專(zhuān)題-36-讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-測(cè)-(解析版)

專(zhuān)題36讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)備考2023年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)講練測(cè)--測(cè)（解析版）名校綜合限時(shí)練共6篇限時(shí)120分鐘（每小題25分,共150分）班級(jí)____________姓名____________(江淮十校2023屆高三11月第二次聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題) 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AndyandEricweretwofriendswhooftenplayedtogether.Oneday,ontheirwaybackhomefromschool,theyrodeslowly,talkingaboutthefishingtripthattheyhadplannedforthecomingsummervacation.Whileturningacorner,Andycriedout,“Afightnearthelake!Let’sgotowatch!”“No,”saidEric.“Let’sgohomeandnotgetinvolvedintheirquarrel.Stayawayfromit,orwemaygetintotrouble.What’smore,ourparentsarewaitingforusathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward(膽小鬼).”Andylaughedathim.Ericwasalittleannoyed,buthedidn’tsayanything,justridinghomedirectly.Thenextday,hewenttoschoolasusual.However,AndyhadtoldalltheclassthatEricwastootimidtodoanythingbrave.Sothewholeclasslaughedathimalot.Andfromthenon,theylookeddownonEric,unwillingtoplaywithhim.Ericwasverysadbuthedidn’tblameAndyforhisbeingrudetohim,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Therefore,heignoredtheirteasing,studyingevenharder.Whatwasdifferentwasthathehadtogohomealone.Severaldayslater,Andytogetherwithhisnewfriendswasridinghome.Theyweresoabsorbedintheirconversationthattheywereunawareofeverythingelsearoundthem.Suddenly,Andynoticedanunusualbuzzofnoise.Hecametoastopandlookedcuriouslyuptotheheavens.Whathesawshockedandterrifiedhim.Ahugeswarmofbeesfilledtheskylikeablackcloudandthenoisymassseemedtobeheadingangrilytowardsthem.“Bees!”someoneshouted.Theboyswerecaughtingreatpanic.AllofthemexceptAndyrodeasfastaspossibletoescape.Andywastooscaredtomove.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Andystoppedthere,withthebuzzlouderandlouder._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Draggingthemselvesoutofthelake,theystruggleduptotheshore.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Andystoppedthere,withthebuzzlouderandlouder.Justatthatmoment,Ericroderapidlytowardshimlikeanarrow.Hestopped,threwoffhisclothesandwrappeduptheirfaces.Afterthat,heshoutedtoAndy,“Thisway!Thereisalakeahead!”Withnotimetowaste,theyrodefuriouslyinthedirectionofthelake,thecrazybeesfollowingthem.Finally,theymadeittothelake.Offtheirbikesandintothecoolwatertheylived,disappearingbelowthesurfaceandawayfromthesavageinsects.Afterholdingtheirbreathforaslongastheycould,theycameupforairandnoticedthebeeshadgone.Draggingthemselvesoutofthelake,theystruggleduptotheshore.AndylookedatEricgratefullyandwasashamedofhavingcalledEricacoward.HerealizedthatErichadtruecourage.HehuggedEric,saying“sorry”toEricrepeatedlyforhisrudebehaviorandaskedforhisforgiveness.Ericforgavehimhappily.HeandAndywerefriendsagainandtheywenthometogetherasusual.Fromthat,Andylearnedwhattruecouragewas:neverbeafraidtodogood,butalwaysfeartodoevil.2.（2023屆江蘇省南京市第一中學(xué)高三第一次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試題）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癇equiet.”Nooneactuallyeversaidthattome—infact,itwasusuallytheopposite“Speakup.”“Whatdidyousay?”“Icouldn’tunderstandyou.”Buteverytimesomeonetoldmetobelouder,tobeclearer,Iwantedtoshutmymouthandneveropenitagain.Yearsoflivingwithalisp(口齒不清)hadtaughtmethatitwasbettertosaynothingthantospeakandriskbeingmisunderstood,leadingtoembarrassmentandawkwardness.Asaresultofmysilence,Ifeltdistancedfrommostofmypeers,havingonlyafewpeopleIfeltwerefriends.“Kathryn?Oh,she’squiet.”That’swhatmostpeoplewouldsaywhentheythoughtofme.“Quiet”mightaswellhavebeenpartofmyname.Iwasokaywiththat.Ididn’tneedtobeheard.Septemberoflastyearthatallchanged.IstartedmyfirstdayofcreativewritingclasswithMs.Haist.Sheisoneofthoseteachersyoudon’tfeelfrightenedtoapproach;youknowshewillhelpyouifyouneedit.Ihadexpectedtofilloutplotdiagramsandlearntheproperwaytopunctuatedialogue.However,everydaywewouldbegivenadifferentwritingprompt(提示詞)andthen,ifwewished,wecouldsharewhatwehadwrittenwiththeclass.Iremembersittingandlisteningtoothersreadtheirwork,andIdistinctlyrememberthinking:Thatwillneverbeme.I’llneverhavethecouragetodothat.Then,onedayinOctober,IwasreallypleasedwithwhatIhadwritten,sopleasedthatIwantedtoshare.IremembermyheartpoundinginmychestasIraisedmyhandtoread,andthoseurgentlittlevoicesinmymindlistingallthereasonswhyitwasn’tagoodidea:Theywon’tunderstandyou.Youhavealisp,remember?Besides,yourwritingisn’tthatgood.Bequiet.Bequiet.IwasabouttowithdrawmyhandwhenImetMs.Haist’sencouragingeyes.注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iswallowedthevoicesdownandletmyrealvoicecomeout._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SoonIwasreadingoutloudnearlyeveryday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iswallowedthevoicesdownandletmyrealvoicecomeout.Atfirst,myvoicewasverylow.Ireadmyarticlescarefully.AfterIfinishedthefirstparagraphfluently,myclassmate’seyesalllookedatmewithaffirmation.Havingfinishedreadingthisarticle,IwaspraisedbyMs.HesterforthecontentthatIwroteandthechangesthatImadeinclass.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadreceivedwarmapplausefrommyteachersandclassmates.WhenIwenthome,acardwasfoundinmynotebookwithasentencesaying“everythingispossible”.TherewasnodoubtthatitwasgiventomebyMs.Hester.SoonIwasreadingoutloudnearlyeveryday.Inthemorning,Iwouldpracticemyfavoritenovelsnearthegroveatschool,becauseIwantedtorealizemydream.Mydreamistobecomeanannouncerinthenextsemester,whichwouldentitlemetosharethestudents’writingandmyfavoritearticles.Inclass,Itriedmybesttoseizeeveryopportunitytoimprovemyself.Gradually,Ibegantohavenormalconversationswithmyclassmatesandgotalongwellwiththem.Everythinginlifewasbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者因?yàn)榭邶X不清，遭到同學(xué)們的嘲笑和非議，而自卑不敢開(kāi)口。在老師Ms.Haist的鼓勵(lì)之下，逐漸挑戰(zhàn)自我、走出陰影、變得自信、和敢于表達(dá)自己的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我把聲音咽了下去，讓我真正的聲音出來(lái)。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者戰(zhàn)勝質(zhì)疑，開(kāi)始大膽閱讀的表現(xiàn)，以及老師和同學(xué)對(duì)此的反應(yīng)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“很快，我?guī)缀趺刻於即舐暲首x?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)作者在發(fā)生改變之后的一些事情。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：口齒不清——產(chǎn)生自卑——同學(xué)疏遠(yuǎn)——老師鼓勵(lì)——戰(zhàn)勝自我——繼續(xù)進(jìn)步3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①實(shí)現(xiàn)：realize/accomplish/implement②得到：received/obtain/attain③回家：gohome/returnhome/gobackhome情緒類(lèi)①被稱(chēng)贊：bepraisedby/becomplimented/becommented②美好的：beautiful/hopeful/promising【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Havingfinishedreadingthisarticle,IwaspraisedbyMs.HesterforthecontentthatIwroteandthechangesthatImadeinclass.（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)，and并列that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]WhenIwenthome,acardwasfoundinmynotebookwithasentencesaying“everythingispossible”.（由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型3]Mydreamistobecomeanannouncerinthenextsemester,whichwouldentitlemetosharethestudents’writingandmyfavoritearticles.（由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）3.(2023屆粵湘鄂名校聯(lián)盟高三上學(xué)期第一次聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Codyalwaysknewhisfamilywasdifferent.Whileotherkidswenttothebeachforsummervacation,heandhismomvisitedtheworld’slargestbasket,ortheworld’slargestbaseballbat,ortheworld’slargestfork.Thesearerealthings.AndCody’smomhadphotosofthemduringthosetripshangingonthewall.Asalittlekid,Codythoughtthesevacationswerethebestever.Butwithtimegoingby,hestartedtofeelembarrassed.Whenhisclassmateswouldaskwherehe’dgoneforvacation,he’dsay,“Noplacespecial.”O(jiān)naSundaymorning,hismomsaid,“Iwasreadingthisarticleabouttheworld’slargestgatheringofpeopledressedasturkeys.ItwasinTexas,anditwasonly661people!Fivetimesasmanypeopleliveinourtown.IwanttoholdasimilareventherearoundThanksgivingDay,whichisafewweeksaway.”“Mom,”Codysaid.“No.”“Yes!”Momsaid.“Ijustcalledthenewspaper.Theannouncementrunstomorrow.ThedayafterThanksgiving,everyonewillmeetinthetownsquare—dressedasturkeys!”AfewdaysbeforeThanksgiving,Codyandhismomsatdownfordinner.Codysetdownhisfork.“Doyouhaveanyideawhatthekidsatschoolthinkabouttheturkeydress-up?”“No,”Momsaid.“Well,theyhavealottosay.”Momlookeddownatherfingernails,thenlookedatCody.“I’mafraidit’stoolatetocallitoff,sweetie.”Atlast,itwasthedayofthegreatturkeydress-up.Butinsteadofbouncingaroundthehouseasshe’dbeenallweek,Momwassittingontheliving-roomfloor,shouldersslumped(耷拉著).“Ican’tbelievetheDJissick,”shesaid.“WhatamIgoingtodo?Musiciswhatmakesafestivityfestive!Idon’tknowhowtoworkallthisstuff.”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Momsighedandleanedbackagainstthecouch._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthehappymemoriesbroughtbackbythephotosonthewall,Codysaid,“I’lldoit.”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】【參考范文】Momsighedandleanedbackagainstthecouch.Withnomusic,theturkeydress-upmightactuallyhavetobecanceled,whichmeanttherewouldbenomoreembarrassment.Codyrealizedthiswashischance.Beforehisblurtingoutwhatwasinhismind,hiseyesfellontheframedphotosfromtheirvacationsovertheyearswhichhungonthewallabovethecouch.Codylookedatthefirstone.HewasaboutfivewhentheywenttoKentuckytoseetheworld’slargestbaseballbat.Hissmilewasalmostasbigasthebatwhilehismom’ssmilewasevenbigger.Suddenly,Codychangedhismind.Withthehappymemoriesbroughtbackbythephotosonthewall,Codysaid,“I’lldoit.”“Dowhat?”askedMom,sittingup.“I’llbetheDJ.Icanfigureouttheequipment.”Shegavehimabighug.“Cody,you’realifesaver!”Codyhadthemusicsetup,andthetownsquarewasfullofpeopledressedasturkeys.Cody’smomwasdeckedoutinextra-longfeathers.Theyallappearedtobehavingfun.Bestofall,hismomwashavingablast.Herealizedheandhismomhadalwaysbeenthereforeachother,tryingtomakeeachothersmile.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了科迪和其媽媽的故事?？频弦恢倍贾浪募彝ヅc眾不同，一開(kāi)始他還覺(jué)得這是好事，但是他逐漸覺(jué)得很尷尬。他媽媽決定舉辦一次活動(dòng)，遇到了困難。后來(lái)他在旅游照片的啟發(fā)下，幫助媽媽解決了困難，舉辦了活動(dòng)。與其同時(shí)，他也意識(shí)到他和他媽媽一直都在身邊，努力讓彼此微笑，是最重要的事情?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“媽媽嘆了口氣，靠在沙發(fā)上?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)科迪媽媽面對(duì)此次困難做出的行動(dòng)以及科迪的反應(yīng)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“帶著墻上的照片勾起的美好回憶，科迪說(shuō)“我會(huì)做的。””可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)科迪和其媽媽采取的措施以及活動(dòng)的舉辦情況。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：科迪態(tài)度變化——媽媽計(jì)劃舉辦活動(dòng)——DJ生病——科迪受啟發(fā)——幫助媽媽3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①意識(shí)到：realize/awareof/recognize②改變：change/convert/alter③使……回憶起：bringback/recall/recollect情緒類(lèi)①尷尬：embarrassment/awkwardness②積極：havefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtime【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Withnomusic,theturkeydress-upmightactuallyhavetobecanceled,whichmeanttherewouldbenomoreembarrassment.（由連接詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]HewasaboutfivewhentheywenttoKentuckytoseetheworld’slargestbaseballbat.（由連接詞when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型3]Herealizedheandhismomhadalwaysbeenthereforeachother,tryingtomakeeachothersmile.（由省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）4.(2023屆浙江省杭州第二中學(xué)新高三上學(xué)期適應(yīng)性測(cè)試英語(yǔ)試題)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Edundidnotwanttogoonahike.Sheespeciallydidnotwanttogoonalonghikeinthemountainsthatledtoatinycabin(小木屋)withnoelectricityandnorunningwater.Shewantedtostayhomereadingabookinsteadwhilewrappedinawarmblanket.“Ready?”Momaskedcheerfullyafterbreakfast.Edunlookedoutthewindowandonlysawrain,lotsofit.“Weshouldgoanotherday,”Edunsuggested.“Maybeahundredyearsfromnow.”Sheworriedshewouldgettiredonthehike.Sheworriedaboutgettingboredatthedarkcabin.Momsaiditwastimetostopworryingandgetintothecar.Edun’sbrother,Will,waswaitinginthegarage,whoworeacameraaroundhisneck.WillwasfouryearsolderthanEdunandhadclimbedmanymoremountains.He’dstartedhikingwhenhewastwoandlovedit.Becauseitwasraining,Edunhadtowearherrainpants,herrainhat,herrainjacket,andherwaterproofboots.Herjackethadaroughmaterialontheinside.Shedidn’tlikehowitfeltagainstherskin.Afterabouthalfanhour’sdrive,theyparkedatatrailhead(登山口).Therainhadstoppedbutthegroundwasstilldrippingwet.“We’llbetherebyafternoon!”Mompromised.Theafternoonsoundedfaraway.Willidentifiedabirdsittingonanearbybranch—“Foxsparrow!”—thenheraceddownthetrailandwassoonoutofsight.Edunrestedunderapinetree.“Youcan’tforcemetowalk,”Edunsaid.“You’reright,”saidhermomsmilingly,standingunderthetree,too,“Butyouwillneverknowwhatmaylieaheadandamazeus.”注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.Theypassedawaterfall,tinyyetclear.ThetricklingofwatermadeEdunfeelbetter.Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,therewasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animaltracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.SoontheycaughtupwithWill,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFoxsparrowrestingonabranch.Togethertheywenton,strollingpastscratchybushes,climbingovergrayrocksandhikingthroughdwarftrees.Edunloomedabovethoselittletrees,exclaiming,“Look,Mom,I’magiant.”Unknowinglytheyhadalreadydonemostoftheclimb.Paragraph2:Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.EdunandWillstartedracingupthehill.Finally,theretheywereinthesmallbutcozycabin.Throughitswindow,Edunsawfarawaymeadowsandlakes,andmanymoremountains,awholenewworldemergingbeforehereyes.Thatnight,everybodystayeduplatetoseethestars.Somanystarsclusteringupthere,Edunproposed,“Ineedtotakeapictureofthem.”“Click!”Thecamerafrozethemoment.Radiantwithasmile,EdunapproachedMomandhuggedher,whispering,“Mom,thankyouforhavingmecome!”【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了艾頓不想去山里遠(yuǎn)足，但還是和家人一起出發(fā)了，由于下雨而不得不穿上的雨衣使得艾頓感覺(jué)不舒適。半小時(shí)后，他們到達(dá)了登山口，威爾沿著小路去追小鳥(niǎo)，艾頓想要停下休息，媽媽告訴艾頓，如果不繼續(xù)走，就永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)知道前方有什么能使他們驚訝。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“艾頓認(rèn)為媽媽是對(duì)的，就跟著她走了。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)艾頓繼續(xù)前行，看到了美麗的風(fēng)景，不知不覺(jué)間，已經(jīng)完成了大部分攀登。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“二十分鐘后，他們看到了小屋?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)他們來(lái)到小屋，晚上看星星，艾頓感謝媽媽邀請(qǐng)自己來(lái)。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：繼續(xù)前行——美麗的風(fēng)景——完成大部分攀登——到達(dá)小屋——看星星——感激3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①尋找：lookfor/searchfor/seek②繼續(xù)前行：goon/moveon/keeponmoving③擁抱：hug/embrace/holdinone’sarms情緒類(lèi)①舒適的：cozy/comfortable②面帶微笑：radiantwithasmile/withasmilingface【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,therewasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animaltracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.(由連接詞as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】SoontheycaughtupwithWill,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFoxsparrowrestingonabranch.(由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，省略的關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)5.(廣東省東莞市東華高級(jí)中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期模擬考試)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Lungsnearlybursting,Istruggledtoliftmyheadoutofthewater.Inchbyinch,mytiredbodyreachedfortheendofthepool.Theextentofmyswimmingcareerwaspurelyrecreational,whilethecompetitiveswimmersnearbythoughtnothingoftheseeminglysimpletaskofa500-meterswimtest.PushingmyselftofinishwhatIhadstarted,Icouldonlythink:whynottaketheeasywayout?Earlierthatweek,Ihadturnedinmyfirstjobapplicationatalocalpool.Overqualified,Iwashiredonthespot.However,thetaskswereboring:helpingconfusedvisitorsandmeasuringtheheightofchildrenbeforetheywentdowntheslide,thosesortsofthings.Iwascapableofmore.Soaswimtestwasrequired,establishingthemerefactthatIwasnotcompletelyhelplessinapool.Midwaythrough,themanageradministeringthetestremarked,“Thislooksreallyeasyforyou.Whyaren'tyouapplyingtobecomeaguard?"“Thethoughthadn'tcrossedmymind."“Well,lifeguardingdemandsmoreresponsibility,strengthandrespect.Thusthepositionpays$2moreperhour.Yourswimmingskillsarestrongenough.Allyouneedtodoiscompleteacertificationclass.”InsideIwasunsureofmyself,buthiswordsinspiredme-Youneverknowwhatyouarecapableofuntilyouforceyourselftodoit.SoonIpassedtheswimtest.Allleftwastopracticeandlearnfirstaid,CPR(心肺復(fù)蘇),andproceduresfordifferentlandandwater-basedemergencies.Workstartedsoon.Awell-intentionedyetanxiousfeelinginmesoonpassed.Days,weeks,andmonthswentbywithoutincident;emergencieswererare.TheskillsandtrainingIhadsocarefullystudiedandacquiredseemedunnecessary.Todayappearedtobeanotheruneventfulday.However,shortlyaftertheotherguardssignaledtothechildrentoexitthepool,Inoticedoneboywasstillinthemiddlewhiletheothershadclimbedup.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癝omethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.Sureenough,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishandsdesperately.Iquicklydivedintothewater,swimmingtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolside,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Icouldtellthathehadnoheartbeatandwasn’tbreathing.Everysecondcounted!Withouthesitation,Ididfirstaid,givinghimmouth-to-mouthbreathinganddoingCPRastrained.Otherguardswatchinganxiously,Icarriedon,sweating.Suddenly,astreamofwaterburstoutofhismouthandtheboycoughedintensely.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,thosearoundbrokeintocheers.Exhausted,Isighedwithrelief.IthoughthadIacceptedthateasyposition,Iwouldhavebeennothingbutabystander.I’mhappyIdidn’ttaketheeasywayout.【分析】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者向一家游泳館遞交了第一份工作申請(qǐng)，完成一些諸如幫助困惑的游客，在孩子滑下滑梯之前測(cè)量他們的身高等事情。在進(jìn)行測(cè)試時(shí)，經(jīng)理提議讓作者去當(dāng)一名救生員，于是作者采納了這個(gè)建議。經(jīng)過(guò)一系列培訓(xùn)，作者成為了一名救生員，但好像所學(xué)的東西也無(wú)用武之地?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘他一定是出了什么問(wèn)題，’我心想。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者發(fā)明并營(yíng)救這個(gè)溺水男孩的經(jīng)過(guò)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“讓男孩躺在地板上，我把耳朵湊到他的嘴邊，手指放在他的脖子上。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者如何運(yùn)用自己學(xué)過(guò)的救生員知識(shí)救了這個(gè)孩子的。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：發(fā)現(xiàn)男孩溺水——抱起男孩——實(shí)施急救——男孩恢復(fù)知覺(jué)——松了口氣3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)游泳：diveinto/swimtowards/sinkto走路：reach/headto情緒類(lèi)①.擔(dān)憂(yōu)：anxiously/frightandconcern/begrateful②.高興：happy/cheers/inrelief【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.（由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2].Icouldtellthathehadnoheartbeatandwasn’tbreathing.（由that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）6.（廣東省汕頭市金山中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期第二次月考）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Marywaitedanxiouslyforherturnintheemptydressingroom.Neverhadshebeensonervousbefore.Thiscompetitionwasofvitalimportancetohercomeback.“IfIcanwintoday，”shesaidtoherself，“Icandanceonthenationalstagenextmonth.”Threemonthsago，herleftarmwasseriouslyinjuredinacaraccident.Afterthemedicaltreatment，shebegantorecoverslowly.Shepracticedoverandoveragaininordertoregainherdancingskills.“Hi，Mary，”inrushedherfriendJessica.“Howisyourarm?Isitgoingtoinfluenceyourperformance?”“IguessitcanbetoleratedforIamtowinthematch.”saidMarywithadeterminedlook.“Admirable!ButIhearthatagirlcalledLindaisreallygiftedandstrong.Shecanbeyourrealwell-matchedcompetitor.Comeon!”AfterJessicaleft，Marydecidedtopracticehermostdifficultspin.“IfIdon’ttryharder，Iwon’tgraspthischance.”Shethought.Butherarmbegantohurt，makingherworried.“Mary，whatmakesyouthinkyouhaveachancetonight?”shesaidtoherself.Afterthepainwasgone，shecontinuedtowarmup.Aslimgirlhurriedinandputdownanequipmentbagonthechair.Then，shetookoutherdancedressquicklyandputitonskillfully.SeeingMary，shesmiledpolitelyandsaid“Hi，I’mLinda.Iamthenextone!”Marynoddedinreplybutfeltuncomfortable.“Thisisjustmycompetitor.Becauseofher，Imaylosetonight.”HermindwaswanderingwhenLindaletoutascream，“Oh，God，Ican’tfindmymusictape!”Lindasearchedherbagbutinvain.“Itmaybemissingontheway.”Withthesewords，shethenrushedout.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右;2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1：Suddenly，MarycaughtsightofablackboxunderthechairwhereLindaputherbag.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：LindafinishedherdancingsuccessfullyandthencameMary’sturn.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________