讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+椰林守護(hù)與災(zāi)難中祖孫的求生+課件-2025屆高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)椰林守護(hù)與災(zāi)難中祖孫的求生1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ten-year-oldSamilovedtovisithisgrandfather’shouse.Thehousewasnearthebeautifulbluesea.Attheseasidestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreencoconutshangingfromthem.Whenthecoconutsfelldown,Samiwouldbreakthemopenanddrinkthecoconutwater.ItwasalwaysgreatfuntospendtheholidaysatGrandpa’splace.Thiswintervacation,Samiwassurprisedwhenhecametohisgrandfather’svillage.Therewerehardlyanytreesleft.Hesawhousesbuiltnearthesea.Peoplehadcutdownmanypalmtreesandtherewashardlyanygreeneryleft.4續(xù)寫原文Grandpa’shousewasdifferent.Heneverallowedhistreestobecut.Hehuggedeachpalmtreeinhiscourtyard.Healsonamedthetwobigtreesnearthefrontdoor—onewasPetu,andtheotherBetu.Theyweretallandgreenandgavethesweetest,juiciestcoconuts.Onenight,Samiwasawakenedbyastrangesound.Hecouldnotsleep.Hetossedandturned(輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè))inbed.Suddenly,thegroundshookasiftheearthwassplitting.HesatupstraightandthenrantoGrandpa.Heclungto(抓緊)hisgrandpatightly.Grandpacriedout,“It’sanearthquake!”Theyranoutsidethehouse.Suddenly,therewasaloudsound;theearthwasnotsplittingbuttheseawasroaring.Peoplewereshouting,screamingandcrying,“Theseaisrising!”Thevillagersstartedrunningawayfromthebeach.Samiwatchedwithfear.5續(xù)寫原文Thewaveswererisinghigherandhigher.Samithought,“Howbigthewavesare!”Hewentintothehouseagainandsawwatercominginfromallsides.Hewasscared.Samirememberedhismothertellinghimlongago,“Youmustalwaysgetoutofthehouseifthefloodscometoonear.”HeranoutsidethehousewithGrandpa.Butthewatercamesurging(洶涌)in.Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.Waterwasallaroundandeverywhere.6段首句Paragraph1：GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Paragraph2：NowtheywereupinPetu.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9十歲的薩米喜歡去爺爺家，那里靠近大海，椰樹成林。寒假時(shí)，薩米發(fā)現(xiàn)村莊樹木被大量砍伐，唯有爺爺家的樹得以保留。一天夜里，地震引發(fā)海嘯，海水咆哮而來。薩米和爺爺匆忙逃出屋子，卻遭遇洶涌巨浪。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.爺爺緊緊握著薩米的手，但一個(gè)巨浪襲來，將他們沖散。薩米瞬間被卷入冰冷的海水中，他驚恐地掙扎著，拼命呼喊著爺爺，可洶涌的海浪聲淹沒了他的聲音。四周一片黑暗，除了冰冷刺骨的海水，他什么也看不見。薩米感覺自己在水中不斷下沉，慌亂中他胡亂地伸手去抓，卻只抓到一些漂浮的雜物。此時(shí)，他想起了爺爺和家里的大樹，心中燃起一絲求生的希望。他努力讓自己冷靜下來，試圖尋找漂浮物來支撐身體。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：NowtheywereupinPetu.此刻，他們爬上了佩圖樹。薩米用盡全身力氣，終于抱住了樹干，他的雙腿還在顫抖，心也在砰砰直跳。爺爺就在不遠(yuǎn)處的同一棵樹上，大聲鼓勵(lì)著他要堅(jiān)持住。海浪不斷拍打著樹干，濺起的水花讓他們?nèi)頋裢?。薩米看著周圍被淹沒的村莊，心中滿是悲傷。但他知道，只要和爺爺在一起，守著這棵大樹，就有活下去的希望。他們?cè)跇渖系却?，盼望著救援的到來，?jiān)信這場(chǎng)災(zāi)難終會(huì)過去。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Samiwasimmediatelyplungedintotheicyseawater.Hestruggledfrantically,screamingforGrandpa,butthedeafeningroarofthewavesdrownedouthisvoice.Itwaspitch-blackallaround,andhecouldfeelnothingbutthecoldwaterdragginghimdown.Panicking,heflailedhisarms,tryingtograbontosomething,onlytoclutchatfloatingdebris.Inthatmomentofdespair,hethoughtofGrandpaandthebigtreesathome,whichgavehimaglimmerofhope.Heforcedhimselftocalmdownandstartedsearchingforsomethingbuoyanttokeephimselfafloat.14范文呈現(xiàn)NowtheywereupinPetu.Samimanagedtograspthetreetrunkwithallhismight.Hislegswerestillshaking,andhisheartwaspoundingwildly.Grandpa,onthesametreenearby,shoutedwordsofencouragementtohimtoholdon.Thewaveskeptcrashingagainstthetrunk,splashingthemwithcoldwater.Samilookedaroundatthefloodedvillage,hisheartfilledwithsorrow.ButheknewthataslongashewaswithGrandpaandtheyhadthistreetoholdonto,therewashope.Theystayedinthetree,waitingpatiently,hopingforrescueandbelievingthatthisdisasterwouldeventuallypass.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)GrandpaheldSami’shandinadeath-grip,yetacolossalwavecamecrashingin,brutallyseparatingthem.Samiwasinstantaneouslyengulfedbythefrigidseawater,hisbodytossedaboutlikearag-doll.Desperately,hethrashedhislimbs,shriekingforGrandpa,butthetumultuousroarofthewavesswallowedhiscrieswhole.Thedarknesswasall-consuming,andtheonlysensationhecouldregisterwastheicywaterdragginghimdeeperintoitsdepths.Inastateofblindpanic,hewildlyflailedhisarms,attemptingtolatchontoanythingsolid,onlytoclutchatbitsoffloatingdebris.Amidstthischaos,memoriesofGrandpaandthesturdytreesathomeflashedthroughhismind,kindlingafaintsparkofhopewithinhim.WithaHerculeaneffort,hewilledhimselftocalmdownandbeganscanningthewaterforsomethingbuoyanttokeephimselfafloat.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)NowtheywereperchedhighupinPetu.Sami,summoningeveryounceofstrengthhehad,managedtotightlygripthetreetrunk.Hislegstrembleduncontrollably,andhisheartthunderedinhischest.Grandpa,positionednearbyonthesametree,bellowedwordsofencouragement,imploringhimtostaystrong.Waveafterwavesmashedagainstthetrunk,drenchingthemincold,saltywater.Samicasthiseyesaroundatthedevastated,floodedvillage,hisheartheavywithgrief.However,hewasacutelyawarethataslongashewasbyGrandpa'ssideandtheyhadthissteadfasttreeastheirrefuge,therewas