壓軸題07-讀后續(xù)寫(人和動物和諧相處類)(原卷版)(江蘇專用)

壓軸題07讀后續(xù)寫新高考最突出的特點是增加了讀后續(xù)寫題型，讀后續(xù)寫是對考生閱讀和寫作的綜合能力考查形式，是整個考卷中最難的題，它每年堪稱是壓軸題。讀后續(xù)寫總是以友愛互助、人和動物之間的和諧相處為主題。2023年高考對于讀后續(xù)寫的考查，友愛互助、人和動物之間的和諧相處仍將是主要話題。2023年1月的浙江高考英語試題及2023年四省聯(lián)考試題都能聞到這個味道。EQ\o\ac(○,熱)EQ\o\ac(○,點)EQ\o\ac(○,題)EQ\o\ac(○,型)二人和動物和諧相處類1.基本規(guī)律：讀后續(xù)寫中給出的故事本身難度不大，其核心是考查學(xué)生的續(xù)寫能力，如果考生連給出的故事都看不懂，就無法展現(xiàn)考生的寫作水平，這樣的試題是失敗的命題。讀后續(xù)寫和前面的故事構(gòu)成一個完整的閉環(huán)的故事，這樣才能較好的考查考生的水平。2．實用解題方法：押題速練1.【2023年1月·浙江卷】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________押題速練2.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It’samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(斷奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.”Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn’tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________押題速練3閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheDogWhoSavedOurFamilyWemetMaxatthepickupareaofAlaskaAirlinesfiveyearsago.Hewasastandardpoodle(獅子狗)bornonValentine’sDayin2017，andcametousinasmallbluebox.Wehadadoptedhimfromanout-of-stateraiserwhopostedthenewsonthesocialnetwork.Ouronlyrequestwasthathehaveacalmbehavior,abletobearthepushingandhuggingofoureight-year-olddaughterandsix-year-oldson.Wewereasweetlittlefamily:me,myhusband,andourchildren,SophieandJake.ButforyearsI’dfeltasifwewouldn’treallybecompleteuntilwehadadog.Also,myhusbandworkedinabusinesscompanyandhadtotravelsome200daysayearforhisjob,andIknewI’dfeelsaferwithalargeanimalsleepingbythedoor.Whenweopenedthebox,thelastpieceofourpuzzlefellintoplace.Withhisblackhairandintelligenteyes,Maxwasbeautiful.Hewassosmallthathefitintothepalmofmyhand,hisbigpawslappingoverthesides.Hewasalsoalittlebitscared.AsIpulledhimclose,Ifelthisheartpoundandwonderedifwe’ddonetherightthing,takinghimfromhismother.Butitwastoolate.SophieandJakewerealreadyfightingoverwhowouldholdhimnextandwhoshouldhavetherighttotakeabathforhim.Overthefollowingmonths,wespentendlesshourswatchingMaxplaywithhisKongtoyorrollaroundthelivingroomfloor.Likemostpoodles,hewassmart.Hemasteredhouse-trainingquicklyandneverchewedonourfurnitureorshoes.Heconsideredhimselfoneofus.注意1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。OnenightweweresleepinginthebedroomwhenIheardsomestrangenoise.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthattime,Maxrantowardsme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________押題速練4閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onceuponatime,inavillage,alittleboynamedBoblivedwithhismotherintheirattractivelittlecottage.Theydidn’thavemuchbutwerecontentwiththelittletheyhad.Everydayafterhecamehomefromschool,Bobwouldaccompanyhismothertotheforesttocollectfirewood.Oneday,whenBobwasintheforestcollectingwood,hecameacrossapuppywhichseemedtobeallalone.Boblookedhereandthereforitsownerbutinvain.Sohepickeditup,putitunderhisshirtandcarriedithome.Reachinghome,hesaidtohermother,“Mom,Ifoundalittlepuppyaloneintheforest!Canwekeephim,please?“FeelingBob’shappiness,hismotherwasintwomindsaboutwhethertokeepthepuppyornot.Shetoldhim,”O(jiān)hBob,that’sthecutestpuppyI’veeverseen!Butwedon’thavemuch.Whatwillwedoabouthisfoodandsleepingarrangement?“Bobreplied,“It’sOK.I’llgivehimhalfofmymealsandlethimsleepwithmeinmybed.”Hearingthis,Bob’smotherjustnodded.Bob’shappinessknewnobounds,andhenamedthepuppyMilo.Fromthatdayonwards,BobandMilobecamethebestfriends.MilofollowedBobwhereverhewent.WhenBobwenttoschool,Milowoulddiligentlywaitoutsidetheclassroomtilltheclassesended.Atnight,MilosleptnexttoBobonhistinybedanddreamedsweetdreams.Ononeparticularday,Milowassick,unabletofollowBob,sohestayedathome.Thatdayitrainedheavily,andtheroadseverywhereturnedslippery.Onhiswayhome,BobwastryingtoreachhomeassoonaspossibleashedreamedofMilowaitingforhimandkeepinghimwarm.Unfortunately,Bobmissedseeingaholeatthesideoftheroadandfelldownthehole!注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hecriedforhelp,hopingtobeheardbypassers-by.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Milo’sbehaviordrewthesearchparty’sattention,andtheyrantowardsthehole.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________押題速練5閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Christmaswasalmosthere.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Arrivinghome,Bensaid,“Isawtwohorsestrappedbytheheavysnow.”FatherlookedatJack,theolderson.“Well,gotakealook.Taketherifleandsomehay.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot...”Thenextmorning,BenandJacksetoffinthecold,crispsnow.Thesnowmobilesankabitinthedeepsnow,buttheykeptgoing.Atlasttheyreachedtheclearingwherethehorsesstood.“They’restarving!”saidBen.Oneofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.“Well,”saidJack,sighing,pickinguptherifle.“There’snowaytogetthemdownthroughthesnow.Andtheylookprettybad.”“No!No!”criedBen.“Weshouldtry,”hepleaded.“Howdoweknowhowbadtheyreallyare?Dadcangetthevet!”“Well,Idon’tknow,“saidJackslowly.Hewalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedthebigbrownoneontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound.“Maybeyou’reright.”Benquicklygotthehayandspreaditaround.Thehorsesatehungrily,andBenpouredwaterintoapailforthem.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.“Whatifweputthemonabigsled?”Jacksaid.“Idon’tknowhowwecouldgetasledthatbigupthere,"Dadsighed.“Ithinkthekindestthingtodoistoputthemoutoftheirmisery.”“No!”saidBen.“Welljusthavetoshovel(鏟)apathortunnelthen.”Hisparentsraisedtheireyebrows.“That’salongway,andalotofsnow.Idon’tknowifitcanbedone,”Dadsaid,“unlesswehaveanawfullotofpeopleshoveling.”Bencouldseehewaswarmingtotheidea.“We’llfindsome!”saidBen.Hegrabbedhiscoatandboots.“Comeon,Jack,let’sgo!”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,agroupofsnowmobilersarrivedwithshovelsandhotchocolate,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________押題速練6閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Twolittlebirdswerehappilysittingontherock,justhavingfinishedtheirlunch.Theirparentshadallowedthem,forthefirsttime,togoandhuntfortheirlunchbythemselves.Andtheyhadenjoyedeverybitofthefreedom.Suddenly,anetcameandfellonboth.Theystruggledtopassthroughitbutinvain.Twoboysjumpeddownfromthebranchabovethem.Theyquicklygatheredthenet.Oneoftheboys,Eric,shoutedtohislittlebrotherMax.“Wehavefinallysucceededaftertendaysofwaiting.”“Yes,whatluck!Theylookmuchmorebeautifulthanordinarybirds.Let’sgohomeandputtheminourcage,”Ericsaidjoyfully.Theyranhomewiththebirds.Thetwolittlebirdswereterriblyfrightened.Theythoughtoftheirmotherwhomustbeanxiouslywaitingforthem.Whenthetwoboysgottothehousegate,thesweetsmellcameoutofthekitchen.TheirmotherAmlawasbakingcakes,whichwerewhattheboyscouldn’tlivewithout.Hearingtheboys’footsteps,Amlaanxiouslyasked,“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iwasgettingworried.I’mcookingyourfavoritecakes.”“Look,Mom,wehavecaughttwobeautifulbirds!Wearegoingtocagethem.Theywillplaywithus.”MaxproudlyshowedthemtoAmla.Seeingtheyoungbirdsshivering(發(fā)抖)intheboys’hands,Amlasaid,“Theyareindeedbeautiful.Buttheyaresoyoungandlooksoscared!Theyneedtheirmother.Setthemfree.”T