2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從逃避到賽場(chǎng)足球場(chǎng)上的蛻變+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從逃避到賽場(chǎng)，足球場(chǎng)上的蛻變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.IwashavinglunchwhenDadtoldmetogetready.Ibecameunhappy.Idon’tlikeSaturdays!Eventhoughit’saholidayformostchildren,itisnotformebecauseIneedtogotofootballclub.Manykidslovesports,butIamnotoneofthem.Iprefertostayathomeandread.Idon’tlikerunning,soinateamIamabadplayer.ThecoachistiredofmeandmyteammatessometimesthinkI’museless.Ihavenoideahowtoplayfootball.Usually,afterpracticemyteammateswouldaskmetostayoutofthegameandIwouldjustnod.LastThursday,thecoachtoldusthatwewouldbecompetingwithanotherteaminamonthandmanypeoplewouldcometoseethegame.Ouropponents(對(duì)手)werethewinnerlastyearandIfrozeandthoughthowawkwarditwouldbeiftheteamlostbecauseofme.4續(xù)寫原文SoIdecidedtopracticehardforthematchandIwenttopracticeeverysingleday.Afteronemonth,whenthegamedaycame,myteammateswereunwillingtotakemeintheteam,andIalsowishedtostayawayfromthegroundaswell.Buttheyhappenedtobeshortofoneplayerandhadnochoicebuttotakemeintheteam.OurteamwastheBigBlues.Therewasagreatcheeronourarrivalinthefield.Igotverynervous.Thegamestartedandwithintwominutes,Igotabluecard.BythetimeIwasallowedback,thescorewastwogoalsforeachteamandthenextgoalwoulddecidethewinningteam.5段首句Paragraph1：Whentheballcametowardsme,Ifroze.Paragraph2：Ourteam,TheBigBlues,wonthematch!6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了“我”不喜歡足球，周六去足球俱樂部讓“我”滿心不悅。在隊(duì)里，因不愛跑步且不懂踢球，“我”表現(xiàn)糟糕，遭教練厭煩和隊(duì)友嫌棄。得知將與去年冠軍隊(duì)比賽，“我”擔(dān)心拖后腿，便每日苦練。比賽當(dāng)天，球隊(duì)缺人，“我”被迫上場(chǎng)，開場(chǎng)不久就吃藍(lán)牌?；貋頃r(shí)，比分持平，勝負(fù)在此一舉。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Whentheballcametowardsme,Ifroze.當(dāng)球朝我飛來時(shí)，我腦海中一片空白，身體仿佛被定住了一般。曾經(jīng)那些在球場(chǎng)上的失敗經(jīng)歷如潮水般涌上心頭，讓我差點(diǎn)放棄。然而，就在這關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，我看到了教練充滿期待的眼神，聽到了隊(duì)友們?yōu)槲壹佑偷暮艉啊Ｎ倚闹杏科鹨还闪α?，告訴自己不能退縮。我迅速調(diào)整狀態(tài)，全力奔跑，精準(zhǔn)判斷球的落點(diǎn)，然后用盡全身力氣，一腳將球踢向?qū)Ψ角蜷T。足球在空中劃過一道漂亮的弧線，直奔球門而去。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Ourteam,TheBigBlues,wonthematch!我們的球隊(duì)，大藍(lán)隊(duì)，贏得了這場(chǎng)比賽！整個(gè)球場(chǎng)瞬間沸騰起來，隊(duì)友們激動(dòng)地沖過來，將我高高拋起。他們不停地歡呼著，臉上洋溢著喜悅和自豪。教練走過來，緊緊地?fù)肀?，夸贊我表現(xiàn)出色。這一刻，我感到無比的榮耀。我不僅為球隊(duì)贏得了勝利，也戰(zhàn)勝了曾經(jīng)那個(gè)自卑的自己。從那以后，足球不再是我討厭的運(yùn)動(dòng)，而是我熱愛并為之奮斗的事業(yè)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Whentheballcametowardsme,mymindwentblank,andmybodyseemedtobefrozen.Memoriesofallthosepastfailuresonthefootballfieldfloodedback,almostmakingmegiveup.However,atthatcriticalmoment,Isawtheexpectantlookinthecoach'seyesandheardthecheersofmyteammates.Asurgeofstrengthwelledupwithinme,tellingmenottobackdown.Iquicklyadjustedmystate,ranwithallmymight,accuratelyjudgedtheball'slandingpoint,andthenkickedtheballtowardstheopponent'sgoalwithallmystrength.Thefootballflewthroughtheairinabeautifularc,headingstraightforthegoal.13范文呈現(xiàn)Ourteam,TheBigBlues,wonthematch!Theentirestadiumeruptedintowildcheersinaninstant.Myteammatesrushedtowardsmeexcitedlyandthrewmeintotheair.Theykeptcheering,withjoyandprideontheirfaces.Thecoachcameoverandhuggedmetightly,praisingmeformyexcellentperformance.Atthismoment,Ifeltextremelyproud.Inotonlywonthegamefortheteambutalsoovercamemyformerself-doubt.Fromthenon,footballwasnolongerthesportIhatedbuttheoneIlovedandwouldstrivefor.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Whentheballhurtledtowardsme,mymindemptied,andmybodyseemedtobeparalyzedbyasuddeninertia.Thefloodofpastfailuresonthefootballpitchsurgedback,threateningtodrownmeinself-doubtanddefeat.However,inthatsplit-second,theexpectantglintinthecoach'seyesandtheresoundingcheersofmyteammatespiercedthroughthefogoffear.Awellspringofdeterminationsurgedwithinme,compellingmetostandmyground.Withaburstofspeed,Iadjustedmystance,calculatedtheball'strajectorywithprecision,andunleashedapowerfulkick.Theballsoaredthroughtheair,tracingaperfectarctowardstheopponent'sgoal.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Ourteam,TheBigBlues,emergedvictorious!Instantly,thestadiumexplodedintoacacophonyofjubilation.Myteammates,eyesablazewithexcitement,rushedtowardsmeandhoistedmeintotheair.Theirexuberantcheersfilledthestadium,eachfaceradiantwithpride.Thecoach,beamingwithapproval,approachedandenfoldedmeinawarmembrace,laudingmyoutstandingperformance.Inthatmoment,aprofoundsenseofaccomplishmentwashedoverme.NotonlyhadIsecuredvictoryfortheteam,butIhadalso