer’sworkisverygreatandhelpful.Ilearnresponsibilityandpatiencefromit.Ihopemoreandmoreyoungpeoplewillbevolunteer.15.WhenIamfree,Ioftengotothenursinghometodosomethinggood,suchasreadingbooks,andwashingclothesfortheold.16.Wearenotperfecttodoeverythingwell.Weoftengethelpfromothersinourdailylife.Inreturnwemusthelpotherpeopleasoftenaspossible.Ⅲ.例題分析請以“______isthemostimportantthinginmylife”為題寫一篇短文。請先將題目補(bǔ)充完整再進(jìn)行寫作。Questionsforreference:1.Whatisthemostthinginyourlife?(health,happiness,friendship,honesty...)2.Whydoyouthinkso?(Giveatleasttworeasons)3.Whatisyoursuggestion?要點(diǎn)分析1．審題時，學(xué)生要注意“我生命中的最重要的東西”，不是單指某一樣具體的東西或某件事，而是通過事例來突出某一項品質(zhì)。如：友誼、自信、助人、誠實、感恩等。2注意：提出的建議要圍繞主題來寫，不能前后脫節(jié)。寫作素材圍繞“友誼”給出建議和保持友誼秘訣的1.Friendssharehappinesswithus.Inaddition,theykeepusfromsadness.2.Withoutfriends,wefeellonelyandbored.Instead,withthemourlifewillbemoreandmorecolourful.3.Inaword,friendsareourmostpreciouswealthandfriendshipisnecessarytoeveryone.4.Friendsarelikeleavesonthetree.Thoughtheyaresmallandordinary,withoutthemthetreewillbeugly.5.Friendshipcanmakeourlifemorecolourfulandmeaningful.6.Friendplaysanimportantpartinourlife.7.Nobodycangetthroughlifewithoutfriendship.8.I'mluckyenoughtomakemanyfriendsaroundme.9.WheneverIamblue,theycomfortmeandhelpmetofindsolutionstomyproblems.10.Ilikemyfriendsbecausewecantrusteachotherandhelpeachother11.Wehaveparentstoturntoforhelpathome,andwehavefriendswhenweareout.12.Iregardhimasmybestfriend.Wealwaysdiscussthingstogetheranddomanyactivitiesinoursparetime.原文稿FriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylifeIfIdon’thavefriends,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldlonely.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Makingfriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttothemsothattheycantrustus.What'smore,afriendneverhesitatestogivehisloveandcaretohisfriend.Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwefindthatourlifebecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.點(diǎn)評與評分作者在整篇文章中，緊緊圍繞友誼是生命中最重要的部分來描寫，層層深入,步步上升，最后點(diǎn)題。按中考作文20分計算，屬于第三檔到第二檔的作文?？傻?5分左右。需修改之處：themostimportantthing應(yīng)改成oneofthemostimportantthings，表明友誼是生命中最重要的東西之一。要表達(dá)“獨(dú)自生活在這個世界上”，應(yīng)用詞組liveintheworldalone。表示目的，句首應(yīng)用動詞不定式Tomakefriendswithpeople。4.afriend改為“arealfriend”更好。5.最后一句應(yīng)注意時態(tài)，需改為：Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifebecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus。修改稿：IfIdon’thavefriends,myworldmaybecomecolorless.SoIthinkfriendshipisoneofthemostimportantthingsinmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldalone.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Tomakefriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttothemsothattheycantrustus.What’smore,arealfriendneverhesitatestogivehisloveandcaretohisfriend.Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifebecomecolorfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.作文專題作文專題隨著人類文明的進(jìn)步和社會的發(fā)展，一些社會現(xiàn)象成為了社會熱點(diǎn)。如共享單車，愛心捐贈活動，旅游中的不文明行為，朗讀者活動的開展等等。在這一主題中，我們會針對社會熱點(diǎn)問題加以探討與剖析，讓學(xué)生更加具備明辨是非的能力，積極投身到一些有意義的活動中去，從而抵制不文明現(xiàn)象，做對社會有用的人。Ⅰ.主題詞匯goabroad,badbehaviors,respectforeignculture,talkquietlyinpublicplaces,make/leaveagoodimpression,culturaldifferences,payattentiontoourbehaviors,showaperson’sinnerbeauty,becivilizedtourists,jumpthequeue,signtheirnamesonthewallsofattractionsⅡ.有用句型WithmoreandmoreChinesepeopletravellingabroad,theirbadbehaviorshavebecomeahottopic.2.Inaword,thesituationissoseriousthatwemustdosomethingtochangeit.3.Ifyoudotheseabove,itshowsgoodmannersandpoliteness.4.Nowadays,Chinesearenotexpectedtogoabroadbecauseoftheirbehaviorssuchaswastingfood,...and...Ⅲ.例題分析近幾年來，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，他們中的一些不文明行為引起了人們的極大關(guān)注。調(diào)查顯示，中國游客成為世界上最不受歡迎的人之一。為此，請你給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文,并提出你的建議，呼吁人們文明出游。要點(diǎn)分析這篇文章講述的是一種社會現(xiàn)象，時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。審題要清楚，文章中所講的是指人們在出國旅游時的不文明行為，而不應(yīng)涉及其他方面的不文明行為。寫作素材開頭句Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplegoabroadforfun.However,someofthemshowbadbehaviors.2.Chinaisknownasacountrywithancientcivilization.However,theChinesewhotravelabroadoftenbehavebadly.3.Inthenewcentury,mostpeopleliketogoabroadforfun.But,someofthemhavebadmannersandhabits.列舉不文明現(xiàn)象的1.Forexample,theyleaverubbishanywheretheywant.Theyevensigntheirnamesonthewallsofattractions.Theydon’trespectforeignculture.2.Someyoungpeoplewastefood,jumpthequeueandthrowrubbishhereandthere.3.Forinstance,someChinesetouriststalkloudlyinpublicplaces.Thismakesothersunhappy,especiallythenativetourists.談具體措施的Weshouldn’twastefoodbecauseitisprecious.Pleaseorderlessfoodandbringthedisheswhichhaven’tbeeneatenbacktoyourhotel.2.Weshouldqueueupwhenwe’rewaitingtobuythings.3.Whenweareinpublicareas,weshouldspeakquietly.It’srudetomaketerriblenoise.WeshouldknowthatthereareculturaldifferencesbetweenChinaandothercountries.結(jié)尾句1.Inbrief,let’sbepoliteinordertoleaveagoodimpressiononnativepeople.2.Therearemanythingsweshoulddo.Pleaseremembertobepolite.Let’sbecivilizedtourists.3.Asthesayinggoes,“WheninRome,doasRomansdo.”Ibelievethatgoodmannersshowaperson’sinnerbeauty.例文分析原文稿WithmoreandmoreChinesepeopletravelingabroad,theirbadbehaviorshavebecomeahottopic.ArecentsurveyshowedthatChinesewereoneoftheworsttourists.First,weshouldkeepourvoicedownwhiletalkingwithfriendsinpublicplaces.Weshouldwaitinlinewhenwewaitforabus.Also,wecan’tspitordroplitterwhereverwewant.Finally,we’llrememberit’sreallyabadbehaviortowriteordrawpicturesonbuildings.Whileenjoyingourselves,weshouldnotonlyrespectlocalcustoms,butalsotakecareoftheenvironment.點(diǎn)評與評分這篇文章從一個側(cè)面切入，指出了當(dāng)今中國游客出國旅游時做的一些不文明行為。文章中，作者列舉了一些比較典型的不文明現(xiàn)象，也具體談到了改進(jìn)的措施。條理清晰，文筆流暢，結(jié)尾部分點(diǎn)題。但如果加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡句，會起到承上啟下的作用。此外，也要從“我”出發(fā)，談?wù)勛鳛橐粋€中學(xué)生如何做出文明的行為。按中考作文20分計算,該文章為15分左右。修改稿：WithmoreandmoreChinesepeopletravellingabroad,theirbadbehaviorshavebecomeahottopic.ArecentsurveyshowedthatChinesewereoneoftheworsttourists.Howcanwebegoodtourists?Herearesometips.First,weshouldkeepourvoicedownwhiletalkingwithfriendsinpublicplaces.Weshouldwaitinlinewhenwewaitforabus.Also,wecan’tspitordroplitterwhereverwewant.Finally,we’llrememberit’sreallyabadbehaviortowriteordrawpicturesonbuildings.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinkweshouldpayspecialattentiontoourbehaviors,savingnotothosebadhabits.Whileenjoyingourselves,weshouldnotonlyrespectlocalcustoms,butalsotakecareoftheenvironment.寫作專練20題一、話題作文1．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Howtostudyinabetterway”.(作為初三復(fù)習(xí)迎考階段的學(xué)生，努力學(xué)習(xí)是十分重要的，那么，我們?nèi)绾我砸环N更有效的方式來學(xué)習(xí)？是應(yīng)該抓住每一分每一秒的寶貴時間，還是應(yīng)該勞逸結(jié)合，適當(dāng)?shù)匦菹⒎潘蓙硖岣邔W(xué)習(xí)效率？以“Howtostudyinabetterway”為題，寫一篇不少以60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其他相關(guān)的信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtostudyinabetterwayNowIamaGrade9student,andIthinkstudyinghardisveryimportant.However,howcanwestudyinabetterway?Herearemysuggestions.Frist,youshouldlearntomanageyourtimeproperly.Second,whenyouaretiredofstudying,youcanrelaxbylisteningtomusicorreading.Third,keepinghealthyisalsoimportant.Youshoulddosportsandeathealthily.Lastbutnotleast,it’snecessarytogetenoughsleep.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpandyouwillhavegoodgradesinthehighschoolentranceexamination.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“如何以更好的方式學(xué)習(xí)”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段圍繞如何更好地學(xué)習(xí)提出建議；最后一段表達(dá)自己的希望和祝愿。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。2．Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“AproblemI’vesolved”.（以“我解決了這個問題”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）提示：你可以根據(jù)以下提示講述自己如何解決在學(xué)習(xí)、生活中遇到的一個問題。Usethefollowingpointsasareference:1.Whatwastheproblem?2.Howdidyousolveit?3.Whathaveyoulearned?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AproblemI’vesolved

IstillrememberwhenIjustenteredthefirstyearofjuniorhighschool.Ididn’tknowhowtokeepabalancebetweenstudyandhobbies.MyparentsthoughtthatIshouldgivemyhobbyofplayingbasketball,andconcentrateonmystudyanduseallmysparetimetostudy.ButIthoughtthatlifewasboringandIthoughtIalsoneededtorelaxproperly,soIcommunicatedwithmyparents.Theyallowedmetorelaxproperly,butstudymustn’tfallbehind.Iwasveryhappy.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedthatwhenwemeetsomeproblems,weshouldnotgiveupbuttryourbesttosolvethemactively.【詳解】1.題干分析：該題目要求以“我解決了這個問題”為題寫作，包含曾經(jīng)遇到什么問題，通過什么方式解決的，以及從這件事情學(xué)到什么。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章主要用第一人稱，描述經(jīng)歷時用一般過去時，描述經(jīng)歷時注意行文要流暢。3．Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“________are/isimportanttous”.（以“________是重要的”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）________are/isimportanttous________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MakeOurHometownMoreBeautifulIsImportanttoUsThecleanwaterandgreenmountainsareourtreasures.It’sourdreamtohaveahomewithabluesky,greentreesandcleanwater.Soit’sveryimportantforustorealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmentanddealingwithpollution.Butwhatshouldwedo?Wecantakeactionsinourdailylife.Wecanplantmoretreestokeepthesoilinplace.Resourcesareveryimportant,soweneedtosaveresourcestoavoidpollutingtheenvironment.Forexample,wecanusebothsidesofthepaper.Pollutedwatershouldbedealtwithintimetokeeptherivercleanbecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.Whenwegotootherplaces,wecanchoosepublictransporttoreduceairpollution.Inmyopinion,everyonecandosomethingsmalltomakeadifference.Whenweseerubbishontheroad,weshouldpickitupimmediately.Weshouldalsolearntorecyclewastebyseparatingthewasteintodifferentgroups.Ifallofusworktogether,wewillhaveamorebeautifulhome.【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要寫出對我們來說重要的一件事情，為主題展開描寫，主要從保護(hù)環(huán)境，節(jié)約資源，垃圾分類等方面做詳細(xì)的描述，寫作時要注意文章的層次感和語言的邏輯性要合理。2.例文點(diǎn)評：文章分三段描寫。第一段引出綠水青山很重要，我們應(yīng)該如何做；第二段給出一些具體的做法，第三段給出自己的一些觀點(diǎn)，從生活出發(fā)要怎么做。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語言表達(dá)流暢，意思明確，通俗易懂。4．Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic:________changedme!以“_______改變了我”為題,寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文，要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，學(xué)校及其相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分）Suggestedtopic：Reading/Doingsports/Helpingfightagainstpollution/Doinghousework/Myteacher/Mymother…changedme!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Musicchangedme!Everyonehashisownhobby,anditmaygivehimlotsofhappiness.Myhobbyislisteningtomusic.WhenIwasachild,Ienjoyedlisteningtomusic,especiallythecartoonmusic,thoughIwasn’tgoodatit.Ioftenlostmyselfinit.WhenIamintrouble,musiccanmakemecalmdown.WhenIamverytired,itcanmakemecomfortable.WhenIamangrywithsomething,italsocanmakemehappyagain.Listeningtomusickeepsmeinagoodmoodandit’sgoodformyhealth.Doyoulikelisteningtomusic?Ifnot,hopeyoucanhaveatry,youwillfinditbeneficial.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇命題作文，介紹什么改變了我，可以從文中提示的話題中選擇一個，要求要點(diǎn)覆蓋全面，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；注意寫作時要點(diǎn)齊全，同時也要緊扣主題。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和，人稱用第一人稱，寫作時，注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時的常用句式和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。5．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof___________”（請以“……的重要性”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，要求意思明確、內(nèi)容連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不計字?jǐn)?shù)）（注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的中文姓名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheimportanceofConfidenceConfidenceisveryimportantindailylife.Itcanhelpyoutodevelopahealthyattitude.Itcanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwedo.Astudyshowsthattheconfidentpeoplearemuchhappier.Theycanhavemorechancestomakethemselvessuccessful.Soconfidenceisvaluabletous.WhenIwasinGrade7,oncemyteacheraskedmetomakeaspeechinclass.AlthoughIpracticeditmanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthewordsatthebeginningofit.ThenIbreatheddeeplyandrelaxedmyself.Youcan’tbelievehowhappyIwaswhenIrecalledthespeechandfinisheditsuccessfully.MyteacherthoughthighlyofmyperformanceandIgotmuchencouragementfrommyclassmates.Fromthenon,Ihavebecomemoreandmoreconfident.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，談?wù)撟孕诺闹匾砸约白约旱囊淮谓?jīng)歷以及從經(jīng)歷中的收獲是什么，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。二、材料作文6．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Arespectablepersoninmyeyes”.(以“我眼中值得尊敬的一個人”為題寫一篇60詞以上的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。Suggestedoutlines:Whoisarespectablepersoninyoureyes?Whydoyouthinkhe/sheisrespectable?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?Arespectablepersoninmyeyes_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ArespectablepersoninmyeyesTherespectablepersoninmyeyesismyfather.Firstly,heisverystrongandmakesmefeelverysafe.Secondly,heisgoodatmanythings,suchasbasketballandping-pong.Ithinkheplaysping-pongaswellasWanghao.Thirdly,heisverypopularinourbigfamily.Everyoneinmyfamilylovesmyfatherverymuch.Mostimportantofall,heisagreatfatherandhelovesmeandmymotheralot.Healsohelpsmealot.Ihavelearntalotfromhim,suchassomewaysofsolvingproblemsandresponsibilityforthefamily.IdothinkheisasgreatasSuperman.Irespecthim!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求以“Arespectablepersoninmyeyes”為題，介紹眼中值得尊敬的人是誰，說明理由及從他/她身上學(xué)到了什么，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以第三人稱來敘述；時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；第一段點(diǎn)明我尊敬的人是誰。第二段介紹尊敬他的理由，并說明從他身上學(xué)到了什么。在寫作時可使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞讓文章有次序，要做到無標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和語法錯誤。7．★Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難朋友才是真朋友?！顴astorwest,homeisthebest.在家千日好，出門時時難。★Nocross,nocrown.不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨，怎能見彩虹。以上是幾位同學(xué)的感悟，請選擇你比較有感觸的一條，作為題目，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勛约旱捏w會。寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nocross,nocrownIfirstsawthissentencewhenIenteredjuniorhighschool.ThemomentIcameintotheclassroom,Isawthesentenceontheblackboard.Iliketheproverbbecauseittellsavaluablephilosophyoflife.Achievingourgoalsisalwaysnoteasy,butifwemanagetosolvealltheproblems,wearesuretorealizethem.OnceIwasnotverygoodatEnglish.Ididn’tknowmanyEnglishwordsandmygrammarwaspoor,whichreallymademeupset.Fortunately,myEnglishteachernoticedmybadsituationandsaidtome,“Don’tloseheart.Nocross,nocrown.”SuddenlyIwasremindedofthesentenceontheblackboard!Fromthenon,IdecidedtoworkhardonmyEnglishanditfinallypaidoff.MyEnglishimprovedalotand,moreimportantly,Igainedmuchconfidence.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求選擇一條諺語，結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行寫作。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題，介紹自己為什么喜歡這句諺語；第二段介紹自己的經(jīng)歷；第三段收尾，介紹自己的收獲。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。8．科技的發(fā)展正不斷地改變我們的學(xué)習(xí)方式，有人喜歡傳統(tǒng)的教學(xué)方式(traditionallearningintheclassroom)，有人喜歡現(xiàn)代化的在線教學(xué)(modernlearningontheInternet)。請將題目“Iprefer___________”。補(bǔ)充完整，談?wù)勀阆矚g這種學(xué)習(xí)方式的理由。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達(dá)/內(nèi)容僅供參考）Traditionallearninginaclassroom:

?wellplannedteachingarrangement

?face-to-facecommunication

?colourfulclassroomactivitiesModernlearningontheInternet:

?flexibletimetable

?aplanmadebyoneself

?richonlinelearningresources(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IprefertraditionallearninginaclassroomWiththedevelopmentofmoderntechnology,thewayoflearningischanging.ButIstillprefertraditionallearninginaclassroom.First,thereisafixedtimetable.Astudyplanisoftenmadebymyschool,soIdon’tneedtothinkabouthowtoarrangewhentolearndifferentsubjects.Second,wecanhaveface-to-facecommunicationwithbothteachersandclassmates.Third,therearecolourfulactivitiesinclass.Inthisway,Icanlearnthenewknowledgehappily.What’smore,learningintheclassroomcanhelpmedevelopasenseofteamspirit,soIcanlearnhowtogetalongwithothers.ThatiswhyIprefertochoosethetraditionalwayoflearningintheclassroom.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所示的參考信息以“Iprefer___________”為題談?wù)勛约焊矚g傳統(tǒng)的教學(xué)方式還是現(xiàn)代化的在線教學(xué)，并給出相應(yīng)的理由。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。正文第一部分先表述自己更喜歡哪種教學(xué)方式；第二部分給出相應(yīng)的理由，同時注意選用合適的連詞、短語和句型來將內(nèi)容進(jìn)行串聯(lián)和拓展；第三部分總結(jié)全文。文章做到思路清晰，層次分明，要點(diǎn)齊全；行文要語句通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系；無語法、單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。9．Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Sam在學(xué)校的英語學(xué)習(xí)論壇里發(fā)了一個帖子尋求幫助，請閱讀他的帖子并針對他提出的問題寫一份回帖為他提供幫助。Sam,Posted:(2daysago)MyproblemI’mveryworriedaboutthecomingEnglishoraltest(口語測試).I’mnotgoodatspeakingEnglish.I’venoideaabouthowtopracticeoralEnglish.MyparentsareangrywithmebecauseIhaven’tmademuchprogress.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?YourReplyRe:Sam’sproblem_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇內(nèi)容不得分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)●bepatient●keeppractising●communicatewith___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Don’tloseheart.Confidencewillsolvemanyproblems.TherearesomesolutionstoimproveyouroralEnglish.Firstofall,recitethewordsandbepatient.BecausethesentencesreadinEnglisharecomposedofwords,youwillbemorefluentwhenyouarefamiliarwiththewords.Secondly,youshouldreadaftertheradioandcultivateyoursenseoflanguage.Keeppracticingsothatyoucanspeakfluently.Finally,youshouldfindmoreclassmatestocommunicatewithyouinyourclassroom.Ihopeaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文需要回復(fù)Sam發(fā)布的一個帖子，回復(fù)原貼中的問題：應(yīng)該如何提高口語？2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時；主要以第二人稱為主展開敘述；短文采用三段式：第一段鼓勵對方，引出話題。第二段給出具體的三個提高口語建議；最后一段總結(jié)全文。在寫作時要做到無標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和語法錯誤。10．Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegiveninformation（根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）Pleasecompletethetopic“The________Iwillneverforget”andwriteatleast60wordsonyourtopics.（請補(bǔ)全題目并以此為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）.提示：生活中總有一些令人難忘的東西，或是一個給你幫助的人；或是一個意義非凡的日子或是一部令人深思的電影……請你搜索記憶的寶庫，分享一段令人難忘的片段。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheEnglishspeechcontestIwillneverforgetDuringmymiddleschoolstudy,Ihavetakenpartinmanymatches,butIneverforgetanEnglish