基礎(chǔ)寫作（短文投稿類應(yīng)用文）課件-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

應(yīng)用文寫作突破訓(xùn)練短文投稿類應(yīng)用文短文類應(yīng)用文即根據(jù)寫作情景的要求，寫一篇短文，通常為說明文，參與征文活動(dòng)或報(bào)紙、雜志的投稿。典例示范一、寫作情景一學(xué)校英文報(bào)YOUTH成功舉辦10周年，請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章投稿，慶祝它創(chuàng)辦10周年。內(nèi)容包括：1.讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛的欄目；3.期待與祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

一、審題審題要素情景一寫作情景慶祝校英文報(bào)YOUTH成功舉辦10周年征文話題報(bào)刊閱讀作者考生本人寫作對(duì)象

涉及的功能表達(dá)全校師生1.表示祝賀2.描述讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷和喜愛的欄目3.表達(dá)期待與祝福Youth

andMeAsaloyalfanofYouth,Iwouldliketoextendmywarmcongratulationsontheoccasionofthe10thanniversaryofitsfounding.【總起段：回應(yīng)寫作情景，表示祝賀】IcanwellrememberhowdeeplyattractedIwasbyitsuniquelayoutdesignandlanguagestylethefirsttimeIreadit.【要點(diǎn)1：讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷】Sincethen,Ihavehadtoreadeveryissue,inwhichIappreciatethecolumnSchoolCulturebest.【要點(diǎn)2：喜愛的欄目】Becauseitintroducesourschoolculturefrommanyaspects,whichenablesmetohaveadeeperunderstandingoftheconnotationofschool.【要點(diǎn)2的展開，說明原因】ThemoreIread,themoreIloveourschoolandYouth.Duringmyhighschoollife,YouthenrichesmyspiritualworldandwitnessesmyprogressinEnglish.Wordsfailtoconveymyfeelings.MayeachsucceedingyearbringYouthgreaterdevelopment!【要點(diǎn)3：期待與祝?！俊窘?jīng)典范文】二、寫作情景二你校英語節(jié)組織“你最喜愛的卡通電影人物”英語征文評(píng)選。你打算推薦“花木蘭”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文參加評(píng)選。1.簡述木蘭代父從軍的故事；2.你喜歡這一角色的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。IwishtochooseMulanasmyfavouritecartooncharacter.

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謀篇布局【經(jīng)典范文】IwishtochooseMulanasmyfavouritecartooncharacter.【總起段：推薦的人物】Livinginancienttimes,（V-ing作狀語）Mulanwasayounggirlwhowas

determinedtosacrificeherselfandreplaceherfathertojointhearmywithouthesitation.（定語從句）【主題句】Toavoidbeingseenthrough,Mulandisguisedherselfasamantotrickthearmyofficers.ItwasnotuntilMulanreturnedtoherhometownwithhonorandremovedherdisguisethatherfellowsoldiersrealizedshewasafemale.【展開句；要點(diǎn)1：木蘭代父從軍的故事】ThereasonwhyIlovethischaracteristhatsheisbothbraveandcaring.【主題句】Shefightedwithcourageanddeterminationandshemadegreatcontributionstohercountry.Sheisalsoawonderfulrolemodel,showingwomenandordinarypeoplethattheyneednotfeellimitedaboutwhattheycanachieve.【展開句；要點(diǎn)2：喜歡木蘭的理由】Aboveall,MulanissuchanattractivecharacterthatIadmiremost.【總結(jié)段：再次說明木蘭的人物特征】三、寫作情景三某英文雜志開設(shè)“一周一成語”專欄，向外國讀者介紹中國成語。請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，介紹成語“鍥而不舍”。內(nèi)容包括：1.解釋字面意思；2.闡釋道理。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。鍥而不舍（QieErBuShe）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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根據(jù)已給范文內(nèi)容，為“寫作情景三”寫一個(gè)總起段，和兩個(gè)主題句。

鍥而不舍（QieErBuShe）總起段：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________分段1主題句：________________________________________________“鍥(Qie)”means“theactofcarvingonthegoldstone”.Asfor“而(Er)”,itissimilarto“and”inEnglish.Whenitcomesto“不舍(BuShe)”,itsimplymeans“nevergiveup”.Chineseculturevaluesthegreatspiritofpersistence.Lotsofidiomsexpresssuchmeaning,amongwhichistheonewe’llintroducethisweek—鍥而不舍(QieErBuShe).Literally,themeaningofthisidiomliesineachcharacter.分段2主題句：_________________________________________It,asawhole,suggestsifwekeepcarving,wewilleventuallyturnametalorstonepieceintoanartworknomatterhowharditis.Takingcarvingmetalorstoneasananalogy,thisidiomhighlightsthemoralthatifwedon’tgiveup,wewillachieveourgoaloneday.總結(jié)段：Shortastheidiomis,itdemonstratesthefundamentalprincipleoftheChineseancestorsandhasaprofoundinfluenceontheChinese.Theidiomconveystheimportanceofperseverance.四、寫作情景四為迎接一年一度的重陽節(jié)，學(xué)校英文報(bào)舉辦以“關(guān)愛老人”為主題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語短文參賽，包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.重陽節(jié)的意義；2.如何關(guān)愛老人；3.期望與呼吁。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。LovetheElderly_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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根據(jù)已給范文內(nèi)容，為“寫作情景四”的分段要點(diǎn)2.“如何關(guān)愛老人”寫展開句。

LovetheElderlyTheChongyangFestivalfallsontheninthdayoftheninthmonthofthelunarcalendar.Nine,asthebiggestsinglenumber,representslonglifeandhappiness.That’swhyChinacelebratesSeniorCitizen’sDayontheninthoftheninthmonth.Itsymbolizesrespectandlovefortheold.Asourpopulationages,it’smoreimportantthaneverthattheelderlyarewelltakencareof.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopefully,byworkingtogetherwecanimprovethelatteryearsofourseniorcitizens.Aftertheirlifetimeofhardwork,it’stheleasttheydeserve.Youngpeopleshouldkeeptheirparentsorgrandparentscompanyregularly.Asasociety,weshouldbuildmorenursinghomeswheretheelderlycanbesafeandenjoytheirretirementtogether.五、寫作情景五你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。

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參考所給語塊，完成“寫作情景五”寫作任務(wù)。1.提高人們對(duì)海洋保護(hù)的認(rèn)識(shí)raisepeople’sawarenessofoceanconservation2.提供我們食物的主要來源provideamajorsourceofourfood3.在調(diào)節(jié)氣候方面發(fā)揮著重要作用playasignificantroleinregulatingtheclimate4.……是世界大部分經(jīng)濟(jì)的基礎(chǔ)…serveasthefoundationformuchoftheworld’seconomy5.肩負(fù)起保護(hù)……的責(zé)任shouldertheresponsibilitytoprotect…6.從小開始startwithsmallactions7.是時(shí)候……itishightimeto…OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Itwaslaunchedtoraisepeople’sawarenessofoceanconservation.ItiscommonlyacknowledgedthatoceansaresignificanttoourplanetEarth.Withabundantfishandotherseafood,theyprovideamajorsourceofourfood.Besides,itplaysasignificantroleinregulatingtheclimateanditabsorbstheheatandgeneratestheoxygenwebreathe.Lastbutnotleast,theyalsoserveasthefoundationformuchoftheworld’seconomy,supportingsectorsfromtourismtofisheriestointernationalshipping.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Asoceansbringsomanybenefits,undoubtedlyitiscrucialforustoshoulderourresponsibilitytoprotectthem.Firstofall,let’sstartwithsmallactionslikenotthrowinggarbageintotheoceanstoprotectmarinehabitats.Secondly,itishightimetoappealtopolicymakerstotakemeasurestohandletheissuesofoverfishingandwaterpollution.Allinall,toprotecttheoceanistoprotectourselves.變式訓(xùn)練四

完成寫作任務(wù)。

你校英文報(bào)“TeenageLife”本期專欄的主題為“SportsandHealth”。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性；2.你的運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。SportsandHealth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Itiscommonlyacknowledgedthatsportsaresignificanttoourhealth.Thisisespeciallytrueforusteenagers.Aswearestillinthecriticalstageofgrowingup,doingsportscanbuildupourbodies,thushelpingusstayenerg