07 和諧交往- 把脈2021年中考英語作文熱點【學(xué)科網(wǎng)名師堂】

07-和諧交往（一）與父母相處伴隨著身心的日益發(fā)展，如何與父母相處是初中生必須要面對和解決的問題，這個話題經(jīng)常會出現(xiàn)在平時的寫作中。

【預(yù)測題目】假如你是HanMei，下面是一封你的筆友Alice給你發(fā)來的e-mail，請你根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。提示詞語：listento，mother’slove，careabout，communicatewith，getalongwith，smile寫作要求：1.語句通順，書寫工整;2.可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)在100左右.

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：DearAlice，Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit’snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother’slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother’s，youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn’ttakeyouradvice，justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.YoursHanMei（二）愛心真善美是每個時代都會倡導(dǎo)的主題。一個充滿愛心的人無論走到哪里，都會像火光一樣，溫暖和照亮他/她周圍的世界！

【預(yù)測題目】假設(shè)你是李明，你們學(xué)校正在舉辦主題為“付出既是收獲”的征文活動，請你聯(lián)系自己平時的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。

要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。

2.80—100詞。標(biāo)題和文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

GivingisReceivingI’mastudentfromGreenMiddleSchool.MynameisLiMing.

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：GivingisReceivingI’mastudentfromGreenMiddleSchool.MynameisLiMing.IlikehelpingothersbecauseIthinkitmakesmeveryhappy.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirschoolwork.SometimesIhelpcleanupcityparks.Igototheoldpeople’shomeanddosomecleaningforthemonceamonth.SoI’mprettypopularthere.Ioftenvisitthechildren’shospitaltocheerthesickkidsup.Ireadstoriesandsingsongsforthem.Iamgoodwithchildren.Ialsogivemoneytocharitiestohelppeopleintrouble.Ithinkgivingisreceiving.Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Doyouagreewithme?（三）友誼是幸福的源泉之一。請你寫一篇短文，要點如下：1.敘述一件你和好朋友之間發(fā)生的事情；2.表明這件事情中你在他（她）身上學(xué)習(xí)到的品質(zhì)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MaryandIarebestfriends.Wealwaysgotoschooltogetherandshareeverythingwitheachother.Oneday,wewerereadinganewmagazineattheschoollibrary.ButIbrokethemagazine.IwassoshythatIwasafraidtotellthetruth.Marytookthemagazineandtoldtheteacherthatshebrokethebookandsaidsorry.Friendsshouldbehonest.Ifyouarehonest,yourfriendcantrustyou.MybestfriendsalwaystellsmewhenIdosomethingwrong.Ithurtssometimes,butitmakesmeabetterperson,too.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以友誼為話題作文，要求結(jié)合與好朋友之間的一件事情，表明自己學(xué)習(xí)到的品質(zhì)。因此短文要用一般過去時態(tài)講述一件與朋友相關(guān)的感人事件，并用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)說明自己從這件事上的收獲、感悟。動筆前要選擇好寫作材料、理清頭緒，寫作時要注意語言及句型的選用，敘述自己的感受要注意到情真意切。寫作亮點：短文第一段敘述了和好朋友之間發(fā)生的事情，第二段表明作者的感悟。層次清楚，條理分明。短文開頭首先總體說明“我們”是好朋友，提出中心詞：best；然后用always…together，everything幾個詞突出中心；接下來介紹了作者與好朋友之間互幫互助的故事，具體生動。其中用到的狀語從句，賓語從句等等使文章更加生動；第二段作者圍繞honest闡述，表明友誼要真誠，幫助朋友要使朋友成為更好的人。突出并且升華了主題。考點：考查話題作文。（四）隨著年齡的增長，不少青少年發(fā)現(xiàn)越來越難與父母溝通和交流，各方面的分歧使兩代人之間的關(guān)系日益緊張。請圍繞該話題用英語談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲ螅海?）內(nèi)容包括①分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的主要原因；②提出解決該問題的具體建議。（2）字數(shù)：60-80字（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。優(yōu)秀滿分范文"Idon'tlikemyparents.TheyalwaystellmeIshoulddothis,andshouldnotdothat.Itsometimesmakesmeangry，"saidZhangHua，amiddleschoolstudent．Almosteveryteenagerhavethesamequestion.Why?Oneofthebiggestthingsiswhensomeonebecomesaparent，he/shelikesworryingthings.Theyworryabouteverythingaboutyou，fromthetimeyouwereborn.Allthesethingsarepartofyourlife.Theywantyoutogrowuphealthilyandhappily.Sohowcanyoumakethingseasieronyourself?Justmakesureyourparentsknowwhatyou'redoing.Getthemtoknowyourfriends.Phoneifyoustaysomewhereelsesothatyourparentsdon'tcalleveryhospitalinthephonebooklookingforyourbody.Saysorrytothemwhenyoumakemistakes.Takeresponsibility(責(zé)任)forwhatyouhavedone.Talkaboutyourideaswiththem.Mostofall，trytothinkaboutwhyyourparentsdothisordothat.Someday，whenyoubecomeaparent，theymaybeabletohelpyouhowtogetonwithyourchildren.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:worryabout擔(dān)心；growup長大；takeresponsibilityfor為……負責(zé)任；talkabout談?wù)撃?；getonwith和……相處等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩?？键c：考查提綱類作文（五）“傳遞愛心，服務(wù)他人”是文明社會所倡導(dǎo)的理念。獅子會(theLions)就是一個以此為宗旨的國際性服務(wù)團體。楊敏是獅子會的一名成員，多年來她一直樂于助人。請根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇短文，向?？腅nglishWorld欄目投稿，簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勀愕挠^點和打算。

Readytohelpothers

YangMin

◆helpothersforyears

◆gototheoldpeople'shometwiceamonth(cuthair.washclothes,dosomecleaning)

◆offerpeopleumbrellasorraincoatsonrainydays

◆youropinion……

◆yourplan……

要求：1．短文內(nèi)容必須包含表格所提供的要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名；3．詞數(shù)：80-100（短文開頭已給出，僅供選擇使用，不計人總詞數(shù)）。短文開頭：Fromtimetotime，wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________優(yōu)秀滿分范文Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.AsamemberoftheLions,shehasbeenhelpingothersformanyyears.Shegoestotheoldpeopledhometwiceamonthtocuthair,washclothesanddosomecleaningforthem.Besides,onrainydayssheofferspeopleumbrellasorraincoatsforfree.Findeeplymovedbyherstory.Fmgoingtostartwithsmallthingsaroundme.Iplantogivebooksandclothestochildreninpoorvillages.Whatsmore,Tilaskmyparentsandmorefriendstojoinme.Smallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Let5shelpthosewhoneedhelp!【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。向?？腅nglishWorld欄目投稿，簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勛约旱挠^點和打算。本文所給材料比較詳細，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，字數(shù)在80至100之間。寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，表達清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語言通順，要點齊全，條理清楚，字數(shù)符合要求，沒有拼寫和語法錯誤，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章?？键c：提綱類作文。（六）父母與子女的溝通：親子關(guān)系是很多家庭關(guān)注的話題，也是孩子青春階段突出的矛盾。請你寫一篇相關(guān)內(nèi)容的英語短文。要求：1、語言通順。2、100個單詞左右優(yōu)秀滿分范文HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.（七）人際關(guān)系假如你是HanMei,下面是一封你的筆友Alice給你發(fā)來的e-mail,請你根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。提示詞語：listento,mother'slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile寫作要求：1.語句通順，書寫工整;2.可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)在60-80左右DearHanMei,I'mafraidI'vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.Putonmoreclothes.Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?andsoon.I'mannoyed(煩惱)。WhatshallIdo?Alice優(yōu)秀滿分范文：DearAlice,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit'snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother'slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother's,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn'ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.（八）“和諧鄰里，互助互愛”是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。最近，某社區(qū)發(fā)生的一件事在當(dāng)?shù)貍鳛榧言挘簝芍芮?，李明八十歲的父親獨自在家，他突然生病了，而李明夫婦在離家很遠的學(xué)校工作。幸虧鄰居張先生的幫助，老人被及時送往醫(yī)院，現(xiàn)已脫離危險。李明十分感激。請根據(jù)上述材料，用英語寫一篇短文，文章必須包括以下要點：1.簡述李明父親得救的經(jīng)過；2.你對這件事的感悟（擁有好鄰居很重要，……）；3.如何成為好鄰居（和睦相處，……）。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名；2.詞數(shù)在80—100之間，已給出的文字不計入總詞數(shù)?！癊njoyingaharmoniousneighborhood”isoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues.Whathashappenedinonecommunityrecentlyisagoodexample.Twoweeksago,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wecancreateaharmoniousneighborhoodinthisway.【答案】"Enjoyingaharmoniousneighborhood"isoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues.Whathashappenedinonecommunityrecentlyisagoodexample.Twoweeksago，LiMing'seighty-year-oldfathersuddenlyfellillathome.LiMingandhiswifeworkedinaschoolfarawayfromhome.ThankstothehelpofhisneighborMr.Zhang，theoldmanwassenttothehospitalintimeandnowhewasoutofdanger.LiMingwasquitethankfultohisneighbor.It'simportanttohaveakind-heartedneighbor.Weshouldgetonwellwithourneighbors.Whenan