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SummaryWriting

ByJanetAsummaryisa

shortstatement(陳述)thatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsomething,notthedetails.（細節(jié)）

Whatisasummary?concise簡潔的Howtowriteagoodsummary5DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?Step1Readfortheoutline.What’sthetopicofthispassage？DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?What’sthewritingstyleofthepassage?NarrationArgumentationExpositionABC①②③④①②③④①②③④A B CWhat’sthestructureofthepassage?

Topic:DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?Reason1Reason2Reason3ThestructureofthepassageConclusionStep2Findthekeypointsandunderlinethem.Para1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Para1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.FactPara1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.

Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.ExamplePara1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthat

thesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Opinions

ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Somepeoplearguethatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpay.Tip1:Omitdetails&specificexamples.（刪除細節(jié)和具體例子）Tip2:Keepgeneralwordsratherthanspecificones.（保留概括性詞語）Tip3:Payattentiontosignalwords（信號詞）:however,but,infact,therefore,thus,inshort,inmyopinion

TipsforfindingkeyinformationPara2

Whilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople'slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames?Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.ReasonPara2

Whilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople'slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames?Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.ReasonPara3

What'smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara3

What'smore,

sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara3

What'smore,

sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalents

butalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara4

Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknowntotheworld,theyattractmanypeople'sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesofproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.ReasonPara4

Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknowntotheworld,theyattractmanypeople'sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesofproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.ReasonStep3Paraphrase

(改寫)thekeypoints.Para.1

Icanneveragreewiththeviewthatsportsstarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.

neveragreewith=___________________donotdeservethehighpay=____________（反義替換）（同義替換）oppose/objectto/beagainstshouldn'tearnsomuchmoneyPara.1

Icanneveragreewiththeviewthatsportsstarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.__________holdtheviewthatsportsstarsshouldn'tearnsomuchmoney,but________

thinkstheydodeservetheirhighpay.（改變句式）__________somepeople’sviews,thewriterbelievessportsstars’payisnottoohighbut________.（合理的）（改變句式）Manypeople

thewriterDifferentfromreasonable1.Usesynonymsorantonyms(運用同義詞或反義詞)2.changesentencepatterns（改變句式）3.changethevoice（改變語態(tài)）Hiscontributionsshouldberecognized

bypeople.People

shouldrecognizehiscontributions.Howtoparaphrasethekeypoints？Haveatry!Reason1Reason2Reason3Conclusion

Theyareimportanttopeople'slife.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.Sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.

talents,hardwork,Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.keysentences

Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.同義替換、句型轉換語態(tài)轉換、同義替換語態(tài)轉換、同義替換同義替換、句型轉換Reason1

Theyareimportanttopeople'slife.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.Theyareofgreatimportancetopeople'slifeby__________（提高，促進）people'sspiritualhappiness.promoting同義替換、句型轉換Sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.talentsandhardworkTheyobtaintheir__________（成就）throughtheirtalentsandhardwork,sothey________________（應該）toearnalot.achievementdeserve/arequalifiedReason2

同義替換、句型轉換Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.They_________________（促進提高）thenationaleconomybyexertingtheirreputationandinfluence.boom/promoteReason3

語態(tài)轉換、同義替換Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.Peopleshouldfully_______________（意識到）theirvalue.Conlusion

realize/beawareof語態(tài)轉換、同義替換Step4Addpropertransitionalwords.(過渡詞)Differentfromsomepeople'sviews,thewriterbelievessport