2025年八省聯(lián)考高考英語讀后續(xù)寫試題解析及范文講義

八聯(lián)英語讀續(xù)解析及參考范文閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀錄片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.01一、知故事大意閱讀材料講述了作者在費城出差時，看到一則關于當?shù)貏游锞戎M織的紀錄片宣傳廣告。由于不愿獨自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房間度過這個晚上。然而，在感到無聊后，作者鼓起勇氣前往劇院觀看紀錄片，但在劇院前遇到了一個由許多大塊頭騎士組成的團體。作者一開始感到非常緊張，認為自己可能會遇到麻煩，甚至有點后悔自己的決定。盡管如此，作者最終決定進入劇院，希望能安全觀看電影。續(xù)寫部分要求構思作者進入劇院后發(fā)生的事情，特別是揭示摩托車騎士的真實身份，以及作者是如何從恐懼轉向安心。圖片02二、審篇章段落閱讀材料由五段組成，各段段落大意如下：第一段：作者在費城參加會議時，看到一個關于動物救助的紀錄片廣告，想去觀看募捐活動，但由于沒有同事陪伴，且擔心獨自外出，猶豫是否前往。第二段：作者回到酒店后感到無聊和不安，決定克服恐懼，前往劇院。劇院距離酒店只有五個街區(qū)，周圍環(huán)境看起來不危險，于是決定出發(fā)。第三段：天色已晚，街道幾乎空無一人。作者找到了劇院所在的街道，但轉角后卻被眼前的一群看起來強壯威猛的摩托車騎行者嚇到。第四段：雖然作者知道許多摩托車愛好者是友善的人，但此時作為一個獨自女性，身處陌生的街區(qū)，面對一群身穿標志的摩托車騎行者，作者感到非常害怕，并開始懷疑自己是否來錯了地方。第五段：盡管感到害怕，作者看到劇院的標志確認自己來對了地方。她決定進入劇院，希望里面會更安全，并祈禱摩托車騎行者會離開。03三、定敘事結構從結構上看，文章采用了“設懸念—解謎”的敘事方式。閱讀材料部分通過詳細描寫作者的心理活動，尤其是對這群騎士的恐懼，制造了緊張氛圍。而續(xù)寫部分則要求合理構思情節(jié)解開這個謎團，讓整個故事從緊張轉為輕松，傳遞出一個積極向上的信息。續(xù)寫部分要繼續(xù)延續(xù)這個懸念并最終解答，保證故事有完整的閉環(huán)。04四、構寫作思路一）續(xù)寫第一段寫作思路續(xù)寫第一段的段落開頭語是“我匆匆進入劇院，結果發(fā)現(xiàn)劇院里還有更多的摩托車騎士?！边@暗示作者原本的恐懼沒有完全消失，她進入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)情況并沒有改善，反而有更多的騎士。這一段我們需要保持文章的緊張氣氛和懸疑感，可通過環(huán)境的描寫、作者的心理活動，以及騎士們的舉止，來繼續(xù)加強這種懸疑氛圍。二）續(xù)寫第二段寫作思路續(xù)寫第二段的段落開頭語是“在電影開始后，我意識到這些騎士其實是一個動物救助組織的成員?！痹谶@一段的續(xù)寫中，我們需要揭示這些騎士其實是參與動物救援活動的志愿者?？梢酝ㄟ^對影片內(nèi)容的描述、騎士們的行為等，讓讀者逐漸意識到他們并不是“壞人”，而是為了公益事業(yè)而聚集在一起。通過這個轉折，消除之前的緊張氛圍，并傳達一種溫暖和正能量。05五、參考范文范文1Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Theyweresittingingroups,sometalkinginlowvoiceswhilethersquietlysippedontheirdrinks.Theirtoughappearancedidn’tseemtomatchthepeacefulatmosphereinsidethetheater.AsIwalkedin,oneofthemsmiledatme,whichmademefeelunexpectedlycalm.Inervouslyscannedtheroom,butinsteadofangrylooks,Iwasmetwithfriendlyglances.Still,Icouldn’tshakethefeelingthatIwasoutofplace.Butthen,thelightswentdown,andthefilmbegan.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Thedocumentaryshowedtheirincredibleeffortstosaveabandoneddogs,oftenriskingtheirownsafetytorescueanimalsfromdangeroussituations.Thebikersappearedonscreen,helpingwiththetransportationandcareofthedogs.Ifeltawaveofreliefandadmirationwashoverme.Theyweren’tthetough,scarypeopleIhadfirstthought;instead,theywereheroes,workingtomaketheworldabetterplaceforthehelplessanimals.(184words)范文2Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Theroomwasdimlylit,andseverallargemeninleatherjacketssatscatteredacrosstherows,theirpresenceasimposingasithadbeenoutside.Ihesitatedforamomentatthedoor,unsurewhetherIshouldstayorleave.Theairfeltheavywithuncertainty.AsIsteppedin,acoupleofthebikerslookedupandnoddedatme,butnoneofthemseemedthreatening.Despitetheirtoughappearance,theywerequietlychattingamongthemselves,andIcouldn’tshakethefeelingthattheyweren’tasdangerousastheylooked.Still,myheartwasracing,andItriedtostaycalm,hopingthesituationwouldresolveitselfsoon.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Thedocumentaryshowedimagesofthesemenworkingtogethertorescueabandoneddogsandbringthemtosafety.Theywereshownlovinglyfeedingandcaringfortheanimals,theirtough,ruggedpersonalitiesblendingseamlesslyw